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01-05-2008, 02:47 AM
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| | Moke
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: New Orleaaanss!
Posts: 8,554
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Katelyn Quillio
Fifth Year |  Love is Good, Love is...PAINFUL. - Sa13+ Aquila Pacis
*sigh* Hey y'all! This is Kate with another one-shot! I seem to be better at these then LOOONG stories. Anywhow, this is a SeVans story. I am a huge fan of the ship! Without further ado, here ya go:
He pulled her along behind him, his hold on her tiny frame firm. The forest’s silence welcomed them as he pulled her deeper and deeper into it’s heart. Her strawberry-golden hair fluttered as she was led by him, her true love.
He ran a deathly pale hand through his shoulder length, black hair as he glanced around quickly in a nervous manner. He then did something so daring, so sudden that her heart jumped to her throat. He pushed her roughly against the nearest tree. He pressed his lips ever so gently against her delicate neck. She giggled, her pleasant laughter filling the silent void of the forest.
“Severus, stop! That tickles,” she whispered, placing her warm hand against his cold chest. Snape smirked, his black eyes glistening in the darkness. He ignored her whisper, and put her tiny face in his hands. His kiss was gentle, like a butterfly landing ever so gently on the petal of a flower. Though Lily pushed him away softly, it felt as if she had slapped him. It mentally pierced him painfully.
“Sevvy, please, don’t make this harder than it already is. I’m with James…” she trailed off, for Snape had let go of her face. He didn’t know what hurt more; his sickening nickname, her obvious pain at how hard this was, or the fact that she was with…Potter. Her green eyes tore into his black ones.
“I came to say…goodbye. I’m with James. We can never….be,” Lily Evans said gently, stroking his cheek softly. Her words, though she didn’t know it, cut deeper into his already slit heart.
One’s usual reaction to such a mental blow would have been to cry, run away, or both. Severus did none of those. This time his kiss was hard, not in the least that butterfly kiss Lily had received before. Her fingers twisted through his greasy hair, his arms tight around her, holding her close. Kisses feel like they last forever, but unfortunately they don’t. when they broke apart, they both had tears streaming down their faces, crystals glistening prettily in the waning moonlight.
In that moment, Snape realized just how much he loved this girl. His love couldn’t be expressed in any way, shape, or form. Her words echoed in his head, each time cutting deeper and deeper. His heart positively bled at the thought that he would never have her, never hold her, never kiss her again. It nearly exploded at the thought that she would never love him again, instead love that Potter. Severus choked, the hole where his broken heart had been thudding painfully against his ribs. How such a beautiful and pure thing such as love hurt so badly?
And they kissed, again, for the last time.
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Yeah, it was kinda short but that's alright and please review and...tell me your oppinions!
*Kate*
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01-05-2008, 07:48 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Top Ramen plz?
Posts: 13,082
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Danny Logan Edwards
Sixth Year  x1
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Kate! You are unbelievable!!! I have never been a SeVans fan, but you are slowly making me one!!
After all your first SeVans Oneshot got me to write one  Your writing it powerful and I love it!!!
Your Oneshots work wonders Kate 
L-O-V-E-D I-T!!!!
Write more!! Pleaaaase!!!
*Steph*
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01-05-2008, 11:45 PM
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| | Moke
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: New Orleaaanss!
Posts: 8,554
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Katelyn Quillio
Fifth Year | Aquila Pacis
your entirely too nice, Steph! ha. I better make you a SeVans fan...its possibly almost as amazing at Dramione.
and thankksss. but. eh. i dont really think im that good...*hugs*
*Kate*
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01-06-2008, 01:38 AM
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| formerly: Ginny_Fan  Jobberknoll
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Exeter, UK
Posts: 4,332
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Daniel Sychev Jnr
Fourth Year |
Katee
i reallly dont want to sound patronising but for a 14 year old your so good at this stuff, better than me for thinking up one shots anway and im 17 haha !!
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01-06-2008, 05:38 PM
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| | Snidget
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Far away from you...
Posts: 2,634
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jake Chatich
First Year | FanFic Enthusiast
Kate!! I am to stunned to talk! Your one-shot is absolutly amazing! Your spelling and vocabulary is really good! I'm not trying to sound like your english teacher or something but your writing was really good!
Like Steph, I usualy hate SeVans together but yours was just so... I don't know but it really changed the way I look at them right now. You made it so ramantic!
-*~ Shirel ~*-
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01-07-2008, 12:00 AM
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| | Moke
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: New Orleaaanss!
Posts: 8,554
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Katelyn Quillio
Fifth Year | Aquila Pacis
aww thankssseee Danny boy. haa. hmm...just cuz im fourteen dunt meaan NUTHIN. lmao.
And THANKS a TON Shirel! haha...i can always count on you to read ma stuff! hahaa. and thanks..like i said before, im a big fan of SeVans...so yeah. i hope to convert you guys to SeVans too!
*Kate*
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01-07-2008, 04:30 PM
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| | Imp
Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In dreamworld ...
Posts: 465
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ayame Sakamoto
Fourth Year |
Convert me to seVans? Impossible. I'm already there, but your story just confirmed my belief they should be together. That was amazing, Kate! It was seriously good! You're an awesome writer!
I hope to read more of your oneshots.
Much love,
~Brooke
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no matter how we're separated in this darkness ;; our hearts call for each other with a stronger bond than anything
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01-07-2008, 09:31 PM
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| | Moke
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: New Orleaaanss!
Posts: 8,554
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Katelyn Quillio
Fifth Year | Aquila Pacis
ha. thannks. im glad at least ONE Sevans fan has read! WHOOPI. lmao...they should. but then we wouldnt have Harry...so yeah. it sucks, REALLY. haahaa.
and thanks. yeah. i guess its good. XD
i hope to write more...if i can get any inspiration!
*Kate*
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01-08-2008, 04:07 PM
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| | Jobberknoll
Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A rainy, rainy place
Posts: 4,425
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Xylina Samuels
Third Year |
Up that list to two seVans fans, Kate. That was brilliant! Very realistic. I almost felt like I was there when reading it, seeing it happen.
And you should write more, hon!
Love,
Lena xXx
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01-09-2008, 02:27 AM
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| | Moke
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: New Orleaaanss!
Posts: 8,554
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Katelyn Quillio
Fifth Year | Aquila Pacis
WHOOOPI! TWWOO whole SEVANSSS FANS! YAY! haha...
and thanks...i 'preciate it!!!
i shall...like i said, IF I CAN GET ANY INSPIRATION...from you other brilliant writers...ha.
*Kate*
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01-09-2008, 05:38 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Dancing in the rain!
Posts: 1,990
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Dominic(Dom) Dawson
Third Year |
Wow Your really good Kate! I never been a Sevans fan but the way you wrote this made methink a little more about this. Very good Kate you should write more, your so talented!
*~Alexia~*
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01-10-2008, 03:48 AM
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| | Moke
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: New Orleaaanss!
Posts: 8,554
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Katelyn Quillio
Fifth Year | Aquila Pacis
thankeee....ok. YOU BETTER CONVER TO A SEVANS FAN NOW! I command THEE! haaa.
XD
thanks AGAIN!
*Kate*
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02-04-2008, 12:16 AM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: on candy mountion
Posts: 395
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Aurora Jullian Marks
First Year |
i dont ussually like sevans but this was AWSOME
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