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01-31-2010, 01:51 PM
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| Snidget
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Hey, I am really sorry!
I know it is late; typically my Grandparents’ connection wouldn’t work for my laptop so I am just typing it just now. I really am sorry. Well here goes.
‘‘Aunt Ginny!’’ I was standing outside in Grimmauld Place, chapping constantly.
‘‘I am really sorry Vic. I am just coming!’’
The door opened and Ginny’s red hair greeted me. She was wearing Muggle clothes, like me, which wasn’t unusual for the Potters. Her white t-shirt had a patch of blood on it and I was instantly worried.
‘‘Aunt Gin. What happened to you? Have you hurt yourself?’’ I said with a very panicky voice
‘‘Don’t worry about me, worry about Lily. I just used a whole bottle of Dittany to stop her head bleeding. James just stabbed her with the end of his quill!’’ Now she was very angry.
‘‘James Potter! I can’t believe you did that. Why?’’ I couldn’t believe it! My little cousin had stabbed his own sister, my other little cousin. I don’t even have a sister but I know that I wouldn’t stab her if I did.
‘‘I am trying to write an essay for Potions and she kept bugging me!’’ James and Lily had come downstairs and were now sitting on the couch opposite me in the living room.
‘‘You could have just asked her to go bug Albus instead, or better, asked your mum to keep her occupied until you were done.’’
‘‘You don’t think that I tried everything before turning to violence?! It was totally out of frustration and I am sorry Lily and Mum.’’
‘‘Hmmm.’’
‘‘And Victoire. Hold on, what did I do to you?’’
‘‘You frustrated me. Anyway Ginny I was hoping to ask you something.’’
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‘‘Bill is being Bill. Come on I grew up knowing that because I was the only girl, that nobody would be happy with who I married. You are their only child; they have one girl, one chance to make things perfect. It might not be because they don’t like Ted. In fact, it is definitely not that. He might just be a normal Dad.’’
‘‘Really? I thought it might have something to do with the whole werewolf thing. What do you think?’’
‘‘That might be part of it. He has probably realised that both of you are partly werewolf, in one way or another and is afraid of the outcome when it comes to children. You really never know until you ask him. He really needs to remember that being partly werewolf doesn’t make you a bad person.’’
We were alone in the kitchen in Grimmauld Place with a cup of tea. I was helping Ginny hang up some washing, magically of course, on the line on the ceiling.
‘‘Thanks. You make everything really positive. Change of subject. Lets focus on you and your family. Where are Harry and Albus? I haven’t seen them today.’’
‘‘Well Harry got called into some emergency training thing for the new employees and Albus was desperate to go with him. So they are away for a few hours today.’’
The conversation continued with these types of questions then it was time for me to head. You only get so many days of holidays off work during the Summer and I still had a report to write for the Prophet. Oh, and I have to talk to that father of mine.
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01-31-2010, 03:51 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
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Oohhhh good chapter
JAMES!!! how could youuuu??
Boys...*tut tut*
Anyway cant wait till the next one
Eviee
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01-31-2010, 04:24 PM
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| Puffskein
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oohhh :O great chapter PAMS PAMS PAMS !!!!!
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01-31-2010, 06:26 PM
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| Fire Slug
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nice chapter =]
PAMS
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01-31-2010, 06:35 PM
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| Murtlap
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Nice work, great progress so far.
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01-31-2010, 06:49 PM
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| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
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nice post...waiting to see what she talks to her father...
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02-01-2010, 12:08 AM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Great posts! haha, James cracks me up. Reminds me of Sirius kind of... Can't wait for more. Please PAMS!!! (:
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02-01-2010, 02:09 AM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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JAMSIE! HOW DARE YOU! Poor Lily! I hope she's okay.. hehe
Biiiilll!!! Stop being a normal dad and be haaaappy!
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02-01-2010, 05:31 PM
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| Snidget
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Thank you everybody!
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02-01-2010, 08:03 PM
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| Snidget
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I JUST TYPED THE WHOLE 6TH POST AND IT ALL DISAPPEARED BECAUSE I HAD TO LOGIN AGAIN! Raging!
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Reason: another typing error
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02-01-2010, 08:57 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Ohhh thats sooo damn annoying...
Thats why i type the chapter on my laptop....save it...the copy and paste...just sort it out bit before posting
Hope you post soon
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02-01-2010, 09:00 PM
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| Snidget
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Hey I remembered almost all of it!
''Daddy, I'm home!'' I was so nervous, afraid of the answer.
''In the livingroom.''
''Hey, how are you?'' Starting off with the usual.
''Fine. You?'' Fantastic, not wanting to have any conversation at all.
''I am good. Can I ask you something?'' I decided just to go for it.
''Course. What is it?''
''What is your problem?'' The cheeky and frustrated tone was coming up.
''What do you mean by 'my problem'?'' Oh, so he wanted to play that kind of game!
''I shouldn't have to tell you. What is your problem with the fact that I love Teddy?''
''Well honey, it's just--''
''Don't give me the usual dad crap and don't call me honey!''
''Well do you want to be called something else? I am not going to talk the Dad crap! OK? I just think that you are young. That is all. You could have waited to get your career on full track.''
''What is that supposed to mean? Being the Quidditch columnist for the Prophet isn't good enough, every witch and wizard reads my work!''
''I don't mean it like that. You know that I am proud of your achievements.''
''What is it then?! I need to know.''
''Do you know why your mother and I called you Victoire?''
''Of course. You were victorious against Voldemort just before Mum fell pregnant with me.''
''Have you ever thought of what we were implying for your benefit?''
''No. It is just a name!''
''We were hoping that you would be victorious in all areas of life.''
''Like school and stuff?''
''And work, love and hopefully a family.''
''This is all about my name? You don't think that Ted is right for me do you? I haven't been 'victorious' in who I have chosen!''
''Partly yes. I just know that you could have waited and found someone else.''
''I can't believe you. UHHHHH!''
''Hello. I'm home!'' Saved by the French accent of Mum.
As she walked in the room I stormed out, pushing past her.
When I got to my room I sent an owl to Teddy. I needed him badly, desperately.
Within minutes Quaffle came back with a note telling me to pack a bag, he was coming to get me. Just like he had told me, I packed a bag with the usual toiletries, jammies, clothes and some food stolen from the kitchen. I went back to get my half-finished report for work then went to the garden. Nobody heard me, fortunately. I had my wand at the ready to Stun Dad if he saw me.
I knew exactly where I was going. Teddy's apartment in the heart of London. Easy access to the Ministry where Ted worked as Kingsley Shacklebolt's, the Minister, right hand man. He was always away, lets hope that he gets off for the wedding. The balconty was right above the river Thames and it overlooked Big Ben and the Parliament. It was just beautiful. The chimes don't ring during the night on Big Ben as Teddy charmed it not to, Muggles can hear it but not wizards.
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We had travelled by broom, Ted's Dumbledore Express 101, to the apartment. It had been raining so we were pretty wet and were drying off in the kitchen.
''I really don't care about what your bloody name is!''
''Thanks honey!''
''I was named after my Grandfather but also a stuffed bear and I turned out absolutely fine!''
''I know, you turned out more than fine.''
We were now lounging on the big couch together just relaxing. Ted was drawing fireworks in the air with his wand and making shows. My head was on his chest and it was extremely comforting. I kissed his neck and he kissed my forehead.
''Do you know what Vic? You could do with some sleep, actually so could I.''
''Oh really. Well I think I need carried to the bedroom.''
And with that Teddy lifted me up, ran into the room, flung me on the bed and slammed the door shut with his foot.
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Well?
Be honest!
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02-01-2010, 09:02 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Originally Posted by Evangeline Hermione Ohhh thats sooo damn annoying...
Thats why i type the chapter on my laptop....save it...the copy and paste...just sort it out bit before posting
Hope you post soon
x I normally do that aswell!
I was so mad.
Its dead annoyin when u hav to sign in again.
Its just because my head was full of plans so i just went for it!
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02-01-2010, 09:07 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP I normally do that aswell!
I was so mad.
Its dead annoyin when u hav to sign in again.
Its just because my head was full of plans so i just went for it! I dont think ive ever written whats in my hed straight onto here.
I write it up on either paper or on my laptop...then i re-read and make some corrections...Takes a long time i know...but...and anyway..i come up with most of my ideas while im getting ready for bed.
Mehhh
It was a good chapter
I like...cant wait for more
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02-01-2010, 09:13 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
ooh katie !!! u were rite about the end haha it was great keep it coming PAMS PAMS PAMS !!!!!
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02-01-2010, 09:19 PM
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| Snidget
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Thankyou people.
There might be more tomorrow!
You never know.
I could do with some ideas remeber
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02-02-2010, 01:34 PM
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| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
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heya nice one...keep writing...
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02-02-2010, 06:47 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP ''Partly yes. I just know that you could have waited and found someone else."
''I was named after my Grandfather but also a stuffed bear and I turned out absolutely fine!'' WHAT! BILL HOW DARE YOU! Teddy is so sweet and charming and perfect and you can say that! WAAAAAA
Stuffed bear.. Your just so cuddly
That was awesome! Teddy is so awesome
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02-03-2010, 06:24 AM
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| Fire Slug
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Los Angeles
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awesome =]
PAMS
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02-03-2010, 05:09 PM
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| Snidget
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Get ready for tonight's post!
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02-03-2010, 06:03 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Omg i heard about this in R.E can't wait eeeeek <<< not idea what thats ment to be haha PAMS PAMS PAMS !!!
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02-03-2010, 09:21 PM
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| Snidget
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I woke up feeling loved. For a first time, that was incredible, I thought. I stretched out and ran my hand along Teddy's pillow. My hand searched for him but he was gone.
''Teddy. Where are you?'' Typical. I lose my fiance after our first night of 'you know what'. ''Ted!''
I sat up and grabbed all items of clothing from the floor, I was still yelling for him. I checked around the flat, the bathroom, other bedroom and the livingroom. When I got to the kitchen I saw him.
There he was. Wearing only jeans. How lucky am I? He was singing, dancing and cooking me breakfast. The Forever Knights' new song was blasting from the wireless playing their new song 'Blow out my fire'. Uncle Harry, Uncle Ron and Aunt Hermione went to school with the lead singer. He is some Irish guy that loves Quidditch.Can't remember his name.
Ted didn't notice me when I walked in so I decided to take the opportunity to scare him. I sneaked up behind him and wrapped my arms around his waist. I went on my tip-toes and kissed his cheek. He replied with a kiss on the lips and I replied with full on major passion.
''I loved the dancing and singing.'' I giggled and his face reddened very quickly.
''Oh, you saw that?'' He looked so embaressed, my poor fiance.
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We walked into the manor and I fell in love with it instantly.
''Isn't this just the perfect wedding venue?'' The host was showing us around the place.
''Yes, it is perfect!'' I was so excited I could imagine me marrying the most perfect man ever. AKA Teddy.
''It is very pretty. Would you mind telling us the price?'' Teddy always ahd to think negatively and ask silly questions. OK, this wasn't a silly question but at my time of happiness, it was unnecessary.
*************
Nobody has to know what we agreed to pay for the venue. Put it this way: it was alot! We took the offer though,our wedding is to be there in the August of next year.
Perfect amount of time to find the Resurrection Stone.
Two Weeks Later.
''Aunt Hermione. Are you here?'' I had let myself in and was walking down the hall of 36 Godric's Hollow.
''Oh, hey Vic. I thought I heard someone come in. What's up?'' Uncle Ron was still his lanky self and his fiery hair had gone slightly weaker and older at the edges. He was still humourless, kind of, and took nothing seriously.
''Just came to talk to Hermione. Is she about?'' I hoped so!
''Sorry Vic. She is in Diagon Alley with the kids, just getting the rest of the school stuff. You know what it is like. All back to school in a week!''
''Oh, that's fine. I was just about to head there after I talked to her. I might see her there.'' Oh, please yes.
''Do you want to ring her on her mobile?''
''Don't you remember that you two are the only ones with those things. I can't work it.''
I know, I'll call it. You speak. Tell her to meet you somewhere.''
''Thanks Uncle Ron.''
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I saw her with my little cousins in Fortescue's Ice Cream Parlour sitting at a table for four. Rosie and Hugo were starting their ice cream and were beginning to get hyper already.
''Hey Hermione!''
''Hello angel! Are you alright?''
''Kind of. I need to talk to you, please.''
''Alone?'' I nodded. ''Kids here is some money, go to the Emporium and get owl, cat and rat food.''
''OK. Can we go to the Quidditch shop and stare at the latest brooms for ages?''
''Sure. Stick with eachother. If either of you have to found by the Young Witch or Wizard Protectors I won't be happy.''
''Yes Mum.'' I could tell that they were told this quite often and were quite bored of it.
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''Do you really think so? Are you sure?''
''Yes. All the signs are there. I have enogh evidence, don't I?''
''Yes you do actually. Same symptoms as anyone I've known to be pregnant.''
''Well I was wondering if you would accompany me to St. Mungo's please.''
''Yes Vic. I'll get the kids home first. We will go to George's shop and ask him to apparate them.''
''Thank you Hermione, really.''
''No bother.''
We went to the shop and asked George to accompany them home. He knew not to ask why so he just did it. We waited for his return and then walked out. The shop was still a joke shop but with a different name. It was no longer called Weasley's Wizard Wheezes. It's new name was now FRED. It stands for Fake.Rats.Edible.Disasters.
Also it represents the huge loss in the shop. Obviously.
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St. Mungo's was very busy as we were leaving.
''I don't know how to tell anyone. It is really scary.''
''I gave Ron a huge meal for the first one and wrote a note on a piece of parchment and slid it under his cutlery.''
''That is so lovely. Shame I can't and don't cook.''
''Well just tell him, it will be fine.''
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''Teddy!'' I was so nervous.
''In the livingroom.''
As I walked in he pulled me into a hug.
''You might want to sit down.'' I said this while being hugged.
''OK. What is wrong?'' He pulled me with him to the couch.
''I'm going to have a baby. Our baby.''
Well?
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02-03-2010, 09:27 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Ohhh good chapter
nice twist
Cant wait for more
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02-03-2010, 09:29 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
:L Hermione tellin ron :L OMG u cant leave it there PAMS PAMS PAMS !!!!! oh might not go down well :| not even married yet
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02-03-2010, 10:03 PM
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| Snidget
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''Oh, my! Really, are you sure? Are you guessing or are you positive? Seriously?!'' He was in utter shock. Thank Merlin I told him to sit down.
''I have been to see Aunt Hermione for advice and then we went to St. Mungo's. They confirmed it for me. Would you like to see a picture?''
''Really? Yes please.''
He was beaming. This was what I had hoped for. He took the picture and just stared at it. There was nothing there yet obviously, I was only two weeks, but it was still amazing to see. There was a baby growing inside of me.
As soon as I thought of this the tears started to come. Teddy was right there for me. His eyes started to well up too.
''I hope they are happy tears?'' I asked him whilst blubbering.
''They sure are. What about you? I hope they are happy tears too.''
''Of course. Then there is part of me that is scared, nervous, scared and petrified.''
''Why, I will be there the whole time. Please don't worry.''
''I have the responsibility for the next 9 months to keep this baby alive. That is quite a scary thought you know.''
''Well, when I proposed to you, I was scared because I wold have to keeep you alive for eternity. I know how you feel minus the sickness and nausea and the -''
''OK. Thanks. I had that talk with Hermione in her kitchen thanks.''
''Sorry. Are we keeping this to ourselves for now?''
''I want to. Just a week or so.''
''Sure my darling, anything.''
And with that he kissed my head and let me lie on him on the couch until we both fell asleep.
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I woke with a blanket wrapped around me and I was in a bed not on the couch.
''Hey sweetie. That couch will be too uncomfortable for you at the moment. I was afraid to carry you incase I hurt you so I levitated you here.''
''Thanks. Did I just have a very strange dream?''
''What. We just booked our wedding venue and we will have to get a refund as you just found out that you were preganant?''
''I wasn't dreaming then. Will we bring the wedding forward slightly? I was thinking, this Christmas?''
''Yes, that sounds great. I will have to go for a few days. I was speaking to Harry this morning. Rubeus Hagrid is allowing us to stay at his house where we are in perfect distance to the forest. I will send him an owl just now.''
''No!'' I sat up and moved closer to him. ''You can't tell him that I'm pregnant through an owl, silly.''
''You're right. I'll say that we found the perfect venue, that is true, and we have booked it for the 24th of December, which is also true.''
''It is? I just told you there that we would have to move it.''
''Well, I took the liberty of doing it myself. I know you Vic, I knew you would really want a Christmas Wedding.''
''Oh, thankyou Ted. You really are an angel.'' I kissed him and then got up from the bed.''What food have we got?''
''Here come the cravings.''
''Hey, not funny.'' I hit his arm as I raided the cupboards.
Well.
That was for RonHermione(L) who was desperate for another post.
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