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Okay... *waits half patiently till Sunday*

I told myself I wasn't going to read any Dramione FF's, but oops, I did. Great chapters! Looking forward to more!

Lol. Got you sucked in didn't, Veggie_Potter? Don't blame you... it's a really good story. This is actually my first time reading a Draco and Hermione fanfic. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

*Waiting patiently for next chapter*

Ive read quite a few of draco/hermione fan fic's, they were really well written it made me want to write my on version. I dont think im as good as a writter as them though. Lol

Im glad soo many people are reading this, and i hope evry much the next chapter will entertain my readers(think ive lost some already!)
Thanks, and if its your first id recommend reading some more Draco/Hermione fanfic's they can be really fun to read!! and next chapter soon

*grabs pen and paper, to start writing chapter 3*

It did. Funnily enough, I was arguing with a friend on Facebook about how Draco and Hermione would never happen, blah blah blah... And then I read this, and shamefully went back on Facebook to tell her what I had done. :headsmack: Buts its great! Its always interesting to read other ships, even if you don't agree with it.

I was always trying to avoid Dramoine fanfics, but I like yours so I am going to read it. And don't put yourself down! So far, so good, so don't say you're a bad writer, because you aren't

That's funny. You had to take back what you said about how a Draco and Hermoine relationship wound never happen. In reality, you're right.

I must say that Draco/Hermione fanfics only really work if there written just write, and well. Not being rude to anyone. And thanks. I shall hopefully post chapter 3 tomorrow. And im going to try and make it long, all my chapters seem to all be really short...annoying.
Lol
And your a great writer also, i love your story!

Firstly i'd like to say...Yes i know it's a double post..But i just wanted to tell you guys this:

Well im sorry...as you all know im trying to write a Longg Post for you guys...so its naturally taking longer....

And my laptop went weird yeaterday...so i shall write a bit veryday and get it to you guys very soon....No matter what im doing this week!!!

thanks guys
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Awww.. okie! Can hardly wait.. But I will *forces self to wait* lol... It's gonna be great when it comes! Good work is worth the wait

Well Im glad someone is still reading
True reader!!!

Your writing is great, Evangeline. Can't wait for the rest. Keep up the good work.

oooh Cant wait for the new post D exited to read it !!!!!!!

Thanks Guys....I was going to post part one of chapter 3 now, but my words gone weird...which means im going to have to write it all out again! Sorry, ill try and write some tonight and post it!

EDIT: here Part one

CHAPTER 3, PART ONE!!

Hermione stepped through the wall leading to Platform 3 1/4, pushing her trolley as she went. Her cat, Crookshanks hissed, he didnt like being shut in.

"I'll let you out when we get one the train" She simple told him, looknig into his cage, and his angry eyes. She sighed and began walking down the platform. Looking for her two best friends, Harry and Ron.

She couldn't see them anyway, 'Maybe they haven't arrived yet' She told herself as she looked around again, her eyes peeled. Her eyes caught something, she wanted to ignore it but she couldn't. Her eyes seemed to force her to watch as Draco appeared on the platform, his mother not far behind him. Her eyes bored into his head as he walked away from the wall, she couldn't help it. Ever since she had bumped into him, by accident of course, she just couldn't get there conversation out of her head. She'd tried loads of different techniques, but none worked.

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*Memory*

"Malfoy what are you doing here?" Hermione asked him, her anger wrapping round her words. He looked taken back. She didn't know why, he was always used to them being mean to each other.
He had taken a deep breath, waiting, looking, till he finally answered,
"Why do you care? I can come down here" His tone back to what she was used to. She shook her head, she chould have sworn that his tone had been friendly. No, he's never nice to me, he hates me. she told herself. She was confused, and to stop it showing on her face, she glared at him
"I dont. But why aren't you with your precious family? There Death Eaters aren't they. I bet you father is loving being is Azaban" She said out of sprit, knowing it would anger him. She could tell that he wanted to hit her, to bring up his parents, expecally his father, was like slapping him in the face, like she did in her third year, but ten times worse.
"How dare you bring up my family" He almose spat at her, she jumped back in friend. She could see the anger, the hatred in his eyes. She knew he was going to be angry, but not this angry! She actually felt frightened of him. Draco seemed to see it in her face, beacuse he took a deep breath and looked at her.
"Im sorry Hermione. Just dont bring up my family again" He said moving his hand to place it on her shoulder. She moved back, not wanting to touch him. He dropped it, looking at his feet, "I said i was sorry, what more do you want?"
"You to leave me alone" She shot back, glaring at him again. He mumbled somthing in return, she didn't catch it.
"What was that?" She asked, making her ears listen with all her might
"I cant" He simple said, looking at her once, before turning and walking away. Hermione stared after him, puzzlement on her face. What had happened? She stood, rooted to the spot, for a few minutes more before shaking her head to clear her thoughts. She walked away also.

*End of memory*

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Draco turned, feeling her eyes on him. Hermione looked at him, he looked at her. It seemed to last a lifetime, before he gave her a simple nod of the head and looked away.She sighed and continued to looked for her friends.......


More soon...when i write it!!!

wooohooo that chapter was great PAMS PAMS PAMS !!!!!!

nice post...pams....

No, he's never nice to me, he hates me

This is fab as he might not actually hate her.
It implies amazing pictures in your head that can be hard to digest.

By the way I am new and this is the first one I have read. I love it. PAMS!PAMS!

hahaha... Hermione is over reacting.. HOW DARE SHE SPEAK OF LUCIUS! Meanie! Especially speak of him to Draco lol

PAMS! I love it! Poor Draco!

Love it, too! Seriously, what is wrong with Hermione? Definitely wrong of her and rude to bring up Draco's father like that.... not the best father in the world, but jeez. Lucius isn't Voldemort. Poor Draco Malfoy.

Thank you guys...I shall post the second part soon...i hope
But im really glad you like it!

Lol...im glad you really like it
Yeahhh i loved that line also, and ohhh cool...pictures!!!
Hey Welcome btw, and i hope you like the rest of the story
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And you can call me Eviee

Well she does hate him, she's not really going to be nice to him, but yeahhh meanieee
Shall post more soon...


Thanks...i didnt think may would...
Yep Poor Draco...i just wrote down what came to my head....the characters have there own personalities!!! lol

I really glad you liked it..i shall post more soon i hope
Yeahhh very rude i think....mehhh but people can be unexpected
I agree no the best father, and yep not Voldemort....shes a meanieee
Poor Draco
I just wrote what came to my head!

Lol you guys are probably wondering....but this story actually sets in the characters sixth year...just so you know and dont get confused when i use bits from the books
Shall post part 2 of chapter 3 VERY soonn
xxx
Thanks again guys!!!

I love it!!! How dare 'Mione say anything bout Lucius!!!! Bad 'Mione!!!! i only have one thing to suggest: put spaces in between different parts of the coversations like this.....

Hermione looked away as quickly as she could, but he walked up anyway.

"Well, Granger, where's Potty and Weaslebee?" Draco asked with a smirk.

"Well, obviously they're not here!"

Draco looked shocked.

it makes it easier to read........

That's all I have to say!!!!!!!!! Either way though.... I love it!!!!!!!! I <3 DRAMIONES!!!!!!!!!!! They are like THE only thing I'll read!!!!!!!

PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey...thanks for reading!
Glad you liked it, shall post part 2 soon.
About the spaces....i like the suggestion....i'll do that next time....if i remember...
You gave me a great idea!!! You dont mind if i use what you wrote above do you???
Post more soon
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no problem! i don't mind at all! that just popped into my head so i decided to use it as an example!

Ok guys...Next Post tomorrow (Chapter 3, Part 2)
I hope its a long one so you all not bored
Lol
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YAAAYAYAYAYAY! Can't wait till tomorrow