okay, I tried this maybe two months ago but for some strange reason it didnt show up- anyways, here it goes :unsure: hope you like, if not thats okay at least I still rock my world

Up

I stab with ice
I run with wolves
you swallow the words I paint
put your ax to my chains
fly me where no one can breathe
I cannot hide my broken wings
my eyes, know
my tongue, chokes it back where it swings high and heavy by your thread
I have never found the stairs to climb
so holdwith your icy breath

its here
YES!
sorry im in a love-the-world-mood
we just won our first volleyball game of the season and i am pumped
i dont even care if no one replied
im happy!

well...we lost our game
but here goes if anyone cares

Untitled (cant think of anything just yet)
you lean in
my breath skips and twirls beneath my chest
but as your eyelids fall
I turn a cheek for your lips to gently land
oh how sweet it could have been
a flavor all its own
cool salty tears sting as they wind down
my cheeks,my neck
with sharp regret
I flee

i love em! The first one is great though, I like the 'I stab with ice/I run with wolves/you swallow the words I paint/put your ax to my chains' awesome dude.

you like me you really like me *tear*
thank you so much it means alot

No problem lol, Could you do me a favour and tell me what you think of my poetry? It's under 'random poetry' thanks a bunch and add another poem!!!

they really say something and are easy to understand
luvved them too much
dont feel weird cuz not alot people reply
this thread is pretty much dead
i was talkin to myself for a while there
okay im not really sure about this one...havent really thought about it just kinda poppped outa nowhere. btw you spell favor with the extra "u" are you from europe or something just curious
here you go:

Gift

We scream
until our pens glide
no more a thin-lined blue
our hearts
we flood
not freely
how did you manage the labryinth
to this place of security
for us to bleed when no one throws a care
scarred and burned to nothing but ashes
lashed about wildly in the wind
enwreathed in unending splendor
you should be
we follow no faceless horses
ready grasp to the noose
that slipped unnoticed
like your tongue
we keep it tethered
and at risked glance
we may slit the throat of the careless





lotsa hugs

Yeah I'm from the one and only England. It's cold, wet, windy and I live in the new 'gun capital', but we make the best buys!
Great as ever!! {the poem i mean}. Thanks for lookin at mine, all the poetry threads seem to be dead don't they? Oh well

whats it like shopping and stuff in England
whats Camden like, Ive heard some great things about it and btw howd ya catch a snitch
anyways heres another


Hangman,Quicksand

ah,the thrill of horror
footsteps
lurking as a shark
in the deepest,blackest waves
whispers
they were not yours
choirs of the most fatal tidings
hollow chords to haunt the bell in your ear
muffled voices
in what you pray was the distance
shuffling of someone else
what freshly dripping torture devise
shall they choose
you will stumble upon...something
is there an afterdeath
silhouettes against the wall
the hooded figure
passing by at a suspicious pace
you should not run from the dark
but what lies within it

i like this one in particular


Riddle

green flames
swallow the ice stained rocks
gasp,white
pullback
then
divinely sharp clouds
bolt to the curvebound dunes
disperse and settle to a foamy broth



figure it out
lotsa hugs

great as ever, im hopeless at riddles though lol. Its great shopping apart from London- its too expensive lol. ive never been to camden. Catch a snitch by clicking the link at the top of the page for HPANA n vote 4 ss.

think reeeeeally hard
if you cant figure it out ill just tell you
lotsa hugs

erm.... the sea? Darn tootin, its so hard when you have a simple mind! *plays world's saddest song on world's smallest violin*

just kidding
omg! you got it! youre the first!
snaps for you!

I'm so proud of myself!! hehe!!

oh my gosh i luv the new smilies
im gonna use all the good ones before i write another poem
these are so me
alright spidey is kinda creepy but here ya go oh btw ya know the one i titled untitled i remembered the title: Almost Something, sorry i took soooo long just call me Dori




Secrets

this is kinda about someone



whisper to the doves
to shatter the bitter silence
i can taste it all too well
it swells around my silhouette
you call me by name
but i am not alive
deception is my craft
i have mastered it as you have speech
an art i cannot forgive
as little less than worthy of innocence
so cast your tongue to the wind
for all its worth
dust gathers quickly
images on fast forward in my mind
you leave and empty world
for me to sketch
what shall never escape my lips
but to the exception of you
i meet and leave you to rest
on what i have finally let go



lotsa hugs

great great great!!

just a quick Q: could you rate this thread for me
thnx too much

did you rate it already
aaaw gorsh 5 stars
what a pal

no problemmo!

kool! where'd you get the second snitch?!?!

i clicked it again
you can do it as many times as you want
sometimes on the same day

im all alone!
well i guess i better write somthin for u to write back about hah
well i feel intelligent

okay im workin on one i swear im just in desperate need of your opinion so be brutally honest plz

how does this sound:
you have not yet crucified your beliefs for them
and that
i shall always keep close
though you are not

...its a workin progress... im a just little shaky on the last two lines if you could give sum constructive *critisicm
*...um...spelling? thanxthanxthanx

Wow great poetry! Thumbs up!