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12-31-2008, 02:54 AM
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The very name of this dungeon should send chills down your spine. If you've landed a trip to this room - you're in big trouble mister. Not only are the walls lined with slime and chains, but a particularly scary suit of armor looms in the corner. Be prepared to be punished to the full extent of Hogwarts punishment. |
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Jack walked in amusedly "Big name, small room" he laughed
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John walked into the room and was ready to cry when he saw what was in the room. He looked at Jack and saw him taking it quite calmy so John decided to put a brave face on. He saw some stuff that were fasterned to the wall and John remember about dad saying they used to hang people by there feet and leave them there upside down for a few days.
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Dumont looked up with undisguised loathing as the insolent pair of boys walked in. He gestured to a wall which was covered with black, icky, sticky substance. "Ready to learn your lesson?", he asked. "The first thing I want the two of you is to begin scrubbing that gunk off these walls, and I want you to do a good job of it. Make sure those walls are completely clean, so clean you can lick them, because you will be doing just that. And by the way, I expect you both to be wearing these while you are cleaning." Antonio casually tossed the twins a pair of clown suits, both were red, green, yellow and blue in color and included big red shoes, a big red rubber nose and a multi-colored bushy wig. "I expect you clowns to do this NOW!"
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01-22-2009, 07:46 PM
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Originally Posted by Slytherin Fox Dumont looked up with undisguised loathing as the insolent pair of boys walked in. He gestured to a wall which was covered with black, icky, sticky substance. "Ready to learn your lesson?", he asked. "The first thing I want the two of you is to begin scrubbing that gunk off these walls, and I want you to do a good job of it. Make sure those walls are completely clean, so clean you can lick them, because you will be doing just that. And by the way, I expect you both to be wearing these while you are cleaning." Antonio casually tossed the twins a pair of clown suits, both were red, green, yellow and blue in color and included big red shoes, a big red rubber nose and a multi-colored bushy wig. "I expect you clowns to do this NOW!" Jack laughed so hard at Dumont's face "Lesson?" Jack grinned "And what are we supposed to clean it with?" Jack asked as he caught the clown costume, putting it on Jack started hopping on one foot "Look, I'm Dumont" he laughed
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01-22-2009, 07:49 PM
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"Let's see how you feel that way after you are done," Antonio said contemptuously, tossing the pair a couple of bloated, stinky sponges and a bucket of blackish looking, soap scum covered water. "See what you can do with that, will you? And make sure that you do a thorough job. And by the way, those outfits are most becoming on the pair of you, they bring out your true personality." He yawned, putting his feet up on the desk and watching the boys.
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Originally Posted by Slytherin Fox "Let's see how you feel that way after you are done," Antonio said contemptuously, tossing the pair a couple of bloated, stinky sponges and a bucket of blackish looking, soap scum covered water. "See what you can do with that, will you? And make sure that you do a thorough job. And by the way, those outfits are most becoming on the pair of you, they bring out your true personality." He yawned, putting his feet up on the desk and watching the boys. Jack stared at Dumont "Oh no, I might get dirty" Jack grabbed a sponge and dipped his hand right in, then taking care to splash Dumont a little, Jack splattered it on the wall.
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"Let's hope that's the case," Antonio drawled, then pointed his wand at his robe and uttered "Evanesco", making the mess disappear instantly. He then turned and cast a wad of mud onto the back of Jack's pants.
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01-22-2009, 08:02 PM
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John watched as Jack pants got muddy. He felt like bursting into tears but decided to put a brave face onto things, even though all he wanted was for the earth to swallow him up. He started to clean the walls so the same thing didn't happen to him.
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Originally Posted by Slytherin Fox "Let's hope that's the case," Antonio drawled, then pointed his wand at his robe and uttered "Evanesco", making the mess disappear instantly. He then turned and cast a wad of mud onto the back of Jack's pants. Jack gave Dumont a dirty look and he scrubbed the wall, all of a sudden Jack's pants felt heavy, yawning fakely, Jack went over to the desk "I'm tired Mr Hopeless" Jack said in a fake tired voice "Can I sit down please?" Jack sat on Dumont's legs which transferred all the mud onto Dumont's trousers.
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01-22-2009, 08:11 PM
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"Evanesco," Antonio pointed at his pants, careful to remove no dirt from Jack's clothing or person whatsoever. "As a matter of fact, I do mind. You will continue cleaning until I give you permission to stop. Keep it up, you aren't doing very well at all and I hope to see a much better effort than this." Antonio smirked and pointed Jack back towards the wall. "The bucket is right over there, get going." He knew the boys couldn't do anything about the situation, he had made certain they had been stripped of their wands before they entered this room, unbeknownst to either of them. They were completely where he wanted them.
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01-22-2009, 08:15 PM
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Originally Posted by Slytherin Fox "Evanesco," Antonio pointed at his pants, careful to remove no dirt from Jack's clothing or person whatsoever. "As a matter of fact, I do mind. You will continue cleaning until I give you permission to stop. Keep it up, you aren't doing very well at all and I hope to see a much better effort than this." Antonio smirked and pointed Jack back towards the wall. "The bucket is right over there, get going." Jack jumped up and grinned "nkay" he grabbed the sponge and scrubbed the wall, hard. The grime started to shift "You ok John?" Jack asked John, John looked like he was going to cry!
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01-22-2009, 08:20 PM
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"I'm okay." Said John has he contined to clean the walls. He was nearly at the halfway stage. He wondered if he would have to clean the wall all on his own.
John was now defently trying to be brave, but unfortunaly for him a single tear came out. John wiped his eyes and then looked at Jack. He though to himself that Jack was being very brave or silly. He would never do a thing like this again, thought John to himself.
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Originally Posted by liammoiser "I'm okay." Said John has he contined to clean the walls. He was nearly at the halfway stage. He wondered if he would have to clean the wall all on his own.
John was now defently trying to be brave, but unfortunaly for him a single tear came out. John wiped his eyes and then looked at Jack. He though to himself that Jack was being very brave or silly. He would never do a thing like this again, thought John to himself. Jack dropped his sponge and hugged John "Sorry mate" Jack felt bad, John shouldn't have been in this detention, it was unfair "Look, Professor Hopeless? Please let John go" Jack pleaded "I'll do anything, please" Jack begged him.
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01-22-2009, 08:35 PM
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Originally Posted by Becky Jack dropped his sponge and hugged John "Sorry mate" Jack felt bad, John shouldn't have been in this detention, it was unfair "Look, Professor Hopeless? Please let John go" Jack pleaded "I'll do anything, please" Jack begged him. As Jack hugged him, John continued to do the wall he whispered to him. "Jack, a little help would be nice" he knew now that he had done something wrong and maybe what he did was going a bit to far. He looked at Jack and wondered if he would ever clean the wall. John knew that he was learning how to clean muggle style and he had always wondered how hard it was, now he knew and he wouldn't be doing it again.
John looked at Jack seriously. "Jack, I got put in detention for being stupid and silly and I deserve everything I get. We went to far and now where paying for it. So if you don't mind, will you help me clean the wall?" He was on the verge of breaking down and crying all over the room, when the detention was finished he though he would break down and cry, but for now he wanted to prove to everyone that he was strong.
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Originally Posted by liammoiser As Jack hugged him, John continued to do the wall he whispered to him. "Jack, a little help would be nice" he knew now that he had done something wrong and maybe what he did was going a bit to far. He looked at Jack and wondered if he would ever clean the wall. John knew that he was learning how to clean muggle style and he had always wondered how hard it was, now he knew and he wouldn't be doing it again.
John looked at Jack seriously. "Jack, I got put in detention for being stupid and silly and I deserve everything I get. We went to far and now where paying for it. So if you don't mind, will you help me clean the wall?" He was on the verge of breaking down and crying all over the room, when the detention was finished he though he would break down and cry, but for now he wanted to prove to everyone that he was strong. Jack turned to look at John "But I was the one who damaged the place, I'll take it all" Jack told John, he knew John wasn't as strong as him, Jack got on his knees "Please Professor Hopeless, please" Jack begged
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Antonio wasn't buying any of this, he didn't think either boy was repenting that quickly. "Keep scrubbing," he said, not ready to relent at this point. These boys needed to toughen up!
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Originally Posted by Slytherin Fox Antonio wasn't buying any of this, he didn't think either boy was repenting that quickly. "Keep scrubbing," he said, not ready to relent at this point. These boys needed to toughen up! Jack glared at Dumont "I asked you very nicely to let John go" Jack told him "You are evil, EVIL!" Jack threw the sponge at Dumont and went to pick up the bucket, if John didn't stop him, Dumont would have he first bath he'd had in years, or so it seemed.
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Originally Posted by Becky Jack glared at Dumont "I asked you very nicely to let John go" Jack told him "You are evil, EVIL!" Jack threw the sponge at Dumont and went to pick up the bucket, if John didn't stop him, Dumont would have he first bath he'd had in years, or so it seemed. John grabbed the bucket of water of Jack "Come on let's not make it worse" replied John as he put the bucket of water down. He hoped that Jack would just do what the Professor said, saying that he had finished the wall.
"I've finished the wall Professor, what do you want be to do next." He hoped that the wall was done properly and he wouldn't have to do it again, and maybe the next thing Jack would help him do it.
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"You call that good? Look there are streaks and smears all over it!", Antonio said. "You are going to have to do a better job than that if you boys hope to get out of here any time soon. And the more lip I hear from you" - he glared at Jack - "the longer you will be here, in fact, you may never leave this room!"
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Originally Posted by Slytherin Fox "You call that good? Look there are streaks and smears all over it!", Antonio said. "You are going to have to do a better job than that if you boys hope to get out of here any time soon. And the more lip I hear from you" - he glared at Jack - "the longer you will be here, in fact, you may never leave this room!" Jack's face dropped "you can't do that" he told Dumont while picking up the sponge again, this time Jack helped to clean the wall, he scrubbed high and low.
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"Is that a fact?", Antonio asked, leaning his face close to the boy's. "This is my domain, and I can do anything I wish here. There is no one here to stop me or care. Think about that. You're not in much of a position to negotiate, either one of you."
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Originally Posted by Slytherin Fox "Is that a fact?", Antonio asked, leaning his face close to the boy's. "This is my domain, and I can do anything I wish here. There is no one here to stop me or care. Think about that. You're not in much of a position to negotiate, either one of you." Jack spun around with anger written in his face "Oh really? What would your daughter think? hmm? Little Antonia?" Jack smirked at Dumont
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Originally Posted by Slytherin Fox "You call that good? Look there are streaks and smears all over it!", Antonio said. "You are going to have to do a better job than that if you boys hope to get out of here any time soon. And the more lip I hear from you" - he glared at Jack - "the longer you will be here, in fact, you may never leave this room!" John looked at the wall, okay maybe it wasn't his best effort, but surely it wasn't that bad. He looked at the Professor "Okay, maybe I haven't done my the best I can. He looked over to Jack and wondered if he had decided to help him do the wall yet.
John started to do the wall again, this time giving the best effort he could, the only problem was that he couldn't reach the top of the wall. "Professor Dumont, I can't reach the top of the wall." He said trying to fight the tears in his eyes, "Honestly Professor I can't reach the top of the wall. Is there a ladder that I could use?."
John scrubbed the wall down, until his hands were bright red and they hurt, he did everywhere he could 110% but the top of the wall was out of his reach, even if he jumped up, he couldn't reach it, he waited until the Professor told him how to do the top. he knew he wasn't allowed to use his wand so that was out of the question.
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Antonio looked at Jack closely. "How is it that you happen to know my daughter's name?" This was a very sore subject with him, he had been willing to sacrifice practically everything he had to get his daughter back with him and now that he had succeeded, he was particularly protective of her. He didn't like people talking her and was very suspicious of any mention of her, especially by someone as devious and sneaky as Jack.
He looked over and saw that John was doing a better job than Jack was. "There, your brother is really working," he said. "Here, let me give you a boost up." He made a ladder appear, making it easier for John to reach the top. He still was going to insist that all the foul, disgusting scum be scrubbed off, but he could make things a bit easier for the boy for right now. There might be hope that he would learn his lesson in time.
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