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12-22-2009, 05:51 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hangin With The Crew
Posts: 960
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ariana Jane Salvatore
First Year |  Raquel's Poetry Thread - Sa13+ Abby(:
 I want to dedicate this poem to my big brother who has always tried to be there for me. I may say i hate him sometimes, but i don't think it's possible for me to actually hate him. Here goes.
Always
(From Percy to Ginny)
I carried you when you were weak,
I cried with you when you cried.
I laughed when you laughed,
I sighed when you sighed.
I smiled when you smiled. (and i still do)
I walked with you when you wanted to walk,
I held your hand when you were afraid.
(From Ginny to Percy)
Even when I didn't see,
You were always there for me.
So as you say,
"don't you see? I was always there.
Even when you didn't need me."
I guess I never realized
How much I needed you.
Because only when you weren't there,
Did I see how much I appreciated you.
So...... What do you think? Let me know! I'm not really good at poem writing, but I wanted to dedicate this poem to my big bro. I just wasn't born a poet.
Last edited by demented_death_eater; 07-11-2011 at 02:38 AM.
Reason: I changed Ron to Percy! It fits better. :)
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12-23-2009, 02:43 PM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 15,697
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sebastian Price
First Year | The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
Great Job! Welcome to the Script Crypt poetry vault, please be sure to read all the rules and post often.
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12-23-2009, 02:58 PM
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| | Mooncalf
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Home ♔
Posts: 7,300
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Tilly C. Richards
First Year | Bluejay | Potatopop! | SRS - Stupid Ravenclaw Syndrome
that was beautiful
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12-23-2009, 03:00 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
You have potential my dear..
really good.....
You inspired me....
I think Im going to post a poem ano my thread...
thank you...
that poem was very lovely...
thanks for the lift...
-Xavier
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12-29-2009, 01:27 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hangin With The Crew
Posts: 960
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ariana Jane Salvatore
First Year | Abby(:
This is a poem I wrote because once again I was bored. It is from Draco Malfoy to his imaginary little sister I made up.
As you said
"Tell me who I am,
Tell me who I'll be."
Your eyes reflected the pain,
I felt inside of me.
Your dreams cascaded,
Just like your long hair,
But dear baby sis,
Don't you see? You don't belong here.
I tried to tell you,
But I couldn't push it past my lips.
I listened for you,
But you didn't want to be heard.
You wandered in the night,
You wandered in the day.
Your dreams cascaded,
But still you wanted
To stay, to play.
You told me you were a dreamer,
I told you your dreams don't belong here.
You said I was your safe haven,
I told you, "Find a safer one."
You told me about your dreams
And suddenly I knew,
There was a reason you didn't belong here,
And it was because I didn't deserve you.  I told you, I'm not a poet...... anyway there it is and I hope you liked it.
Last edited by draco'sgirlraquel!; 05-15-2010 at 11:34 PM.
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12-29-2009, 05:04 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Battle School. [:
Posts: 721
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rosalie Wayland
Second Year | || Random Moments, Random Times - Sa13+ || Slytherin's Curly-Haired Beauty(:
OhMyDracoMalfoy!
You're a poet also?
Here I go sending you poetry I wrote in two minutes to find out your not only an author but a poet!
Ha!
Love the poetry though..
Another obsession I have(:
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12-29-2009, 03:32 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: India (GMT +5.5)
Posts: 6,766
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First Year  x1
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Hey, great one and it's really good and also you are a poet 
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12-31-2009, 02:35 AM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: May 2006
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Sebastian Price
First Year | The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
very nice
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01-02-2010, 09:58 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hangin With The Crew
Posts: 960
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ariana Jane Salvatore
First Year | Abby(:
I'm going to try to incorporate this into my ff "A Summer With His Beloved".
It is from Draco to Hermione. I originally wrote part of this for a song, but I'm not so sure I'll make it into one just yet.
Falling
I'm falling for you,
Calling out to you.
I don't care what they say,
I'll throw it all away,
If only I can be with you.
I'm dangerously in love with you,
I've fallen hard.
I knelt by your side,
I held your hand.
I told you I'd dissapear,
If only it'd make your life easier.
But I'm falling in love with you,
Faster every day.
I'm taking my time,
Keeping it slow,
Trying to keep myself
Just as a shadow.
Trying to keep myself
From falling for you.
It's just not working,
I fell for you years ago,
I told you
'Never again'.
And yet I fell for you anyway.
I came back in your life
Only to trash it.
That's what your friends would say,
If only they knew.
If they knew of your past,
They'd kill us both.
I'll dissappear again,
I won't say a word to you.
I'll skip right through your life,
Only to run away again.
I fell for you years ago.
Too bad they don't know.
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JUST REMEMBER.... I'm not a poet! P.S. I changed the last line if you read this before!
Last edited by draco'sgirlraquel!; 05-15-2010 at 11:34 PM.
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01-04-2010, 10:25 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Battle School. [:
Posts: 721
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rosalie Wayland
Second Year | || Random Moments, Random Times - Sa13+ || Slytherin's Curly-Haired Beauty(:
Aww..!
It does remind me of 'Summer With His Beloved'!
How creative!
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02-04-2010, 11:31 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hangin With The Crew
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ariana Jane Salvatore
First Year | Abby(:
Once again I was bored and I haven't posted in a while......
Harry doesn't know
I had to go back to school,
And Harry still thinks he's cool.
He has a wand,
My school has a pond.
He has galleons,
My pet eagle has talons.
He dreams of killing Voldemort,
I dream of not having to write that report.
His best friend's Ron,
I have an uncle named John.
But Harry doesn't know
What I know.
He thinks he's cool,
But people at my school think he's drool
And would rather spend their time at the pool.
Here ya go!!!!!!!!!! Once again I'm not a poet this is just an experiment! (Did I spell that right?!?!?  )
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02-05-2010, 02:36 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Battle School. [:
Posts: 721
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rosalie Wayland
Second Year | || Random Moments, Random Times - Sa13+ || Slytherin's Curly-Haired Beauty(:
Yayy!
Draco poetry!
(Yes you spelled it correctly..)
Goodiee!
~Courtney~
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02-05-2010, 06:34 PM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 15,697
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sebastian Price
First Year | The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
Cute! Keep writing
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04-02-2010, 01:17 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Candy Mountain =P
Posts: 208
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Robin Mitchells
First Year |
Hehe real good! I liked all the poems you posted. Keep writing poems please!
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04-15-2010, 10:43 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hangin With The Crew
Posts: 960
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ariana Jane Salvatore
First Year | Abby(:
Gin and Harry
Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
Ginny loves Harry,
And he loves her too!
He likes his taco supreme,
She likes her krispy-kreme.
They don't think this poem is at all extreme.
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WOW. Another AWFUL attempt at poetry..... LOL I was just sitting here thinking about ideas for one of my stories and this popped up! Wonder why? LOL
Luv Ya!
Laney
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...She wins every time...
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04-16-2010, 06:38 PM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: May 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sebastian Price
First Year | The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
Made me laugh...
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05-15-2010, 11:52 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hangin With The Crew
Posts: 960
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ariana Jane Salvatore
First Year | Abby(:
From Draco to Hermione 
Hermione, oh, Hermione.
Lovely as the stars.
My love for you is bigger,
Bigger than your heart.
You say it's not possible,
I tell you it's true.
I love you as much
As the sky is blue.
If you ever leave me,
I swear I'll have no heart.
I'll turn colder than I acted before.
Leave me and I'll die,
For Hermione,
You are my life.
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Gosh! I am, like, SO bad at poetry! haha But I am, like, SO obssessed with DraMione! Love you guys!
~Laney~
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05-16-2010, 02:46 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hangin With The Crew
Posts: 960
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ariana Jane Salvatore
First Year | Abby(:
This is a poem I made up about Hermione. This is also on FanFiction.net. I didn't steal this. I am JenavyMalfoy. The Preppy Cutter
She's the preppy cutter.
I know that it's true.
You say there's no such thing I say
I believe it, it's true.
She knows that he knows and it hurts him.
He tried to stop her once and got in the way,
She turned him to a cutter that day.
She was tired of listening to those,
Those who told her,
"This has to stop,
It isn't you."
She yelled at them to shut up,
She didn't know what to do.
She told them they didn't know her,
They said they knew her well.
She said they didn't know her,
But they ignored her and said,
"Of course we know you! We're your best friends."
But they didn't know her,
And the guy that likes her,
He thinks he knows her,
She told him it's no use.
To herself she thought,
"Nobody knows me, what am I to do?"
She felt alone and thought her parents hated her.
She prayed to God,
"Oh Lord, please help me,
I don't know what to do.
I'm afraid of this world,
But who am I to say what to do?
Lord I don't know what to do!"
This was her prayer,
On her last day.
She left this poem and said ok.
She gave up 'cause they didn't take the time.
The time to get to know her.
She was afraid of this world,
But not the sands of time.
She wasn't afraid of seeing God,
At such a young age.
She knew him in her heart,
He was her best friend.
He was the only one who really knew her.
She was a rebel, a writer, a singer.
She was afraid of this world
And sought God's help.
And she got it.
She's with him today,
He still knows her thoughts.
She left this poem for those
Whose hearts were tied in knots.
Hope you liked it! Even if it makes you tear up Love you guys! ~Laney~
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06-18-2010, 04:43 PM
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| | Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kaylee Strap
First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
Quote:
Originally Posted by draco'sgirlraquel!  I want to dedicate this poem to my big brother who has always tried to be there for me. I may say i hate him sometimes, but i don't think it's possible for me to actually hate him. Here goes.
Always
(From Ron to Ginny)
I carried you when you were weak,
I cried with you when you cried.
I laughed when you laughed,
I sighed when you sighed.
I smiled when you smiled. (and i still do)
I walked with you when you wanted to walk,
I held your hand when you were afraid.
Even when I didn't see,
You were always there for me.
So as you say,
"don't you see? I was always there.
Even when you didn't need me."
I guess I never realized
How much I needed you.
Because only when you weren't there,
Did I see how much I appreciated you.
So...... What do you think? Let me know! I'm not really good at poem writing, but I wanted to dedicate this poem to my big bro. I just wasn't born a poet. Ohmigosh! This made me cry! It's like soooo cool! (I have big brothers and totally understand this) I love it (how come you never told me you wrote poetry naughty naughty! lol) Quote:
Originally Posted by draco'sgirlraquel! This is a poem I wrote because once again I was bored. It is from Draco Malfoy to his imaginary little sister I made up.
As you said
"Tell me who I am,
Tell me who I'll be."
Your eyes reflected the pain,
I felt inside of me.
Your dreams cascaded,
Just like your long hair,
But dear baby sis,
Don't you see? You don't belong here.
I tried to tell you,
But I couldn't push it past my lips.
I listened for you,
But you didn't want to be heard.
You wandered in the night,
You wandered in the day.
Your dreams cascaded,
But still you wanted
To stay, to play.
You told me you were a dreamer,
I told you your dreams don't belong here.
You said I was your safe haven,
I told you, "Find a safer one."
You told me about your dreams
And suddenly I knew,
There was a reason you didn't belong here,
And it was because I didn't deserve you. I told you, I'm not a poet...... anyway there it is and I hope you liked it. That is soooooooooooooo pretty! And that was to many o's lol, it was really really good! Quote:
Originally Posted by draco'sgirlraquel! I'm going to try to incorporate this into my ff "A Summer With His Beloved".
It is from Draco to Hermione. I originally wrote part of this for a song, but I'm not so sure I'll make it into one just yet.
Falling
I'm falling for you,
Calling out to you.
I don't care what they say,
I'll throw it all away,
If only I can be with you.
I'm dangerously in love with you,
I've fallen hard.
I knelt by your side,
I held your hand.
I told you I'd dissapear,
If only it'd make your life easier.
But I'm falling in love with you,
Faster every day.
I'm taking my time,
Keeping it slow,
Trying to keep myself
Just as a shadow.
Trying to keep myself
From falling for you.
It's just not working,
I fell for you years ago,
I told you
'Never again'.
And yet I fell for you anyway.
I came back in your life
Only to trash it.
That's what your friends would say,
If only they knew.
If they knew of your past,
They'd kill us both.
I'll dissappear again,
I won't say a word to you.
I'll skip right through your life,
Only to run away again.
I fell for you years ago.
Too bad they don't know.
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JUST REMEMBER.... I'm not a poet! P.S. I changed the last line if you read this before!
OhmyDracoMalfoy! I'm stunned, I LOVE Summer With His Beloved! And this poem as well, Quote:
Originally Posted by draco'sgirlraquel! Once again I was bored and I haven't posted in a while......
Harry doesn't know
I had to go back to school,
And Harry still thinks he's cool.
He has a wand,
My school has a pond.
He has galleons,
My pet eagle has talons.
He dreams of killing Voldemort,
I dream of not having to write that report.
His best friend's Ron,
I have an uncle named John.
But Harry doesn't know
What I know.
He thinks he's cool,
But people at my school think he's drool
And would rather spend their time at the pool.
Here ya go!!!!!!!!!! Once again I'm not a poet this is just an experiment! (Did I spell that right?!?!? ) Bwhahahahahahaha! That was hysterical! Love it Laney! Quote:
Originally Posted by draco'sgirlraquel!
Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
Ginny loves Harry,
And he loves her too!
He likes his taco supreme,
She likes her krispy-kreme.
They don't think this poem is at all extreme.
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WOW. Another AWFUL attempt at poetry..... LOL I was just sitting here thinking about ideas for one of my stories and this popped up! Wonder why? LOL
Luv Ya!
Laney Were you eating krispy-kreme!? I think that poem is very extreme! It's wonderful! Quote:
Originally Posted by draco'sgirlraquel! From Draco to Hermione
Hermione, oh, Hermione.
Lovely as the stars.
My love for you is bigger,
Bigger than your heart.
You say it's not possible,
I tell you it's true.
I love you as much
As the sky is blue.
If you ever leave me,
I swear I'll have no heart.
I'll turn colder than I acted before.
Leave me and I'll die,
For Hermione,
You are my life.
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Gosh! I am, like, SO bad at poetry! haha But I am, like, SO obssessed with DraMione! Love you guys!
~Laney~ You are NOT bad at poetry, your uh-maze-ling at it!
Btw, for the most recent one it was a little confusing but good non-the-less!
(I am going to go find you on Fanfiction.net right away! btw I'm JusticesCall)
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06-30-2010, 01:00 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hangin With The Crew
Posts: 960
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ariana Jane Salvatore
First Year | Abby(:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy Ohmigosh! This made me cry! It's like soooo cool! (I have big brothers and totally understand this) I love it (how come you never told me you wrote poetry naughty naughty! lol)
That is soooooooooooooo pretty! And that was to many o's lol, it was really really good!
OhmyDracoMalfoy! I'm stunned, I LOVE Summer With His Beloved! And this poem as well,
Bwhahahahahahaha! That was hysterical! Love it Laney!
Were you eating krispy-kreme!? I think that poem is very extreme! It's wonderful!
You are NOT bad at poetry, your uh-maze-ling at it!
Btw, for the most recent one it was a little confusing but good non-the-less!
(I am going to go find you on Fanfiction.net right away! btw I'm JusticesCall) awww I made you cry! I'm sorry!  lol Thanks! I love ASWHB too! lol And nope I wasn't eating krispy kreme! lol haha thanks! My friend tried to tell me that and we argued over me being good at poetry for HOURS. Literally! lol. . . I'll look for you on ff.net! don't forget I'm JenavyMalfoy. . . I also have a poem on there too.
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09-24-2010, 01:31 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hangin With The Crew
Posts: 960
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ariana Jane Salvatore
First Year |  Abby(:
This song is from Pansy's point of view to Draco. Draco cheated on Pansy with Astoria Greengrass. . . *GASP!* Haha I know, right? Anyways. . .
I got the idea from Evanescence's "Everybody's Fool".
NO MORE
I won't be lied to anymore.
I'm tired of this,
These lies, deception.
It all became clear as I looked in your eyes.
It was a make believe world.
A world that never was,
And never will be.
Now I know,
We never were,
We never will be.
You don't know how you betrayed me.
Somehow, you've got everybody fooled,
With one smile,
You turned my world upside down.
One glance,
One laugh.
Well, you're not real,
And I don't love you anymore!
There was once a time when I would have killed for you,
But you killed my heart,
And I will no longer write you a love song.
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...She wins every time...
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09-24-2010, 11:51 AM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 15,697
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sebastian Price
First Year | The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
Nice!
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09-25-2010, 03:20 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hangin With The Crew
Posts: 960
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ariana Jane Salvatore
First Year | Abby(:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Droo Nice! Thanks Droo!!
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...She wins every time...
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10-09-2010, 07:30 PM
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| | Imp
Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: USA
Posts: 459
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ava Jade Lyall
Fourth Year | | Ava Jade the Valiant | ❤ Mrs. Caspian ❤
Great poetry! I know it's older, but I think my favorite is "Falling" -- so pretty
Keep writing!
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10-09-2010, 08:06 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hangin With The Crew
Posts: 960
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ariana Jane Salvatore
First Year | Abby(:
Quote:
Originally Posted by iluvtowrite Great poetry! I know it's older, but I think my favorite is "Falling" -- so pretty
Keep writing!
Thanks! I like that one too. PS I love your signature! haha
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