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05-03-2010, 02:42 PM
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|  DoM Sea Serpent
Join Date: Sep 2009
Posts: 41,122
Hogwarts RPG Name: TBD First Year | Mommy of 3 <3 <3 <3
I was worried about the 'it's finished' comment! Thank you for clarifying!! I like it alot Evvie. you story just keeps getting better and better!!!!
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05-03-2010, 06:17 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) Pams pams pams !!!!! Thank You
More soon Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy OHMIGOSH! THAT STUPID COW!
Oh and thank you for letting me kill Pansy-poo!
I'm glad that Hermione knows the truth.. Well, the semi-truth
IT'S ALMOST OVER!  It's wonderful! Your most welcome
Yeahh im glad Hermione knows the semi-truth. &&Knowing her she will investigate
Awww Dont worry, I might write some more stories soon after exams  Im said its over too But thank You for being such a awesome reader! Quote:
Originally Posted by harita nice...that's what i was thinking...you couldnt leave us like that in the middle...:O...  ...good one...pams when you can... Awww i wouldnt do that to you guys  Honest! But im glad you liked it.
Anddd i hope to update very soon, but my exams are praticually on top of me andd i havent started revision Quote:
Originally Posted by gustka48 I was worried about the 'it's finished' comment! Thank you for clarifying!! I like it alot Evvie. you story just keeps getting better and better!!!! Alyssa, I wouldn't do that to you!  But your most welcome 
Thank For reading and i hope to post more soon -nodss-
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05-11-2010, 02:09 PM
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#128 (permalink)
|  DoM Sea Serpent
Join Date: Sep 2009
Posts: 41,122
Hogwarts RPG Name: TBD First Year | Mommy of 3 <3 <3 <3
Evvie my love!! When are we going to get more?
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05-11-2010, 02:21 PM
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#129 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by gustka48 Evvie my love!! When are we going to get more? Alyssa!
Sorry for the wait, Im about to start writing it now, ive been so busy with RL i haven't had much time to write. Exams start next week! *screams* But i promise to post another chapter before they start!
*runs the write next chapter*
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05-11-2010, 02:31 PM
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#130 (permalink)
|  DoM Sea Serpent
Join Date: Sep 2009
Posts: 41,122
Hogwarts RPG Name: TBD First Year | Mommy of 3 <3 <3 <3
It's okay Evvie! Real Life is kinda of important too (I guess) lol
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05-16-2010, 09:30 AM
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#131 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Sorry guys for the LONGGGGGGGG wait...Been rather busy ;/
So Here you go Your going to hate me after this one CHAPTER THIRTEEN "Draco, can i talk to you..." "No" "Please!" "No!" Draco said, as harshly as he could as he stormed away from her. She jogged behind him, a little out ofr breath. They had just come out of Herbology, so that rays of sun beamed down on them from behind the thick clouds. There feet threged through the grass. Hermione stopped, dropping her heavy bag on the floor, Draco carried on walking at a fast pace. "I know what you did for me" She called to him, he hestitated before turning round. He began to walk slowly towards her. "I did nothing for you, Mudblood" He spat at her, he could see Harry and Ron jogging towards them in the distance. His heart broke, he loved her, but he had
to end it, for her sake. "That wont work on me Draco.." She took a step forward, "I heard what you and Pansy said a few weekes ago..it took us ages but finially we all figured it out"
At this Harry and Ron finally stopped right behind Her, they both looked at him. "Figured out what? There's nothing to figure out!" He cried turning around to walk away. He didn't know who but someone shuffled forward and grabbed his arm. "Hey mate, listen to her" Great Weasel! He thought yanking his arm away from him and turned around again. He grinded his teeth together. "We know what Pansy is doing to you, you dont have to listen to her. I can take care of myself"
Draco closed his eyes and breathed, "I dont know where you've been getting your information from, but its not true. Now leave me alone!" He opened his eyes and turned to go. "Malfoy, Wait!" He heard Harry call. He whipped out his wand and span around. "If anyone else tries to stop me from leaving i will hex them" He spat at them, striding away. He could feel there eyes on the back of his head.
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Hermione sighed, they had try'd. But she wouldn't give up. They were sitting in the Gryffindor common room. The fire blazed infront of them. Harry and Ron sat either side of her, both looking at her with concern on their faces. "Look 'Mione we tried. He just doesnt like you anymore" Ron said for the uptenth time that night. I was the night before they all left to go home. Their exams done, their bags packed. The feast had ended hours before, leaving them th only students still awake. Harry yawned. "Hermione, Just leave it, He's not worth your tears" She looked at him, how had he known she'd been crying over him? "I talked to Lavender, she told me you
cry in your sleep" He told her quizzenly look. She stared back into the flames of the fire. Harry sighed, leaning don he peeked her cheek. "You coming man?" He asked Ron, heading towards the stairs to the dormintry. Ron looked at Hermione again. "Yeah" He said not taking his eyes off her. He too kissed her cheek and made his way after Harry. "Hermione get some sleep, you'll need it" Ron said from the stairs, before dissappearing.
She sighed, a few tears falling down her cheek, where her best friends had kissed her. She whipped them away, leaning her head on the side of the sofa, bringing her leags up so she was lieing down. She never took her eyes off the fire, it's warmth, it's colour. She too yawned, covering her mouth with her hand. She closed her eyes, to rest them before making her way to her dormintory. The last them she remembered thinking was that she'd talk to Draco tomorrow, no question's asked!
............................................... "Hermione, Wake up. The trains leaving soon" She heard someone say, proding her awake. The voice sounded far away. The proding came again, this time harder. She opened her eyes to see Ron leaning over her. They were in the common room, students filing out with luggage. She sat up, streaching. "What time is it?" She asked tiredly, "Almost ten, Hermione why didnt you go sleep in your bed?" Harry asked. She hadn't seen him before he had spoke up
She stood up, looking around. She could see Harry, and Ron's luggage behind them, she also saw her own luggage. She looked at Ron cunfused. "I asked Lavender to bring it down for you" He told her, going sligthly red. She smiled, "Thanks Ron" Grabbing her luggage she made her way towards the
porthole. "Are you both going to stay here all summer?" She asked without looking around, smiling. She felt hungry, she had missed breakfast, but glad she had some snacks in luggage.
Twenty mintues later she stood on the platform, her luggage already on the train. Harry and Ron were both sitting on the train already. She looked around for him again before sighing. She wasnt going to see him. "Hermione" She heard him say quitely behind her. She whipped around and hugged him, he pulled her close. "I love you" He whispered in her ear.
Pulling back she looked him in the eye, "Why did you pretend? You knew that i was right" Draco was silent for a moment "Because i couldn't bare to see you hurt" "Who would hurt me? I can fend for myself" He said nothing but stared at the ground. "Draco please"
He looked her in the eye, "She was right, it would never work" "Who? Tell me!" She cried "Us, Hermione, it would never happen. Pansy was right. I Love You Hermione. But us..." He cried back. His eyes swarming with tears. "Draco please, dont" Hermione whispered, pulling him close. He hugged her for a moment before pulling away. "Im sorry" He simply said, kissing her once on the forehead and pulled away. With one last looked he turned and made his way towards the train, not looking back. Hermione followed him with her eyes. "I Love you too" She whispered after him, Tears streaming down her face. {THE END}
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Sorry guys, i had to end the story due to exams, but i couldnt bare leaving it not finished...so.. i finished it. Im not sure about this chapter though. Hope its alright. ;/
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05-17-2010, 12:47 AM
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#132 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black Okay.. I have a tear in my eye... NUUUUU! Waaaaa it's such a happy/sad ending (don't ask how I worked that out) But.. I LOVE IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH! AND YOU! Wonderful story, I'm sad it's over. I'm sad for Hermione. I'm sad for Draco. And I'm sad for ME! (I have some ego problems lol) It was such an enjoyable read! Something I would most likely reread because it's so. So. NICE! You did awesome Evangeline, don't let anyone tell you other wise (unless it's better of course!) |
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05-17-2010, 09:37 PM
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#133 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
Posts: 2,232
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Awhhh tht was sad the story was great i enjoyed reading it
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05-18-2010, 05:00 AM
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| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
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Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
aw...it was a real good story...so dont worry...really really liked your post...and all the best with your exams too...i have mine too starting next week!
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05-18-2010, 08:44 PM
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#135 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy Okay.. I have a tear in my eye... NUUUUU! Waaaaa it's such a happy/sad ending (don't ask how I worked that out) But.. I LOVE IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH! AND YOU! Wonderful story, I'm sad it's over. I'm sad for Hermione. I'm sad for Draco. And I'm sad for ME! (I have some ego problems lol) It was such an enjoyable read! Something I would most likely reread because it's so. So. NICE! You did awesome Evangeline, don't let anyone tell you other wise (unless it's better of course!) Aww i didnt mean to make you cry!  Butt im thankful you like it 
I might be doing another story in the summer, after exams...just a thought!
Awwww thanks  im sad for everyone too, but now you can kill Pansy  Anddd its really nice to hear you would want to re-read, haha i dont mind what people say about my writing, it makes me happy to do it. All the matters to be honest. Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) Awhhh tht was sad the story was great i enjoyed reading it  Thank You for reading Quote:
Originally Posted by harita aw...it was a real good story...so dont worry...really really liked your post...and all the best with your exams too...i have mine too starting next week! Thank You for reading  Andd thanks, ive had like 3/4 now already?? Had a 2 hour one today *gasp* I hope yours go well too, lots of revision
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06-17-2010, 11:08 AM
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| Bugbear
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Down Under
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cody Liam Evans Seventh Year | HP, Harry & Ginny ♥ | Music Girl ♫ | | BW, JB, CS, 1D, Glee, AVPM/S Lover | Pray &
Brilliant Eviee!
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06-17-2010, 11:10 AM
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#137 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by bonnieginnyfan1 Brilliant Eviee!  You read it all?
Gave me a shock when it came up in my User CP
Thanks Huni,
Your the best for reading!
Now...lets start the next one
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06-17-2010, 11:15 AM
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#138 (permalink)
| Bugbear
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Down Under
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cody Liam Evans Seventh Year | HP, Harry & Ginny ♥ | Music Girl ♫ | | BW, JB, CS, 1D, Glee, AVPM/S Lover | Pray & Quote:
Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 You read it all?
Gave me a shock when it came up in my User CP
Thanks Huni,
Your the best for reading!
Now...lets start the next one  Yes I did. I'm a fast reader.
Can't wait!
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06-17-2010, 11:17 AM
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#139 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by bonnieginnyfan1 Yes I did. I'm a fast reader.
Can't wait!  How long did it take you? LOL! im a fast reader too!
Me either!
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04-07-2011, 03:04 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Please Delete.
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