Krysta: Yep big shock, but relieved. Sorry about it being nearly finished, but to your luck i am doing a sequal, which im writting now. I'll update you every now and agian

hrmy luv 4eva: me too, god i just write what comes to my head, to what eva mood im in, so that proberly why some posts are wacky...!!!!!! LOL!!!. Totally its what every one would do if that happened to them

bubi people

Evangeline
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A sequel! A sequel!

yes Krysta there is going to be a sequal

its sort of a mystery one

got any good names???

Evangeline
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That was Good!!!!
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I missed so much!!!
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PAMS!!PAMS!!PAMS!!
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Plz tell me wat the name of you sequal will be!!!

-meg :lock2:

A sequel? YAY! I love sequels!
Names...this sounds really dorky but what about "The new Nightmare 2"?

just kidding

How about "A Terrible Sacrifice" or something like that?

Well its a mystery sort of story, like something goes missing, they find it, but different. I don't know someone dies suddenly and they want to know why. Yea thats good i might do that

anyway the only title i could think of was 'The mystery' but its very boring and not very catchy. Anyone got any new titles????

Have feel free to PM me then

Thanks

Evangeline
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Ginny and Harry were both sat at Lily’s bedside when a nurse walked in.
“Mr, Mrs Potter, your sons are here” at that Albus and James rushed in. They ran to there parents
“Mum, your ok” James said giving her a hug, something he wouldn’t do publicly
“Hi mum, dad” Albus said happily giving them both a hug
“Hello Albus, James” their mother gave then each a kiss on the cheek.
“How’s Lily?” James asked his parents
“She’s asleep at the moment” Harry moved then over to her bed, they sat down at each side of her bed and started to have a conversation. Albus looked around Lily’s bed; her bedside was full of get well cards and presents.
‘Why didn’t I think of bring a card?’ he asked himself before turning back to the conversation.

After about 10 mins James brought up the relationship topic.
“Mum, Dad guess what? Albus has a girlfriend” He told them happily hoping to get him told off. Albus glared at him.
“Is this true Albus?” his father asked
“Yes” he replied gloomily
“What’s her name?” His mother asked
“Lily-Anne” Albus slouched down in his seat waiting for a letcher from his parents.
“Congratulations Albus” his parents said. James started to protest
“Now James your brother is entitled to have girlfriends, just like you are” Ginny told him sternly

Nothing more was said on that subject. After about 20 mins more conversation Lily was showing signs of waking up. They all stopped talking and watched her. Lily moved restlessly in her sleep but did not wake. Ginny and Harry looked at each other both had the same thing on there minds.

Suddenly Lily woke screaming. Albus and James jumped. Lily started to cry and Ginny took her into her arms. She started to cradle her, kissing her forehead every now and again. Lily was shivering, remembering her dream
“Th…the d…dark place…” Lily began
“Shhh, I’m hear” Ginny said soothing her.
Albus and James looked at each other blankly. Harry started to explain,
“She told us before that when ever she dreams she goes to a dark place, well it scares her, being alone” He stopped and looked at his only daughter.

Awwwww Lily it's all right, the darkness won't hurt you. Not while Sabrina and I are here. Teehee, James wanted to get Albus into trouble. Yeah right, I think Harry would be please to see his son having a girlfriend, it's Lily-Ann's parents that Albus needs to worry about.

This is really good Evangeline... only two more chapters to go

For a new title what about: The Unfortunate Dissapearance (spell check)

Jemma
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thanks Jemma

great title. might use

more soon very soon

hoping to have the story finished by teh end of today

Evangeline
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Lily sat up in bed doing a muggle puzzle with her mother. It was a day after she woke screaming, it sent concerns round to everyone. She couldn’t stay in one room on her own, or she would get really scared. She also had to be with someone, mostly here parents, where, ever she went, which was not normally as she was still healing.
This time it was Ginny. Harry was with Albus and James getting some breakfast.
“I don’t get how you do this puzzle thing mummy. How did daddy do it again?” She asked her mother.
“I have no idea Lily. We’ll ask him when he gets back with the boys”

A good 10 minutes later Harry, Albus and James walked in. Harry took one look at the puzzle (which was together wrongly) threw his head back and laughed, disturbing other patients.
“What’s so funny daddy?” Lily asked from her bed
“You’ve done the puzzle all wrong” he explained
“Could you show us again please daddy” Lily put on her puppy face for him. Harry say down next to Ginny and showed them (Yet again!) how to do a muggle puzzle.
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“Your going back to school tomorrow boys” there father told them. Lily was a good way in from finishing the puzzle at this point.
The boys nodded their heads, a little disappointed. They both wised they could stay longer
“Don’t’ look so glum boys; we will be seeing each other at Christmas. Albus, Rose will be going back tomorrow with you” there mother smiled at them
“Finished” Lily almost shouted, she was very please with finishing her first muggle puzzle. Harry looked it over,
“There are a few wrong pieces in t he wrong place, but well done for trying” Harry made the changes.

How about: "The Thirteenth Chime"...actually I like that. I might use it myself. It shall be a murder mystery. Whenever a clock chimes thirteen times someone turns up murdered.

PS - was it jigsaw puzzle? Aww, that's really cute.

Now dont say that i might steale it. LOL!!!!!

Last chapter tonight but now i need to have some lunch

bubi

and Krysta i might really steal that idea

irs a good one, just going to change it a bit, not telling you what to

bubi, going to eat my yougot and banana

Evangeline
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No probs! You're welcome to use it! Can't wait for the final post! Phew.

PS - what's bubi?

bubi means bye

ok well thanks but im going to change it lightly

Evangeline
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UPDATE:

Albus, James and Rose all stood in a straight line, ready to leave. The nurses had declared Rose well enough to go back to school.
“Albus, James be nice to each other and don’t get into trouble. See you at Christmas”
“Me, trouble” James began to laugh
“James” Harry said warningly. James stopped laughing
“Albus look after Rose, make sure no harm comes to her” Ginny told his son in a whisper
“Yes mum” he whispered back letting Ginny kiss him on the cheek.

“Rose, be careful at school, always stay with people you know” her mother told her
“Yes mum” Rose kissed her mother, hugged her father and joined James and Albus

After more goodbyes, hugs and kissed they were ready to go
“Bye Rose” Hugo said giving his older sister a hug
“Bye Hugo!
“Albus, James” Lily outstretched her arms for them to give her a hug.

10 minutes later the three children, each with a finger on a old boot (portkey), they looked at their parents one last time before they were lunched into nowhere. They began to spin.

A big light began to shine in the headmaster’s office. The headmaster didn’t even look up. Albus, James and Rose suddenly appeared in the office.
“Good morning Mr. Potter, Mr. Potter and Miss. Weasley, nice to have you back” Professor Smart finally looked up to look at them
“You may go” He said
The three children stumbled out the office and down the stone steps.
“Well I must go, I need to see Samantha” James ran off
“Who’s Samantha?” Rose asked Albus
“His girlfriend” He told her simply
Albus grabbed Rose’s hand and started to run towards their common room
“Where we going?” Rose asked
“To see Lily-Anne” Albus told her.
They came to the porthole. Said the password and rushed in
“Albus” Lily-Anne jumped from her sat to give Albus a kiss. Rose stood there feeling embarrassed. Finally they broke apart.
“Lily-Anne this is my cousin Rose” Albus pointed at Rose
“Rose so nice to meet you at last. I’ve heard so much about you” Rose looked at Albus, who smiled. Lily-Anne at that moment new she was going to get along with Rose.
“Did you know us three together; we could solve mysteries, and fight anything that needs fighting” Lily-Anne said suddenly, startling Albus and Rose
“A three-some. Like my dad and your parents Rose were at our age”
“Our adventures have only just begun” Rose told them
They looked at each other and laughed. The three best friends, best friends always.

THE END………………

lol, fantastic ending! It's like the Famous Five! They need an animal who can go on all their adventures with them, ha ha.
I really can't wait for the new story. The Trio next-gen!

Well Done Evangeline!

Thank you Krysta and everyone else (I'll name you all later. LOL!!!!) I've never read thE famous five, i dont like the books. I just made it up on the spot. LOL!!!!

ok all my writting skills are going towards the new story adn the one im doing with Sabrina. The new story will be up some time in my summer hoilday.

It was a plesure writting for you guys

Evangeline
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Awww Well done Evangeline!! That was an excellent story



You were amazing and the story was even better. You should read the Famous Five... they could be the Terrific Three!

Just to let you know, when you have all the comments you want... just pm one of the mods and ask them to move this one and the other one to the finished fan fics section.

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aww, what a nice ending! I luff it!

Well done!

THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR READING

A SEQUAL WILL BE UP IN A COUPLE OF WEEKS (OR A MONTH)

SO STAYED TURNED

IT WAS A PLESURE WRITTING FOR YOU ALL

Evangeline
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OMG i cant believe i missed everything!! I missed so many posts!!!
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Great ending and i cant wait for the sequal!!!
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Wen u find out can u PM me the name?

-meg :lock2:

I cant believe i missed so many posts oh i feel so bad i missed loads of posts and a sequel name could be " The Nightmare Continues" and i love the story loads more now since everyone good is safe.............................................. ...............................................
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For now

PS. can you PM me when you start the new story too including the name!

That was so great! Well done! And don’t worry; I’ll be on the lookout for the sequel, promise!

Thanks for writing such a great story!

Thanks everyone

ok well with a lot of thinking, adn deciding. (just to say i loved all your ideas) but i have come up with a name:

The Nightmare at Midnight

like??

Evangeline
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I don't like it i love it loads!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cant wait for the last posts adn well i cant wait for the sequel.

Harry Potter Freak 1 this story has finished

im writting te sequal at the moment

Evangeline
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