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07-31-2010, 07:13 AM
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Fifth Year |  Alice - Sa13+ she dreamed of para-para-pardise ♥ ily MY Sara x Sams twinny x Kake/Anastopher/Chalie
Disclaimer: The magical world of witches and wizards, and some characters, belong to the awesome J.K Rowling, the best author ever. Also this story is dedicated to two very awesome people, Sara and Jesse, luff yoou two <3
Haaiii Everyone  Me be Jessica also known as Jess or sometimes Tiger. So This story is basically about Harry finding out about he has a sister named Alice, and when he finds out, it seems everything goes wrong with relationships and everything. Now, shall we begin? YES. Enjoy! <3 Chapter One: The Secrets Out It was a dark night and the only thing you could see in the forest was a girl - she was running and looked as though she was lost. Her name was Alice, Alice Walters. She had beautiful rich red hair, deep green eyes and was dressed in Hogwarts robes that had the Gryffindor crest sewn on them.
Alice stopped. "I’m Coming Harry!” she yelled.
She ran as fast as she could and then she stopped behind a tree. Alice saw Voldemort standing there, pushing Harry against a tree. Hermione and Ron were being held back by two Death Eaters and the rest of the Death Eaters were watching.
“Tell me where your sister is Potter!” Voldemort said.
“I swear, I DON'T have a sister” Harry replied.
“You liar! Very well then, watch your friends die!” Voldemort dropped Harry. He then pulled out his wand and pointed it at Hermione. “Say goodbye, Harry! Avada Ke-“
”STOP! Don’t hurt them please” Alice yelled and she walked out behind the tree. Draco's eyes widened as he heard the words come out of her mouth. He came out from behind his father, but he still could not see her behind all the Death Eaters. Tears came to Alice’s eyes as she said “Please, I’m Harry’s sister. You can have me - just don’t hurt them!”
”Well I cannot promise that I wont hurt them, but I like the idea of harming you,” Voldemort paused. He once again raised his wand. '
I have a sister?’ Harry thought. He knew he had to learn more and to do so, he had to save Alice. He couldn’t help himself. He knew he had to do something, but what? ‘Its a stupid idea but it might work’
“NO - STOP!!” interrupted Draco. He launched himself in front of Alice and all he could see was a bright green light.
“Draco?” asked Alice, confused.
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08-09-2010, 11:24 AM
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A good job so far Jessica!
I do believe, with all you have going on, that you will have a real live soap opera soon! So... Harry has a new sister he knows nothing about... Hermione and Ron are about to be killed... Draco is with the Dark Lord... and dare I say it... Draco loves Alice?
I look forward to you next chapter. Keep it up!
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08-09-2010, 12:14 PM
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I really love your story! Did Draco die? I love how harry has a sister! It's great!
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08-09-2010, 12:26 PM
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08-09-2010, 08:50 PM
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Fifth Year |  Alice - Sa13+ Chapter Two she dreamed of para-para-pardise ♥ ily MY Sara x Sams twinny x Kake/Anastopher/Chalie
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Originally Posted by luna_severus_26  Wow, this is cool!! PAMS!! Thanks Quote:
Originally Posted by Morag I really love your story! Did Draco die? I love how harry has a sister! It's great!
PAMS!
Soph x You will have to wait and find out! Quote:
Originally Posted by MissWeasley A good job so far Jessica!
I do believe, with all you have going on, that you will have a real live soap opera soon! So... Harry has a new sister he knows nothing about... Hermione and Ron are about to be killed... Draco is with the Dark Lord... and dare I say it... Draco loves Alice?
I look forward to you next chapter. Keep it up!
Katie Yes Draco did love Alice at Hogwarts but now may I say he is not sure as he has always not liked potter (Alice's Brother) Chapter Two: Draco, Good or Bad? "Draco? Speak to me!” Alice Said as more and more tears came to her eyes as she looked at Draco’s body
“He’s dead” Hermione Said, even Hermione started to cry
“Alice, I think we need to talk” Harry Said looking at Alice.
Alice could not belive what she had seen, the meanest boy in slytherin, sacrificing himself for a sibling of Harrys ‘This Cant be true, I’m dreaming’ thought Alice “You! You did this how could you!?” Alice said standing pointing at Voldemort
“Its My job” smirked Voldemort “Come Death Eaters, there has been enough deaths for tonight, I shall return Alice”
“Come Narcisses” Said Luciuse, Narcisses was crying the most as he was his son and she thought that she would never have to say goodbye for good, never, but she had to. All the death eaters left with Voldemort, some crying some laughing, Voldemort was one of the many that were laughing, Left there in the Dark Forest was Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley and Alice Potter.
“Uhhh... What Happend?” Draco Said very weakly
“DRACO! You’re alive! But how?” Asked Alice whipping away the tears on her cheak,
Everyones face brightened up as they saw Draco alive. “I don’t know” Draco paused “Alice, are you alright?”
“I’m fine, it’s you that we should be worrying about!” Explained Alice.
Draco Stood up and at the same time so did Alice and once she stood there straight she said “Why did you do that for me?”
”People do crazy things when there in love” Said Draco looking out to the sky
“It wont be long till I do something crazy then” Alice started to blush, she reached out her hand and held Dracos hand tightly
“Step back Alice!” Said Harry Talking His wand out and pointing it at Draco
“What are you doing Harry?” Alice said surprised
“Don’t you remember? He’s a Death Eater, Its probably a trick, thats why he survived!” Said Ron
“Guys, I’m the one who gets called You Know What by him and I trust him why cant you?, you should be happy Harry, he saved your sisters life!” said Hermione
“How do we know if she IS my sister though?” Harry said
“Why Are you going against everyone? Next your gonna say I’m not a Muggle Born!” Hermione Said
“You ARE a Muggle Born Though!” said Harry “Look, I’m just shocked to hear that I have a sister and I would like to know more about this, Alice can I please talk to you”
”Okay, but not here, let’s Go somewhere else” said Alice. Everyone joined hands and they disparted and appeared at once again another forest.
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08-09-2010, 09:02 PM
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WHAT?! OMG! That is such a mean cliffhanger! I knew my brain was right in telling me to read this, I LOVE it! It's awesome! I can hardly wait to see what happens..
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08-09-2010, 09:05 PM
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Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy WHAT?! OMG! That is such a mean cliffhanger! I knew my brain was right in telling me to read this, I LOVE it! It's awesome! I can hardly wait to see what happens.. Thank You, Just To Let You know chapter two is above your post! | |
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08-10-2010, 01:23 PM
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08-10-2010, 09:03 PM
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*fans herself* Draco is NOT dead! *has a wild party* That's freaking awesome! I can hardly wait to find out what happens NEXT! It's awesome, yea some characters a bit ooc but I like them this way! (Voldemort makes me laugh)
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08-10-2010, 09:17 PM
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Oh harry, I really doubt that everyone is lying! Get over it you've got a sister!
Loved the post! I'm so glad Draco is alive.
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08-24-2010, 10:06 AM
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Originally Posted by Morag Oh harry, I really doubt that everyone is lying! Get over it you've got a sister!
Loved the post! I'm so glad Draco is alive.
S x Thanks, Hehe! x Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy *fans herself* Draco is NOT dead! *has a wild party* That's freaking awesome! I can hardly wait to find out what happens NEXT! It's awesome, yea some characters a bit ooc but I like them this way! (Voldemort makes me laugh) Trust me, its all part of the plan  Quote:
Originally Posted by luna_severus_26 One thing, with Harry at his disposal it sems very un-Voldylike to say he's killed enough people Well, I can tell you one thing, Voldemort was never finished, Hehehe...  Chapter Three: The Information Harry and Alice Put together the tent and walked inside and went inside one of the bedrooms. “So, what do you want to know?” asked Alice whilst sitting down on the bed
“Everything” Harry Replied
“What do you need to know now?” said Alice
“How come your last name was Walters?” Asked Harry
“Its our Grandma’s maiden name” said Alice
“Grandmas alive?” Harry said as his face brightened
“No... She died not too long ago” said Alice as her face dulled
“Ohh... You are my sister arnt you? I mean this isn’t a joke? Cause you do look like mum?” said Harry, she had red hair just like there mum, but her eyes were her fathers, she was the opposite to Harry
“I am your sister Harry, Older sister in fact” Alice giggled and then they both walked out and saw Draco, Ron and Hermione having a drink of water at table
“Well, Is she your sister?” said Ron
“She is” answered Harry.
The rest of day was filled with questions that they wanted to know from Alice, Alice was the last to fall asleep as she was still confused as what had happend that day, The next morning Hermione was the first to wake up, she diecided to wake up Alice so they could talk.
“Alice?” Herione said as she shoock Alice side to side
“Yes Hermioe?” Alice said as she opened eyes
“Befor, when you were hiding, when Harry said he didn’t hav a sister, he tried to kill me and Ron, I mean hes been wanting to kill Harry for a long time, but he trys and kills us? I just don’t get” Hermione said, she had throught about it all night but hadn’t figured out why.
Alice just stared at her for awile, “I don’t know Hermione, I don’t Know” Alice said, she really didn’t know and she was still tired, “Can we go back to sleep?” Alice asked
“Sure” Hermione Replied
They Both fell aslee and as the rest of the morning went on it until....
“AHHHHH” someone screamed at the top of there lungs, who was it though?
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08-24-2010, 06:05 PM
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OMG. The description of Alice is almost the same as me only I have harry's green eyes. I wnder who was screaming? PAMS!
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08-25-2010, 09:27 AM
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Nice story 
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08-25-2010, 09:33 AM
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Originally Posted by Dianna Malfoy Nice story
PAMS!!
-Kara Thanks Kara Quote:
Originally Posted by Morag OMG. The description of Alice is almost the same as me only I have harry's green eyes. I wnder who was screaming? PAMS!
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08-26-2010, 10:19 AM
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A great job Jessica!
Your a brilliant writer. I love how you began the story and how it is developing! Keep it up! 
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08-26-2010, 10:34 AM
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oh My FREAKin GOD!
THAT IS AWESOME! ... seriously it must be pretty good I stopped reading Series of Unfortunate Events, just to read it.
You have some crazy ideas, but I like them
Harry has a OLDER sister, Draco loves the older sister
thats some awesome ... yet confusing ... stuff right there
PAMS!
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This is just sooooooo cool cuz like lots of fan fics I dot like but this one is amazing!!! PAMS!
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Originally Posted by samthehpfreak
THAT IS AWESOME! ... seriously it must be pretty good I stopped reading Series of Unfortunate Events, just to read it.
You have some crazy ideas, but I like them
Harry has a OLDER sister, Draco loves the older sister
thats some awesome ... yet confusing ... stuff right there
PAMS! Hehe, Thanks Sam, I am truly grateful for your comment!  *hugs* Quote:
Originally Posted by city_girl_95 This is just sooooooo cool cuz like lots of fan fics I dot like but this one is amazing!!! PAMS! Thanks, Im sure you will love this chapter aka chapter four! Thank You All, You Are The Ones Who Keep ME Going When I Write This Story! Chapter Four: The Lies And Pain Harry and Ron looked at each other as they had woken up because of the scream, They looked around, Draco was nowhere to be seen. They ran into the girls room, There was Hermione, laded down on the floor, probably just fainted or someone but her asleep, but she as alive, she was breathing.
“Hermione, Wake up!” Harry said as he shook her up and down, Alice was gone and so was Draco, they may have been in love but they would not have ran off together, well, not Alice.
“Ughh, He was here” Hermione said with shock written all over her face.
“Who was here” Ron asked looking into Hermione’s eyes.
“You-Know-Who” Hermione said, Alice was gone and Draco was also, Harry saw this coming, why didn’t he stop it? He knew that he should have never trusted Draco, and know this was Harry’s punishment is.
Alice was being dragged along the ground not to far from there, she was being dragged by one of the death eaters, standing next to the death eater was none other then Voldemort, Alice was silent as she was unionise, her clothes were getting filthy as she had been dragged across all the mud and dirt, there was hope though, A hope to find freedom.
As Alice’s eys opend she was not being dragged on the ground, she was in a pitch black room, there was no one to be seen, tears were running down Alice’s cheek, she was scared, where was she?
“Hello Alice” said a voice coming from the distance, who was this?
“Who are you?” Alice asked as she wiped the tears off her face.
“Thats not important, what I want is you” The voice said, Alice listend, it was a male.
“What do you want from me?” Alice asked
“Join me, I can help you, away from the danger of heart break, away from Draco” He said, where was this going?
“Why did Draco do this?” Alice asks
“Because it was the Dark lords plan, to bring you here, but I can help you, I can help you stay away from danger, you will be safe with me, just take my hand and all your troubles will fly away” He said, there was a hand, you could not see who this was but you could see his hand.
“Ok” Alice said she took his hand, her arm stung with pain as a mark was coming on her forearm, what had she done? This was no nice man, this was Voldemort, he had tricked her into joining, he then came out of the darkness, Alice screamed with pain and she was dead scared.
“Welcome to the team” Voldemort said as he let go of her arm, there on her arm was the dark mark, she looked at it, once again she cried, why did she take his arm? She was now a Death Eater and there was nothing she could do about it.
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Woah.. *speechless*
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*stuttering because it is so awesome*
All I can say is PAMS!
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:o suspense!
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OMG...I cannot believe Draco has turned bad again. Harry shouldn't blame himself.
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Originally Posted by Morag OMG...I cannot believe Draco has turned bad again. Harry shouldn't blame himself.
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*stuttering because it is so awesome*
All I can say is PAMS! Thanks Quote:
Originally Posted by Dianna Malfoy Woah.. *speechless*
PAMS! Please enjoy this chapter! Chapter Five: What Has Alice Done? Harry, Ron and Hermione looked everywhere for Alice, not so much Draco, She was nowhere to be seen, she was gone and they had no idea where, Alice knew where she was.
“I can’t believe it, she’s gone” Harry said a he sat down on a log outside the tent.
“Harry, She could have gone far” Hermione said as she sat don next to him putting her arm around him.
“She’s been stolen by You-Know-Who!” Harry said.
As the sun went down and the moon raised they kept looking, they hope that they would find her, hope that she was safe, hop that she alive.
Back where Alice was, she was not in the dark room, she was among all the Death eaters, including Draco Malfoy.
“Why have you done this?” Alice said, she had been tied up in the seat with her hands behind the chair.
“Because I’m aloud” Voldemort said right in her face.
“Draco, fight back, I thought you loved me!” Alice said as she struggled around in the chair.
“I never loved you” Draco said, sadly, it was a part of the plan, Draco would pretend to die, Voldemort could go and follow them and then when they were asleep, get Alice.
“Look, if I’m one of you let me out of this chair” Alice said as she moved side to side.
Bellatrix sighed and walked over to Alice, she untied the chair and went back to sit down.
“Thank you” Alice said as she starched her arm.
“Now, back to the meeting, our plan, to kill Harry Potter” Voldemort said, before he finished what he was saying he looked at Alice, “Alice, you must promise, as you are one of us, to be one of us, deal?”
Alice was shocked, she couldn’t say no but she didn’t want to say yes, act like a death eater, how do you do that? Alice sighed “Deal”
The meeting went all night planning how they would attack Harry Potter, Alice helped them, she was now *sigh* one of them. The next day was the day for the plan to come in action.
Harry, Hermione and Ron had fallen asleep outside hoping that Alice would appear out of nowhere, there was a noise in the forest and they woke up.
“Alice?” Harry said as he turned around, rubbing his eyes, It wasn’t Alice, it was someone else, someone you would never expect it was.....
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Okay, I just caught myself up on the whole thing, and I must say you are a brilliant writer!
Who was it?? Someone I won't expect...but who?!
I'll be anxiously awaiting more, my friend!
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