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05-10-2010, 02:05 AM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
I can't believe I missed so much!
I WANT TO KILL ROB SO BADLY IT'S NOT FUNNY! that was the caffeine I've had today kicking in
I hope Ted's okay!
And the babies!
And EVERYONE else! 'Cept Rob, he could have jumped off a 500 foot high cliff shouting that he was a idiot to the whole world and saying he's using some sort of love potion and confessing that's he's a jerk and is being mean to EVERYONE and it's all his fault, and I wouldn't care! *takes a deep breath* I have a much longer rant forming in my head
pams!
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05-10-2010, 06:42 PM
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#352 (permalink)
| X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Killing Rob!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Nooooo!
Teddy can't be dead I'm crying right now
I don't think I've cryed this much reading a story... Well apart for New Moon when Edward left (and I cryed when he came back too I was soo happy.)
Please don't kill off Teddy. We love him too much. Plus the twins won't have a Daddy!
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05-10-2010, 06:50 PM
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#353 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
Posts: 2,232
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
OMG :| Katies you could have gave me some warning :| PAMS PAMS PAMS NOW !!!!!!!!
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05-10-2010, 08:21 PM
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#354 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) OMG :| Katies you could have gave me some warning :| PAMS PAMS PAMS NOW !!!!!!!! Kerri, you had plenty of warning! I told you everything that was going to happen so don't give me that!!!
Pams = maybe
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05-10-2010, 08:23 PM
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#355 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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| Wish I Was In Florida! | The Avengers | Music | HP Boxset - my life since Xmas! | Luna Lovegood Welcome back Sophie!!! I cried at New Moon too!! haha
I know that the twins won't have Ted but it is part of the story
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05-10-2010, 09:03 PM
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#356 (permalink)
| Jobberknoll
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Up in the Stars
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kennedy Stark Fifth Year x2
| ♥ Slytherpuff ♥ dancer ♥ totally awesome :: Starkid lover
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOO Teddy can't be dead. He just can't. PAMS PAMS PAMS. I need to find out if he's alive.
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05-10-2010, 09:25 PM
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#357 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Not the beach
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Originally Posted by Morag Well apart for New Moon when Edward left (and I cried when he came back too I was soo happy.) Haha, I totally balled my eyes out when Edward left and came back Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP I know that the twins won't have Ted but it is part of the story As in he really is dead??? |
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05-11-2010, 02:56 PM
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#358 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Originally Posted by emilyblack
As in he really is dead???
Sorry to break it to you but you have to take the last post seriously. He died. I just said missing and presumed dead because of the way he died. You will find that out in the next post. Maybe now actually. Well it will only be as short one, I am in the library but when I get home it will be bigger. Deal?
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05-11-2010, 03:01 PM
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#359 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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hey.
thanks everybody for reading my story.
there will be more soon.
katie.
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05-11-2010, 03:20 PM
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#360 (permalink)
| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
aw...i tought so she would feel all that...because she really does Love Teddy!
and asfor Teddy being presumed dead...i just hope he is not!
They shouldnt lose him....please...pams when you can...
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05-11-2010, 03:37 PM
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#361 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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I am sorry if it came as a shock but I wanted to surprise you. I left you all hints though. like in the post he comes back to the Burrow, as he walks up the garden path he talks about not being here for much longer blah blah.
I had no train of thought as I stood next to the window, both letters in my hand.
I couldn't think, it was too painful.
I couldn't cry, I was scared I would never stop.
I couldn't move, I was afraid that I would collapse if I did.
When I finally thought of the short life that my husband had, I was finally able to cry, I was finally able to move to the couch and sit with my pain.
I was interrupted by a quick knock on the door. I didn't want to get it. It would be somebody that didn't know, somebody that I would have to tell. I wasn't ready for that yet. How was I supposed to say it?
'Vic, I am coming in OK? I know, don't worry about it. It will be OK.'
'How is it going to be OK? He's gone, forever.'
'Alohamora.' Whispered a crying Hermione, opening the unopend front door. 'Just cry all you want.'
So I did. She hugged me and played with my hair as I lay on the couch balling my eyes out. This made me remember that she was my aunt. She was normally like a friend.
Suddenly, it dawned on me that she knew. How?
'How did you find out? Did you get a letter?'
'Ron came home lastnight. So did Harry. Ron broke it to me, I was distraught. I am so sorry Victoire. I can't even imagine what it would be like to lose Ron.'
'You mean that you knew before me and you didn't tell me? My own husband and you didn't tell me? I have the right to know. I bet you even know how he died aswell.'
'Actualy I do.'
'Well tell me then!! I need to know.'
'I think it would be best if Ron and Harry told you.'
OK. So I have to go now. The next post will be when e find out how he is gone. We are going to Grimmauld Place so that Harry and Ron can tell Vic.
How was it??
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05-11-2010, 06:53 PM
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#362 (permalink)
| X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Killing Rob!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP I am sorry if it came as a shock but I wanted to surprise you. I left you all hints though. That was far to much of a shock Missy. We love Teddy and you killed him!
I had no train of thought as I stood next to the window, both letters in my hand.
I couldn't think, it was too painful.
I couldn't cry, I was scared I would never stop.
I couldn't move, I was afraid that I would collapse if I did. Poor Vic. Its so hard when you lose a loved one :(
'Alohamora.' Whispered a crying Hermione, opening the unopend front door. 'Just cry all you want.' I think if it was me I'd cry forever and ever. I still can't believe you killed him! :(
How was it?? :) It was fab. Apart from killing Teddy,... but I suppose thats the storyline. Another great post Dear. I'll be watching for more.
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05-11-2010, 07:06 PM
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#363 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida
Posts: 1,415
Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hey Katie, it's so sad that Teddy is dead. I wonder why Harry, Ginny, Ron, and Hermione didn't tell her when they got home? It's sad the twins won't have their father. It's sad Vic won't have her husband. Very sad.
I'll be watching to find out more on your next post.
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05-11-2010, 08:28 PM
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#364 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Not the beach
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP I couldn't think, it was too painful.
I couldn't cry, I was scared I would never stop.
I couldn't move, I was afraid that I would collapse if I did. Sooooo sad. Quote:
'You mean that you knew before me and you didn't tell me? My own husband and you didn't tell me? I have the right to know. I bet you even know how he died aswell.'
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Originally Posted by Connie I wonder why Harry, Ginny, Ron, and Hermione didn't tell her when they got home? I'm with Connie... Why didn't they tell her when they got home? Well, we would all like to know, you know
I bet Vic is going to feel even worse about herself now because she technically cheated on him right before he died (or after?). That's going to take a toll on her. This is so sad.
Great post. I can't wait to find out more. PLEASE PAMS!! |
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05-11-2010, 08:32 PM
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#365 (permalink)
| Jobberknoll
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Up in the Stars
Posts: 3,857
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kennedy Stark Fifth Year x2
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oh my goodness so sad i'm nearly crying now,
please PAMS
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05-11-2010, 11:03 PM
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#366 (permalink)
| Fire Slug
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Los Angeles
Posts: 166
Hogwarts RPG Name: Elizabeth Burnes Fourth Year |
no!
that was so sad
my eyes watered but i forced myself not to cry because other people are in the room
but like you said, its part of the plot
no!!!
PAMS
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05-12-2010, 04:10 AM
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#367 (permalink)
| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
nice post...pams when you can...
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05-12-2010, 01:23 PM
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#368 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black *is not ashamed to cry* GAAAAH! I'm about to do that in real life *is now slightly ashamed to cry*
Err, I love it! I really do! Buuuuut Teddy's gone! Waaa! Okaay.. I need to stop bawling about him.. It's just a fan fic! but a VERY VERY GOOOOOD one!
Hehe, I hope something happens and he's not dead! *crosses her fingers* ehh, but you said he was... Hmm. |
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05-12-2010, 07:05 PM
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#369 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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I left off at Hermione and Vic crying, about to see Ron and Harry so now they are in Grimmauld Place.
I sat down on the kitchen chair next to Ginny, preparing myself for the images I was about to see in my head. Hermione was on my left, squeezing my hand. That was Ted's thing. I took my hand out of hers' and clasped them at my bump.
'I am so sorry Vic, I don't know what to say.' Harry's voice was low and defeated as he said this.
'What to say? Tell me what happened.'
'It was early morning, maybe around eight thirty in the morning.'
Harry's eyes clouded over as he remembered every detail. There was a cool breeze cooling everybody down in the hot African sun. Nobody expected anything bad to happen, it was too early for that. Everybody was chatting in groups and laughing for the first time in a while. Harry, Ron and Teddy were leaning against the crates of bottled water in the shade. The light wasn't as bright as where the other guys were sitting.
'Thanks for coming to my fabulous wedding guys. I mean, I loved it. I hope you two enjoyed it as much as I did.'
'Well you came to ours' so we felt as thought we had to. I thought it was rubbish. What about you Harry?'
'Yeah, absolutely crap.' Their sarcastic voices shined through, making all of them all laugh.
For about half an hour, they just sat and chatted until they heard banging. Before they knew it the place was flooding. The crates had been blown apart. As soon as they could, wands were out and shooting spells toward the invisible enemy.
'Avada Kadavra', was flying from all angles. If somebody was hit, they had no hope of survival. Harry whipped his head around to check casualties but found that Ron nor Teddy were no where to be seen. He checked again and saw Ron on the other side of the field fighting off the enemy trying to invade through the bushes. They were completely alone. Nobody had survived, they had been wiped out by one simple spell. With all his might, the red-haired man desperately fought off the tall, red robed wizards who were obviously the rebellions. The darker haired man was ready to give up but as soon as he thought of his godson lying out there somewhere he blasted them all. Everyone of them disappeared. They had escaped.
Within seconds, the victims were gone, the field was empty, apart from around 50 wands lying where their owners once were.
'Here is his wand Vic, I am so sorry.'
Ron handed me the wooden stick, no longer a wand. It had no owner to cast its spells. It was merely a stick.
He was gone, his blue eyes were gone, his messy hair was gone, his soothing hands were gone, his heart was gone.
How was it?
Ted will be having a memorial by the way. Maybe next post or the one after.
Katie
xx
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05-12-2010, 07:11 PM
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#370 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
Posts: 2,232
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
OMG Katie !!!! PAMS PAMS PAMS
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05-12-2010, 07:15 PM
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#371 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) OMG Katie !!!! PAMS PAMS PAMS Soon Kerri!!
xx
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05-12-2010, 08:41 PM
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#372 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Not the beach
Posts: 7,087
| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP 'Well you came to ours' so we felt as thought we had to. I thought it was rubbish. What about you Harry?'
'Yeah, absolutely crap.' Their sarcastic voices shined through, making all of them all laugh. Hahahaha, gotta love them ...and sarcasm Quote:
The darker haired man was ready to give up but as soon as he thought of his godson lying out there somewhere he blasted them all.
Wow, I loved this bit So sad, but so good It was really good! I loved the post, Katie! PLEASE PAMS!! |
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05-12-2010, 09:06 PM
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#373 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Thanks Emily! More soon
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05-12-2010, 09:14 PM
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#374 (permalink)
| Jobberknoll
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Up in the Stars
Posts: 3,857
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kennedy Stark Fifth Year x2
| ♥ Slytherpuff ♥ dancer ♥ totally awesome :: Starkid lover
oh my goodness so sad, it was really good i can't wait for more
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05-12-2010, 09:24 PM
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#375 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Thanks Sarah!! More soon!
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