Sorry Snape i didn't mean it in a bad way, i just nevr imagined you that way.......please forgive?!?!?!?

and i thought snape was just a butt hole, but i guess the fatherly part of him had to come out sometime. its just SO surprising to hear that he hugged them

1 Ron that was rather rude... /Punches Ron rather hardly then hugs him

2 SNAPE! /Faints.. You are so nice!

Ooh! I love the bit when Ron told Draco to get away from Hannah! It was so demanding and i loved it. Aw! The ball! Woah, woah, woah. Severus hugging his children? OMG! Didn't know he had it in him. OMG! They're going home?! They can't go home! Oh dear! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita

NO WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


JESS!! I AM SPEEECHLESS! how can you do this to me missy?! Your gonna give me a heart attack or something one day!

Ok i missed like THREE posts (sowwieeeee) so i think an extra long comment is in order

Firstly, Ron and Hannah going to the ball! Sooo cute!! and he seems so excited about it! But draco telling him to get out!! What a meany! hes not even supposed to be there!!! AND he said it at a very appropriate time, i think,, *eyebrows*
And then he wanted a word!! ok thats crazy! his voice was all sweet!! AGHHHH!!!! (plus, you think im excited here, just wait till we get to the kiss )
But i Was NOT expecting the whole mudblood thing! that was harsh!! But if she dumps Ron it might change...THATS LIKE...BLACKMAIL!!! but its ok coz he's smexy
THE KISS!!! OMG WHAT IS GOING ON IM SO EXCITED!!! AHHHJJJGHHHHHHHHH!!!!! i cant believe it!! i love dramione so much..or...Drannah? EEEEEEEEEPPPP!! but naughty hermy! what about ron!! oh never mind, dracos too smexy!! I CANT BREATH!!
Blaize's reaction!! aww he's so brotherly i love him!!! he's so nice!!!!!!!!!! and protective!! and hes ifne with the whole ron thing!! i wanna snuggle him!!!
And finally....SNAPE!!!!!!!!! AGHHH SNAPE!!! YAY but PAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA htat cracked me up when he hugged them lol i can just imagine it lol him being all awkward pahahaha lol well done my jessieluff. THEY ARE GOING HOME!!! Does that mean we get to see more snape-being-a-dad?!?!???!!!!!! WHERE IS HOME?? spinners end? or somewhere else???

Im freaking out now hahaha hope your happy with yourself missy, im now having a nervous breakdown!!!

But its ok, because i love you

Moooreee please! and i promise this time i will be up to scratch with my reading

EDIT: just looked back at my comment. WHOA when i said i was gonna do a long comment i wasnt kidding! BLIMY!!

OMG this is getting so good :O keep writing

New Reader!!!!!!!!!!! Great Writing! Please update soon! Awesome story line (I love Draco and Hermione together)

Cait

Snape: I don't forgive, why even ask the question?



Yeah, it was pretty fun to write the part when he hugged them.
I could only see Snape hugging them only at this time.

xDDD

Ron: What was that for?

Snape agrees(:

I know, I love Ron<3
I shall post later TODAY(:

WOAHHHHH!!!!!
Thank you shoo much for the comment Jennerzzz<3
I don't think I can quote you on all of it, but you have my thanks.

-cling-


Aww thanks

I shall update TODAY, with all of my other stories as well.

Jess(:

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Being mean to Draco duh!

Chapter 16

Blaise raised an eyebrow.

"You mean as in..going home..as in...the mansion?" He asked.

Father rolled his eyes. "Of course." He said.

I took a deep breath in and could feel myself not letting to want the breath out. Next I knew it, I had fainted.

"Hermione, please wake up!" Ron yelled, shaking me.

I groaned and opened my eyes. "Hey Ron." I said laughing a bit.

He looked up and kissed both of me cheeks.

"Blaise told me!! I can't believe you're...you're going home, but wait..who is your father and mother?" He asked.

I was about to say Professor Snape but decided that would not be the best choice seeming as right outside the door Father was watching me.

"Oh, I'm not sure Ron." I said biting my lip. "Anyways did Madam Pomfrey say I could go, whenever?"

Ron nodded and helped me up out of the bed.

"Mr. Weasley, I will take care of Miss Zabini at this moment. I presume Mr. Potter is waiting for you in the Great Hall?" Father asked.

Ron looked back at me and nodded, walking out of the Hospital Wing. Father walked in with Blaise.

"You should be getting ready for the ball." Blaise said.

Father nodded and I sighed, walking past the two into the Head's common room and into my room.

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This sounds great!

SNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPE! Lol.. Awesome

PAMS! I love it!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHH! I cant wait for the next chappie!!!!!!!!!!!

Ooooooooh !!!!!! I can't wait for the ball !! And to see what happens with hannah and Draco wooohoooooo PAMS !!!!!

ball? BALL!??!!

OMG is draco going to be ther? make them love each other!!

LUFFED it jessieluffer PAHAHAHA i just LOVE the image of Snape being a day. Phahahahahahahahahaah

more pweeeese

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

i really like this one, i really want to know wat she thinks when or if she ever goes home, with her brother and her father

PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS

Cait

OMG! A mansion?! Wow! That's so cool! Oh dear! Hermione fainted! And Ron came! So sweet! OMG! A ball! Can't wait for that! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita

Last update 18 JAN 2010

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^ Thanks

Chapter 17

The ball had started.

I could tell seeming as the loud music of the Weird Sisters echoed throughout the hallways and rooms. I straightened out my red satin dress and fixed my extraordinary detailed mask. I took a deep breath in and out and walked downstairs into the Head's Common Room. There sitting on the couch was Draco Malfoy.

"Hmm you look nice Zabini." Draco said raising an eyebrow at me.

I rolled my eyes. Was that a compliment?

"Thanks Malfoy." I snapped.

"Hey, no need for rudeness tonight." Draco said walking over to me.

I sighed. "Why not? Aren't you going with Pansy? I think she'll put the rudeness back into you if you go nice all of a sudden." I said. "Anyways where is Blaise?"

Draco narrowed his eyes at me in anger but looked up at Blaise's door. "In his room still. To think I actually thought girls took longer."

"Is that a joke?" I said angered by him.

"Why yes it was Zabini." He said smirking.

I whipped away from him and started towards the door. Right before I walked out of the portrait hole, Draco's voice entered my senses.

"You look beautiful tonight, Hannah. Hope to dance with you at the ball." Draco said, of course smirking.

I swallowed and walked out searching for Ron.

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OoOOOoooOOO!!!!!!!! PAMS!!!!! Please Can't wait to see what happens at the ball!!!!

Cait

LOL! Draco is soooooo funny!

The ball is gonna be really fun! I love her gown!

cool...pams...

Ooh! Ball time! I love what she's wearing by the way. Great choice! Haha! Draco and Hannah arguing is so funny! Poor Hannah! Having to choose between Draco and Ron. Sort of. The ball's going to be very interesting. Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: I'm so glad that this has been activated again! Oh! And i love your gleeness!