Thankooo for the compliments, and yes, I don't particularly like Mafilda. I even tend to forget her name. xP

Might .. update soon.

You didn't update!!



Love,
~~Jay~~

I shall try to in half an hour, sweetie.

*petpet*

[Sorry for the late comment MaxieluffYAY! ]
I'm actually feeling quite guilty for hating Lucius.
-pets-
His mother is horrible to him!!
I would hate to dance with *cough* [Future Bellatrix-Malfoy]. xD
Great chapter!!
PAMS!!!
Jess(:

oh i love jeans too...i am sort of live in jeans kinda person...

oh you so need to update TSRDT...or else it will get upset...

College is being a right pain in the head these days, which is why there is a lack of updates, guys. But I promise, REALLY promise, to update, this week. Really. REALLY, really.

Iloveyou, guys. Thank you for being here!

Sorry I'm late, still you know I wouldn't miss this for nothing Maxie. I love Lucius' mother btw. OMG! She's so deliciously evil ... I mean when it comes to matching her son ...

As always your descriptions are spot on, and beautiful like this:

Silly horses, pride commeth before the fall ... neways,

I love how Bellatrix made her entrance. Oh, she's so wickedly beautiful ... yes she is ... I have to say I love her ... *sighs*

I love Lucius' mom. Seriously, cool. I love her, I love her, I love her.

That is all. You write the best female characters ever, and Lucius looks dashing to say the least ... I can see his pained expressions so clearly nice work as always Maxie. Back when I can ...

I. WILL. Update. Today.

Or should I say...

“Mother!” Lucius exclaimed, and it was with quite a struggle that he managed to keep his tones normal. He knew well that he would have to put up with Mafilda until he came into his inheritance - yes, he had other plans, after that, trust you me - but this was more than even one with his patience could tolerate.

Mafilda did not even look up. “Yes, Lucius?” she asked, very, very sweetly as she straightened up to her full height, and smoothed out the creases in her dress. Had to look the epitome of perfection she was, you know.

“You can not be serious," Lucius said, most irritably. "Really – Bellatrix and I, we are no match. We are good friends, I do not think you know, and I have good reason to believe that we will never be more than that.”

"What?" Mafila drew herself up, in quite a blaze of quick fury. "Do you mean to say that she has turned you down, already?"

Lucius raised a perfect eyebrow. "I do not understand," he said stiffly. "Why you would even consider such a possibility. I have no - never have had any - wish to ask her out. We would make a most incompatible pair. There is little that is common between us, and even less that we can agree upon -"

Mafilda Malfoy’s eyes went from sickly-sweet to pretty-casually-evil with swift and well-known ease, and she gave them a rather unnerving roll as she did not wait for him to finish, and cut through his train of words. “Do not be silly, Lucius. She will make the perfect wife. Have you seen the way she carries herself? Brilliant, just brilliant. Look at the other girls here – fidgeting midgets, it is a surprise they can tell their right hands from their lefts. They do not even know how to walk in a dress! She catches my fancy, Lucius – nobility and poise seem to speak of her!”

“But –” Lucius was now struggling with words, mostly because he was angry. “Mother, this can not be!” He managed to finally blurt out. “She is not my type. We are good friends, but you can not even imagine the disdain she would show if she were ever proposed by me.”

“Lucius, Lucius, I always thought you believed yourself to be a ladies’ man,” Mafilda said exasperatedly, eyeing his rather muscular arms with a rather evil smile. “Something ofa hottie." She waggled her eyebrows - to her son's utmost horror. My gosh, this is my MOTHER? - and went on, "She will not disdain anything once she falls in love with you.”

“She will not fall in love with me!” Lucius half-shouted at his parent, glad that there were no people nearby to overhear this conversation. “She is no doubt beautiful or noble or whatever else rubbish you believe her to be, but she is not the one for me. I know her too well - I can not try to seduce her!”

The raise in the pitch of his tones disturbed Mafilda. “There is no woman a bit of love can not change,” she returned haughtily but, the truth was, she was pretty sure now that she would lose this fight, if she did not come up, at once, with an argument that could floor him in one, silent moment.

“This is Bellatrix Black we are talking about, mother," Lucius snapped in anger. "The pride of the Blacks, their golden jewel.”

“Which is exactly why a match between the two of you would be just the thing!" Mafilda flared. His anger made her lose her own cool, and this irritated her. "Families as elite, as pure as ours, as the noble Malfoys, are few and far, in our World. She comes of the several that are at pars with ours. The match would be brilliant!”

“Mother –”

“Lucius!” Her tones were cold, like chilled steel, and when Mafilda Malfoy’s voice acquired the touch it had just transited into, Lucius knew you could no longer argue with her. She became like fire, ready to burn, ready to devastate - gently, kindly. “My decision is final. Bellatrix Black is, and will be, a future Malfoy.”

Lucius sealed his lips, his insides on fire with bottled-up rage.

Sokay, Otty. <3
Thank you, and NO WAY! Bellatrix is ... a VERY BAD Bellatrix. I can not believe you love her. -pokethpoketh for you-

She killed my Sirius. ={
Is that a way to say my male characters are no good? =pp

I joke, I joke. Thank you SO much for the lovely review.
*clingles to the OttySt* <3

xD xD xD xD xD xD
zomg!!!!
Lucius mother is horribly evil, yet hilarious!!
Ive never pictured Lucius with Bellatrix, but Im waiting to see what happens next!!
pams!!!
=)Jess

Mafilda: HOW DARE YOU CALL ME HILARIOUS?

Yeah, she's angry. You better run, JesshLuffYAY.

Perfect indeed!

DUDE!
I love their form of speech…. it's so nice and fancy. Makes me wanna start talking like that too, hehe.

I dunno why but that made me giggle. Pretty casually evil…
Something I'm quite familiar with, too…
WHAT, WHAT?! I didn't say anything! -Looks around-

OMGGGGG. HAHAHAHAHAHHAAHA!!! I could totally imagine her giving him the eyebrow smiley look ->
Poor Lucy!
I bet he wouldn't mind if I gave him the eyebrow smiley look…
WHAT, WHAT?! I didn't say anything, what're you talking about?! -Looks around-

Aw, shucks, really?!


I knew you'd be excited, my love! So am I!

Awwwww this is so romantic, Maxers, please write more ASAP. I can't wait to get to the wedding, I've got my dress ready and all!

Lucius: My darling. -eyebrows-

I tried. For some reason, it seems to... fit. I can't imagine Andromeda speaking like that, though. Not Cissy, either.


Mr. Donkey says he remembers! 'Cause you locked him up, once.

MORE THAN ONCE! <-- That was Mr. Donkey.







BWAHA! What colour is it? =pp

-Swoons-


Yes! It fits just perfectly!
LMFAO You're right about Cissy and Andra not talking like that... it would make Voldie too happy. I love Andra's casual hey-what's-up speech with Voldie, it's hilarious.


Whaaaaatttt! :O
No wayyy!
I never did that, Donkey!!!

... Okay maybe I kind of did.... but I gave you fame! FAME, DONKEY, FAME!





It's black. O_O

No, I'm kidding, it's white of course... It's purrrrtttyyyy and sparklyyyy and Lucy will faint when he sees me in it!

Jenna! *poketh*

Mr. Donkey: I shall have my revenge! *enrolls with Maxie*

xDD

*rushes Lucius to the hospital, in advance*

Wedding cancelled. OOPS.

Aw shoot, kick me.
That was very embarrassing. Very embarrassing indeed... I think I'm gonna go crawl into the nearest hole and suffer a slow and painful death...

!
Bah! -Covers up blush-



Heyyyy wait a minute! You guys aren't allowed to turn on me! You're my minions!



NO!!
NEVER!!!
-Breaks into hospital screaming all madwoman-like and kidnaps the unconscious Lucy-
Conscious or not, this wedding is still ON! >:O!! I've waited too long for this moment!

O_o

DEE! How dare you say something like that? Take it BACK!
*hugs you forever* Iloveyou. <3

Is that so? *eats whippie*

MWAHA!

Draco: You're going to cheat on me with THAT?

-dead'ed-

YOU POSTED!!!!!!!!!

After LOTSSZZZ of failed promises you posted!!!!



Love,
~~Jay~~

I'm sooweee!
*goes to hidddde*






I post often. I just don't ... update that often.

Okay.

So loved the post.

Luvv how evil Mafilda is! And their fancy speech is awesome. Good characterization and can't wait fo moree!

Love,
~~Jay~~

Thanks a big bunch, luff!

Brand New Reader.... I think I might just might start fan girling Lucius..

I read Us... I fell in love with it I couldn't stop reading it! It was awesome,
you do AWESOME jobs on writing them... And this one is also perfectly awesome! I am jealous of your writing!

Welcome to TSRTD, luff!
... and yes, Lucius can be hot. xP

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed Us, and hope to continue seeing you here, too.

<3

So we get an update?

Lyk nowwwwWwwwwWWWww?

Love,
~~Jay~~