A post!

I really thought you were never gonna update. *pokes you fo makin' me think BAD stuff*

Will comment soon, still have to read. Just makin' my presence felt!

~~Jay~~

Where, where, where? xD

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I really thought you were never gonna update. *pokes you fo makin' me think BAD stuff*

Awww. *hugs you hard* I'll try to post more frequently now, luff.

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Will comment soon, still have to read. Just makin' my presence felt!

I'll be waiting. <3

Wow, so Jenna White is like so cool to me now ... having read post #58. She's a bit of a witch too, kind of rude to Tom but she's so obviously sure of herself it's too cool.

Did I mention I love your writing here? Color me pea green with envy. Seriously. My favorite quotes if you will.

Truly beautifully descriptive, but then you turn around and make it part of the description for Voldemort. I like that kind of creative writing ... nice Maxie and I'm naming a character after you in my fic sort of ...

I loved that quote as well. Very ... I don't know, appropriately dramatic, interesting, it reveals subtle hints without interrupting the story flow. Genius love, just genius. Can I borrow your brain? Because my story needs some genius.

The next post with Bellatrix and Lucius wasn't so strong in text, sorry, but it left a nice interesting mystery, what with the Dark Lord not wanting them to hang out with them and ... well ... what can I say, I'm properly intrigued and totally caught up. Doods, I PWN!

So, yeah. Do you have a new fic? LOL seriously girl you write too much.

Keep up the neat stuffs ... I'm loving this story even if I can't remember the title but I will be remembering Jenna White and Victoria Glade ... yay! So post more loves and soon. Pams for the memories

*is out* But I will be back.

She's a lot of witch. Witch as in.... female who knows magic. =p

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Did I mention I love your writing here? Color me pea green with envy. Seriously.

Thank you. Meloveyou. <3

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Truly beautifully descriptive, but then you turn around and make it part of the description for Voldemort. I like that kind of creative writing ... nice Maxie

Thank you, thank you, thank you YAY.

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and I'm naming a character after you in my fic sort of ...

EEEP! This is SHO exciting. x3

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Can I borrow your brain? Because my story needs some genius.

Pfft, of course you can't. Because your writing is already super awesome, it stuns me. -clings to it-

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The next post with Bellatrix and Lucius wasn't so strong in text, sorry, but it left a nice interesting mystery, what with the Dark Lord not wanting them to hang out with them and ... well ... what can I say, I'm properly intrigued and totally caught up. Doods, I PWN!

Teeh, PWN you do. The last post was my special treat for my Lucius-loving readers, though. I really hope I didn't mess it up. =[

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So, yeah. Do you have a new fic? LOL seriously girl you write too much.

Awww, I don't write THAT much. But the last three fics I've written, were all written within a week. =D No new story for now, though.

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Keep up the neat stuffs ... I'm loving this story even if I can't remember the title

*pokes* The title is the story. In a way.

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*is out* But I will be back.

As always, I'll be waiting. ^^

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG.
-Hyperventilates-
Lucius Malfoy!!!!
Oh Godddddddddd.
-Dies-
This is the moment I've been waiting for my whole entire life!!! Okay fine, just the small part of my life I've spent here on SS reading Maxeh's lovely fics... But still! Gahhhh. He hasn't done a thing yet and I'm already - as Bellatrix so kindly put it, "fangirling".
I. Must. Have... more Luciusssss! Gah. =|
Okay, but anyway. I really like Jenna and the way she acts around Voldie. It's funny. & I wonder about Wormtail too...
Aw man, I really can't wait for the next chappie, Maxers. =[ I'm so overjoyed right now, Us got all Dracolicious and now TSRTD is getting... Lucylicious? Point is, I want more lisciouness!

I love you. =D

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Lucius Malfoy!!!!
Oh Godddddddddd.
-Dies-

-gasp- Please, PLEASE don't die. =[

*sad*

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This is the moment I've been waiting for my whole entire life!!! Okay fine, just the small part of my life I've spent here on SS reading Maxeh's lovely fics... But still! Gahhhh. He hasn't done a thing yet and I'm already - as Bellatrix so kindly put it, "fangirling".

That wasn't a reference to all the Lucius-loving ladies here, really it wasn't.

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I. Must. Have... more Luciusssss! Gah. =|

Awww. You'll have to contend with Jenna for now, luff.

-TWO hugs-

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I really like Jenna and the way she acts around Voldie. It's funny. & I wonder about Wormtail too...

*hugsmyJenna* I know she's someone I've created myself, but I like her so much! Can't help it, I have this really sweet physical image of her in mind.... how she looks and everything, and I love it.

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Aw man, I really can't wait for the next chappie, Maxers. =[ I'm so overjoyed right now, Us got all Dracolicious and now TSRTD is getting... Lucylicious? Point is, I want more lisciouness!

Dracolicious? Lucylicious? We sound like crazy fangirls!

Which we are. =p

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Originally Posted by Max

A diamond ring upon his finger, and a diamond pin in the topmost button-hole of his expensive coat, Lucius Malfoy was certainly a sight to see as, wending his way between tables, he finally took a seat in front of the dark-skinned beauty who was carelessly ignoring the many people stealing looks at her.

You make him sound SO delicious.

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“Bella,” he said, raising her hand to his lips.

“Lucius,” she returned, half haughtily.

I lyk this bit. I think it shows their characters really perfect..... she's proud, haughty, an' he knows his manners, has had rich upbringin' - good bit, shows a lot in just two sentences!

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– A distance that disappeared the moment their trio, their dream team, was completed by the addition of Jenna White.

So Jenna is lyk the missin' link?

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“It is a pity the two of us can not talk to her,” Lucius remarked. “I still do not understand why the Dark Lord has told us to stay away from her. But I guess he will have had his reasons. He always does, does he not?”

Oooh, mystery!

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The fangirling is beginning, Lucius,” she said, with a slight smile.

If that wuz a reference, it just hits its mark.

GREAT post! Thunky0000 for the Luciluv.

~~Jay~~

I'm sleepy updaatinggg.

Hang in there, y'all.

“What do you think of him?”

Voldemort’s voice shook her out of her thoughts. Jenna White looked up, at the face that had killed so many, at the face that so many so feared, before choosing not to reply – If the man was fine enough for him, the man was fine enough for her, too.

“It’s hot in here,” she said, casting off her cloak to reveal the two, thick, silver braids travelling down the front of her chest, and ending at her waist. Silver bangs brushed her forehead, and she impulsively pushed them back. “Why can’t we just wear white?”

“I think,” and, now, Lord Voldemort’s voice was severe, “you sometimes forget who you are talking to, Jenna.”

“If you don’t want me here, tell me. I can leave.”

He ignored the comment. “You are hiding something from me, Jenna.”

“Only because I promised Wormtail.”

“What has he done this time?”

“I promised him I wouldn’t tell you.”

Lord Voldemort was examining his wand, now. “There is no end to your insolence.”

“Insolence? I can not break a promise for you.”

She had gone too far. Voldemort’s wand moved with the speed of light, but so did hers. The curse deflected, hit a table. It shattered into pieces, which dissolved into tiny, dust-like particles. If it had hit her – – but she knew. She knew him.

He had not intended to hurt her; he had only been testing her reflexes.

“That could have hurt me, you’re so –” she began, eyes huge.

“Jenna!” Voldemort said, and there was something deadly cold about his tones. Jenna fell silent, immediately. For a moment, the room was absolutely devoid of noise. Then she muttered, “I’m sorry.”

Voldemort looked away. “There is no need. But you take my leniency with you too lightly.” He paused, silent for a moment. When he spoke again, his voice was its usual business-like cold. “Bella told me you said you would like to learn the Dark Arts from me.”

She looked at him with wide, silver eyes. “I know you do not teach.”

“I have taught Bellatrix.”

“She has long been your favourite death eater. I have not been with you for more than a fortnight. I –”

He looked up. “Yes?”

She hesitated. “I am not asking you to teach me,” she said quietly. “I have never hidden anything from you – you know I do not know the Dark Arts. I only know magic, powerful magic, and I learned it myself, practicing long days and longer nights. I have not asked anyone.”

For a moment, she felt she might have said something wrong. But she did not, would not, falter under his gaze. It was cold, very cold, a gaze icy to the core. She met it with her silver one, her wide-eyed, innocent one, and then she looked away.

“You are making me nervous.”

“I want to see you, tomorrow night. At the Mageant Mansion.”

He turned, disapparated.

For some reason she herself could not discern, Jenna’s hands were cold.

Thanks, cuz.

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I lyk this bit. I think it shows their characters really perfect..... she's proud, haughty, an' he knows his manners, has had rich upbringin' - good bit, shows a lot in just two sentences!

Thank you. Glad to know you liked it. ^^

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So Jenna is lyk the missin' link?

Sort of. But then again, she could be the "missing link" pretty much anywhere. That's her. =]

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Oooh, mystery!

Not really. xD

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If that wuz a reference, it just hits its mark.

Of course, it was wasn't. xDD

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GREAT post! Thunky0000 for the Luciluv.

Luciluv? New addition to the Lucius dictionary, tee hee.

Thanks, luff. <3

Woah!!!!
SSoooo cool!!
I felt like I was actually in the chapter! xDD
PAMS!!!
Jess

Thanks, luff. <3

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I felt like I was actually in the chapter! xDD

Awww. That's one of the best comments a writer can receive. You just made my day! -hughughug-

Duuuuude. o_O
You're like the best freakin' writer alive, you know that? I'm so serious! Maxers, you're too skilled. Honestly, if a teacher assigned you to talk about roaches, you'd describe them so amazingly that everyone would suddenly.... want to be a roach. Okay, maybe not! But you totally rock my socks.
I love love love love Jenna's smart mouth, BAHAHA who would have ever imagined Voldemort with a back-talking Death Eater?! I love it! It's almost kind of cute how he lets her get away with it, too. She's cute. -Pokes Jenna then runs away before she hexes my head off-
I can't wait to see what happens nextttttttt! I must know, I must know!
& HEY! I just realized this is in the Romance Stories section! Which means... pairings!
Okay, I want Jenna to end up with Lucius. =|
Don't blame me for always wanting the heroines to end up with a Malfoy... xDD

You just.... made me go red! I mean, honestly, I'm not THAT good. I've seen better writers on SS itself, and I'm really not trying to be modest, or anything. You're just too good, my DeeLeeLuffeee.

P.S: I'd turn down that assignment.
Not. xDD

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I love love love love Jenna's smart mouth, BAHAHA who would have ever imagined Voldemort with a back-talking Death Eater?! I love it! It's almost kind of cute how he lets her get away with it, too.

It makes me feel all warm and nice inside when someone says they like Jenna. I mean, I love her so much for no reason other than the fact that she looks so cute when I imagine her. And because I've felt her when writing her. <3

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She's cute. -Pokes Jenna then runs away before she hexes my head off-

Jenna [narrowing eyes]: Watcha doin', huh, WATCHA DOIN' girlie?

Okay, so that was SO not Jenna.

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I can't wait to see what happens nextttttttt! I must know, I must know!
& HEY! I just realized this is in the Romance Stories section! Which means... pairings!

LOL! You realized that, now?

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Okay, I want Jenna to end up with Lucius. =|
Don't blame me for always wanting the heroines to end up with a Malfoy... xDD

You want 'Mione with Draco, you want Jenna with Lucius.... You're Malfoy-crazy, my Malfoylicious DeeLee. =D

ILOVEYOUSOMUCH.<3

Yay I made The Maxers blushhhhh.
Well, even if there's other good writers out there, you are still and will always be my FAVE!

! LMFAO!

Awwwww!
! I wish I could imagine her the way you do so I could draw her out! I finally found my sketchbook so I've been drawing lately. =] xD
Oooooooh, that gives me an idea of something to dooooo...

! I'm just glad she didn't hex me.

Oooooops.

! I can't help it! Maybe I just have a thing for evil men with platinum blonde hair? I dunno, but I really love these guys.

ILOVEYOUSOMUCHMORE!

Is that something to be happy about? =p

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Well, even if there's other good writers out there, you are still and will always be my FAVE!

Thank you, sweetie. I'm honoured. ;]

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I wish I could imagine her the way you do so I could draw her out! I finally found my sketchbook so I've been drawing lately. =] xD

You sketch? Oooooh, I love sketching! Not very good at it, though. =( Can you sketch Jenna? She's.... really Jenna-like.

:|

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Oooooooh, that gives me an idea of something to dooooo...

What, what, WHAT? You HAVE to tell me, DeeLee'reena! You told me you had a surprise for me a week ago too, and you never told me anything about it after that! You're an evil DeeLee, keeping me in suspense. But you know that, don't you?

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I'm just glad she didn't hex me.

She wouldn't, she's my girl. -pets her-

xD

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I can't help it! Maybe I just have a thing for evil men with platinum blonde hair? I dunno, but I really love these guys.

Evil men with platinum blonde hair....

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ILOVEYOUSOMUCHMORE!

ILOVEYOUMOST!

[And am hence the winner of Round No. Can't-remember-the-number]

Of course!!!

!!

Yeppp, I've been "the one that draws" my whole life. Well, when I started high school, I became more of "the one that likes to pull pranks and harass people" ...
I'd totally love to sketch Jenna though!
& I mean... that description really helps, Maxers... Like, a lot.

I'm not sayiiiiiiiiiin'! Okay, well, maybe I was considering doing a drawing. Nothing serious, though, but rather... something cute. Tee hee. You'll seeee.
& About the surprise, I haven't finished it! Okay, I won't lie... you know how artists are known for not finishing their work? Weeeeelllll... I still haven't finished mine. But I will one day, promise!

Heyyyyyy, don't make fun of my detailing skills just 'cause you're like 98234827348 times better at it than I am!

Pffffft.
ILOVEYOUMOSTEST!
I win, luff.

It doesn't take much to make me blush.
I can't handle being praised. :[

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Yeppp, I've been "the one that draws" my whole life. Well, when I started high school, I became more of "the one that likes to pull pranks and harass people" ...

I was "the one who studies" for an awfully long while. The "straight A's" kid, and all. But high school does strange things to people - it turned me into "the one who breaks rules."

At least it didn't make me the "the one who WROTE." xD

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I'd totally love to sketch Jenna though!
& I mean... that description really helps, Maxers... Like, a lot.

See how good I am at describing things? LOLOL. She's.... pretty, I guess. REALLY innocent. With almond-shaped eyes. Sort of hauntingly innocent, almond-shaped eyes. And waist-length, smexy hair.

:|

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I'm not sayiiiiiiiiiin'! Okay, well, maybe I was considering doing a drawing. Nothing serious, though, but rather... something cute. Tee hee. You'll seeee.
& About the surprise, I haven't finished it! Okay, I won't lie... you know how artists are known for not finishing their work? Weeeeelllll... I still haven't finished mine. But I will one day, promise!

I'm still in suspense. Even more suspense than I was in before, actually, because now I want to know what the drawing is about. *waits to be surprised* YAYAYAYAY. =D

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Heyyyyyy, don't make fun of my detailing skills just 'cause you're like 98234827348 times better at it than I am!

I wasn't making fun of them, the description just struck me as awfully funny true.

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Pffffft.
ILOVEYOUMOSTEST!
I win, luff.

ILOVEYOUMOSTEST!mostest.

I win. xD

Well, you'd better start getting used to it!

My little Maxers the Great a rule-breaker?! !!! I'd pay to see that!
LMFAO how did you avoid that label?! Your writing's so goooooddd... =|

! Okay, that's better! Tee hee. Now I feel inspired to get started on it! I think I will! =D

!
Mwaaaaaahahahahahaha!
You'll just have to wait and seeeeeeee....

! That should totally be their dictionary definitions.
Malfoy, Draco: Smexy evil man with platinum blonde hair.
Malfoy, Lucius: MILF FILF of the Draco; also evil with platinum blonde hair.


ILOVEYOUMOSTEST!Mostestestestest than mostest of most!
o____O
I win!!!
Give up already!

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Originally Posted by Max

“It’s hot in here,” she said, casting off her cloak to reveal the two, thick, silver braids travelling down the front of her chest, and ending at her waist. Silver bangs brushed her forehead, and she impulsively pushed them back. “Why can’t we just wear white?”

I luv her!

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“I think,” and, now, Lord Voldemort’s voice was severe, “you sometimes forget who you are talking to, Jenna.”

“If you don’t want me here, tell me. I can leave.”

He ignored the comment. “You are hiding something from me, Jenna.”

“Only because I promised Wormtail.”

“What has he done this time?”

“I promised him I wouldn’t tell you.”

Ok, so I KNOW this is a really long quote, but I just had to quote the whole bit. The thing is, their conversation is so awesome! It seems to move along so effortlessly........... an' I luv it, luv how Jenna seems to be with him "on her own terms" an' everythin'!!!!

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“Insolence? I can not break a promise for you.”

I luv her courage! One unique DE!!!

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He looked up. “Yes?”

She hesitated. “I am not asking you to teach me,” she said quietly. “I have never hidden anything from you – you know I do not know the Dark Arts. I only know magic, powerful magic, and I learned it myself, practicing long days and longer nights. I have not asked anyone.”

There's somethin' strange between these two! I mean, I love their conversations!!!!

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He turned, disapparated.

For some reason she herself could not discern, Jenna’s hands were cold.

Awesome endin'! You have me hooked so POST POST POST!

Love,
~~Jay~~

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My little Maxers the Great a rule-breaker?! !!! I'd pay to see that!

I wasn't a rule-breaker, I was THE rule-breaker. That's why I miss high school so much, now. xD But college is good, too. *hugs College*

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LMFAO how did you avoid that label?! Your writing's so goooooddd... =|

Guess what? I didn't! I was always "the one who writes" alongside the rebel with a cause. xDD

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Okay, that's better! Tee hee. Now I feel inspired to get started on it! I think I will! =D

YOU ARE TOO GOOD! Iloveyou SO much, THANK YOU!

-one million hugs-

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Mwaaaaaahahahahahaha!
You'll just have to wait and seeeeeeee....

-anticipates like mad-

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That should totally be their dictionary definitions.
Malfoy, Draco: Smexy evil man with platinum blonde hair.
Malfoy, Lucius: MILF FILF of the Draco; also evil with platinum blonde hair.

I LOVE the "also evil with platinum blonde hair" bit.
Too good, too good.

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ILOVEYOUMOSTEST!Mostestestestest than mostest of most!

-dead'ed-

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Originally Posted by Jay

I luv her!

I'll take that as a compliment. =p

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Ok, so I KNOW this is a really long quote, but I just had to quote the whole bit. The thing is, their conversation is so awesome! It seems to move along so effortlessly........... an' I luv it, luv how Jenna seems to be with him "on her own terms" an' everythin'!!!!

Thank you once more, luff.

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There's somethin' strange between these two! I mean, I love their conversations!!!!

Awww. -hug- It's good to know you're enjoying reading TSRTD.

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Awesome endin'! You have me hooked so POST POST POST!

Thanks. Updating, just wait a second.



* * * I love y'all!

Narcissa Black’s lean face, usually rendered handsome by its striking, perfectly-shaped features, looked uncharacteristically ugly [though not uncharacteristically bad-tempered] as she surveyed her elder sister through steel-like, blue eyes.

“Where I go, and with whom, is solely my concern, Bella,” she said, her voice so high, it shook.

Leaning against the staircase in a gray gown of sorts, Bellatrix Black raised an eyebrow. Narcissa, she could not help thinking, was turning out to be as much of a disappointment as Andromeda. How could the girl be foolish enough to think the Castles her well-wishers?

“Indeed,” she said, her tones cool. “It becomes my concern, however, when the family pride is at stake – and all because of your foolish whims.”

“Andra Castle is my friend!” Narcissa half-screamed.

“Andra Castle is a Castle,” Bellatrix replied, very calmly.

“That doesn’t make her –”

“That does make her an enemy, Cissy. You know just well as I do that no Castle has ever wished a Black anything other than the utmost ill-will. What a stupid story they’ve come up with this time – Why would Andra want you, a sworn Black, to come along when she shops for her dress? She would have brought it long ago, rest assured. And, even if she hasn’t, she wouldn’t let a Black know that. The humiliation! Or is she that stupid?”

“She’s stupid,” Narcissa mumbled. Bellatrix laughed.

“I don’t doubt that, Cissy, but I don’t doubt that she has some cunningly shrewd people around her, either. Alva Castle – and, most importantly, Victoria Glade. That woman knows Andra in and out: she would certainly be expecting some stupidity of this sort from the fool.”

Whenever Bellatrix reasoned, Narcissa could not help finding herself at a loss for words. But, abundance of speech or not, she knew one thing, and she knew it well: Bellatrix was not going to run her life.

“I don’t care about Victoria Glade,” she said stubbornly. “Get out of my way, Bella.”

“Cissy, don’t be stu –”

“Stupefy!”

She had not learnt the Dark Arts – and that, too, from the Dark Lord himself – for nothing. Bellatrix Black deflected the curse with ease, but she could not help swearing under her breath. Narcissa was acting a fool!

“Cissy, if you don’t stop it this instant, I will tell mother!”

“Take your time,” Narcissa replied acidly, storming down the staircase. “Because, you know what? You’re going to have all the time in the world.”

There was a crack, and Narcissa had vanished into thin air.

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Grr, I can't believe this thread didn't show up as having new posts in my subscribed threads list!
Anyway.
Whooooooo! Awesome chappie! Narcissa's so cute, all naive... Pfft. I bet she's still evil anyway! BUT OMG! Wait a minute! Narcissa! That means... LUCIUS! Ooooooh, I wanna hear the story of how they got together! Bahaha, I love this, though. >=]
More, more, moreeeee!!! I wanna see the drama unfold.

Hi. =p
-gasp- BAD thread, bad!
I thought you wanted Lucius with Jenna.
Has anyone ever informed you that you, DeeLee, are evil?

xDD

Bellatrix is soo evil!!! grrr xDD
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xDDDDD
Jess