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08-30-2010, 03:46 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by SarahLestrange OMG! I love this post Thanks, Lauren Quote:
you had me in suspense the whole time...what is the mission that Dumbledore wants her to do? Is she going to be okay? I hope she tells George soon...PAMS! xD
Haha, all in good time Quote:
Originally Posted by 3uzz3ee CODY?
What is Cody doing back in it?
Emily should curse him into teeny tiny pieces! Lmao, I'll pass on that opinion. Quote: I love it though!
Can't wait for the next bit! Thanks, Abi Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Great post honey!! Thanks, Katie Quote:
I completely forgot about Cody!! Just one of her men Hehe, so did I at the time Quote:
The hair flick and nose scratch was very funny!!! Tehe, thanks I've always wanted to have some type of symbol with my friends, so I thought it'd be fun Quote:
PAMS Emily!! Love ya
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08-30-2010, 05:26 PM
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| Puffskein
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FAB chapter i was quite funny but i really think Emily should tell George about the trip to the hospital insted of being distant. i wonder what Dumbledore has planned.
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08-30-2010, 06:10 PM
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) FAB chapter Thanks, Kerri! Quote:
i was quite funny but i really think Emily should tell George about the trip to the hospital insted of being distant. i wonder what Dumbledore has planned.
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08-31-2010, 01:52 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Emily. I hope school is going well for you. I know you have quite a lot on your plate, so I'll try not to ramble. Quote:
They were both happy, extremely happy, but there was still a voice in the back of Emily’s head about her recent trip to the hospital. Ever since the trip, she wouldn’t get that close to George. She made up excuses, and he eventually bought them.
Oh dear. Poor Emily needs somebody to talk to about this. I hope she can talk to Tonks. George won;t take excuses for long. He'll get suspecious real quick. Quote:
“Oh no, he’s coming over here,” Emily whispered as she glanced to her left. Cody was walking towards them. “I haven’t spoken to him in a while. I better meet him in the middle,” Emily whispered to Hermione.
Why did he have to pick now to speak to her? And I wish Emily would have let him come and talk in front of Hermione. I do not see anything but trouble coming. Quote:
Ahh! More secrecy! I don't think George can stand all this. And Dumbledore should know better. But, there's the rub, right? He doesn't.
Tremendous chapter Emily! I can't wait till your next post. |
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08-31-2010, 02:00 AM
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Originally Posted by Connie Hello Emily. I hope school is going well for you. I know you have quite a lot on your plate, so I'll try not to ramble. Hey, Connie Yeah, school is...school. I'm just waiting for the summer again. And I enjoy your rambling It makes me happy sometimes Quote:
Why did he have to pick now to speak to her? And I wish Emily would have let him come and talk in front of Hermione. I do not see anything but trouble coming.
Sometimes, I feel like you guys WANT trouble... Nah, I'm kidding, he was just making an appearance. It was initially supposed to set up something for the future, but I changed the story line and didn't feel like changing that part. But the set up had less to do with Cody and more to do with Hermione and Emily's signals... Quote:
Tremendous chapter Emily! I can't wait till your next post. Thanks, Connie! |
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08-31-2010, 03:31 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hi Emily. Quote:
Sometimes, I feel like you guys WANT trouble... Nah, I'm kidding, he was just making an appearance. It was initially supposed to set up something for the future, but I changed the story line and didn't feel like changing that part. But the set up had less to do with Cody and more to do with Hermione and Emily's signals...
That's great! I absolutely love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Even though you changed the line there, it still fits smoothly. And I loved the signals Emily came up with and I loved Hermione's response when Emily did signal. Just precious, all of it. Especially sense there wasn't any trouble from it. |
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09-02-2010, 04:13 PM
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On Friday evening, after her classes, Emily found herself in Dumbledore’s office, sitting across from him, saying ‘yes’. Dumbledore was delighted, and now all she had left to do was tell George. She and the Headmaster decided it’d be best to tell him and the others right before she went. On the next Monday, Dumbledore told Emily to meet him in his office for the details of her mission. “Sir, exactly what will I be doing?” she asked after a few minutes of silence. “For one, you will be helping those in need. For another, you will be like an assistant,” he replied calmly, studying her from the opposite side of his desk. “What do you mean by ‘assistant’?” she asked suspiciously.
There was a knock on the door, and the guest continued through without waiting for an answer. Severus Snape glanced at Dumbledore and then Emily, only to look back at Dumbledore. “Perfect timing, Severus, please have a seat,” Dumbledore said with a small smile. “Headmaster, do you need me to leave?” Emily asked quietly as she started to stand. “No, Mrs. Weasley, I need both of you here,” Dumbledore replied. Emily’s brows knitted in confusion. “You’re joking,” Snape said skeptically after a minute. Emily side glanced at him in confusion. “Do I look like I’m joking, Severus?” Dumbledore asked calmly. “She’s a child! What could she do?” Snape said with a hint of disbelief. “Are you talking about me?” Emily asked quietly. Snape grimaced at her and she took it as a yes. “I’m not a child, professor. But I’m with you on the last bit. What exactly could I do that someone more experienced cannot?” Emily asked as she stared at the Headmaster. “I’ve already told you that you are the only one for the job,” Dumbledore said patiently. “Now, you two can keep throwing glares at each other or you can put your pasts behind you and realize that you need each other.” Emily glanced cautiously at Snape as he glared at Dumbledore. “Fine, I’ll behave if he does,” Emily sighed. Snape huffed in frustration, but said nothing further. Dumbledore nodded in thought for a moment. “Tell her everything, Severus,” Dumbledore decided. “Excuse me?” Snape nearly choked. “You heard me, Severus, tell her everything,” Dumbledore repeated. Snape glared at Dumbledore for a moment before turning to glare at Emily. She raised an eyebrow at him, daring him to say something rude in front of the Headmaster. He sighed in surrender and looked at a place on the floor. “You know I’m a former Death Eater,” Snape began. “Well, fifteen years ago, I overheard a prophecy; a prophecy about the Dark Lord. So, naturally, I told the Dark Lord. At once, he assumed it to be Potter and decided he had to kill her.” Snape paused as a certain redhead ran through his mind. “As soon as I realized what I’d done, that he was going to go after her, I went to Dumbledore. From that moment on, I was on Dumbledore’s side, and I pretended to still be on the dark side. I was a spy for Dumbledore, pretending to be a spy for the Dark Lord.”
“So, what you’re saying is, you’re still in contact with him, with all of them?” Emily asked warily, her thoughts on Bellatrix Lestrange. Snape nodded curtly. “I don’t really understand, professor, exactly what am I going to do?” she asked, her eyes cutting between Snape and Dumbledore. “First, you must hear all of the story,” Dumbledore said quietly, studying Snape.
Snape huffed in frustration and grimaced. “Severus,” Dumbledore said quietly. Without saying a word, Snape went to a cabinet and pulled out the stone Pensieve. Snape raised his wand to his temple and pulled it away from his head as if he were pulling a rope. A white-blue wisp came from his head. He guided it to the Pensieve and then sat back down. Dumbledore gave Emily a look that said “Go ahead” and she stood up. She wasn’t exactly familiar with Pensieves, but she had read about them. She bent over until her nose touched the substance and she fell headlong into the bright sun.
When she stood up and dusted off her bottom, she stared around her. She was standing in the middle of a deserted playground, where two girls were swinging and a boy was watching them from behind the bush.
Emily wasn’t sure what she was doing here, but she listened to the two girls talking and watched the skinny, shabby dressed boy. She was in Snape’s memories. She watched for a long while as Lily Evans was told by Severus Snape that she was a witch, and then she watched as Snape told Lily about the magical world. The scene re-formed again and she landed on Platform nine and three-quarters. Emily went through all of Snape’s memories, from him meeting her father and godfather, to him taking his O.W.L.s, to his and Dumbledore’s meeting on top of the hill. She was speechless as she watched Snape beg him to help Lily Potter and agree to help her son.
Emily wasn’t sure what was happening when Dumbledore was telling Snape that he must kill him, instead of Draco. Emily was furious when she watched the conversation about a part of Voldemort living inside of Harry. She couldn’t believe what she was hearing. Harry couldn’t die! He was her brother, her family. The scene dissolved and Emily found herself leaving Snape’s memories and back in Dumbledore’s office. Instead of sitting back down, she stared at the carpet, fuming. “You can’t be serious!” she finally exclaimed. “How can you let him die? I thought he meant something to you!” Emily yelled at Dumbledore. “He does, Mrs. Weasley.”
“Then how can you just sit here, when you knew all along that he was just going to have to die? He trusts you! I trusted you!”
“Sit down, Mrs. Weasley,” he said quietly. Emily hesitated but finally sat down. “I can’t believe I’m about to say this, but she has a point,” Snape said quietly. Emily side glanced at him in shock. There was no way that they could agree on something. “Severus,” Dumbledore said quietly, obviously telling him to shut it, but in nicer terms. “It has to happen. It is the only way to destroy Voldemort.” Emily stared at him, speechless. She didn’t want to know any of this stuff. She had no idea what she had gotten herself into. She wanted out of this. She glanced at the door and Dumbledore followed her gaze. “There’s no getting out anymore,” Dumbledore whispered. Emily’s eyes snapped around at him. “I think you have the wrong person,” Emily whispered. “I don’t,” he said simply. Emily and Dumbledore stared at each other for a long time. “So, what now?” Emily asked quietly. “You will not be able to return to school next term,” Dumbledore started. She gaped at him. “What? Why not?” she asked in irritation. She didn’t like being told what she could or could not do. “Because I will not be here. It will be too dangerous for you.”
“Why won’t you be here?” she whispered. “I’m sure you saw the memory. I’m dying slowly as it is. Severus is going to shorten the process when the time is right.” Emily turned to stare at Snape, giving him the “I can’t believe you agreed to this” look. He returned the same look. “I will explain more to you in time, but for now, we’ll just go over the basics. This is how you will communicate,” Dumbledore said as he pushed part of a mirror toward Snape. “Hey, I have one of those. Where did you get that from?” Emily asked curiously. “It’s a copy of the one Sirius had,” he said quietly. “Severus will most likely still be at school and will be able to warn you, on the outside, of anything. Even if he’s not at the school, he still might need your help when orders are made from Voldemort.” Emily listened carefully; she still wasn’t sure why he had chosen her for this. “Severus, I believe you have a class you need to attend to,” Dumbledore said suddenly. With one wary glance at the Headmaster, Snape grabbed the mirror and set off for the dungeons. “Is there anything else?” Emily asked as she readied herself to leave. “Not for now, but in time,” Dumbledore said as Emily stood up to leave. “You mustn’t tell anyone,” he stressed. Emily nodded as she made her way to the door. What do you think? |
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09-02-2010, 05:31 PM
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What do I think??Hmm...let's see!! Brilliant!!
How did you come up with that? Such a good idea Emily is in on it
I am trying to wrack my brains to figure things out...like what she would do exactly and how she can be of use.
And Emily please, please don't let anything really bad happen to her, pretty please!!
K xx
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09-02-2010, 05:37 PM
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP What do I think??Hmm...let's see!! Brilliant!! Awe, thanks, Katie Quote:
How did you come up with that? Such a good idea Emily is in on it Thanks, I didn't think it would come off as very believable, but it's more believable than my initial plan... So I had to edit and this is what I came up with Quote:
I am trying to wrack my brains to figure things out...like what she would do exactly and how she can be of use.
Ohh, haha, you'll see, it's really not a lot though Quote:
And Emily please, please don't let anything really bad happen to her, pretty please!!
You should know by now that I give No promises :evillaugh
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09-02-2010, 05:55 PM
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| Snidget
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Originally Posted by emilyblack You should know by now that I give No promises :evillaugh Ehmm...Come again!! What is that supposed to mean....I know she doesn't die because she is in the sequal but I'm getting very worried!!!
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09-02-2010, 05:56 PM
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Ehmm...Come again!! What is that supposed to mean....I know she doesn't die because she is in the sequal but I'm getting very worried!!! You don't know that... Maybe George was talking to a different Emily. And I'm not giving any hints, so you'll have to wait :evillaugh :evillaugh |
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09-02-2010, 07:14 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hello Emily. I'm really speechless, I don't know what to say. Your writing is superb as always, I'm just scared out of my mind for Emily! I'm wondering what her thoughts are about Draco, and his role in what's going on. Quote:
Emily was furious when she watched the conversation about a part of Voldemort living inside of Harry.
So, you've changed JK's storyline here, because she had Dumbledore not telling Snape about the Horcrux's. It's fine, I just wonder if I'm thinking correctly my thought what you're going to have Emily doing. It sounds way incredible, and I can't wait to read the whole rest of the story. I'm so glad that you're such a good writer that I know you'll be able to pull this off wonderfully. It's obvious you always put great thought in your writing. Great post Emily, and I'll be waiting anxiously for your notice of your next post. |
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09-02-2010, 08:04 PM
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Originally Posted by Connie Hello Emily. I'm really speechless, I don't know what to say. Your writing is superb as always Thanks, Connie. Hopefully speechless doesn't mean anything bad? Quote:
I'm just scared out of my mind for Emily! I'm wondering what her thoughts are about Draco, and his role in what's going on.
Ah, it's good for you to wonder. It will be revealed in due time Quote:
So, you've changed JK's storyline here, because she had Dumbledore not telling Snape about the Horcrux's.
Actually no, Dumbledore does tell Snape that when Voldemort used the killing curse it rebounded and a piece of Voldemort lives in Harry. He just doesn't tell him that it's a Horcrux... It's on page 686 in DH, if you want to take a look. So, I'm still going by the books in a way Quote:
It's fine, I just wonder if I'm thinking correctly my thought what you're going to have Emily doing. It sounds way incredible, and I can't wait to read the whole rest of the story.
Awe, thanks, Connie. I hope I don't disappoint anyone with it... Quote:
I'm so glad that you're such a good writer that I know you'll be able to pull this off wonderfully. It's obvious you always put great thought in your writing. Great post Emily, and I'll be waiting anxiously for your notice of your next post. Thank you, Connie, more soon |
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09-02-2010, 08:24 PM
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| Puffskein
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great chapter
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09-02-2010, 08:29 PM
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) great chapter Thanks, Kerri |
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09-03-2010, 12:55 PM
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I love it!
PLEASE tell me what the mission is!
I'm getting anxious!
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09-03-2010, 02:10 PM
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Originally Posted by 3uzz3ee AHH!
I love it!
PLEASE tell me what the mission is!
I'm getting anxious!
Abi Thanks, Abi. You'll find out soon. |
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09-03-2010, 06:08 PM
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Hey Emily, sorry I haven't replied but I haven't been on in a few days, but I'm here now... Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack He bought her a silver charm bracelet with a miniature tree and their initials on the trunk. It was a miniature version of their tree. Aww thats cute! I want one now! Quote: " You are to not tell a soul, which includes your husband.” He paused.
No-way, no-way. She and George are joined at the hip. You can't seperate them and they can't keep secrets from one and other- they're married for goodness sake. This doesn't sound good Quote: “Yeah, sorry I didn’t invite you to the wedding. It was mainly family,” she said quietly.
Pitty you wern't invited, Cody. It was the wedding of the century! Quote: “Not bad, though our hangout is pretty lonely without you,” he chuckled.
Akward!!!! And theres your cue to leave
Great Post Emily. I loved it. Especially the ending. Quote: “You’re joking,” Snape said skeptically after a minute. Emily side glanced at him in confusion.
Yes, You must be!!! Quote: “You mustn’t tell anyone,” he stressed. Emily nodded as she made her way to the door.
Tuff luck Dumbledore, she told me!!! though I would like to now more.
PAMS!
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09-03-2010, 07:33 PM
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Emily that is such a good chapter I can't wait for more info on what is going to happen Emily and Severus working together is a little different from what I ever would have expected I would have thought that she was gonna help him with finding the Horcruxes locations and then Harry would help Dumbledore get them but I guess not? Anyways I loved it! PAMS!
xoxo. Peace and Love.
~lauren~
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Morag Aww thats cute! I want one now! hehe, me too Quote:
No-way, no-way. She and George are joined at the hip. You can't seperate them and they can't keep secrets from one and other- they're married for goodness sake. This doesn't sound good Well... Quote:
Pitty you wern't invited, Cody. It was the wedding of the century!
Sophie, you crack me up Quote:
Great Post Emily. I loved it. Especially the ending.
Thanks, Soph Quote:
Tuff luck Dumbledore, she told me!!! though I would like to now more.
All in due time Quote:
Originally Posted by SarahLestrange Emily that is such a good chapter Thanks, Lauren
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09-05-2010, 04:46 PM
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With May came a bit of drama, I guess you could say. Harry and Malfoy had a go at each other and Malfoy ended up almost dying. Dumbledore talked to Emily quite often about her mission. On one evening, he went as far as to give her a few gifts that she would need. He gave her one of his Putter-outers, also known as a Deluminator. He was leaving Ron the other one. He told her of how it works and how to use it. He gave her a few books on different spells and Transfiguration for her to read and keep. He also gave her a book about different wounds and how to treat them, including curses.
Emily felt like she was ready in one sense, but in another, she had no idea what she was getting into. She was scared, worried, and lonely. Scared because she didn’t know what the outcome of it all would be. She’s worried because she isn’t sure if she can really make a difference in this war. And she’s lonely because she can’t tell a soul, not even her husband. George picked up on her gloomy mood sometimes, but she always put it off as a reaction to school work and stress.
After Gryffindor won the Quidditch Cup and Harry kissed Ginny, Emily started feeling less worried. She was happy that Harry and Ginny were happy too, and together. Emily always believed that a little more love was needed in the world, so for them to be experiencing it together was all the better.
June arrived with more devastations than ever. Emily had been with George and Fred when it happened. They were talking, laughing, joking—just having a good time. The trio was home, in their living room with a round of Butterbeers. They had a game of Exploding Snap going on in the wee hours of the morning. It was around six o’clock when they got a visit from Lupin and Tonks. Emily opened the door for them with a big grin plastered on her face, looking from one to the other.
she asked as she studied their expressions, her smile faltering. George and Fred appeared behind her as they all looked towards the two with anxious expressions. “Let’s sit in the living room,” Remus murmured quietly as he led them all to the living room. Remus and Tonks sat on the couch as Emily sat in George’s lap in one of the armchairs. Fred took the other chair. “Remus, Tonks, you both look horrible. What’s happened?” Emily asked again. George squeezed her hand. “Death Eaters,” Tonks said quietly as she looked at a spot on her knee. Emily gasped and Fred and George both took in a deep breath. “Was anybody hurt badly?” Fred asked quietly.
Neither Tonks nor Remus answered right away. Remus nodded slightly as a tear escaped Tonks’ eye. “Bill…” Remus started. Fred and George’s eyes snapped up as Emily’s hand went to her mouth. “He’s fine,” Remus rushed on. “He’s in bad shape after Greyback, but he’ll be fine. He wasn’t bitten so he won’t be a full werewolf. But there’s no telling what kind of characteristics he’ll have.” Fred and George nodded gravely. Emily squeezed George’s fingertips. “Anybody else?” Emily asked quietly. “Er,” Remus hesitated. “What else, Remus?” Emily asked as she watched him bury his face in his hands. She knew that she was about to hear the news. “Dumbledore…” Remus choked out. “Dumbl… Is he going to be okay?” Fred asked.
Tonks’ tears came more frequently now. “He’s dead,” Remus whispered as his own tear made its way down his cheek.
Emily shook her head quickly. “No, there’s been a mistake—He couldn’t have—He’s not…”
Emily’ tears flooded down her pale cheeks, dropping on top of her and George’s intertwined fingers. She knew that it was coming. It had been partly planned after all. She didn’t need to ask who had done it; she already knew. Yet, even with all of the preparations and the good-byes she had already said, it still hurt the same. Emily turned her head into George’s chest as he held her tightly, his face buried in her hair. Tonks did the same with Remus, crying into his shoulder. Fred’s head was buried in his hands. They all sat in silence as they remembered the brilliant man with the bespectacled glasses.
The funeral was held on all too beautiful day. Emily felt like it should be raining a terrible storm for what they had lost. She thought about her mission and her promise as she, George, and Fred took their seats next to Remus and Tonks. She smiled slightly as she looked at their intertwined fingers in his lap. She sat next to him and grabbed his other hand. George occupied her other hand with his.
Emily recognized a lot of the Order members—Mad-Eye Moody, Kingsley Shacklebolt, and Mr. and Mrs. Weasley. Bill and Fleur sat behind them as others filled in around them. She wasn’t too keen when Umbridge walked past her to take a seat, her ugly, black bow in her hair.
They sat quietly as the Minister, in his plain black robes, came to the front, by Dumbledore’s white tomb, and started to speak. She got lost in the moment, barely listening to what the Minister was saying. She stared at the white tomb with teary eyes. She promised to keep many people safe. She promised she would help Snape. She promised him, and, no matter what, she was keeping that promise. **Okie dokie, tell me whatchya think!** |
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09-05-2010, 05:13 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Emily. Again, I am speechless as to what I can say. And no, that's not a bad thing from your story telling. It's just well, It's soooooooooooooo sad! I love the presentation of the story very much here. We all knew it was coming, but, still you made it seem like it's the first time I heard about Bill, and Dumbledore. The devistation was real, and the heartache for our lovely Emily was real. You see, I was wondering how you would present Emily, since she obviously already knew about the things to come. And you made the news overwheming for her just as if she didn't know. It's because death, distruction, and devistation is hard to take in no matter how many times you hear of it, when it involves the ones you love. Tremendous writing Emily. I'll be watching for your next post. Oh! Wait, there is one thing: Quote:
He also gave her a book about different wounds and how to treat them, including curses. I'm taking this as an advance warning of terrible things to come. Great work Emily.
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09-05-2010, 05:30 PM
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#873 (permalink)
| X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Hi Emily! Another Great Post. It was sad that Dumbledore has died now. I didn't realise it would be so soon. Quote:
She was happy that Harry and Ginny were happy too, and together.
Yay! I'm glad Harry's happy. I know that Emily worries about him too and that must be a weight off her shoulders knowing he's safe with Ginny. Quote:
“Dumbledore…” Remus choked out.“He’s dead,”
Like I said earlier It's so soon. I can't believe he's gone Quote:
Emily felt like it should be raining a terrible storm for what they had lost.
It's so true. It is a terrible lost Quote:
no matter what, she was keeping that promise.
I'm glad. It's what Dumbledore would have wanted.
PAMS!
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09-05-2010, 06:27 PM
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#874 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie Hello Emily. Again, I am speechless as to what I can say. And no, that's not a bad thing from your story telling. It's just well, It's soooooooooooooo sad! I know, but it was something that had to happen. The next post is happier though Quote:
I love the presentation of the story very much here. We all knew it was coming, but, still you made it seem like it's the first time I heard about Bill, and Dumbledore. The devistation was real, and the heartache for our lovely Emily was real. You see, I was wondering how you would present Emily, since she obviously already knew about the things to come. And you made the news overwheming for her just as if she didn't know. It's because death, distruction, and devistation is hard to take in no matter how many times you hear of it, when it involves the ones you love. Tremendous writing Emily. I'll be watching for your next post.
Thank you so much, Connie I was hoping I did okay by her emotions with the news. Quote:
Oh! Wait, there is one thing: I'm taking this as an advance warning of terrible things to come. Great work Katie. Ohh, well there may be a few things in store... Oh and I know you meant Emily, not Katie, right? Quote:
Originally Posted by Morag Hi Emily! Another Great Post. Thanks, Sophie Quote:
It was sad that Dumbledore has died now. I didn't realise it would be so soon.
Ohh, yeah, I realized that when I was posting that it probably seemed far sooner than when it should have happened, but it needed to happen. And I'm trying to get everything on its way... So, we'll probably skipping through a lot of stuff... kind of... You'll see what I mean... Quote: Like I said earlier It's so soon. I can't believe he's gone You should have seen me when I was reading through HBP the first time. I just remember thinking that he HAS to come back. I mean there was no way that Dumbledore could be dead. I cried so much when he died. |
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09-05-2010, 07:40 PM
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| Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Secret Snape First Year | You can quote, disagree with, glorify or vilify me But about the only thing you can't do is ignore me
Sorry I haven't posted for ages, but trying to juggle 4-5 active Fan-Fic's is tiering.
And, thinking about the sequel, I think I know why George is crying, and Emily is cold, but I mustn't spill, incase I'm right. But what I think... -shudders-
Loved the reunion. Quote:
“I can’t believe I’m about to say this, but she has a point,” Snape said quietly. Emily side glanced at him in shock. There was no way that they could agree on something.
Baha, like Father, like Daughter. Quote:
“Fine, I’ll behave if he does,” Emily sighed. Snape huffed in frustration, but said nothing further.
That was really funny.
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