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09-13-2010, 12:59 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Connie Hello Emily. You asked what we think. I'll tell you that as I read this, I got goosebumbs all over, and the further I got the more I got. I think my goosebumps had goosebumps. And when I got to the end, the hair on the back of my neck stood up. So, I think you did an outstanding job on your post tonight, this morning rather. Awe, Thank you. You're too sweet. Quote:
That ^ was my favorite part of the whole post. Love has no boundries, nor is it limited to the spoken word. The silence and the knowing look says everything.
Thank you; I agree, Love really does have no boundaries. Quote:
I always miss reading about Harry, well, you know, because he's my hero. But, I'm really glad you're staying true to your story line. It isn't about Harry, it's about Emily.
Ohh, yeah, I'm sorry.. You'll probably see even less of him from now on... Quote:
You're an excellent writer when you aren't tempted to put other things in, simply because you know it is popular. I think it makes it better this way. Popular doesn't make it great. Staying with the storyline is the best way to go in my opinion.
Thank you so much, Connie ![Glomp](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/glomp.gif) And I agree about staying with the storyline. Quote:
Originally Posted by Ruby85 Loved the post! Thanks, Sarah-Jane! Quote:
Maybe one of my fav parts
Another great one.
Thank you! Quote:
Baha, just like George
![lol](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/LOL.gif) George will be George Quote:
Originally Posted by 3uzz3ee The seventh book...
How long is this going on for?? Mmmmm, until Tonks and Remus's funeral... and then something else... Quote:
I'm only asking because of your other Fic that has not seen the light of day yet...
The sequel? Yesh, I know... I don't think it's the sequel you guys have been thinking of... It's a bit different... Quote:
Great post though, Ems!
Thanks, Abs! Quote:
I can't believe that they convinced her not to go!!!
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09-13-2010, 06:29 PM
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| Snidget
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Great Post Emily ![Glomp](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/glomp.gif)
You really should be proud, you are fabulous!! No matter how many times I say it, I do hope you believe me. This is the story that Sophie, Kerri and I talk about in registration, this is spoken about in Maths, PE and Chemistry between Kerri and I and Sophie and I talk about it whenever we are near eachother
It wasn't as sad as I know its soon to turn into ![:P](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/tongue2.gif) Can't wait for more!!!
K xx
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09-13-2010, 06:40 PM
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| ![Ravenclaw](/i/ranks/ravenclaw_group.gif) X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Killing Rob!
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Originally Posted by emilyblack “Harry? You are the real Harry? What happened? Where are the others?” I loved this scene. How there was more than one Harry. The only sad bit was.... I'll get to it in a mo Quote:
Remus was supporting George, who was unconscious. Emily and the others hurried over to them.
Aw poor Emily, you couldn't begin to think what was going through her mind. Quote:
Emily sat on the edge of the couch, clutching her husband’s hand tightly as she cried.
Aw don't cry Emily Quote: “I’ll prove who I am, Kingsley,” Mr. Weasley was saying, “after I’ve seen my son, now back off if you know what’s good for you!” I love how Arthur has his priorities right. Not just here but in all the books Quote: “All I could think about was you—coming home to you, seeing your face, kissing you,” George whispered back.
Aww he's so sweet. If only all boys were like George! Quote: “Mad-Eye,” they repeated as they took a swig of the drink.
...And this is where I cried ![:(](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/sad02.gif)
Great post Emily. You write it very well, even if some of it was jk's, your writing fit in perfectly...
Ok, i'm offski...French homework to do ![:(](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/sad02.gif) ![:P](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/tongue2.gif)
PAMS Dear,
Soph x
P.S Katie is so right Your story is the topic of most of our convos, and if its not MYUTM, it's just SS in general!
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09-13-2010, 06:47 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Great Post Emily ![Glomp](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/glomp.gif) ![Love](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/Love1.gif) Thanks, Katie! Quote:
You really should be proud, you are fabulous!! No matter how many times I say it, I do hope you believe me. This is the story that Sophie, Kerri and I talk about in registration, this is spoken about in Maths, PE and Chemistry between Kerri and I and Sophie and I talk about it whenever we are near eachother Awe, thanks. Do you really? ![lol](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/LOL.gif) Is this where you guys come up with all this horrible stuff that "will" happen? |
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09-13-2010, 06:52 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Morag I love how Arthur has his priorities right. Not just here but in all the books ![:)](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/smile1.gif) I agree! It's like the perfect parents, him and Molly. If only all dads could be that way Quote:
Aww he's so sweet. If only all boys were like George!
Ohmygosh! I know! If only he wasn't fictional... Quote:
...And this is where I cried ![:(](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/sad02.gif) Don't cry! ![Console](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/console.gif) I cried in the book at this part... This isn't even close to what I have in store for you though, so you might want to save the tears... :evillaugh Quote:
Great post Emily. You write it very well, even if some of it was jk's, your writing fit in perfectly...
Thanks, Sophie! Quote:
Ok, i'm offski...French homework to do ![:(](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/sad02.gif) ![lol](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/LOL.gif) I've always thought French would be fun, no? I guess when there's homework, it's not fun... Quote:
P.S Katie is so right Your story is the topic of most of our convos, and if its not MYUTM, it's just SS in general!
![lol](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/LOL.gif) Well, I'm honored, really |
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09-13-2010, 06:53 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Originally Posted by emilyblack
Awe, thanks. Do you really? ![lol](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/LOL.gif) Is this where you guys come up with all this horrible stuff that "will" happen? ![LMAO!](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/lmao.gif) Precisely
We come up with loads of story lines and what we think could happen!! Kerri and I often try to solve the teaser of the sequal
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09-13-2010, 06:56 PM
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#907 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Precisely
We come up with loads of story lines and what we think could happen!! Kerri and I often try to solve the teaser of the sequal ![Glomp](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/glomp.gif) ![LMAO!](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/lmao.gif) Have you guys come up with anything good? |
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09-13-2010, 08:33 PM
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#908 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Originally Posted by emilyblack ![LMAO!](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/lmao.gif) Have you guys come up with anything good? ![lol](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/LOL.gif) Maybe :evillaugh Not saying!!!
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09-13-2010, 09:06 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Maybe :evillaugh Not saying!!! ![LMAO!](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/lmao.gif) Okay, then I guess i'll just have to keep my mouth shut... |
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09-13-2010, 10:06 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
wow that was so good. I loved it. I smiled the full way through. well exept when Mad Eye died
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09-13-2010, 10:15 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) wow that was so good. I loved it. Thank you, Kerri! Quote:
I smiled the full way through. well exept when Mad Eye died I know, it is rather sad. I wish JK wouldn't have killed him off. |
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09-13-2010, 10:19 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
i know! She was kinna evil in the last book.
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09-13-2010, 10:25 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) i know! She was kinna evil in the last book. I agree! I mean, was it really necessary to kill off Fred? She already took George's ear! And poor Hedwig! what did she ever do?
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09-13-2010, 10:36 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
I know! Fred NEVER had to die :O ![:(](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/sad02.gif) and neither did headwig.or any other of the Characters !
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09-13-2010, 11:16 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) I know! Fred NEVER had to die :O ![:(](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/sad02.gif) and neither did headwig.or any other of the Characters ! I know! Well... I don't know. I can kind of see why she made all of the Marauders die, because they accompanied Harry into the forest so Voldy could kill him. And I can kind of see why she would kill Dobby. He's been trying to protect Harry since the second book, so he died protecting him. And it kind of set Harry on fire. Like he was now completely determined on the Horcruxes instead of Hallows, because he had to stop them instead of being the Master of Death, you know? Fred and Hedwig are innocent in my eyes. There was no real reason for them to die, that I can justify in some way... If she wanted to take a Weasley for no reason, then she should have taken Percy, no offense to him... But I wish Fred would have gotten to live |
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09-14-2010, 03:08 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
I totally agree. Percy would have been my choice too ![:P](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/tongue2.gif) i also thought it was cruel that she killed both tonks and lupin and left Teddy without parents.
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09-14-2010, 03:21 PM
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| Snidget
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) I totally agree. Percy would have been my choice too ![:P](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/tongue2.gif) i also thought it was cruel that she killed both tonks and lupin and left Teddy without parents. I totally agree ![lol](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/LOL.gif) Percy is my choice!!
Dora and Remus should NOT have died!! Not fair to leave my Ted ![:(](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/sad02.gif) I'm sure Andromeda was brilliant with him but...
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09-14-2010, 04:19 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) I totally agree. Percy would have been my choice too ![:P](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/tongue2.gif) i also thought it was cruel that she killed both tonks and lupin and left Teddy without parents. Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP I totally agree ![lol](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/LOL.gif) Percy is my choice!!
Dora and Remus should NOT have died!! Not fair to leave my Ted ![:(](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/sad02.gif) I'm sure Andromeda was brilliant with him but... ![cry](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/cry.gif) I know! At least one of them should have lived!
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09-14-2010, 04:42 PM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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09-14-2010, 04:48 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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09-14-2010, 06:52 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Haha I've been told that alot
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09-15-2010, 02:47 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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So, I'm kind of having a bad day and thought maybe posting would make me feel better?
After the ordeal with rescuing Harry, Remus placed a Fidelius Charm on George and Emily’s house, as well as his and Tonks’. George and Emily spent their nights at their own house to give more room at the Burrow for Fleur’s family. They spent their days helping to set up for the wedding or working at the shop. It was a week before Bill’s wedding, and Emily and George decided to stay home, talking and relaxing. “We need to talk,” Emily whispered against George’s chest as he played with her red curls. They were lying across the sofa, snuggled up. “Mmmm, what about?” he answered.
Emily hesitated, not knowing how to start this. She twisted in his arms so that she could see his face. He saw her expression of pain and worry, so he cupped her face in his hands. “You can tell me anything, you know that, right?” he said softly. Emily nodded slightly as a tear escaped her eye. “I just don’t know how to tell you,” she whispered. George wiped away her tears with his fingertips as his eyebrows knitted in confusion. Emily concentrated on a part of his neck rather than his eyes as he stared at her. “I was given a mission,” she whispered. George tensed slightly under her. “Who gave you the mission?” he asked quietly. “Dumbledore,” she said. “Dumbledore? But then, why are you only just now telling me about it?”
“Because we thought it best if I didn’t tell you until it was getting sooner to when I set out on it.” “What kind of mission? What do you have to do?” he asked in a whisper. “I…I can’t tell you, Georgie. He told me to tell no one,” she whispered. “Is it one you can do from home?” Emily shook her head slightly as she felt his gaze on her face. “Don’t go,” he whispered.
Emily started crying softly, the tears spilling over onto his shirt. “I have to.” “No, don’t go. Stay with me,” he whispered. “I promised. I have to go,” she said. “Let me go with you,” he whispered. Emily’s eyes finally met his and she could see the pain and heartbreak they held. “You have to stay here. You have to stay with your family,” she whispered. “You are my family,” he whispered.
Emily nodded slightly. “You can’t come. You have to stay here.”
“When do you leave?” he asked quietly. “I’m not sure yet, but I know it’s soon,” she whispered. He shook his head slightly before his arms wrapped around her waist and he pulled her closer to him. He kissed her tender lips softly before he intensified their kisses. She felt the urgency and the need of his kissing as she knotted her hands in his hair. “Promise me, you’ll be okay,” he whispered as she kissed his neck and collar bone. “I promise,” she whispered between kisses. “Promise me that you’ll come home to me,” he whispered.
Emily pulled back to look at him. Her fingers grazed his pleading lips. “I promise that I will always come home to you,” she whispered. “I love you.” “Forever and Always,” she whispered.
She kissed him again, longer this time. He stood up from the couch, wrapping Emily’s legs around his waist. He carried her up the stairs and into their bedroom as she kissed his neck. She pulled his shirt off as he tackled her on the bed. “I’m going to miss you,” he whispered against her cheek. “Prove it,” she giggled. He pulled back to look at her before he kissed her full on the lips.
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09-15-2010, 03:25 PM
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| Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Secret Snape First Year | You can quote, disagree with, glorify or vilify me But about the only thing you can't do is ignore me
Aww... Hang on, if that's george's reaction, and if she tells Remus... -dives behinds the sofa-
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09-15-2010, 08:32 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
That was acctully heart breaking :O I acctully cried! Poor George! But i loved that you lightened the mood at the end a bit with a little humer. Great post Emily ![:D](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/big_grin.gif) Loved it
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09-16-2010, 12:09 AM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ruby85 Aww... Hang on, if that's george's reaction, and if she tells Remus... -dives behinds the sofa- ![lol](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/LOL.gif) I actually don't go into detail with anyone else's reactions except for a wee bit into Ginny. But she's not that bad. Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) That was acctully heart breaking :O I acctully cried! Is this just an English thing? ![LMAO!](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/lmao.gif) I'm just kidding ![Glomp](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/glomp.gif) But seriously, you need to save the tears for later. :evillaugh Quote:
But i loved that you lightened the mood at the end a bit with a little humer. Great post Emily ![:D](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/big_grin.gif) Loved it ![LMAO!](https://www.snitchseeker.com/images/smilies/lmao.gif) Thank you, Kerri! |
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