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Sitting on his desk, his eyes on his feet with which he drew random patterns in the air, Jeremy patiently waited for the first few students to arrive for his lesson. His first lesson of the term. He hoped to see many new faces and just as many returning. Well, he was going to know soon.
Behind him on the simple blackboard he had written his name and the subject he was teaching:
Professor Jeremy Zookara
Muggle Studies
Just in case somebody had come to the wrong classroom and didn't actually want to attend this lesson. He didn't want anybody to realize half-way through that this wasn't Care of Magical Creatures after all.
SPOILER!!: Blackboard
Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs
- True Love's Kiss -> Enervate? Anapneo?
- Transfiguration into an old woman
- echanted mirror
- Snow White -> Veela?
Rumpelstiltskin
- Transfiguration (?) from straw to gold
Rapunzel
- long hair
- no doors in tower -> apparition?
- tears have healing power
The Gingerbread Man
- charmed biscuit
- talking wolf
Hansel and Gretel
- witch
- transfigured house into gingerbread house
- swan and bird -> animagi/transfigured?
Thumblina
- girl comes out of seed/flower
- girl the size of a thumb
Little Red Ridinghood
- talking wolf -> tranfiguration, animagus?
- grandmother + girl still alive in stomach
Peter Pan
- can fly -> disillusioned broom?
- stays young forever -> potion?
- Tinkerbell: fairy -> Snitch?
The Wonderful Wizard of Oz
- 2 Witches
- Wonderful Wizard (-> Warlock?)
- Tinman, Scarecrow, Lion can talk and move
Alice in Wonderland
- speaking animals
- speaking/moving objects
Aladdin
- magic flying carpets
- Genie can grant wishes
The Little Mermaid
- merpeople
- True Love's Kiss
- voice stolen -> silencing spell?
- Transfiguration into legs
The Princess and the Frog
- Animagus: frog into prince
- True Love's Kiss
Jack and the Giant Beanstock
- superfast growing beans -> Herbivicus?
- Giants
- floating house -> Wingardium Leviosa?
OOC: Class has now officially started, so please no late arrivals, no chatting and make sure you're familiar with the Classroom Rules. If you haven't posted your character arriving, you can just pretend like they have been there all along. ^__^
She was lost in thought when she suddenly realized she was supposed to be working in a group. Hastily, Tayla looked around the room. Everyone seemed to have groups already and many of them in deep discussion.
Tayla spotted her Slytherin friend Salander, but seeing him kiss his girlfriend, decided not to ask him if she could join them. She didn't want to be a bothersome first year. She also spotted Zara and Kurumi, but she was hesitant to join them. Their group seemed complete.
She decided to ask anyway. "Er...hello Zara, Kurumi," she began. "I got lost in my thoughts so I er...don't have a group. D'you mind if I join you two?"
Zara smiled at Tayla, "It's fine with me if they agree," referring to the other groupmates. The Head Girl, Kurumi, Heather, Connor.
Looking around, she was waiting for further instructions from Professor Zookara since she thought it was a long time given for them to do this. And they've done enough. Plus the other groups were done too and were now chatting.
Hufflepuff where they are just and loyal they are patient, true and unafraid of toil
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Originally Posted by city_girl_95
Amy nodded along with the plans the others made, though she drew the line at Isobel's last comment. Uh, no, because otherwise everyone would go around killing everyone she nodded. Was that not obvious? It seemed it to Amy, but Amy was a little odd...sometimes.
After all she was a purple dinosaur
Penny had been lost in thought, listening to the gang and trying to work their ideas into the story.... "Ok, so say we go with the apple pie, but instead of an old beggar woman.. maybe a girl scout should be selling the apple pies door-to-door for her badge?!?"
And then thinking out loud..."We still need a name for the girl.How about Ginny?... I mean in the muggle world, a child wouldn't be called Snow White !!"
Penny was on a roll... "And I suppose we should decide who the 'prince charming' will be..... Either a doctor or policeman i think would be best.....Uhm I think the policeman would be good."
Unless the gang had other ideas...
SPOILER!!: Snow White
Once upon a time, in a large faraway city called New York, lived a beautiful and sweet woman...
She dreamt that one day she and her husband would have a beautiful baby girl.. and a year later, her dream came true and she did have a beautiful baby, but sadly she died just after the birth, making the child motherless....
The husband remarried again, but this woman was not like his first wife, she was vain, conceited, bossy and arrogant..
Everyday the woman would ask her butler who was the prettiest in the city and every day the butler would reply that she was the prettiest..
Seventeen years later, the stepmother asked the butler and he gave her a new answer - that another girl was the prettiest of all girls.... and her name was Ginny.
The stepmother fumed, jealous that this child that she helped raise would be more beautiful than she..
She ordered her chauffeur to drive her a really tough area of the city, where she hired a thug to kill the child...
The thug waits for the child outside school one afternoon, and lures her away to the countryside (??), there in the middle of nowhere he bundles the girl into the forest, about to shoot her - the girl crys and begs the thug not to do it - pleads with him to let her go...The thug takes pity on such a sweet and innocent girl and lets her go free...
He returns to the city, telling the stepmother that the child is dead.... she is beside herself with glee..
Meanwhile Ginny, had been walking for 2 days, without food and water... She reached the city limits, exhausted, hungry and lost.... Walking down strange streets, the girl saw college dorm rooms and entered a building.... finding a door open, she went in - helping herself to some food from the fridge..
Feeling very tired, she found the bedroom and sat down on one of the bed, laid back and promptly fell asleep..
The seven people who shared the Dorm room made their way back from classes.... Hungry after a long day of study, upon entering the room, they immediately know that something is amiss..Three of the guys walked into the to kitchen, they saw debris of food on the counter... while the other four went into the bedroom to clean up before dinner, they found a strange sight..
A beautiful young girl fast asleep on the bed.
The girl woke with a start on hearing voices beside her... all seven guys were standing beside her whispering.... Jumping up and off the bed, she immediately began the explanation of how & why she was there..
The guys, who were dwarves, were totally stunned that anyone could treat another human being like this... they offered to shelter the girl and in return she would look after them, like clean their apartment and have dinner ready when they got home from college every day ... they advised her not to talk with strangers...
The stepmother was absolutely delighted that her plan to get rid of Ginny worked.... She asked her butler the usual question everyday and again the usual answer came... until one day she asked him "Who is the prettiest in all the city?", and he replied that Ginny was indeed the prettiest.... across town the girl had just left the dwarves apartment for the first time since her arrival, she needed to visit the store for supplies...
The stepmother was livid, because she had believed the girl to be dead.... She hatched another cunning plan to finally rid herself of the troublesome girl.... The jealous stepmother decided to use an innocent girl scout to deliver the fatal blow to the girl who would be prettiest in all the city..
The stepmother hastened to the kitchen to bake a 'special' apple pie..
Three days later, Ginny was cleaning the dorm room, when the doorbell went, she answered the door, even though the dwarves had told her not to.....
There stood a small girl scout, she had cookies in her box and one last apple pie.. Ginny thought that the dwarves would love a warm apple pie with ice-cream for dessert... So she bought it off the girl, walking inside to the kitchen, Ginny smelled the wonderful aroma of the pie, unable to help herself, she cut a slice and began to eat. The pie was delicious, but Ginny began to feel unwell and before she could call for help, she fell to the ground.... She was dead.
The dwarves arrived home from college and discovered Ginny laying on the floor, immediately calling the emergency services...The Paramedics came, checked Ginny over and said she was not dead, but was in a coma and unlikely to live for much longer..
Ginny was rushed to hospital and the doctors began treatment right away.. tests confirmed that the girl had been poisoned by the apple pie.. but they did not hold much hope for the beautiful girl...
The dwarves were lost with grief, not knowing what to do next for the girl - they had an idea of who was behind it, so they went to Campus Police to report the crime...
That evening a young policeman called Harry, walked into Ginnys room, and felt his heart break a little, never had he seen such a wondrous and sad sight at the same time, wondrous at her absolute beauty and sad because she was dying.... And he decided right there that the stepmother would not get away with this travesty, he turned and left Ginnys room and made his way back to the Police station..
He sent the apple pie off to forensics for testing, questioned all the people in the dorm building and soon discovered that a girl scout had been selling the day Ginny had fallen into a coma...Harry found the girl scout and questioned her.. The girl scout told Harry about the stepmother, confirming to him what the dwarves had suspected...
Harry went to the stepmothers house and found her eating dinner with Ginny's father... When confronted with the allegations, she was flustered, unable to answer the questions Harry asked her...Ginny's dad was absolutely furious with his wife - for he had believed that his daughter had run away from home..
He immediately went to the hospital, to his daughters bedside, the pain in his heart was unbearable, his beautiful baby girl laying there helpless and dying...
The dwarves came to visit and met the father, they told him all that the stepmother had done to the girl - He was very angry with his wife but even more angry with himself for having missed the signs...
Harry brought the stepmother to court, charging her with attempted murder, and to the delight of the dwarves, Ginny's father and Harry, she was found guilty and sentenced to 15years hard labour on the chain gangs in Arizona..
Ginny was moved to a rehabilitation centre two days after the trial was over.... Harry couldn't stop thinking about her, so he went to visit her..... On entering the room, he was once again in awe of her innocence and beauty, he sat beside her bed... He thought that if things had been different he would very much liked to have dated and married this young woman... tears leaked from his eyes.. he stood up about to leave and then turned to the girl - he leant forward to give her a farewell kiss, as his lips touched his - She awoke from her coma... looking into the face of a handsome police officer, she smiled for the first time in two months...
Ginny's father was overjoyed with the recovery of his daughter, as were the dwarves, but none of them held the happiness of Harry.... He had fallen in love with the girl, she was very pretty, but Harry soon discovered that her soul was just as pure.... For Ginny had forgiven her stepmother her crimes....
Harry and Ginny get engaged, and with her fathers blessing, they were married in the same church as her mum and dad.....
And they lived happily ever after.......
Penny put the finishing touches to the De-Fairy Story..... looking at her team-mates she said.."Well, i'm happy with that....how about you guys?... feel free to edit as you see fit", with a smile
Dude. The Pensevies aint got nothing on you. Aslan is the God
Amy nodded, until they reached the "Prince" part, uh, I don't think a policeman, really she shrugged, I only say that because I think a doctor would be able to administer CPR better, and he could be a nice fitty she shrugged.
And I don't think Ginny is that normal, she paused, maybe Sarah White? Because then you still have the white bit but not the snow
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Tonight we are young. So lets set the world on fire---------------- ----------------------------Belle-Marie. Hufflepuff. Fifth Year.
Hufflepuff where they are just and loyal they are patient, true and unafraid of toil
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Originally Posted by city_girl_95
Amy nodded, until they reached the "Prince" part, uh, I don't think a policeman, really she shrugged, I only say that because I think a doctor would be able to administer CPR better, and he could be a nice fitty she shrugged.
And I don't think Ginny is that normal, she paused, maybe Sarah White? Because then you still have the white bit but not the snow
Penny thought Amy had a good point.... so pushed the Parchment containing the story over to her, so Amy could finish off what Penny had started, fill in what she thought was needed to the story..
SPOILER!!: Sarah White
Once upon a time, in a large faraway city called New York, lived a beautiful and sweet woman...
She dreamt that one day she and her husband would have a beautiful baby girl.. and a year later, her dream came true and she did have a beautiful baby, but sadly she died just after the birth, making the child motherless....
The husband remarried again, but this woman was not like his first wife, she was vain, conceited, bossy and arrogant..
Everyday the woman would ask her butler who was the prettiest in the city and every day the butler would reply that she was the prettiest..
Seventeen years later, the stepmother asked the butler and he gave her a new answer - that another girl was the prettiest of all girls.... and her name was Sarah White.
The stepmother fumed, jealous that this child that she helped raise would be more beautiful than she..
She ordered her chauffeur to drive her a really tough area of the city, where she hired a thug to kill the child...
The thug waits for the child outside school one afternoon, and lures her away to the countryside (??), there in the middle of nowhere he bundles the girl into the forest, about to shoot her - the girl crys and begs the thug not to do it - pleads with him to let her go...The thug takes pity on such a sweet and innocent girl and lets her go free...
He returns to the city, telling the stepmother that the child is dead.... she is beside herself with glee..
Meanwhile Sarah had been walking for 2 days, without food and water... She reached the city limits, exhausted, hungry and lost.... Walking down strange streets, the girl saw college dorm rooms and entered a building.... finding a door open, she went in - helping herself to some food from the fridge..
Feeling very tired, she found the bedroom and sat down on one of the bed, laid back and promptly fell asleep..
The seven people who shared the Dorm room made their way back from classes.... Hungry after a long day of study, upon entering the room, they immediately know that something is amiss..Three of the guys walked into the to kitchen, they saw debris of food on the counter... while the other four went into the bedroom to clean up before dinner, they found a strange sight..
A beautiful young girl fast asleep on the bed.
The girl woke with a start on hearing voices beside her... all seven guys were standing beside her whispering.... Jumping up and off the bed, she immediately began the explanation of how & why she was there..
The guys, who were dwarves, were totally stunned that anyone could treat another human being like this... they offered to shelter the girl and in return she would look after them, like clean their apartment and have dinner ready when they got home from college every day ... they advised her not to talk with strangers...
The stepmother was absolutely delighted that her plan to get rid of Sarah worked.... She asked her butler the usual question everyday and again the usual answer came... until one day she asked him "Who is the prettiest in all the city?", and he replied that Sarah White was indeed the prettiest.... across town the girl had just left the dwarves apartment for the first time since her arrival, she needed to visit the store for supplies...
The stepmother was livid, because she had believed the girl to be dead.... She hatched another cunning plan to finally rid herself of the troublesome girl.... The jealous stepmother decided to use an innocent girl scout to deliver the fatal blow to the girl who would be prettiest in all the city..
The stepmother hastened to the kitchen to bake a 'special' apple pie..
Three days later, Sarah was cleaning the dorm room, when the doorbell went, she answered the door, even though the dwarves had told her not to.....
There stood a small girl scout, she had cookies in her box and one last apple pie.. Sarah thought that the dwarves would love a warm apple pie with ice-cream for dessert... So she bought it off the girl, walking inside to the kitchen, Sarah smelled the wonderful aroma of the pie, unable to help herself, she cut a slice and began to eat. The pie was delicious, but Sarah began to feel unwell and before she could call for help, she fell to the ground.... She was dead.
The dwarves arrived home from college and discovered Sarah laying on the floor, immediately calling the emergency services...The Paramedics came, checked Sarah over and said she was not dead, but was in a coma and unlikely to live for much longer..
Sarah was rushed to hospital and the doctors began treatment right away.. tests confirmed that the girl had been poisoned by the apple pie.. but they did not hold much hope for the beautiful girl...
The dwarves were lost with grief, not knowing what to do next for the girl - they had an idea of who was behind it, so they went to Campus Police to report the crime...
Hoping Amy might do a better job than Penny had been doing - Penny was after all 'only' a first year... what did she know about de-fairying a story !!
ooc: you guys are going have to do this on your own for a few days (or delete all as you see fit)....I got couple hectic days of work - starting today......
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Reason: Can this post be deleted please... its obsolete now !!
"Of course you can!" Rachel said, she was making so many new friends and getting to know others even better.
"Thanks a lot," Charlie grinned and she took a seat next to her. Ok so what was it they had to do again? Oh yeah.
"So we need to replace the magical parts of Snow White with non magical things, am I right?" Charlie smiled. She had been so focused on getting a group that she sort of forgot what the task was.
Hello, Daddy! Hello, Mom! I'm your ch-ch-ch-ch-ch-ch-cherry bomb!
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Originally Posted by Annabeth
"Ok then, hi Daisy, I'm Rachel, so what do you think then about the question?" Rachel asked, she wasnt too sure what to do about the question.
"Of course you can!" Rachel said, she was making so many new friends and getting to know others even better.
"No, I mean yes, I mean yes you can come in our group." Rachel said, her tounge getting tied, "Whats your name?" Rachel asked.
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Originally Posted by teamdobby
"Thanks a lot," Charlie grinned and she took a seat next to her. Ok so what was it they had to do again? Oh yeah.
"So we need to replace the magical parts of Snow White with non magical things, am I right?" Charlie smiled. She had been so focused on getting a group that she sort of forgot what the task was.
Okay, this was just degrading. Lucas hadn't really been paying attention, and by the time he figured out that they were getting into groups, everyone was already grouped up... Except a bunch of first-year girls. Oh, geez. "Um, hey," he said, walking up to their group. "Do you lot mind if I join you?" He smiled, trying to seem friendly. Didn't want to scare the firsties.
Okay, this was just degrading. Lucas hadn't really been paying attention, and by the time he figured out that they were getting into groups, everyone was already grouped up... Except a bunch of first-year girls. Oh, geez. "Um, hey," he said, walking up to their group. "Do you lot mind if I join you?" He smiled, trying to seem friendly. Didn't want to scare the firsties.
"Um, no, that's fine." Charlie muttered as an older boy approached them. She wasn't great with older kids but this one seemed nice.
"Have we to make Snow White- not magical?" Charlie asked.
Hufflepuff where they are just and loyal they are patient, true and unafraid of toil
It seemed to Penny that although some of her team-mates had ideas and criticisms, they weren't making any real effort with the story writing part of the task.... and having handed over the reins of the story to Amy, the story had been sitting untouched for a while now...
She now decided that maybe herself, Isobel and Oakey should work together...
Looking down at the story she had written, she smiled at their accomplishment....
SPOILER!!: Ginny White
Once upon a time, in a large faraway city called New York, lived a beautiful and sweet woman...
She dreamt that one day she and her husband would have a beautiful baby girl.. and a year later, her dream came true and she did have a beautiful baby, but sadly she died just after the birth, making the child motherless....
The husband remarried again, but this woman was not like his first wife, she was vain, conceited, bossy and arrogant..
Everyday the woman would ask her butler who was the prettiest in the city and every day the butler would reply that she was the prettiest..
Seventeen years later, the stepmother asked the butler and he gave her a new answer - that another girl was the prettiest of all girls.... and her name was Ginny.
The stepmother fumed, jealous that this child that she helped raise would be more beautiful than she..
She ordered her chauffeur to drive her a really tough area of the city, where she hired a thug to kill the child...
The thug waits for the child outside school one afternoon, and lures her away to the countryside (??), there in the middle of nowhere he bundles the girl into the forest, about to shoot her - the girl crys and begs the thug not to do it - pleads with him to let her go...The thug takes pity on such a sweet and innocent girl and lets her go free...
He returns to the city, telling the stepmother that the child is dead.... she is beside herself with glee..
Meanwhile Ginny, had been walking for 2 days, without food and water... She reached the city limits, exhausted, hungry and lost.... Walking down strange streets, the girl saw college dorm rooms and entered a building.... finding a door open, she went in - helping herself to some food from the fridge..
Feeling very tired, she found the bedroom and sat down on one of the bed, laid back and promptly fell asleep..
The seven people who shared the Dorm room made their way back from classes.... Hungry after a long day of study, upon entering the room, they immediately know that something is amiss..Three of the guys walked into the to kitchen, they saw debris of food on the counter... while the other four went into the bedroom to clean up before dinner, they found a strange sight..
A beautiful young girl fast asleep on the bed.
The girl woke with a start on hearing voices beside her... all seven guys were standing beside her whispering.... Jumping up and off the bed, she immediately began the explanation of how & why she was there..
The guys, who were dwarves, were totally stunned that anyone could treat another human being like this... they offered to shelter the girl and in return she would look after them, like clean their apartment and have dinner ready when they got home from college every day ... they advised her not to talk with strangers...
The stepmother was absolutely delighted that her plan to get rid of Ginny worked.... She asked her butler the usual question everyday and again the usual answer came... until one day she asked him "Who is the prettiest in all the city?", and he replied that Ginny was indeed the prettiest.... across town the girl had just left the dwarves apartment for the first time since her arrival, she needed to visit the store for supplies...
The stepmother was livid, because she had believed the girl to be dead.... She hatched another cunning plan to finally rid herself of the troublesome girl.... The jealous stepmother decided to use an innocent girl scout to deliver the fatal blow to the girl who would be prettiest in all the city..
The stepmother hastened to the kitchen to bake a 'special' apple pie..
Three days later, Ginny was cleaning the dorm room, when the doorbell went, she answered the door, even though the dwarves had told her not to.....
There stood a small girl scout, she had cookies in her box and one last apple pie.. Ginny thought that the dwarves would love a warm apple pie with ice-cream for dessert... So she bought it off the girl, walking inside to the kitchen, Ginny smelled the wonderful aroma of the pie, unable to help herself, she cut a slice and began to eat. The pie was delicious, but Ginny began to feel unwell and before she could call for help, she fell to the ground.... She was dead.
The dwarves arrived home from college and discovered Ginny laying on the floor, immediately calling the emergency services...The Paramedics came, checked Ginny over and said she was not dead, but was in a coma and unlikely to live for much longer..
Ginny was rushed to hospital and the doctors began treatment right away.. tests confirmed that the girl had been poisoned by the apple pie.. but they did not hold much hope for the beautiful girl...
The dwarves were lost with grief, not knowing what to do next for the girl - they had an idea of who was behind it, so they went to Campus Police to report the crime...
That evening a young policeman called Harry, walked into Ginnys room, and felt his heart break a little, never had he seen such a wondrous and sad sight at the same time, wondrous at her absolute beauty and sad because she was dying.... And he decided right there that the stepmother would not get away with this travesty, he turned and left Ginnys room and made his way back to the Police station..
He sent the apple pie off to forensics for testing, questioned all the people in the dorm building and soon discovered that a girl scout had been selling the day Ginny had fallen into a coma...Harry found the girl scout and questioned her.. The girl scout told Harry about the stepmother, confirming to him what the dwarves had suspected...
Harry went to the stepmothers house and found her eating dinner with Ginny's father... When confronted with the allegations, she was flustered, unable to answer the questions Harry asked her...Ginny's dad was absolutely furious with his wife - for he had believed that his daughter had run away from home..
He immediately went to the hospital, to his daughters bedside, the pain in his heart was unbearable, his beautiful baby girl laying there helpless and dying...
The dwarves came to visit and met the father, they told him all that the stepmother had done to the girl - He was very angry with his wife but even more angry with himself for having missed the signs...
Harry brought the stepmother to court, charging her with attempted murder, and to the delight of the dwarves, Ginny's father and Harry, she was found guilty and sentenced to 15years hard labour on the chain gangs in Arizona..
Ginny was moved to a rehabilitation centre two days after the trial was over.... Harry couldn't stop thinking about her, so he went to visit her..... On entering the room, he was once again in awe of her innocence and beauty, he sat beside her bed... He thought that if things had been different he would very much liked to have dated and married this young woman... tears leaked from his eyes.. he stood up about to leave and then turned to the girl - he leant forward to give her a farewell kiss, as his lips touched his - She awoke from her coma... looking into the face of a handsome police officer, she smiled for the first time in two months...
Ginny's father was overjoyed with the recovery of his daughter, as were the dwarves, but none of them held the happiness of Harry.... He had fallen in love with the girl, she was very pretty, but Harry soon discovered that her soul was just as pure.... For Ginny had forgiven her stepmother her crimes....
Harry and Ginny get engaged, and with her fathers blessing, they were married in the same church as her mum and dad.....
And they lived happily ever after.......
Penny re-read the story again, and said to Isobel and Oakey "I would have loved that story at bedtime...even without the magic"....with a wide smile on her face...
Hiss!Roar!Growl!Caw! | Hermione's Double | The Little Three | Alecate
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Originally Posted by Jason Potter Weasley
" So you should tell us your ideas about the animals and the kiss" William told Sierra. " Your opinion matters to me" William said to Sierra.
Wait. What?! He was really that concerned about her own opinion? Leave it to a Gryffindor... "My opinion," she said, eying the professor and waiting for an answer to her question, "is that we shouldn't be taking all the magic out of these stories." She looked down at their notes and added, "Well, I guess we have enough to write a story..." If, in fact, they did need to write a story.
Mom says I have no sense of direction, so I packed my bags and right.
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Originally Posted by Trish
It seemed to Penny that although some of her team-mates had ideas and criticisms, they weren't making any real effort with the story writing part of the task.... and having handed over the reins of the story to Amy, the story had been sitting untouched for a while now...
She now decided that maybe herself, Isobel and Oakey should work together...
Looking down at the story she had written, she smiled at their accomplishment....
SPOILER!!: Ginny White
Once upon a time, in a large faraway city called New York, lived a beautiful and sweet woman...
She dreamt that one day she and her husband would have a beautiful baby girl.. and a year later, her dream came true and she did have a beautiful baby, but sadly she died just after the birth, making the child motherless....
The husband remarried again, but this woman was not like his first wife, she was vain, conceited, bossy and arrogant..
Everyday the woman would ask her butler who was the prettiest in the city and every day the butler would reply that she was the prettiest..
Seventeen years later, the stepmother asked the butler and he gave her a new answer - that another girl was the prettiest of all girls.... and her name was Ginny.
The stepmother fumed, jealous that this child that she helped raise would be more beautiful than she..
She ordered her chauffeur to drive her a really tough area of the city, where she hired a thug to kill the child...
The thug waits for the child outside school one afternoon, and lures her away to the countryside (??), there in the middle of nowhere he bundles the girl into the forest, about to shoot her - the girl crys and begs the thug not to do it - pleads with him to let her go...The thug takes pity on such a sweet and innocent girl and lets her go free...
He returns to the city, telling the stepmother that the child is dead.... she is beside herself with glee..
Meanwhile Ginny, had been walking for 2 days, without food and water... She reached the city limits, exhausted, hungry and lost.... Walking down strange streets, the girl saw college dorm rooms and entered a building.... finding a door open, she went in - helping herself to some food from the fridge..
Feeling very tired, she found the bedroom and sat down on one of the bed, laid back and promptly fell asleep..
The seven people who shared the Dorm room made their way back from classes.... Hungry after a long day of study, upon entering the room, they immediately know that something is amiss..Three of the guys walked into the to kitchen, they saw debris of food on the counter... while the other four went into the bedroom to clean up before dinner, they found a strange sight..
A beautiful young girl fast asleep on the bed.
The girl woke with a start on hearing voices beside her... all seven guys were standing beside her whispering.... Jumping up and off the bed, she immediately began the explanation of how & why she was there..
The guys, who were dwarves, were totally stunned that anyone could treat another human being like this... they offered to shelter the girl and in return she would look after them, like clean their apartment and have dinner ready when they got home from college every day ... they advised her not to talk with strangers...
The stepmother was absolutely delighted that her plan to get rid of Ginny worked.... She asked her butler the usual question everyday and again the usual answer came... until one day she asked him "Who is the prettiest in all the city?", and he replied that Ginny was indeed the prettiest.... across town the girl had just left the dwarves apartment for the first time since her arrival, she needed to visit the store for supplies...
The stepmother was livid, because she had believed the girl to be dead.... She hatched another cunning plan to finally rid herself of the troublesome girl.... The jealous stepmother decided to use an innocent girl scout to deliver the fatal blow to the girl who would be prettiest in all the city..
The stepmother hastened to the kitchen to bake a 'special' apple pie..
Three days later, Ginny was cleaning the dorm room, when the doorbell went, she answered the door, even though the dwarves had told her not to.....
There stood a small girl scout, she had cookies in her box and one last apple pie.. Ginny thought that the dwarves would love a warm apple pie with ice-cream for dessert... So she bought it off the girl, walking inside to the kitchen, Ginny smelled the wonderful aroma of the pie, unable to help herself, she cut a slice and began to eat. The pie was delicious, but Ginny began to feel unwell and before she could call for help, she fell to the ground.... She was dead.
The dwarves arrived home from college and discovered Ginny laying on the floor, immediately calling the emergency services...The Paramedics came, checked Ginny over and said she was not dead, but was in a coma and unlikely to live for much longer..
Ginny was rushed to hospital and the doctors began treatment right away.. tests confirmed that the girl had been poisoned by the apple pie.. but they did not hold much hope for the beautiful girl...
The dwarves were lost with grief, not knowing what to do next for the girl - they had an idea of who was behind it, so they went to Campus Police to report the crime...
That evening a young policeman called Harry, walked into Ginnys room, and felt his heart break a little, never had he seen such a wondrous and sad sight at the same time, wondrous at her absolute beauty and sad because she was dying.... And he decided right there that the stepmother would not get away with this travesty, he turned and left Ginnys room and made his way back to the Police station..
He sent the apple pie off to forensics for testing, questioned all the people in the dorm building and soon discovered that a girl scout had been selling the day Ginny had fallen into a coma...Harry found the girl scout and questioned her.. The girl scout told Harry about the stepmother, confirming to him what the dwarves had suspected...
Harry went to the stepmothers house and found her eating dinner with Ginny's father... When confronted with the allegations, she was flustered, unable to answer the questions Harry asked her...Ginny's dad was absolutely furious with his wife - for he had believed that his daughter had run away from home..
He immediately went to the hospital, to his daughters bedside, the pain in his heart was unbearable, his beautiful baby girl laying there helpless and dying...
The dwarves came to visit and met the father, they told him all that the stepmother had done to the girl - He was very angry with his wife but even more angry with himself for having missed the signs...
Harry brought the stepmother to court, charging her with attempted murder, and to the delight of the dwarves, Ginny's father and Harry, she was found guilty and sentenced to 15years hard labour on the chain gangs in Arizona..
Ginny was moved to a rehabilitation centre two days after the trial was over.... Harry couldn't stop thinking about her, so he went to visit her..... On entering the room, he was once again in awe of her innocence and beauty, he sat beside her bed... He thought that if things had been different he would very much liked to have dated and married this young woman... tears leaked from his eyes.. he stood up about to leave and then turned to the girl - he leant forward to give her a farewell kiss, as his lips touched his - She awoke from her coma... looking into the face of a handsome police officer, she smiled for the first time in two months...
Ginny's father was overjoyed with the recovery of his daughter, as were the dwarves, but none of them held the happiness of Harry.... He had fallen in love with the girl, she was very pretty, but Harry soon discovered that her soul was just as pure.... For Ginny had forgiven her stepmother her crimes....
Harry and Ginny get engaged, and with her fathers blessing, they were married in the same church as her mum and dad.....
And they lived happily ever after.......
Penny re-read the story again, and said to Isobel and Oakey "I would have loved that story at bedtime...even without the magic"....with a wide smile on her face...
Oakey looked over the story as well. It was very well written. He was gladPenny was up to the task of writing the story out. Oakey would have surely made mistake after mistake if he ended up writing it.
He eyed it one last time and found a drawback. There isn't a countryside anywhere close to New York City Oakey pointed out his finger on the part of the story Penny had written. Oakey took his quill out and wrote something else there.
SPOILER!!: Oakey's revision
The thug waits for the child outside school one afternoon, and lures her away deep into Central Park, there in the middle of nowhere he bundles the girl into the forest, about to shoot her - the girl crys and begs the thug not to do it - pleads with him to let her go...The thug takes pity on such a sweet and innocent girl and lets her go free...
There we go Oakey said feeling accomplished and setting his quill back onto his desk. Central Park is smack dab in the middle of NYC and it has lots of deep hidden woods.Harvey used to take me there a lot when we visited NYC.
Wait. What?! He was really that concerned about her own opinion? Leave it to a Gryffindor... "My opinion," she said, eying the professor and waiting for an answer to her question, "is that we shouldn't be taking all the magic out of these stories." She looked down at their notes and added, "Well, I guess we have enough to write a story..." If, in fact, they did need to write a story.
I actually agree with you on the magic aspect" William told Sierra. " Unfortunately, this is not the assignment we were given in Muggle Studies" William said to Sierra," Yes, we should all turn the story in now to the professor" William smiled.
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Hufflepuff where they are just and loyal they are patient, true and unafraid of toil
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Originally Posted by MyPatronusIsaMoose
Oakey looked over the story as well. It was very well written. He was gladPenny was up to the task of writing the story out. Oakey would have surely made mistake after mistake if he ended up writing it.
He eyed it one last time and found a drawback. There isn't a countryside anywhere close to New York City Oakey pointed out his finger on the part of the story Penny had written. Oakey took his quill out and wrote something else there.
SPOILER!!: Oakey's revision
The thug waits for the child outside school one afternoon, and lures her away deep into Central Park, there in the middle of nowhere he bundles the girl into the forest, about to shoot her - the girl crys and begs the thug not to do it - pleads with him to let her go...The thug takes pity on such a sweet and innocent girl and lets her go free...
There we go Oakey said feeling accomplished and setting his quill back onto his desk. Central Park is smack dab in the middle of NYC and it has lots of deep hidden woods.Harvey used to take me there a lot when we visited NYC.
Penny looked at Oakey when spoke, nodding.... Having never been to New York she didn't know what the environment was, so took Oakey at his word...
"Ok Oakey, that sounds sound... lets do that then - swap countryside for Central Park.."
SPOILER!!: Ginny White
Once upon a time, in a large faraway city called New York, lived a beautiful and sweet woman...
She dreamt that one day she and her husband would have a beautiful baby girl.. and a year later, her dream came true and she did have a beautiful baby, but sadly she died just after the birth, making the child motherless....
The husband remarried again, but this woman was not like his first wife, she was vain, conceited, bossy and arrogant..
Everyday the woman would ask her butler who was the prettiest in the city and every day the butler would reply that she was the prettiest..
Seventeen years later, the stepmother asked the butler and he gave her a new answer - that another girl was the prettiest of all girls.... and her name was Ginny.
The stepmother fumed, jealous that this child that she helped raise would be more beautiful than she..
She ordered her chauffeur to drive her a really tough area of the city, where she hired a thug to kill the child...
The thug waits for the child outside school one afternoon, and lures her away deep into Central Park, there in the middle of nowhere he bundles the girl into the forest, about to shoot her - the girl crys and begs the thug not to do it - pleads with him to let her go...The thug takes pity on such a sweet and innocent girl and lets her go free..
He returns to the city, telling the stepmother that the child is dead.... she is beside herself with glee..
Meanwhile Ginny, had been walking for 2 days, without food and water... She reached the city limits, exhausted, hungry and lost.... Walking down strange streets, the girl saw college dorm rooms and entered a building.... finding a door open, she went in - helping herself to some food from the fridge..
Feeling very tired, she found the bedroom and sat down on one of the bed, laid back and promptly fell asleep..
The seven people who shared the Dorm room made their way back from classes.... Hungry after a long day of study, upon entering the room, they immediately know that something is amiss..Three of the guys walked into the to kitchen, they saw debris of food on the counter... while the other four went into the bedroom to clean up before dinner, they found a strange sight..
A beautiful young girl fast asleep on the bed.
The girl woke with a start on hearing voices beside her... all seven guys were standing beside her whispering.... Jumping up and off the bed, she immediately began the explanation of how & why she was there..
The guys, who were dwarves, were totally stunned that anyone could treat another human being like this... they offered to shelter the girl and in return she would look after them, like clean their apartment and have dinner ready when they got home from college every day ... they advised her not to talk with strangers...
The stepmother was absolutely delighted that her plan to get rid of Ginny worked.... She asked her butler the usual question everyday and again the usual answer came... until one day she asked him "Who is the prettiest in all the city?", and he replied that Ginny was indeed the prettiest.... across town the girl had just left the dwarves apartment for the first time since her arrival, she needed to visit the store for supplies...
The stepmother was livid, because she had believed the girl to be dead.... She hatched another cunning plan to finally rid herself of the troublesome girl.... The jealous stepmother decided to use an innocent girl scout to deliver the fatal blow to the girl who would be prettiest in all the city..
The stepmother hastened to the kitchen to bake a 'special' apple pie..
Three days later, Ginny was cleaning the dorm room, when the doorbell went, she answered the door, even though the dwarves had told her not to.....
There stood a small girl scout, she had cookies in her box and one last apple pie.. Ginny thought that the dwarves would love a warm apple pie with ice-cream for dessert... So she bought it off the girl, walking inside to the kitchen, Ginny smelled the wonderful aroma of the pie, unable to help herself, she cut a slice and began to eat. The pie was delicious, but Ginny began to feel unwell and before she could call for help, she fell to the ground.... She was dead.
The dwarves arrived home from college and discovered Ginny laying on the floor, immediately calling the emergency services...The Paramedics came, checked Ginny over and said she was not dead, but was in a coma and unlikely to live for much longer..
Ginny was rushed to hospital and the doctors began treatment right away.. tests confirmed that the girl had been poisoned by the apple pie.. but they did not hold much hope for the beautiful girl...
The dwarves were lost with grief, not knowing what to do next for the girl - they had an idea of who was behind it, so they went to Campus Police to report the crime...
That evening a young policeman called Harry, walked into Ginnys room, and felt his heart break a little, never had he seen such a wondrous and sad sight at the same time, wondrous at her absolute beauty and sad because she was dying.... And he decided right there that the stepmother would not get away with this travesty, he turned and left Ginnys room and made his way back to the Police station..
He sent the apple pie off to forensics for testing, questioned all the people in the dorm building and soon discovered that a girl scout had been selling the day Ginny had fallen into a coma...Harry found the girl scout and questioned her.. The girl scout told Harry about the stepmother, confirming to him what the dwarves had suspected...
Harry went to the stepmothers house and found her eating dinner with Ginny's father... When confronted with the allegations, she was flustered, unable to answer the questions Harry asked her...Ginny's dad was absolutely furious with his wife - for he had believed that his daughter had run away from home..
He immediately went to the hospital, to his daughters bedside, the pain in his heart was unbearable, his beautiful baby girl laying there helpless and dying...
The dwarves came to visit and met the father, they told him all that the stepmother had done to the girl - He was very angry with his wife but even more angry with himself for having missed the signs...
Harry brought the stepmother to court, charging her with attempted murder, and to the delight of the dwarves, Ginny's father and Harry, she was found guilty and sentenced to 15years hard labour on the chain gangs in Arizona..
Ginny was moved to a rehabilitation centre two days after the trial was over.... Harry couldn't stop thinking about her, so he went to visit her..... On entering the room, he was once again in awe of her innocence and beauty, he sat beside her bed... He thought that if things had been different he would very much liked to have dated and married this young woman... tears leaked from his eyes.. he stood up about to leave and then turned to the girl - he leant forward to give her a farewell kiss, as his lips touched his - She awoke from her coma... looking into the face of a handsome police officer, she smiled for the first time in two months...
Ginny's father was overjoyed with the recovery of his daughter, as were the dwarves, but none of them held the happiness of Harry.... He had fallen in love with the girl, she was very pretty, but Harry soon discovered that her soul was just as pure.... For Ginny had forgiven her stepmother her crimes....
Harry and Ginny get engaged, and with her fathers blessing, they were married in the same church as her mum and dad.....
And they lived happily ever after.......
Penny re-read the story again after adding the Central Park bit.... then she spotted a huge gaff... but unsure of how to correct it, she turned to Oakey and Isobel...
"There's only one thing that still needs fixing - The Kiss - what are we going to do with that?"
Mom says I have no sense of direction, so I packed my bags and right.
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Originally Posted by Trish
Penny looked at Oakey when spoke, nodding.... Having never been to New York she didn't know what the environment was, so took Oakey at his word...
"Ok Oakey, that sounds sound... lets do that then - swap countryside for Central Park.."
SPOILER!!: Ginny White
Once upon a time, in a large faraway city called New York, lived a beautiful and sweet woman...
She dreamt that one day she and her husband would have a beautiful baby girl.. and a year later, her dream came true and she did have a beautiful baby, but sadly she died just after the birth, making the child motherless....
The husband remarried again, but this woman was not like his first wife, she was vain, conceited, bossy and arrogant..
Everyday the woman would ask her butler who was the prettiest in the city and every day the butler would reply that she was the prettiest..
Seventeen years later, the stepmother asked the butler and he gave her a new answer - that another girl was the prettiest of all girls.... and her name was Ginny.
The stepmother fumed, jealous that this child that she helped raise would be more beautiful than she..
She ordered her chauffeur to drive her a really tough area of the city, where she hired a thug to kill the child...
The thug waits for the child outside school one afternoon, and lures her away deep into Central Park, there in the middle of nowhere he bundles the girl into the forest, about to shoot her - the girl crys and begs the thug not to do it - pleads with him to let her go...The thug takes pity on such a sweet and innocent girl and lets her go free..
He returns to the city, telling the stepmother that the child is dead.... she is beside herself with glee..
Meanwhile Ginny, had been walking for 2 days, without food and water... She reached the city limits, exhausted, hungry and lost.... Walking down strange streets, the girl saw college dorm rooms and entered a building.... finding a door open, she went in - helping herself to some food from the fridge..
Feeling very tired, she found the bedroom and sat down on one of the bed, laid back and promptly fell asleep..
The seven people who shared the Dorm room made their way back from classes.... Hungry after a long day of study, upon entering the room, they immediately know that something is amiss..Three of the guys walked into the to kitchen, they saw debris of food on the counter... while the other four went into the bedroom to clean up before dinner, they found a strange sight..
A beautiful young girl fast asleep on the bed.
The girl woke with a start on hearing voices beside her... all seven guys were standing beside her whispering.... Jumping up and off the bed, she immediately began the explanation of how & why she was there..
The guys, who were dwarves, were totally stunned that anyone could treat another human being like this... they offered to shelter the girl and in return she would look after them, like clean their apartment and have dinner ready when they got home from college every day ... they advised her not to talk with strangers...
The stepmother was absolutely delighted that her plan to get rid of Ginny worked.... She asked her butler the usual question everyday and again the usual answer came... until one day she asked him "Who is the prettiest in all the city?", and he replied that Ginny was indeed the prettiest.... across town the girl had just left the dwarves apartment for the first time since her arrival, she needed to visit the store for supplies...
The stepmother was livid, because she had believed the girl to be dead.... She hatched another cunning plan to finally rid herself of the troublesome girl.... The jealous stepmother decided to use an innocent girl scout to deliver the fatal blow to the girl who would be prettiest in all the city..
The stepmother hastened to the kitchen to bake a 'special' apple pie..
Three days later, Ginny was cleaning the dorm room, when the doorbell went, she answered the door, even though the dwarves had told her not to.....
There stood a small girl scout, she had cookies in her box and one last apple pie.. Ginny thought that the dwarves would love a warm apple pie with ice-cream for dessert... So she bought it off the girl, walking inside to the kitchen, Ginny smelled the wonderful aroma of the pie, unable to help herself, she cut a slice and began to eat. The pie was delicious, but Ginny began to feel unwell and before she could call for help, she fell to the ground.... She was dead.
The dwarves arrived home from college and discovered Ginny laying on the floor, immediately calling the emergency services...The Paramedics came, checked Ginny over and said she was not dead, but was in a coma and unlikely to live for much longer..
Ginny was rushed to hospital and the doctors began treatment right away.. tests confirmed that the girl had been poisoned by the apple pie.. but they did not hold much hope for the beautiful girl...
The dwarves were lost with grief, not knowing what to do next for the girl - they had an idea of who was behind it, so they went to Campus Police to report the crime...
That evening a young policeman called Harry, walked into Ginnys room, and felt his heart break a little, never had he seen such a wondrous and sad sight at the same time, wondrous at her absolute beauty and sad because she was dying.... And he decided right there that the stepmother would not get away with this travesty, he turned and left Ginnys room and made his way back to the Police station..
He sent the apple pie off to forensics for testing, questioned all the people in the dorm building and soon discovered that a girl scout had been selling the day Ginny had fallen into a coma...Harry found the girl scout and questioned her.. The girl scout told Harry about the stepmother, confirming to him what the dwarves had suspected...
Harry went to the stepmothers house and found her eating dinner with Ginny's father... When confronted with the allegations, she was flustered, unable to answer the questions Harry asked her...Ginny's dad was absolutely furious with his wife - for he had believed that his daughter had run away from home..
He immediately went to the hospital, to his daughters bedside, the pain in his heart was unbearable, his beautiful baby girl laying there helpless and dying...
The dwarves came to visit and met the father, they told him all that the stepmother had done to the girl - He was very angry with his wife but even more angry with himself for having missed the signs...
Harry brought the stepmother to court, charging her with attempted murder, and to the delight of the dwarves, Ginny's father and Harry, she was found guilty and sentenced to 15years hard labour on the chain gangs in Arizona..
Ginny was moved to a rehabilitation centre two days after the trial was over.... Harry couldn't stop thinking about her, so he went to visit her..... On entering the room, he was once again in awe of her innocence and beauty, he sat beside her bed... He thought that if things had been different he would very much liked to have dated and married this young woman... tears leaked from his eyes.. he stood up about to leave and then turned to the girl - he leant forward to give her a farewell kiss, as his lips touched his - She awoke from her coma... looking into the face of a handsome police officer, she smiled for the first time in two months...
Ginny's father was overjoyed with the recovery of his daughter, as were the dwarves, but none of them held the happiness of Harry.... He had fallen in love with the girl, she was very pretty, but Harry soon discovered that her soul was just as pure.... For Ginny had forgiven her stepmother her crimes....
Harry and Ginny get engaged, and with her fathers blessing, they were married in the same church as her mum and dad.....
And they lived happily ever after.......
Penny re-read the story again after adding the Central Park bit.... then she spotted a huge gaff... but unsure of how to correct it, she turned to Oakey and Isobel...
"There's only one thing that still needs fixing - The Kiss - what are we going to do with that?"
KISSES Oakey didn't do KISSES, those were gross and meant for lovey dovey teenagers and romantics. Oakey was neither of those two. He smiled at Penny when she like his idea on Central Park but stayed completely silent when she brought of KISSING!
Hello, Daddy! Hello, Mom! I'm your ch-ch-ch-ch-ch-ch-cherry bomb!
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Originally Posted by teamdobby
"Um, no, that's fine." Charlie muttered as an older boy approached them. She wasn't great with older kids but this one seemed nice.
"Have we to make Snow White- not magical?" Charlie asked.
"Huh," Lucas said. "I guess so. So... What needs to be taken out? The mirror, I suppose. And... Doesn't the evil queen turn herself into an old lady? So she couldn't do that if there was no magic..." He shrugged. "I don't know. I'm not very good at this sort of thing."
"Isn't it just exhausting!" She put a hand to her forehead dramatically. She liked this girl, she wasn't all serious like some of the other older girls she had met.
"So, third year, that'll be me next year if mother decides to put me in the right year." she added, scowling.
Fee giggled a little at Aurora and nodded."Yeees its totally exhausting",she said," i dont know how i am going to manage this any longer."They were being really obnoxious and thw blonde actually likd it.hehe.
"Your mother put you in thw wrong year?",the Slytherin asked,"gooosh i would be soo mad at my mum."It wouldnt be nice without all her friends in her year.
Hufflepuff where they are just and loyal they are patient, true and unafraid of toil
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Originally Posted by MyPatronusIsaMoose
KISSES Oakey didn't do KISSES, those were gross and meant for lovey dovey teenagers and romantics. Oakey was neither of those two. He smiled at Penny when she like his idea on Central Park but stayed completely silent when she brought of KISSING!
Penny was racking her brain (which seemed to have turned to sludge), thinking that maybe the doctors could get involved in the storyline again...
"How about we have the doctors giving Ginny different treatments everyday, and then one day they hit lucky - Harry is visiting at the time, so he is the first person she sees when she opens her eyes...And then they fall in love, live happily ever after..."..
And all that soppy stuff that Penny didn't really understand...
SPOILER!!: Ginny White
Once upon a time, in a large faraway city called New York, lived a beautiful and sweet woman...
She dreamt that one day she and her husband would have a beautiful baby girl.. and a year later, her dream came true and she did have a beautiful baby, but sadly she died just after the birth, making the child motherless....
The husband remarried again, but this woman was not like his first wife, she was vain, conceited, bossy and arrogant..
Everyday the woman would ask her butler who was the prettiest in the city and every day the butler would reply that she was the prettiest..
Seventeen years later, the stepmother asked the butler and he gave her a new answer - that another girl was the prettiest of all girls.... and her name was Ginny.
The stepmother fumed, jealous that this child that she helped raise would be more beautiful than she..
She ordered her chauffeur to drive her a really tough area of the city, where she hired a thug to kill the child...
The thug waited for the child outside school one afternoon, and lured her away deep into Central Park, there in the middle of nowhere he bundled the girl into the forest, about to shoot her - the girl cried and begged the thug not to do it - pleaded with him to let her go...The thug took pity on such a sweet and innocent girl and let her go free..
He returned to the city, telling the stepmother that the child was dead.... she was beside herself with glee..
Meanwhile Ginny, had been walking for 2 days, without food and water... She reached the city limits, exhausted, hungry and lost.... Walking down strange streets, the girl saw college dorm rooms and entered a building.... finding a door open, she went in - helping herself to some food from the fridge..
Feeling very tired, she found the bedroom and sat down on one of the bed, laid back and promptly fell asleep..
The seven people who shared the Dorm room made their way back from classes.... Hungry after a long day of study, upon entering the room, they immediately know that something is amiss..Three of the guys walked into the to kitchen, they saw debris of food on the counter... while the other four went into the bedroom to clean up before dinner, they found a strange sight..
A beautiful young girl fast asleep on the bed.
The girl woke with a start on hearing voices beside her... all seven guys were standing beside her whispering.... Jumping up and off the bed, she immediately began the explanation of how & why she was there..
The guys, who were dwarves, were totally stunned that anyone could treat another human being like this... they offered to shelter the girl and in return she would look after them, like clean their apartment and have dinner ready when they got home from college every day ... they advised her not to talk with strangers...
The stepmother was absolutely delighted that her plan to get rid of Ginny worked.... She asked her butler the usual question everyday and again the usual answer came... until one day she asked him "Who is the prettiest in all the city?", and he replied that Ginny was indeed the prettiest.... across town the girl had just left the dwarves apartment for the first time since her arrival, she needed to visit the store for supplies...
The stepmother was livid, because she had believed the girl to be dead.... She hatched another cunning plan to finally rid herself of the troublesome girl.... The jealous stepmother decided to use an innocent girl scout to deliver the fatal blow to the girl who would be prettiest in all the city..
The stepmother hastened to the kitchen to bake a 'special' apple pie..
Three days later, Ginny was cleaning the dorm room, when the doorbell went, she answered the door, even though the dwarves had told her not to.....
There stood a small girl scout, she had cookies in her box and one last apple pie.. Ginny thought that the dwarves would love a warm apple pie with ice-cream for dessert... So she bought it off the girl, walking inside to the kitchen, Ginny smelled the wonderful aroma of the pie, unable to help herself, she cut a slice and began to eat. The pie was delicious, but Ginny began to feel unwell and before she could call for help, she fell to the ground.... She was dead.
The dwarves arrived home from college and discovered Ginny laying on the floor, immediately calling the emergency services...The Paramedics came, checked Ginny over and said she was not dead, but was in a coma and unlikely to live for much longer..
Ginny was rushed to hospital and the doctors began treatment right away.. tests confirmed that the girl had been poisoned by the apple pie.. but they did not hold much hope for the beautiful girl...
The dwarves were lost with grief, not knowing what to do next for the girl - they had an idea of who was behind it, so they went to Campus Police to report the crime...
That evening a young policeman called Harry, walked into Ginnys room, and felt his heart break a little, never had he seen such a wondrous and sad sight at the same time, wondrous at her absolute beauty and sad because she was dying.... And he decided right there that the stepmother would not get away with this travesty, he turned and left Ginnys room and made his way back to the Police station..
He sent the apple pie off to forensics for testing, questioned all the people in the dorm building and soon discovered that a girl scout had been selling the day Ginny had fallen into a coma...Harry found the girl scout and questioned her.. The girl scout told Harry about the stepmother, confirming to him what the dwarves had suspected...
Harry went to the stepmothers house and found her eating dinner with Ginny's father... When confronted with the allegations, she was flustered, unable to answer the questions Harry asked her...Ginny's dad was absolutely furious with his wife - for he had believed that his daughter had run away from home..
He immediately went to the hospital, to his daughters bedside, the pain in his heart was unbearable, his beautiful baby girl laying there helpless and dying...
The dwarves came to visit and met the father, they told him all that the stepmother had done to the girl - He was very angry with his wife but even more angry with himself for having missed the signs...
Harry brought the stepmother to court, charging her with attempted murder, and to the delight of the dwarves, Ginny's father and Harry, she was found guilty and sentenced to 15years hard labour on the chain gangs in Arizona..
Ginny was moved to a rehabilitation centre two days after the trial was over.... the doctors were giving Ginny different treatments everyday, and then one day they hit lucky - Harry was visiting at the time, he thought that if things had been different he would very much liked to have dated and married this young woman... tears leaked from his eyes.. he leant forward to give her a farewell kiss, as his lips touched his - She awoke from her coma, the medications finally working.. and looking into the face of a handsome police officer, she smiled for the first time in two months...
Ginny's father was overjoyed with the recovery of his daughter, as were the dwarves, but none of them held the happiness of Harry.... He had fallen in love with the girl, she was very pretty, but Harry soon discovered that her soul was just as pure.... For Ginny had forgiven her stepmother her crimes....
Harry and Ginny get engaged, and with her fathers blessing, they were married in the same church as her mum and dad.....
And they lived happily ever after.......
Penny re-read the completed story with a huge smile on her face.... feeling very proud of herself and her fellow Puffs - they had de-fairyed the fairy tale
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Reason: Finishing off the story :)
Melina had been thinking hard about all of the professor's questions and coming up with answers in her head when she realized that everyone was grouping up.
Looking around, she searched for a group she could join. She couldn't find anyone. She was starting to feel panicky.
Dude. The Pensevies aint got nothing on you. Aslan is the God
OOC: In my defence I had RL exams, and I couldn't come on to SS much, it wasn't that I wasn't bothering.
Yeah I guess Amy said, yawning, she wanted to go back to the dorm and sleep now. Literally that was all she wanted to do, that or visit Narnia, either would do
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Tonight we are young. So lets set the world on fire---------------- ----------------------------Belle-Marie. Hufflepuff. Fifth Year.
Zara sighed, I guess her, Kurumi, Connor, the Head Girl, big sis Heather--and the new addition to their group, Tayla--were done. She looked around, searching for what professor Zookara was doing as the students around were working.
Hmm. Zara waited until he spoke up. Maybe it was soon. Maybe not. Will the class ever end?
She raised her hand, "Professor, I think most are done already. What do we do next?" Zara smiled at him, hoping he noticed her despite the sea of students talking.
Fee giggled a little at Aurora and nodded."Yeees its totally exhausting",she said," i dont know how i am going to manage this any longer."They were being really obnoxious and thw blonde actually likd it.hehe.
"Your mother put you in thw wrong year?",the Slytherin asked,"gooosh i would be soo mad at my mum."It wouldnt be nice without all her friends in her year.
"Sometimes I think of quitting, but it just wouldn't seem right." she sighed.
"Well I've been home tutored in Germany hence the... lack of accent." she laughed, she was aware that her accent was odd, almost entirely absent and she took advantage of it. "So mother thought it would be easier to get used to the customs in first year, I'd have been fine with second year." She shrugged, scowling a little.
"Sometimes I think of quitting, but it just wouldn't seem right." she sighed.
"Well I've been home tutored in Germany hence the... lack of accent." she laughed, she was aware that her accent was odd, almost entirely absent and she took advantage of it. "So mother thought it would be easier to get used to the customs in first year, I'd have been fine with second year." She shrugged, scowling a little.
Ohhhh she had been tutored in Germany?Now that was really cool."I am half german",Fee chuckled,"where did you live?"The blonde had never expected to meet people that had something to do with Germany here.But apparently there were more than just her.Really cool."I am sure your mum will let you in the right year when she sees how could you get along with everyting",the Slytherin nodded encouraging her new friend a little.
Ohhhh she had been tutored in Germany?Now that was really cool."I am half german",Fee chuckled,"where did you live?"The blonde had never expected to meet people that had something to do with Germany here.But apparently there were more than just her.Really cool."I am sure your mum will let you in the right year when she sees how could you get along with everyting",the Slytherin nodded encouraging her new friend a little.
"Awesome, Ich habe in Koln und Munchen und Dusseldorf und viele andere Orten gewohnen, aber jetzt hat meine Mutter gesagt dass ich nur Englisch sprechen muss." She shrugged. "So I guess speaking german is not the best way to show Mother that I'm used to it. We live in South East England now, we only moved to Germany when I was four so we still have our manor here in England, it's great to be staying here though. We used to come to visit our cousins and stuff and I always wanted to stay but my parents were working in German so you know." Aurora smiled at Fee, she liked her new friend. "So have you ever thought of going back to Germany?" Aurora asked.
"Huh," Lucas said. "I guess so. So... What needs to be taken out? The mirror, I suppose. And... Doesn't the evil queen turn herself into an old lady? So she couldn't do that if there was no magic..." He shrugged. "I don't know. I'm not very good at this sort of thing."
Charlie nodded in agreement with the boy. What else was there in that story? Oh yeah, the apple.
"There's also the apple," Charlie said, "It's like charmed or something to put Snow White to sleep." She racked her brain for anything else, "And the dwarves...well they could just be like wee people." Charlie grinned.
ooc- Sorry for the late reply. Haven't had much time recently
"Awesome, Ich habe in Koln und Munchen und Dusseldorf und viele andere Orten gewohnen, aber jetzt hat meine Mutter gesagt dass ich nur Englisch sprechen muss." She shrugged. "So I guess speaking german is not the best way to show Mother that I'm used to it. We live in South East England now, we only moved to Germany when I was four so we still have our manor here in England, it's great to be staying here though. We used to come to visit our cousins and stuff and I always wanted to stay but my parents were working in German so you know." Aurora smiled at Fee, she liked her new friend. "So have you ever thought of going back to Germany?" Aurora asked.
Ohhhh Aurora's german was pretty good.How cool."I lived in Cologne too",the blonde smiled,"its really awesome there.But to be honest i prefer England."Maybe because she grew up here?Would make sense."I am sure your mum wont mind if we talk german when you feel like it",the Slytherin winked.That was one of the good things about Hogwarts,your parents didnt see everything you did.Grin."Well actually i havent thought about going back i was pretty much raised at London",the girl nodded,"but we go to Germany for summer often.We have a really cool summer house there."
Muggle Studies Lesson 1 
Amy, Isobel, Oakey, Penny, Simon 
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Can anyone put me in their group pretty please? 
