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10-05-2010, 08:03 PM
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#626 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Oh Gabbeh, too funny Can you die of laughing
I'm not saying a word - not even you Soph! Or you Kerri :evillaugh
Love ya
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10-05-2010, 09:39 PM
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#627 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: May 2010 Location: your closet MWAHAHA
Posts: 371
Hogwarts RPG Name: Septimus "Sep" Galen Fourth Year |
READ THE ****ING LETTER YOU DEVILISHLY HANDSOME IDIOT!! IT'S AN APOLOGY LETTER OR SOMETHING!! (right?)
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10-06-2010, 05:10 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida
Posts: 1,415
Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Well, this is my third time trying to post this comment. Katie, if it double posts then just hve the double post police delete one. Thankfully this time I copied in case I need to paste. Hello Katie.
First off thank you for your three cheers. It humbles me for your gracious consideration to me. Thank you.
This is the second time I've written this comment, or rather a comment for this post. I don't know what happened to the first one. I even watched to make sure it posted, because just very recently I made a comment for a FF, and it didn't post.
Katie, I loved this little bit. Quote:
‘What do you mean out?’
‘Like, he opened the front door, stepped outside and closed it again. I don’t know Occlumency and all that stuff. I just heard him yawn and go out. Now do you know what ‘out’ means?’ asked Albus sarcastically.
‘Yes, thankyou. Now, breakfast and tell your Dad about James’ little trip will you?’
‘OK. You coming?’
‘After I’ve read this munchkin.’ Ted ruffled his little cousin’s hair.
‘Hey! Not funny,’ Moaned Al as he playfully punched Ted’s arm.
‘Sorry, it had to be said. Can I trust you to take Evie down stairs?’
‘Sure, I helped Mum feed her this morning so I’ll be fine.’
‘Aww thanks cuz..’
‘You’re very welcome.’
It's so real, and just so cute. Albus was a bit grumpy, but Ted took care of him in style.
I wonder if maybe James went to meet Vic. I mean they was pretty close before Vic went all crazy with the Rob mess wasn't they? Quote:
He threw it into the spare room he had used the previous night and headed down the stairs to the strong smell of bacon but delightful at the same time.
But he said he would be down after he read the letter.
Great post there Katie. I'll be watching for your next notice saying you posted. Quote:
Happy Birthday for Saturday Soph!!
Kerri, have a great time in New York and Washignton. And have a great birthday on the 11th!!
Happy Birthday to all three of you girls, Katie , Sophie , and Kerri . 15 right? A wonerful age! Enjoy it while you can.
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10-06-2010, 03:19 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Thankyou Connie You deserve the consideration
Thanks for the birthday wish!!
I'm not saying anything about James or the letter!:evillaugh
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10-06-2010, 04:42 PM
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| X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Killing Rob!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Happy Birthday to all three of you girls, Katie , Sophie , and Kerri . 15 right? A wonerful age! Enjoy it while you can.
Ah Thanks Connie And yep, we're now 15 and fabulous!
Soph x
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10-06-2010, 09:14 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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For CassiopiaMalfoy also known as Gabbeh
Writes non-stop but still has time to read and comment on others' FFs.
Is very funny and enthusiastic and always has something nice to say even if my post is rubbish!! 1 2 3 Love ya Gabbhe!!
Nothing about the letter but lots about James.
Remember Christie McLaggen??
After two hours of waiting James still hadn’t returned. Ginny had insisted that he get his privacy but nobody could resist any longer. Harry decided to send out his patronus with a message. James, we are all very worried. Come home soon. James’ POV
‘I told you they would eventually be crying out for me,’ whispered James into Christie’s neck. They both chuckled and stared into each other’s eyes.
‘Did you know he wasn’t dead?’ Christie asked James, bracing herself for a long answer.
‘I had a feeling, turns out I’m psychic.’ This made Christie laugh. ‘I had to escape the house, get away from everybody. He just keeps repeating the story, it’s so graphic and horrible. So many people died...’
‘Shh... It’s alright. The good thing is that Ted didn’t die. Right?’ Said Christie reassuringly.
‘Yeah. The whole experience made me think about life in general. It’s too short, way too short. I have to ask you something Christie McLaggen. I have been saving up since Merlin existed so I hope you like it.’
‘Like what?’
‘This...’ Whispered James as he opened a square box to reveal a small silver ring with a diamond set in the middle.
‘James...this is really unexpected. I don’t know what to say...’
‘How about yes?’
‘Yes! Yes! Yes, a million times yes!’ She was beaming, absolutely delighted.
James slipped the ring onto her ring-finger on her left hand and she stared in awe at it. Her eyes sparkled, reflecting the beautiful diamond. Her hands shook, after all this was a huge step. Her smile widened and she looked into her fiancee’s eyes. He was her’s and nobody could take him away from her.
‘I’m going to be a Potter. I won’t be a McLaggen anymore.’
‘So are you sure it’s a yes?’
‘James! That is so typical of you. I am ecstatic! Over the moon!’
‘Good good, come here...’ whispered James to his new fiancée.
James kissed Christie with a passion he had never shown before. This was a new love, a whole different scale now. He more than cared for her, she wasn’t a school love anymore. She was soon to be a love for life.
What do you think?
__________________ You're just a daydream away,I wouldn't know what to say if I had you. And I'll keep you a daydream away, Just watch from a safe place, So I never have to lose.
Last edited by KatielovesHP; 10-06-2010 at 09:22 PM.
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10-06-2010, 09:47 PM
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#632 (permalink)
| Bugbear
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Down Under
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cody Liam Evans Seventh Year | HP, Harry & Ginny ♥ | Music Girl ♫ | | BW, JB, CS, 1D, Glee, AVPM/S Lover | Pray &
That's an awesome chappie, Katie!
Keep up the great work!
You've wrote so much in this ff!
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10-06-2010, 11:30 PM
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#633 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Awe, that was precious, Katie! And the ring is so pretty! Great post! Please PAMS! |
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10-07-2010, 04:11 AM
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#634 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Oh Gabbeh, too funny Can you die of laughing
I'm not saying a word - not even you Soph! Or you Kerri :evillaugh
Love ya I do remember reading several years ago that some Greek guy died of laughing... BUT DON'T DIE!
Oh... Ohh... Ohhh. KATIE! <3 You dedicated it to ME?! I am extremely honored, thaaank you <3
And btw, I LOVE LOVE LOVE teh update! Jamesywamsey is freaking awesome! I'm ecstatic that she said yes! JEALOUS! I'll just steal Scorpius then. Congwats James!!!
The ring is gorgeous!!!
Hehe, and again, thank you! And again, I love the update!
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10-07-2010, 03:45 PM
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#635 (permalink)
| X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Killing Rob!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Aww...that is soo cute. Though I'm a little jelouse of Christie...Why couldn't it ave been me!!!!!??? j/k
PAMS Dear, but not too quickly, I don't want it to end!
Sophie Bubbles X
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10-07-2010, 06:33 PM
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#636 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Thanks everyone!!
Gabbeh: you're welcome!!! love ya
Sophie: It has to end!!
Emily: I do like the ring!!
Stef: first to post Thanks
__________________ You're just a daydream away,I wouldn't know what to say if I had you. And I'll keep you a daydream away, Just watch from a safe place, So I never have to lose. |
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10-07-2010, 11:19 PM
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#637 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: May 2010 Location: your closet MWAHAHA
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Septimus "Sep" Galen Fourth Year |
EEEEEEEK!!
james and christie getting married! yay! *nearly wets herself because of excitement*
mclaggen: bad
potter: good
BE A POTTER, CHRISTIE.
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10-08-2010, 07:42 PM
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#638 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Thanks Kassie!!!
The epilogue might be the wedding! Not decided yet tho
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10-09-2010, 05:49 PM
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#639 (permalink)
| Jobberknoll
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Up in the Stars
Posts: 3,857
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kennedy Stark Fifth Year x2
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wohoo I love it
Teddy: must read the letter
Teddy&Vic: must get back together
James&Christie: must live happily ever after
Rob: must die
ME!!!!: must kill Rob
PAMS PAMS PAMS
Oh and happy b'day
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10-10-2010, 02:05 AM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black Quote:
Originally Posted by sarahb wohoo I love it
Teddy: must read the letter
Teddy&Vic: must get back together
James&Christie: must live happily ever after
Rob: must die
ME!!!!: must kill Rob
PAMS PAMS PAMS
Oh and happy b'day That sums up everything that I want to happen perfectly
If that doesn't happen, I cry!!
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10-10-2010, 01:57 PM
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#641 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Thanks ladies!! I will post soon!! Well as soon as I possibly can!!!
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10-12-2010, 12:18 AM
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| Jobberknoll
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Up in the Stars
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kennedy Stark Fifth Year x2
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Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy That sums up everything that I want to happen perfectly
If that doesn't happen, I cry!! :techni: thanksies
me to don't make me cry Katie waahhhhhh
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10-12-2010, 02:42 PM
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#643 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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I can't make promises like that!! I don't control your emotions
__________________ You're just a daydream away,I wouldn't know what to say if I had you. And I'll keep you a daydream away, Just watch from a safe place, So I never have to lose. |
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10-12-2010, 05:44 PM
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#644 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
I'll probably cry no matter how it ends, tears of a happy ending, or a sad one, or just tears of it being over...
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10-16-2010, 04:25 PM
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#645 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Gabbeh!! You would cry because this is ending?? Aww that means alot!!
__________________ You're just a daydream away,I wouldn't know what to say if I had you. And I'll keep you a daydream away, Just watch from a safe place, So I never have to lose. |
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10-16-2010, 05:02 PM
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#646 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Hello
To RavenclawFan.... I don't know how many times I have asked your name but I can't remember it. Sarah rings a bell but forgive me if I am wrong.
Anyways, you have been here since the start. I have to thank you!! Honestly, your comments are just lovely. I had been reading this from the start agin and I realised it's pretty rubbish but you always had a nice thing to say!!!!
Three cheers for RavenclawFan!! 1 2 3
My 51st post, one of the very very last!!!!!
Ted walked up the stairs, thinking about James the whole time. Albus and Lily were downstairs in the kitchen play fighting, making quite a racket. Ginny was napping on the couch with Evie sleeping next to her and Harry was away a walk to ‘clear his mind’, as he had said.
Teddy knew the letter had to be read at some point so he went up to his room and picked it up from the bed. The envelope was a crisp parchment and the writing was Fleur’s tight, font. Ted opened the envelope to reveal screeds and screeds of writing on parchment. As he swept his eyes over the words his mind wasn’t registering anything. The words hit him like a bludger to the head; he got a shock because of what his wife had done. Teddy,
I wanted to let you know that your wife has done something I am appalled with. She called Robert Fiddle and is now at his house. I know you said you were finished for now but she needs to see sense, she needs you. She has needed you for a long time and when you turned up she went upside down – worse than I had ever imagined. You must help her; if it helps it doesn’t need to be for her but for your children. They need a stable mother, they need a family. Violet is here with me as I write this. You must help Victoire - I don’t know what he will do after he has read that letter in Sweden. She told me what it said, she could be hurt. She needs saved, by you.
Fleur Weasley and Violet.
Enjoy!!!!
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10-16-2010, 05:09 PM
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#647 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP I realised it's pretty rubbish It is not rubbish! I love this story! Quote:
My 51st post, one of the very very last!!!!! Sad, is it going to end with Teddy saving Vic from Rob and they live happily ever after?? Quote:
Teddy,
I wanted to let you know that your wife has done something I am appalled with. She called Robert Fiddle and is now at his house. I know you said you were finished for now but she needs to see sense, she needs you. She has needed you for a long time and when you turned up she went upside down – worse than I had ever imagined. You must help her; if it helps it doesn’t need to be for her but for your children. They need a stable mother, they need a family. Violet is here with me as I write this. You must help Victoire - I don’t know what he will do after he has read that letter in Sweden. She told me what it said, she could be hurt. She needs saved, by you.
Fleur Weasley and Violet.
Why on EARTH would she do THAT?? Teddy better hurry up and get to her! What does her letter to Rob say??
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10-16-2010, 05:26 PM
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#648 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Originally Posted by emilyblack It is not rubbish! I love this story! Thanks Quote:
Sad, is it going to end with Teddy saving Vic from Rob and they live happily ever after?? More or less, there will be an epilogue and stuff and some other things but thats it in a nutshell Quote:
Why on EARTH would she do THAT??
She is Vic!! duh She crawls to Rob for attention when Ted is gone! Quote:
Teddy better hurry up and get to her!
Yes yes!!! Whatever you say :evillaugh Quote:
What does her letter to Rob say??
The one that she wrote in the hotel room in Sweden then left with Ted. Everyone thought itt was harsh
Thanks Emily
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10-16-2010, 05:35 PM
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#649 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Yes yes!!! Whatever you say :evillaugh Uh huh, I think you and Sophie are just trying to get revenge or something... Quote:
The one that she wrote in the hotel room in Sweden then left with Ted. Everyone thought itt was harsh Ohhh, that one! I thought she wrote a new letter. Umm, yeah he should probably hurry up and get to her. Please?
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10-16-2010, 05:43 PM
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#650 (permalink)
| Snidget
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Revenge???? Never
Okay, just a tad!! A tiny bit!! Also it creates suspense:evillaugh
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