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02-27-2006, 12:29 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: ♥ waiting for
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cassie Alexandersson | Short post! ok this is al i have. its short, i know but please, im a little stumped on the part that i want to write next. please post here or PM me if u have ideas!
On with the post! “So, what do you want to do today?”
“Hermione im shocked!” Ron said putting on a sarcastically shocked face on.
“What?Why?” Her voice was touched with a bit of concern.
“I’d thought you’d have a schedule all planned out all color coded and each activily would be rated. And it would scream at you if you didn’t cross it out!” of course Ron was referring to his homework planner he got from Hermione for Christmas.
Hermione finally caught on, “As a matter of fact Mr. Weasley, I do,” Ron stuffed his fist into his mouth, which Hermione took no notice of, “but its not colorcoded and the activities aren’t rated.”
“Well since you have this vacation all planned out, then why are you asking me what I want to do?!” Ron questioned. My that boy can be daft.
“No reason. But on tap today is going to the lake that’s about one block away. What do you say?”
“Sure, but I’m concerned Hermione. Does this lake have any giant squids, mermen or anything like that?” Ron face was pricless. Worried would be an understament. Fearful for his life, would be the perfect stament. Fear was etched all over his face. It was like he was looking at aragog again.
“no, Ronald, we muggles don’t think those things exist now go get your suit on!”
As ron started to walk away he remembered, “’Mione, where am I stayibng?”
“Oh right, up the starirs, first room on your left!” Hermione froze. Oh shoot, I have to wear a baithing suit and so does…Ron. Ok, i hope that will keep u guyzs pondering. remember; if anyone has any ideas on how to write my next part PM me! (Since you dont know the idea i will tell u but u cant tell any1 else, but if u have an idea, PM plz! ~Cecilia |
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02-27-2006, 07:57 AM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Where my heart lives forever, with in all Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley Ship stories!!!!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Susan Potter Third |
this is getting really awesome. I wonder what Hermione has in mind? hmmmm? Oh well we'll find out in time. Please post more very very sooon. Love ur fan fic.
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02-27-2006, 08:45 AM
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| Tom's 1/2 Canadian Princess, eh? Streeler
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Neverland.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Christine Esther Anlouise Sixth Year |
~*New Reader*~
omg I love it! you *have* to post more, like nowwwwww! lol jks but hurry hurry hurry and PAMS coz im in love with this story!
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02-27-2006, 11:58 PM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: ♥ waiting for
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cassie Alexandersson | awwww awww girls! thanxs! welcome lizgrintluvrupert4ever and xshannonx! I'm so happy you're here. I'm Cecilia! oh i just have to tell any1 who cares so here it goes: I WAS HIGH SCORER IN MY BBALL GAME TODAY!!!10points!!! YAHOO!!! sorry now that thats out of my system...
For this fanfic, expect a post thursday, because, thanks to rebecafl, i have a post ready to be posted! haha!:evillaugh
On to reviews... susanpotter~thanxs for the review!! You'll find out soon enough! lizgrintluvrupert4ever~phew! long name. anyways thanxs so much for your review and you kind words! (im actually in the middle of reading the fic in ur siggy, is it urs?) I also, love rupert,. xshannonx~thanxs for the pams, and its commin! rebecafl~if u need advice, just PM me! and thanxs for the review! and thanxs so much for the idea! here's a lil somethin.lol. and i was wondering if i could have everyones first name, so i dont have to write out ur long names!. I think i know most of the though... ~Cecilia (isnt he cool?he dances)
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02-28-2006, 05:45 AM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Where my heart lives forever, with in all Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley Ship stories!!!!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Susan Potter Third |
I don't know if i'm right or not, but i have to make a guess. With every fan fic i read i have to make at least one guess. Don't ask me why, i just got into the habite of guessing what will happen next or in the long run. So here's my guess for the long run, Hermione and Ron are going to get togeather, and may be, just may be, Harry and Ginny will get together as well!?!?!?!?!?!?! That's my guess you don't have to answer, but u can if u want to. Ur the writer. POst more as soon as possible. Thanks
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02-28-2006, 05:46 PM
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| Manticore
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: whoville
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Mozart Bronwyn #ee6600 Gryffindor Sixth Year Hogwarts RPG Name: Maebry Grimaldi #ff8d6d First Year x7 x5
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pams again and my name is shannon
~shannon~
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02-28-2006, 09:57 PM
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| Hippogriff
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: In the stars.
Posts: 22,879
First Year | GWFC/BWFC My <3
I love this fic Cecilia, it's adorable.
Anyway, i'm Imi, i'll be reading!
~Imi~
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03-01-2006, 01:42 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: nowheresville MB Canada
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Ohhh swimming...very very interesting. Tsk tsk on Hermione thinking she could go swimming without a bathing suit(hehe). That was a great post. And I'm taking the lifehouse hint to heart and downloading it right now! And the sports thing, I don't play any school sports but I play hockey. My team got 1st in our home tourney on Sunday! I was so excited. Anyway enough about me. I love the story and I can't wait for more!!
~Amy~
p.s If you dont have it figured out, my name is Amy lol
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03-01-2006, 02:31 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: ♥ waiting for
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cassie Alexandersson | Chapter 2.5, The Lake Congrats on ur first place Amy!!!
Oh, hey twin lol. Happy to have you here Imi
Thanxs Shannon and here is the next post..
susanpotter this chapter might help... for Rebeca! This chapter is dedicated to Rebeca!
With that in thought, she ran upstairs to her room shut and locked the door. She advanced to her baiting suit drawer and saw her choices. She could wear a brown bikini, a blue and green polka dot bikini or another roxy bikini but with a white top and pink bottoms. She chose the brown roxy bikini because it would match her eyes and she had brown flip flops and a perfect pink skirt that matched the roxy writing and the logo.
**In Ron's Room**
The thought of Hermione being in a baiting suit didn’t occur to Ron yet, him being so oblivious at times. He just chose a random pair of trunks. They had green hawaiian flowers and down one side it had a navy blue line down it. He put on a white t-shirt and adidas sandals and waited for Hermione downstairs. As he was walking down the stairs the thought occurred to him. Oh **** Hermione was going to be wearing a baiting suit.
When Hermione got down the stairs they decided to walk down to lake, and they enjoyed a pleasant conversation at that.
"So what do you think of Harry and Ginny being together after that I'm-a-big-girl-I-can-take-care-of-myself speech?" Hermione said. She hoped it was ok, for Harry’s sake so he could live through the next year.
"I'm okay with it. I give it an A+ just as long as they don’t kiss in front of me, I'm ok. I just dot want to have to puke every morning and have Professor McGonagall ask why." Hermione tried to suppress laughter but she couldn’t hold it in any longer, she blew up.
"What, what are you laughing at." Ron finally realizing he made her laugh started to laugh and was happy her laughter was because of him. Hermione had a tear trickle down her cheek, so Ron wiped it away with his thumb. They stood frozen for what seemed like an eternity. Snapping out of their day dreams the quickly jumped apart and blushed like a redhead who blushes as they neared the lake Ron said;
"Wanna race?"
"You’re on."
They raced the rest of the way to the lake, but as Hermione expected Ron won because of his strong legs. As he threw his shirt off and dove into the water, but not before Hermione caught a glipse of his chest. 'Man, quiditch did him good..'
Hermione layed out her blanket and sat on it, the slight wind pushing the hair out of her eyes. She felt so alive...so...happy...but yet, the wizarding world as we know it is changing and the society and the power could all end in the blink of an eye between good...and evil. Hermione felt herself dozing off but something cold and wet was caring her, was the wind making her float? "That’s ludicrous' Hermione thought then she opened her eyes.
"Ron what are you doing?"
"Well, seeing as the water is cold and you were dozing off, I thought I might just dump you in there. What do you think?" He asked a smile playing at his lips.
"What do I think? I think...” they were getting closer, "RONALD BILLUS WEASLEY YOU PUT ME DOWN THIS INSTAINT!! YOU ARE AN INSUFFER--" but she was cut off and dirty lake water filled her open mouth and nostrils. She was laughing to herself but found out that something was around her foot and she couldn't get the surface. 'Oh no! Ron please, help me!' she thought to herself, but she passed out.
Ron was on the shore waiting for Hermione to come up for air, but he knew that was too long to be underwater for, unless you’re a merman. The he got a gut feeling in his stomach, ‘Ron please, help me.’ Without another thought, Ron dove into the lake to find Hermione passed out and pale. He swam towards her (having used the bubblehead charm) and quickly swam back to shore. He carried her out of the water and laid her gently on the towel. He remembered one day in Muggle Studies(as opposed to the days when he sleeps) Professor Quinn was telling the class about the muggle form of reviving people called CPR, and they had to practice on dummies, Fred and George told him they would on toads. ‘Thank god I listened’ Ron said and he started CPR on Hermione. After about two minutes he thought all was lost, but he saw the color return to her face.
“Hermione?” He said, but did one more mouth-moth and he felt something, a tongue was in his mouth. He froze and realized it was Hermione’s. He was ecstatic, but he decided to play it cool and kissed back.
Ok kiddies, did you ahve fun? jk, but on ur way out, please post a review!!
Oh and.. HAPPY BIRTHDAY RON!!
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03-01-2006, 02:45 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: nowheresville MB Canada
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Hahah Awww Her saved her life! What a great start to a great relationship! And I bet Rons abs would be absolutely wonderful. This story makes me smile. You really are a great writer Cecilia(do I get a flower? haha) PAMS!
~Amy~
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03-01-2006, 04:06 AM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Where my heart lives forever, with in all Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley Ship stories!!!!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Susan Potter Third |
OH NO! Is Hermione ok? I hope she is. And i hope Harry and Ginny really get together (heheheh). Post more as soon as possible. I can't wait to read more.
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03-01-2006, 06:45 AM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Iowa, USA
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very good. What had her foot something evil or just plain seaweed? Plot thickens maybe.
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03-01-2006, 08:33 PM
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| Bonnie Devotee Keeper of Ginny's Red Hair Doxy
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Amparo Montez |
awwwww ºº new reader ºº Really nice fic please post!
__________________ Bonnie rocks ° have fun in the BWFC* and the GWFC* Bonnie or Wright ? Ginny or Weasley? Just dare. |
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03-02-2006, 02:01 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: ♥ waiting for
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cassie Alexandersson |
hey guys! i may post over the weekend...yeah!!
amy~aww thanxs! but u never know if its the start...but yes, you do get a flower!lol.
susan~yeah you'll see them in the next post
swimMOm~it was just seaweed
Agos*~welcome, and thanxs for the compliments
does anyonw watch one tree hill? if you do... HE'S GONE!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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03-02-2006, 04:43 PM
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| Manticore
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: whoville
Posts: 43,360
Hogwarts RPG Name: Mozart Bronwyn #ee6600 Gryffindor Sixth Year Hogwarts RPG Name: Maebry Grimaldi #ff8d6d First Year x7 x5
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pams please
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03-02-2006, 07:23 PM
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| Hippogriff
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: In the stars.
Posts: 22,879
First Year | GWFC/BWFC My <3
awww that was adorable!
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03-02-2006, 08:45 PM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: ♥ waiting for
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cassie Alexandersson | Major One Tree Hill Spoiler!!!
thanxs guys, this fic is going to take an unexpected twist...i hope you all are ready for it... anyways on to one tree hill..
guys keith scott was one of my favorite characters, and i know it sounds corny but im going to get a siggy and avvy dedicated to him..so if an1 else wants to join me...than u can...
swimMOm~im a weakling too...lol
expect a post during the weekend!!!!
where is everyone??? o well theyre gonna miss out....
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03-02-2006, 11:32 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Dec 2005
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OH MY GOD THEY KISSED SO SEXY....JUST KIDDING
ANY WAY THENKS 4 DEDICATING THE POST TO ME
*sticks out arms to hug you*
THAT WAS SO SWEET I CANT WAITE FOR YOUR NEXT POST
XOXOXOX much love rebecafl XOXOXOXO
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03-04-2006, 01:18 AM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Where my heart lives forever, with in all Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley Ship stories!!!!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Susan Potter Third |
I didn't go anywhere. I'm still here for u. Just waiting for a new post is all. I really love your fan fic. AND i hope you post really really sooon!
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03-04-2006, 03:39 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: ♥ waiting for
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cassie Alexandersson | Postie!! You got your wish susanpotter, here it is: Chapter 3: Awkward Feelings and Confessions
Ron and Hermione didn’t speak to each other the entire way home from the lake. It’s not that both of them didn’t enjoy the kiss per say its that Hermione didn’t think Ron knew that she was conscious. ‘But honestly,’ Hermione thought to herself, ‘he can’t be that daft.’
Of course as we all know...well...Ron is. He thought that she was unconscious and that she didn’t know he ‘kissed’ her back. When they got to the porch, Hermione broke the awkward silence.
“Ron. Umm...er...thanks, for saving me back there. I know it was stupid of me to get my foot caught-“
“Hermione its ok, really, no big deal. I just want to shower and use the phellytone-“
“Telephone Ronald.”
Ron started to blush “Right. Er...see you at dinner?”
As they headed inside Hermione started to say something.
“Ron. I was wondering if you wanted to come with me to rent some movies and we could get candy and order pizza.” Hermione was hoping he would say...
“Sure, let me just shower and stuff and we can go.” Ron headed up the stairs; it was the perfect time for Hermione to clear her head. Hermione plopped down onto the couch and started to think. Naturally, the only boyfriend Hermione ever had was Viktor, if you could even call him one. She had no clue what to do now. ‘Duh! Why Didn’t I think of that before!’ She thought to herself happily and she got up to use the ‘fellytone’ ‘Oh Ron...’ she thought to herself. She dialed a number….
~*Back at the Borough*~ BRRRRRRRING BRRRRRRRRRRRRING!
In the burrow, it was hot. Not only over heatedly hot, but hot and heavy, a major snogging session was under way between one Mister Harry Potter and another Miss Ginny Weasley. BRRRRRRRRING BRRRRRRRRRRRRRING!
Finally hearing the phone ringing, Ginny unwrapped herself from Harry's arm and whispered in his ear phone.
And he retorts sarcastically “Thanks Ginny, so you’re gonna abandon your boyfriend for the telephone?”
“Don’t get your wand in a knot, What if its Hermione calling about Ron problems? Huh! Do you wanna hear them bicker all year” she said, putting an emphasis on the words all year.
“Fine, but hurry up!” BRRRRRRRING BRRRRRRRRRRING!
“I’m commin I'm coming!” she picked up the phone
“Hello?” and she was right.
“Hey Ginny, its Hermione, I need tot talk to you.”
“Ok, so what did Ronnikins do this time?”
“Well…it’s more like what I did per say, I kissed him” she whispered into the phone.
“YOU WHAT?! I’m sorry; could you say that a little louder please, I don’t think I quite heard you?”
“I KISSED RONALD BILLUS WEASLEY AND I LOVED IT!!!” Hermione said, a little too loudly to her liking.
“Awww Hermy kissed Ronnie! So what did he say?” Ginny asked;
Hermione froze. She was pretending to be unconscious when she did it. She mentally cursed herself for doing something so stupid. Little did she know, Ron walked out of the bathroom and heard her ‘outburst.’ He wanted to know what else she was saying, so he stayed.
“I...I umm pretended I was unconscious. Hah isn’t that funny Ginny?!” Hermione said with forced laughter.
“Hermione Granger you’re going to tell him before I reach through the phone and ring you neck.”
“Ok, I get it but…how?”
“Well, how did Harry tell me? Bluntly but it worked for me! Well I don’t know Hermione… why don’t u guys go on a trip or something, Harry and I could come with.”
“OMG GINNY YOU’RE A GENIOUS!!!I know exactly where were gonna go! Pack your bags, because were leaving in two days!” Ron ran straight towards his room so Hermione couldn’t see him. Suddenly, Ron had an idea…. okay there's a post for everyone whose here... I dont like this post very much so I might take a little bit longer posting next time. I want to make it perfect, so sorry but dont leave me!
nyways, cya!
~Cassie(other nickname)
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Reason: changing to purtty colors
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03-04-2006, 05:28 AM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Iowa, USA
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That was great. hard to read though those bright lighter fonts are really hard on my old eyes. PAMS
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03-04-2006, 06:33 AM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Where my heart lives forever, with in all Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley Ship stories!!!!
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03-04-2006, 03:01 PM
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| Hippogriff
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: In the stars.
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First Year | GWFC/BWFC My <3 Quote:
OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M VERY HAPPY THAT HARRY AND GINNY ARE TOGETHER.
I so totally agree! Ohhh i loved it girl! Post more!
~imi~
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03-04-2006, 05:19 PM
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| Ashwinder
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Toronto, ON, Canada
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*new reader*
it's cool!!! i love it... it's cooL! Great start, i admit. can't wait to know what Ron is up to... hehe
[R/Hr all the way!!]
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[Words] of sentiments
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03-04-2006, 05:55 PM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: ♥ waiting for
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cassie Alexandersson |
OMG guys im posting hopefully this week, becuase i have it all mapped out on what I wana write, and im going to add in some of my own memories to the story!
okie dokie now to u guyzs... SwimMOm~so sorry about that, I like colors..lol but the colors will be darker, like blue next time, promise susanpotter~I was scrolling down the page and all of a sudden, I'm attacked by 50 blobs of yellow with faces! lol. I thought you might be happy about that..hehe I just wanted to make it clear for ya! starlightangel~Yea, I'm very excited also, i love them together, like PB&J lol. eliza andrea~Welcome!! I'm so happy you like my story!! . As I have said I LOVE R/Hr hehe. btw, that cat in ur siggy is cute, is it urs? Rebeca~Your welcome, you gave me the idea, so you deverved it!* *
okay, well I gotta go clean, ugg!!!
~Cassie
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