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04-30-2008, 07:32 AM
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#76 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape Evangeline how could you??? Poor Lily!!
Malfoy how can you just stand there?? It's obvious you hate her! Stupid idiotic boy!
Lord Vulture, you are a horrible, ugly, mean, psychotic, evil, derranged, person, who will never be Lord Voldemort, even if you wear his cloak!
Hang in there Ginny, I'll kill her for you!
Harry get your butt over there right now!!!
Okay, now that's out of my system. Brilliant post hunni ! Can't wait to read more!
Jemma
xxx Your post makes me laugh a lot. Hehehe LoL!!!!
well first of all your find out what happens to Lily after that scene.(And It had to happen)
Second Malfoy would be killed if he attacked back, sort of like if you insulted Lord Voldemort.
Third I agree with all the insultes you said about Lord Vulture and Im suprised you found out the bit about her having Lord Voldemorts cloak.
Fourth I agree GINNY HANG IN THERE!!!! Lol!!!
Fifth Harry is on his way Lol!!! or is he???
All my post just come to me when i am left alone. Lol!!!! so everything is from my brain. Lol!!!
luv ya all
xXEvangelineXx
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04-30-2008, 01:37 PM
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| Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
Posts: 8,662
Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump
AHHHH no!!! not Lily and Ginny.
Please Harry, save them!!
PAMS!!!
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04-30-2008, 02:03 PM
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| Wandering Regulus Billywig
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 3,984
Hogwarts RPG Name: Mathi |
NOOOOOOOO!!!GINNY AND LILY!!!
*pets poor harry*
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04-30-2008, 05:42 PM
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| Neville's Patronus Jobberknoll
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: At home.... duh
Posts: 4,122
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Fourth Year | Evangeline I say this because I care for your well being... Save Ginny, Lily, Rose and Ron or there will be no well being! Only joking babes! I'm just worried for them. That's all!
And the cloak was easy, she is trying so hard to be a copycat, but she isn't. Voldemort was a man first and foremost. That's sort of the major major difference!
Love,
Jemma
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05-01-2008, 01:31 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Here, or there...
Posts: 366
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PAMS, PAMS, PAMS!! What's going to happen to poor Lily? And Ginny!!
Harry, hurry!
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05-01-2008, 09:20 PM
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| PAMS PLZ! Dugbog
Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: on the soccerfield
Posts: 119
Hogwarts RPG Name: kate tabetha williams Graduated |
pams!!!!!!!!!!
great job @ figuiring out that was voldies cloak sabrina snape that is good observations
post more soon got 2 go
~kristen~
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05-02-2008, 08:47 AM
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#82 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape Evangeline I say this because I care for your well being... Save Ginny, Lily, Rose and Ron or there will be no well being! Only joking babes! I'm just worried for them. That's all!
And the cloak was easy, she is trying so hard to be a copycat, but she isn't. Voldemort was a man first and foremost. That's sort of the major major difference!
Love,
Jemma
xxx Quote:
Originally Posted by MAthI^_^ lol!!i agree ^!!good obervations and
sabrina i am your partner and responsible for Evangeline's well being![Evil](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/evil_grin.gif) You too just make me laugh. Lol!!! your comments are funny. Thanks for reading, I have a thought this story is going to finish way before i want it too, Im running out of ideas(I you have any plz PM me about them, thanks) Quote:
Originally Posted by harrypottercutie101 pams!!!!!!!!!!
great job @ figuiring out that was voldies cloak sabrina snape that is good observations
post more soon got 2 go
~kristen~ I was good figuiring out. Lol!!! Thanks for reading. more soon Quote:
Originally Posted by hpObsessed PAMS, PAMS, PAMS!! What's going to happen to poor Lily? And Ginny!!
Harry, hurry! Um...Well....opps can't give anything away, it will ruin it, ill post more soon and then you should have your answer. Lol!!
As i said with Sabrina and MathI, I'm running out of ideas of places they could go, people they can meet etc. so if anyone has any idead plz PM me and i will be sure to use your ideas. lol!! thanks
luv ya all always
xXEvanelineXx
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05-02-2008, 11:48 AM
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#83 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Chapter 9 Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Ok guys and girls. Here is the next chapter, a few questions may be answered, i don't know. Lol!!!
Harry appeared outside rons hospital room looking drained. He opened the door and tumbled in, Hermone looked round
"Harry, what are you doing here?" She asked looking surprised, she stood up
"Ginny, Lily, Gone, Taken"He said panting
"What!!, Hary sit down get your breath back and tell me the whole story" Harry sat down for a few seconds to get his breath back. He sarted to tell Hermione his story.
Harry was still sat, telling his story, half an hour later, when they had a happy surprise.
There was movement behind them and when they turned they saw Ron as moving and had his eyes open.
"Ronald"Hermione shouted with joy, she jumped up. Harry smiled but all he could really think about was Ginny and Lily.
A healer walked in at that moment, She looked at Ron then suddenly ran out shouting "He's awack, He's awack."
Rons eyes had amusement in them.
For the next hour healers, family and friends came and went, taking no notice of Harry's sadness.
It was annoced that Ron was going to recover, He will be scared for life and while hes recovering he won't be able be able to move or speak, but will be able to hear.
Hermione and Mrs Weasley were crying with happynes. Mr weasley, Charlie(and wife), George(and wife) were beaming. Bill and Fleur had not yet arrived.
Harry stood up, mumbled something about getting a drink and left. But he heard foorsteps behind him.
"Harry wait" It was Mr weasleys voice. Harry slowed down so Mr weasley could catch him
"Whats the matter Harry?, you seem really down, and wheres Ginny and Lily?"
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"Put me down" Albus wriggled in Hagrids grip, Hagrid ignored him and carryed on down to his cabin.
Hagrid walked accross his pumpkin patch and into his small, but cozy cabin. Hagrid finally let Albus down,
"Sit while i make a cup of tea and we'll talk" He went to the stove to fill with water to boil. Albus sat down sulkly.
" 'ere you are" Albus looked at the tea Hagrid put in front of him.
"Albus your friends tell me you have been down lately"
"I just miss Rose, Ok?" He replied sulkly
"I know what your going through"
"NO YOU DONT!" Albus shouted, tears in his eyes. Albus ran out of the cabon and up towards the castle. Something made him stop. Ok so what do you think??? chapter 10 will be up soon, once i've finished writing it, Lol!!!
luv ya always
xXEvagelineXx
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05-02-2008, 02:13 PM
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#84 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Here, or there...
Posts: 366
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Yes, new post! ![Woot](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/woot.gif) Love the story, keep going! I wonder what made Albus stop. |
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05-03-2008, 12:01 AM
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#85 (permalink)
| Neville's Patronus Jobberknoll
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: At home.... duh
Posts: 4,122
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Fourth Year | Evangeline, did I ever tell you how much I love your stories?? ![Glomp](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/glomp.gif)
They're marvellous!! ![Bow](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/bow.gif)
Ron's awake, now they can go and kill Lord Vulture! *grabs her wand* Let's go right now! :hack:
Poor Albus. Don't worry we're about to go and get Rose and Lily and Mum back for you.
Hagrid, Run after him, he needs a friend.
PAMS!!! And if you'd like me to read it, you just have to pm me hun!
Jemma
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05-03-2008, 03:47 AM
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#86 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: In my mind
Posts: 279
Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | when oh when can we kill Lord Vulture:hack:
I hate her
poor poor lily
its good that rons awake
love voldyXOXOXOXO
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05-06-2008, 11:43 AM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Belgium soon enough!
Posts: 211
Hogwarts RPG Name: Charlotte Tonks Second Year |
rons awake!yeah!!! ![Woot](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/woot.gif) whos going to help albus!! who?! i ask you!! great post!
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05-15-2008, 05:26 PM
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#88 (permalink)
| Wandering Regulus Billywig
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 3,984
Hogwarts RPG Name: Mathi |
Wow!!amazing!!
Harry ![Glomp](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/glomp.gif)
yep!!Ron's awake!!Lord Vulture
Albus ![Console](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/console.gif) Hagrid give him some advice and he does need a friend!!
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05-15-2008, 05:32 PM
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#89 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by MAthI^_^ Wow!!amazing!!
Harry ![Glomp](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/glomp.gif)
yep!!Ron's awake!!Lord Vulture
Albus ![Console](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/console.gif) Hagrid give him some advice and he does need a friend!!
ive been trying to post all week, but with no luck. Lol!!!
look on my other story i have a few new posts for you, i think you might like them. Lol!!!
luv ya
xXEvangelineXx
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05-16-2008, 02:51 PM
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#90 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Ok Guys soory for the long wait, how long has it been??.... 14 days. Now that wont do, these SATs i just had did not help. Lol!!! we got to keep all my readers happy.
Anywho anyhow here is the next chapter, short but thoughtful:
Rose heard a scream from above her somewhere. She jumped.
‘It sounds familiar’ she thought
5 minutes later the dungeon door opened, light was poured in. There were three people at the door, and she knew who two were. Malfoy slightly pushed a crying Ginny who was carrying Lily who was slightly stirring.
Before Malfoy closed the door he smiled, not a evil smile, but a kind smile. The door was closed and it went all black except from the tiny window above. Rose looked at the body Ginny was holding.
“LILY!” she shouted running up to Ginny and Lily. Ginny fell to her knees and placed Lily slowly on the ground.
“What happened?” Rose whispered to Ginny
“That Lord Vulture women threw a cruitus curse at her” Ginny replied before crying all over again. Rose felt like half of her life had drifted through the dungeon floor at that moment.
‘How could she do something like that, I wish someone would come save us from this…. This place’ she thought. She thought back to Malfoy’s face before he had shut the door.
‘He had smiled, not evil, nice, like he liked us.’ She looked at the full shinnying through the tiny window high in the wall
‘its just like he wants….’
“Rose” Ginny said interrupting her thoughts. Ok short post everyone, sorry. At the time I wrote this on paper I was half asleep. Lol!!!
Please comment. I’ll post…..well when I next post.
Luv ya all
xXEvangelineXx
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05-16-2008, 03:03 PM
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#91 (permalink)
| Neville's Patronus Jobberknoll
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: At home.... duh
Posts: 4,122
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Fourth Year | Draco being nice??? If he wants to be nice let them go for pete's sake!!! (or should that be for Lily's sake??) Loved the post Evangeline!
Half of my posts just come to me as I'm in classes so I wouldn't worry about it! ![LMAO!](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/lmao.gif)
I finished a whole GCSE today! Only 14 more exams to go! Jemma xxx
P.S. Check your UN!!! Oh and PAMS!!! |
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05-16-2008, 05:31 PM
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#92 (permalink)
| Wandering Regulus Billywig
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 3,984
Hogwarts RPG Name: Mathi |
Lucius??being evil??
amazing post!!Maybe he just liked ginny from school...
amazing post!!post more soon!PAMS!!
and wellwe half sleep in class compensating the time i spend here so dont worry about it!!!
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05-16-2008, 07:41 PM
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#93 (permalink)
| Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
Posts: 10,764
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lilly Young Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity
I have caught up again. Great posts. So can't wait for more. please post soon.
__________________ *Keeper of Ginny's Heart for Harry**Keeper of Emma's Sisterly Love For Dan**Dreams Can Come True* ![](http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g100/LittleTrooper/dc29c69b6c8f6924772f9c74af63dc57-d3ea2n9-1.jpg) *Siggy By Nat**Avvy By Jen*Dan is my Mr. Darcy* |
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05-16-2008, 11:32 PM
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#94 (permalink)
| Streeler
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Belgium soon enough!
Posts: 211
Hogwarts RPG Name: Charlotte Tonks Second Year |
draco being nice? well thats new!! ![Dumbledore](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/smilie_dumbledore.gif) great post can't wait to see the next one!!!
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05-17-2008, 12:15 AM
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#95 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Here, or there...
Posts: 366
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PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! ![Woot](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/woot.gif) I can't wait for the next post. Is Draco planning something?
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05-17-2008, 12:21 PM
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#96 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Thanks guys for the posts, but im afriad that the Malfoy in my post his is not Draco but son. What was his name........ Scorpio??
posting more soon
luv ya
xXEvangelineXx
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05-17-2008, 01:23 PM
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#97 (permalink)
| Streeler
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Belgium soon enough!
Posts: 211
Hogwarts RPG Name: Charlotte Tonks Second Year |
ohh! light suddenly dawns on her! that makes more sense! please post soon! |
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05-17-2008, 04:08 PM
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#98 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Lol!!! post more soon, i hope
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05-18-2008, 11:01 AM
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#99 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Ok guys this post is from the top of my head, nothing written down. Ive decided to write from the top of my head because i do it with my other fanfic (Tinkerbell Evens.....Her life Diary) and it seems to be working well, so here we are. Plz tell me what you think
Harry didn't know what to say
"Um...... Well Mr Weasley......"
"Harry what is it, has something happened to them??" Mr Weasley said concered
"Mr Wealsey, yes something has happened. I Think you should here the whole story"
Mr wealsey waited.
"Well it all started when we all got home......." He carried one with the story.
10 minutes later Mr Weasley was in the state of shock
"Who could of done this?" He asked
"I dont know Mr Weasley" Harry replied
He stared to pace up and down the corridor, he stopped and turned to look a Harry, he had tears in his eyes
"We must tell the order, not Molly, we dont want her to fuss" He said to himself more then Harry. He left him standing there in the corridor, and walked off towards the door he had come out of 15 minutes ago.
Harry continued to walk, thinking. 'Who could of do this' He asked himself. He contiued.
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Albus Looked at the Owl floating in front of him. 'Weird' He thought.
Albus Slowly, so not to alarm the Owl, Took hold of the bird and undid the letter from its feet. He let go of the owl and let it fly away, into the distence, towards the owlary.
'I wonder who it is from, i hate nogt knowing who it is from' He undid the seal at the back of the letter, took out the parchement and began to read Quote:
Mr Potter
We need to talk, there are a few things we need to dicuss, in privert. Please come to my office at 8.00 tonight. We can talk then.
yours sincerly
Proffesor Dumbeldor
P.s. I love Fizzy pop
Albus stood there wondering what the last bit could mean. After a few minutes he gave up.
"Ill figure it out later, but now i've got to think of away of getting out of this meeting" He said to himself quitely, 'I just want to be left alone' He thought to himself. Albus started to make his way up the steep, long path to the castle. With Hagrid watching his from his cabin window. Ok this chapter is quite rubbish, sorry, i guess writing form the top of my head for this story is a bad idea. I'll remember that for next time. Sorry.
luv ya all
xXEvangelineXx
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ![](http://i768.photobucket.com/albums/xx321/xxrandomxxgirlxx/enyasig.jpg) ___________________Look Who's Back.
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05-18-2008, 11:14 AM
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#100 (permalink)
| Neville's Patronus Jobberknoll
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: At home.... duh
Posts: 4,122
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Fourth Year | It' not rubbish hunny! Just a bit confused on how Dumbledore can be writing to Albus as I thought he was dead, but other than that, I love it!
Poor Mr. Weasley But I agree, Molly would either fret or go really really angry!
Hope everyone's okay,
Jemma
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