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10-11-2010, 05:34 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Morag Hey Emily, how are you? I'm good, how are you? Quote: Go me! I got it right!....BUT I wasn't expecting this...so I technically got it wrong...
Yep, that's why I didn't want to say anything Quote:
I love you again Draco !!!
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How low can you go...? Too for Bellatrix, too far. That is soo sad. There's no giving up with her is there? With Bellatrix, there is no limit. Quote:
Is Draco ok..What about Emily? Is she ok to apparate while pregnant? Ooo...what will Draco say about that.....
You'll just have to wait to find out Quote:
Emily....NEW THRORY! I'm sorry, this must be getting boring for you Actually, no, I find it quite entertaining Please fill me in on your new theory Quote:
Great Post! PAMS!
Soph x
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10-11-2010, 06:50 PM
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| Snidget
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OMG!!!! WHAT A POST!!
THIS WAS AMAZING!!
I'm still not sure if I trust Draco......hmmm...
Emily you must be careful!!!! (character Emily btw)
PAMS PAMS!!!
K xx
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10-11-2010, 06:53 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP OMG!!!! WHAT A POST!!
THIS WAS AMAZING!! Thanks, Katie Quote:
I'm still not sure if I trust Draco......hmmm...
Emily you must be careful!!!! (character Emily btw)
I figured you were talking about character Emily, since I'm not really in any kind of life-threatening situation at the momento. |
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10-11-2010, 07:46 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Emily. Great post. I'm glad Draco helped her. I'm glad he was able to summon enough courage to go against his fatner. But now, he is in danger of his father, plus... what if his blood smells tasty to the Cullens? Will they be ok with her bringing Draco there?
Great post Emily. I'll be watching for your next. |
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10-11-2010, 08:40 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Connie Hello Emily. Great post. Thanks, Connie. Quote:
what if his blood smells tasty to the Cullens?
It will smell the same as Emily's blood. They don't smell "tasty" because their witches and wizards instead of merely humans... Quote:
Will they be ok with her bringing Draco there?
You'll have to wait and find out... Quote:
Great post Emily. I'll be watching for your next. Thanks, Connie |
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10-12-2010, 07:39 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Canada (GMT -5)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Orchid Danelli Simmons Fifth Year |
OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!
Draco you're naughty and good at the same time...that's why I <3 you XD
I hope your okay luff{Draco} does your side hurt to terribly???
Dr Cullen needs to help you and Remus needs to show up and Georgie needs to find out about his children as does dumbledore!!!
Great posts Ems!
PEACE and LOVE
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10-12-2010, 01:40 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by SarahLestrange I hope your okay luff{Draco} does your side hurt to terribly??? This totally reminded me of Pansy. "Does it hurt terribly, Draco?" Didn't she say something like that in one of the movies? Quote:
Dr Cullen needs to help you and Remus needs to show up and Georgie needs to find out about his children as does dumbledore!!!
No promises Thanks, Lauren! |
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10-13-2010, 05:24 AM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Cancerous
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jesse Thomasin Matthews Fifth Year |
NEW READER
I really like your story Miss Emily...the intensity is amazing as is how well you perceive the emotions in your story. No wonder my friend Lauren is basically in love with your story...your a great writer so please keep writing
!Jesse!
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10-13-2010, 05:44 AM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by Jesse_Longbottom NEW READER Ah! Hi! Welcome to Meet You Under The Moon! Oh, and welcome to Snitchseeker too! Quote:
I really like your story Miss Emily...the intensity is amazing as is how well you perceive the emotions in your story. No wonder my friend Lauren is basically in love with your story...your a great writer so please keep writing Awe, thank you, Jesse! I'm glad you like it. That means a lot to me |
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10-13-2010, 04:28 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
wow I have missed alot :O AMAZING !!!!! the posts are brilliant
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10-13-2010, 04:46 PM
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| Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Secret Snape First Year | You can quote, disagree with, glorify or vilify me But about the only thing you can't do is ignore me -Runs round in major circles- I NEED AN UPDATE!
And I think Remus needs to make an appearance at least, maybe with George!
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10-13-2010, 05:23 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) wow I have missed alot :O AMAZING !!!!! the posts are brilliant Thanks, Kerri! SO, new post, anyone? “Are you okay?” she asked, breathing heavily. “Mmmm,” was all Draco could say.
Emily crawled over to him. “Draco? What is it?” Emily searched him. His eyes were closed and he was turning pale. “Draco? Talk to me, Drake!” Emily said, panicked. Draco still wasn’t speaking. Emily fished her hand over his limp body until it reached his hand. He was holding his side pretty tightly, but Emily was able to get his hand away. Her eyes widened. “Carlisle! Emmett! Anybody! Help!” she screamed. “What’s going on, Emily?” Carlisle asked in a calm voice. “Attacked. Had to escape. Kissed. Saved me. Attacked,” Emily stuttered, completely incomprehensible. Edward appeared at Carlisle’s side, but Emily didn’t notice. Her eyes were on Draco and only Draco. She faintly heard Renesmee in Edward’s hands. She heard humming, but she knew that it was just Edward talking quietly to Carlisle, probably filling him in. Emily grabbed Draco’s hand, squeezing it. “Emmett, can you get Emily?” he asked barely above a whisper.
The next thing Emily knew was that her hand was being ripped out of Draco’s as Emmett ran her to Carlisle’s office. The hospital bed was already up, but Emmett didn’t sit her on it. Carlisle was right behind them with Draco. He gently placed Draco on the bed and started hooking him up to an IV. Alice appeared in the doorway, looking anxious. Alice walked over to Emily and, without a word, ripped the sleeve off of Emily’s arm and started dabbing at her wounds. Emily couldn’t even look at her. The last time Emily talked to her was in a yelling match. Emily yelled at Alice and then went to the beach, where she ran into Draco. Emily continued looking at Draco. He moaned when Carlisle stripped off his shirt and started cleaning his wound. “Draco!” Emily said. She jumped up from her chair, causing Alice to click her tongue in annoyance. Emily ran to his side and reached for his hand. “Emily, we need to clean your wound. Draco will be fine,” said Carlisle soothingly. “You don’t understand, Carlisle; these aren’t stab wounds like last time. Nothing can heal him except more magic. I need my book.” Emily glanced behind her but Alice was already gone. She appeared not even a second later, extending Emily’s book to Emily. “Thanks, Al.” Emily took the book with her right hand, her left still clutching Draco’s hand. She flipped through the pages one handed. Draco moaned again. “This is no use! I can’t help you unless I know what you’ve been hit with,” Emily said, exasperated. “It was orange,” he whispered. She strained to hear him. “And it burns like fire.”
Emily immediately went to the index and found which page the orange-colored curses started on. She flipped to page 72 and began to skim the bullets of each spell for something about burning side effects. She stopped on one spell. It said Dark Arts under the title of the curse and Emily knew that it was the right one. She quickly read how to get the curse to leave his body and then studied the wand movement from the pictures. She mumbled to herself about a jive and a jerk. Draco squeezed her fingers and she looked down at him. He nodded and she returned it.
With a quick jive, jab, and jerk of her wand, Emily repeated the spell in her mind and focused on Draco’s side. An orange mist started to extract from his side and she knew it had worked. She had tears in her eyes when she looked back up at him. He intertwined their fingers as Carlisle stepped forward and resumed cleaning the blood off of his skin. “Accio dittany,” Emily said. Her wand fell onto the bed beside Draco’s legs as a small bottle zoomed into the room. Emily caught it and fumbled with the lid since she only had one hand. She was finally able to uncork it and let a drop fall onto Draco’s gash. It sizzled a little as his skin grew back quickly. He clenched his teeth together, his jaw dominant in his features. Emily ran her fingertips over the pink skin. “Thanks, Ems,” Draco whispered. He started to sit up. “Draco, you need to rest,” she said, trying to push him back down. “No, I need to apologize,” he persisted. He ignored her lousy pushing and threw his legs over the side of the bed. He stared up at her. “I’m so sorry, for tricking you, trapping you, betraying you. I don’t deserve any part of you. That’s why George won in the end. He deserves somebody like you, I don’t.” “Draco, you saved me. I wouldn’t have been able to do any of that without you,” Emily whispered. “Maybe, but you also wouldn’t have had to go through any of it if it weren’t for me. I’m the reason they found you. I tricked you and kissed you—”
“You kissed her?” asked Alice and Edward at the same time, interrupting Draco. “What about George?” asked Alice. “I thought this guy was a douche or something,” commented Emmett. “I summoned them with the mark,” continued Draco, ignoring the Cullens. “I’m so sorry. He said if I didn’t do it, he’d kill me.” Draco started crying. “Don’t worry, I can protect you,” Emily said, wiping away his tears with her fingertips. “I don’t deserve your protection,” Draco declared. “You saved me, Draco, I owe you one,” Emily smiled at him. “I almost got you killed. I was the one who was supposed to kill you,” Draco said. He let go of her hand and buried his face in his hands. Emily tried prying them away but they wouldn’t budge. “Why can’t I kill him?” Emmett asked seriously. “Emmett!” Emily scolded. “He just admitted to trying to kill you. He can’t be trusted!” Emmett declared. He moved closer to Draco but Emily stood in front of him. “I’m with Emmett,” said Alice. “Even though I’m furious with you, I don’t want to see you hurt. Anyone who tries should be terminated.”
“Alice, Emmett, I think you should get some air,” said Carlisle quietly.
They grudgingly left the room with one last glare at Draco. “You’ll have to excuse my family. We are very protective over Emily,” Carlisle chuckled lightly, moving to Emily’s side. He started examining her shoulder, where she had been hit. She now felt the blood sticking to her and staining her shirt. She flinched when he applied pressure to it. He grabbed her bottle of dittany and let a drop out of the bottle to heal her. She flinched slightly, but smiled all the same. “Thanks, Carlisle,” Emily said. She hugged him loosely and then looked at Draco. “Draco, I need to speak to Edward for a moment, will you be all right?” she asked Draco. He nodded. Looking at Carlisle, she whispered, “Can you look after him?” Carlisle nodded, so Edward and she left the room.
Edward led the way to the living room, which, to no one’s surprise, the rest of the Cullen family was waiting. “Emily,” sighed Esme as she glided across the room to give Emily a hug. “Hi, Esme,” said Emily. They embraced in a hug, and then Bella, with Renesmee in her arms, gave Emily a hug too. Emmett came next and picked Emily up, engulfing her into a bear hug. “I’m glad you didn’t die,” said Emmett. “Me too, Em,” laughed Emily. Rosalie and Jasper both gave her small hugs, and then it was just Alice.
Alice looked at Emily and Emily looked at Alice. Neither said anything, and everyone in the room just stared between the two. “Come on, Alice. You know I have to,” Emily said in a pleading voice. “Why?”
“There’s a war going on out there!”
“Exactly! That’s why you should stay, where it's safe!” Alice yelled at her. “I can’t just sit back and watch everyone that I love die around me, Alice! My family is out there! My friends!”
“It’s too dangerous!”
“Oh please! If your family was out there fighting, would you sit back and do nothing? Would you let them risk their lives while you just sat here?” Alice looked down, knowing full well that Emily had a point. “Exactly,” said Emily a little more quietly. “You are one of my best friends. You are a part of this family now. We can’t lose you, Ems.”
“Alice, I have to do what is right.”
Alice crossed the room and hugged Emily until she couldn’t breathe. “Let me help with the fight,” Alice begged. “We’ve already had this conversation. You can’t. Wands can kill you. You’re not invincible. Besides, this is a wizard’s fight, not a vampire’s.”
“But, Emily—”
“No buts. End of conversation.” Alice didn’t fight it anymore and Emily assumed it was because she couldn’t see herself fighting with Emily in the future. Emily turned to Edward. “Well?” she asked him. “Emily, I don’t think you know what—” Edward started. “I have to know, Edward.”
Edward nodded. “He truly is sorry for the danger he inflicted upon you. He kept thinking about wishing he could return to third year, whatever that means. He really does love you, and he regrets what he did,” Edward said quietly.
Emily let a few tears escape before she found her voice. “Is he going to betray me again?” She looked at Edward first and then at Alice. “Well?”
“No, but he will return to his home,” Alice stated “What? No, he can’t. They’ll kill him. He will kill Draco,” Emily panicked. “It’s the only way he can do good, Emily. Spying on the rest of them. He’ll go back, saying you were on to him the moment you guys took flight to the forest. He’ll tell them you put him under a spell. Don’t worry; he won’t be punished too much. They’ll believe his story as long as you make him forget everything that’s happened here,” Alice said. Her eyes were unfocused. She was speaking of the future.
Emily let out a sob at the thought of letting Draco return to the bad side. She was terrified for him. “I, er, need a favor. Can someone get in contact with George? Let him know he’s needed here. I need his help. I need him,” Emily said. Alice nodded. Emily walked slowly back up the stairs to Draco. She needed to explain a few things to him. “Carlisle, can I speak to Draco alone for a minute? But let me know when he gets here please,” she added. He nodded, knowing exactly what she was talking about. “Is everything all right, Ems?” Draco asked as Carlisle left the room. Draco stood up and grabbed Emily into a hug. She hugged him back, and they stayed like that for a while. “I’m going to ask something of you, Draco.” Emily pulled back to look at him. She got out of his grip and leaned back against the wall. He sat back on the bed and looked up at her. “Anything,” Draco promised. “I need you to go back, behind enemy lines.”
“What? Why?”
“To spy, to help. It’s the only way, Draco. Harry, Hermione, and Ron are going to get caught sooner or later, whether it’s by saying his name or slipping. They’ll ask you to identify them. You have to lie. You have to help at all costs.”
“Emily, they’ll kill me.”
“No, they won’t.”
“How do you know?”
“Alice...Alice can see the future. She told me you’d be punished but not killed,” Emily looked deep into his gray eyes. She remembered a time when they were so dark she couldn’t even recognize them. “What about you?”
“I haven’t figured it out yet. I’ll either carry on with what I was doing or I’ll go stay with Tonks or George.” Draco nodded, though she could tell he still wasn’t happy. Emily led him down the staircase to the living room. She looked up and immediately started running. This is one of my least favorite posts... The next one is one of my favorites though... What do you think? |
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10-13-2010, 06:05 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Great post!! I love it how you conneccted the part about Malfoy Manor and having to identify them!
Go Emily (Author this time)
K xx
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10-13-2010, 06:08 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Great post!! I love it how you conneccted the part about Malfoy Manor and having to identify them!
Go Emily (Author this time)
K xx Thanks, Katie. |
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10-13-2010, 07:13 PM
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| X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack SO, new post, anyone? YES PLEASE! Quote: “Mmmm,” was all Draco could say.
Aww Drake I don't know whether to love him or hate him Quote: “Draco? Talk to me, Drake!” Yes Draco, talk to her! Let us know that you are ok! Quote: “What’s going on, Emily?” Carlisle asked in a calm voice.
Ok Carlisle, your too calm, nows the time to panic, and your making me panic twice as much cause your so calm! Quote: “Attacked. Had to escape. Kissed. Saved me. Attacked,” Ok DearesT Emily, breath. All this can't be good for the babies. Are they going to be ok??? (Oh I got hints about the babies on your pictures about your characters in the sequall) Quote: “You kissed her?” asked Alice and Edward at the same time, interrupting Draco.
Ok calm it Jannett, you need to hear the full story! Quote: “Why can’t I kill him?” Emmett asked seriously.
I'm saying this seriously too Emmett, why would you kill someone so beautifull- thats like a sin! Quote: “He truly is sorry for the danger he inflicted upon you. He kept thinking about wishing he could return to third year, whatever that means. He really does love you, and he regrets what he did,” Aww Drake, its a little too late I'm afraid, though I'm here even though Emilys not...hint hint Quote: “I, er, need a favor. Can someone get in contact with George? Let him know he’s needed here. I need his help. I need him,” AHHH! George is coming back! You've made my day again Emily!!! I'm so glad she's found sence! Quote: This is one of my least favorite posts... The next one is one of my favorites though I don't know why Emily. I thought it was great! I can't wait for the next one though!!! PAMS!
Great Post Emily!
Soph x
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10-13-2010, 07:31 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Morag Aww Drake I don't know whether to love him or hate him I have that problem all the time. Quote:
Ok Carlisle, your too calm, nows the time to panic, and your making me panic twice as much cause your so calm!
I think Carlisle's always too calm. Quote:
Ok DearesT Emily, breath. All this can't be good for the babies. Are they going to be ok??? (Oh I got hints about the babies on your pictures about your characters in the sequall)
Haha, yesh, they are fine. Hehe, I know I shouldn't have put that up until the story was over... Quote:
I'm saying this seriously too Emmett, why would you kill someone so beautifull- thats like a sin!
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Aww Drake, its a little too late I'm afraid, though I'm here even though Emilys not...hint hint Quote:
AHHH! George is coming back! You've made my day again Emily!!! I'm so glad she's found sence!
Yay! I'm glad I made your day! Quote:
I don't know why Emily. I thought it was great! I can't wait for the next one though!!! PAMS!
Great Post Emily!
Soph x
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10-13-2010, 08:00 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: My own little world
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Secret Snape First Year | You can quote, disagree with, glorify or vilify me But about the only thing you can't do is ignore me -does victory dance- Yay George is coming back!
I bet Remus follows, although if he does...
-yanks Draco behind couch and tells him to shut up if he want to be alive by then end of this year-
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10-13-2010, 08:33 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by Ruby85 -does victory dance-
Yay George is coming back!
I bet Remus follows, although if he does...
-yanks Draco behind couch and tells him to shut up if he want to be alive by then end of this year- Haha, no promises on the Remus bit... |
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10-13-2010, 08:44 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
great post
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10-13-2010, 09:01 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) great post Thanks, Kerri |
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10-13-2010, 09:21 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Cancerous
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jesse Thomasin Matthews Fifth Year |
This is once again another great post Emily
I'm glad she's finally contacting George to hopefully tell him EVERYTHING and that Lupin follows *hint hint*
Oh and Lauren is standing over my shoulder reading this and is currently doing a sad, sad little dance and repeating "Georgie is back! Georgie is back!"
lol
I noticed that in your post Draco and Severus have many similarities:
1. They both love(d) someone that they couldn't have
2. They woman they loved were both in Gryffindor, as were their husbands
3. They both went against The Dark Lord to protect the woman they love(d)
I don't know if you meant it to be like that or not, but I like it
GREAT post Emily and Lauren and I both agree that you should PAMS
!Jesse! And *lauren*
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10-13-2010, 09:26 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by Jesse_Longbottom This is once again another great post Emily Thanks, Jesse! (And Lauren ) Quote:
I'm glad she's finally contacting George to hopefully tell him EVERYTHING and that Lupin follows *hint hint*
No promises Quote:
Oh and Lauren is standing over my shoulder reading this and is currently doing a sad, sad little dance and repeating "Georgie is back! Georgie is back!"
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I noticed that in your post Draco and Severus have many similarities:
1. They both love(d) someone that they couldn't have
2. They woman they loved were both in Gryffindor, as were their husbands
3. They both went against The Dark Lord to protect the woman they love(d)
I don't know if you meant it to be like that or not, but I like it I honestly didn't mean to do it, but I did realize it when I finished writing it. And thank you Quote:
GREAT post Emily and Lauren and I both agree that you should PAMS Thanks, Jesse, Lauren! I'll post soon |
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10-14-2010, 06:04 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Emily. I don't understamd why this would be your least favorite chapter. It's very well written, and I don't see any reason at all for any chapter to be less favorable than any others. You've done a tremendous piece of work writing this ff so far, and I'm sure the rest is going to be just as great. Quote:
“You don’t understand, Carlisle; these aren’t stab wounds like last time. Nothing can heal him except more magic. I need my book.” Emily glanced behind her but Alice was already gone. She appeared not even a second later, extending Emily’s book to Emily.
That Alice is a handy one isn't she? Quote:
“I, er, need a favor. Can someone get in contact with George? Let him know he’s needed here. I need his help. I need him,”
There's the ticket. Quote:
“I thought this guy was a douche or something,” commented Emmett.
I would never have thought of that as a description of Draco. Quote:
She looked up and immediately started running.
I hope this means what I think it means.
Super post Emily. I'll be watching for your next. |
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10-14-2010, 07:31 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Not the beach
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie Hello Emily. I don't understamd why this would be your least favorite chapter. It's very well written, and I don't see any reason at all for any chapter to be less favorable than any others. You've done a tremendous piece of work writing this ff so far, and I'm sure the rest is going to be just as great. Well, thank you; I just didn't like it as much, not sure why really Quote:
There's the ticket.
I knew everyone would be happy about that bit Quote: I would never have thought of that as a description of Draco.
Hahaha, it never came to my mind either until I was writing that bit. Quote: I hope this means what I think it means.
Whatever do you mean? *Looks at you innocently* Quote:
Super post Emily. I'll be watching for your next. Thanks, Connie |
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: My own little world
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Secret Snape First Year | You can quote, disagree with, glorify or vilify me But about the only thing you can't do is ignore me -waits very patiently, is prepared to get up at 5 in the morning is she doesn't post tonight-
I see to be waking up at 4-5 o clock in the morning cause of this blasted cold I have.
-settles self down with sleeping bag and pillow and camps out for next chapter-
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