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08-04-2006, 04:28 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| thaaaank youuu. im so X-cited about this post soo HERE YA GO!: Chapter 10: I'm Tryna - Omarion* Tell me that didn't just happen...There's absolutley NO effin way that just happened. It wasn't......no. I must be daydreaming. Yeah.... "Ouch!" I said aloud when I pinched myself on the arm. Funny...It's not supposed to hurt when you're dreaming.. Oh snap out of it, Draco. You saw it with your own eyes and there's no way that you could ever imagine it in your own mind. Well I know what to do. Of course I know what to do. It's what I do best, right? Spying and eavesdropping. "I'm going to go to the Library with Seamus, as you probably already know," she looked up from clasping her bracelet, and eyed me. I saw she was struggling was the clasp. It was that night in our Head Dorm Common Room. I smirked as I saw her have trouble with the bracelet. "You need help?" She stuck out his wrist and handed me the bracelet. I easily clasped it together in a swift motion. She looked up at me and I looked back. We stood there for awhile. "Okay. Thanks. Well. I..I have to go..Erm, he's probably waiting..So.Um.See you later??" She smiled and pushed open the Portrait Hole. I waited five minutes and then I quickly stepped out and followed her. I took a book out of a bookcase to see them with ease. The pair was sitting at a table talking quietly. Damn, now if I could only hear them..Whatever he just said, she laughed. Hmm...I wonder..I was never good with charms, but I guess I could start practicing now..."Amplifia!"** I whispered at them. Whoa. It actually worked. Sometimes, I surprise myself at how utterly talented I turn out to be..I smirked and then tuned them in. "So, what made you decide to ask me out?" She asked him, clearly curious for an answer. "What would not be a reason?" Seamus raised an eyebrow. She blushed a bit. How very nauseating. But apart of me wanted to punch Finnigan's face in. "Ha, you're sweet. I still don't know why boys have taken any interest me all of the sudden. I don't find myself very attractive..I'm too smart, and like they say, 'a know-it-all.' I have a fast-temper, and - I'm rumbling a bit, aren't I?" Seamus laughed. "A bit?" He had a smart grin on his face. I know that smile...All guys smile like that when they want to go a bit further then talking... "Sorry..I tend to do that when I'm -" She looked up from her hands. "Nervous?" He finished of her. Oh just shut up Finnigan! She just looked at him. And he just looked at her. "Yeah..kind of," she whispered. "You know, you shouldn't be unsure why guys are starting to fancy you.." They were leaning in to each other. Oh Merlin, please don't. "Why's that?" "You're perfect.." And to my absolute horror, he kissed her. Big deal. Wait..not a big deal. It's a TREMENDOUS big deal. I paced out of there. Madame Pince yelled at me because I threw the book to the floor. I have to prove I am worthy of her. Somehow.. I'm tryna act like I don't wanna be with youu. Like I would be okay, if you just walked away. I'm tryna act like I don't wanna see youu. Like I would be okay if you just went away. * i lovvve Omarion. i went to one of his concerts. he is SO adorable * clings* **i made this spell up. i dont remember or didnt research any spell that JKR used to make noises louder. so this spell is all my own. if that is actually a spell, i apologize and didn't know..so yeah. ~Danielle |
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08-04-2006, 04:51 AM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| YAY, A POST! And it was awesome. I have never EVER heard a song by Omarion. Shocking, I know. I've actually never even heard his voice. Is he good?? If he's like Usher (you know, like singing about love and all that same stuff) then... ew. I don't like Seamus, he's too weird. PAMS!!
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08-04-2006, 05:42 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| Amie- thanks! *gasps* you have NEVER heard a song by Omarion! i absolutley luff him. well yeah he does sing about girls and stuff (but honestly, the only music without it is the scary-type hard rockish emoish music i hate who sings about killing themseleves *runs away*) try to (if u can) listen to his music. he went single about 2 years ago, leaving his group B2K...if you recall their major hit "Bump, Bump, Bump"...a GREAT song.. his latest is called 'Entourage' i loove that song! he's a great dancer too....well, not to go off of topic...thanks!! ~Danielle
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08-04-2006, 06:01 AM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In A Book....;)
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teehee is Draco a bit jelouse eh?
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08-04-2006, 07:07 AM
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| Guest |
Wow! that waz awesome! post more plz!
~ Sarah
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08-04-2006, 12:35 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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Ah, give it up, Seamus. He's too cheesy. But Draco restrained himself quite well from "punching Finnigan's face in."
That was sooooooooooooo awesome! I looooooovvvvvveeeeeeeddddddd it!
Pams!
Adrienne
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08-04-2006, 04:15 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Atlantis...that's right, I found it!
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Honestly i didnt see that coming, i thought for sure he would make some move and hermione would be all like "no! you perv" but guess not lol. Still amazing post!! Keep it up! I loved Dracos thoughts
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08-06-2006, 05:09 PM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Aug 2005
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Yeah, I guess Draco can be a gentelman when he wants to...helping Hermione put her braclet on, not punching Seamus, waiting to make a move, that sort of thing. They both need to stop making the other person jealous and just get together already! PAMS! Can't wait to see Hermione's reaction to Seamus kissing her...
~Shannon
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08-07-2006, 03:31 AM
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| Imp
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Atlantis...that's right, I found it!
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i second that motion!!
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08-09-2006, 12:43 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| heyyy im back! didnt get a chance to post this last weekend cuz i was busy..friday i was with my friends watching boys play football *swoon*...saturday i was @ a swim party for one of my guy friends..SO fun..and sunday i was in classes. yesterday i was trying to do lots of my summaries for my book report. 1 week and 6 days til schooL! woo! im really excited for school! haha i must be totally strange then, but w/e..! well here's your post!!!: Chapter 11: Impossible - Kanye West Seamus's kiss was really good. I liked it. But in the back of my mind I wondered what Malfoy's must be like. Secretly, of course. And when I got back to our Drom, he was there...doing homework. I stuck around to see if he wanted to talk, and he didn't apparently. But whatever.. We didn't talk at all the whole next week, either. You'd think living together would kinda force that kind of thing..but no. It's been kind of bumming me out, actually. Since I was suffering, I decided to see what was up. "Malfoy?" I called while watching him walk out of the portrait hole. He hesitated, turned around, and walked back in. "Hmm?" "Are you okay? You seem not yourself.." To be honest his eyes looked greyer then usual and revealed jealousy and curiousity. Maybe I was wrong.. "There's....no reason I shouldn't be..right? I mean, what gave you the idea that I wasn't being myself?" He wanted to know. He started making his way toward me. "Well you haven't been as arrogant or insulting or nosy for one.." I found myself backing away as he continued to walk towards me. "You wouldn't know that since you don't seem to spend every day and all day with me, am I not right? Well anyway...how's Finnigan?" "Why do you need to know? But he's fine nonetheless..I could ask you the same about Serena.." I practically spit at that name. My back hit the cold wall. "Serena? Ha. I wouldn't know," his warm breath hit my face. Chills ran down my spine as his fingers stroked my thigh. And so he did what I was waiting for since his face was about centimeters from mine. He kissed me. And it was incredible. As it should be. As I predicted it was. Some how, without even thinking, my hands found their way to the back of his neck and I was bringing him closer to my body then possible. His fingers traced the outline of my body and just when I thought things were going to get hot, he pulled away. "This shouldn't work.." And he left.. I've been waitin my all my life and I stayed on my grind and I've made up my mind I've spent way too much time that's why it's impossible. (It's just impossible) |
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08-09-2006, 03:04 AM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| He kissed her But he pulled away PAMS!!
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08-09-2006, 05:21 AM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: somewhere in the USA
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wow i love your story espcially how every song fits perfectly and that u get to know what they are both thinking! and i like that action goingg on.....lol. but anyways i love hip/hop and r&b songs too so that even makes it better! keep posting! PAMS!
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08-09-2006, 08:58 PM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: May 2004
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Thanks for clarifying about the common room thing. It's kind of sad though, that they're just using people to get back at each other... and then cheat on them with each other. Nonetheless, great drama factor.
PAMS!
P.S.- Thanks for liking my siggy!
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08-11-2006, 08:09 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: u.s.a.
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Yay! They finally kissed, but they really need to just get on with it already and get together!
~Toni
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08-12-2006, 03:27 AM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Aug 2005
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Ok, so you're looking forward to school and you like writing cliffhangers, anything else? (Don't worry, you're not weird, i'm looking forward to school too) Anyway, THEY KISSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally!!!!!!! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *chants, must have more, must have more!* ~Shannon
P.S.- the lyrics craked me up, they're my favorite so far, they tie into the story so good!
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08-12-2006, 07:29 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| hello everyone im back! thank you for your motivating comments. *hehe* i love you guys!! i have a busy weekend for me so thankfully i have found the time to post!! so here ya go: Chapter 12: Obsession - Frankie J f/ Babybash Kissing her must've been the worst thing I've ever done and/or could do. I, apparently, am ill in the head because I can't walk straight for my life. Fine, I'll just admit it to myself because it's not doing me any good to just lie. Even though I've lied all my life so why can't I do it now? Okay. It was a completley mind-blowing kiss. I really do hate that I like her so much. No. Maybe I should just ignore her the rest of my life. Ignore that Mu- that Mud- that Mmmuu- FOR THE LOVE OF MERLIN!! WHY can't I even THINK of that name for her!!?? My best INSULT for her is not even being comprehended in my mind. I am insane. Lock me up in a madhouse and keep me there. I'm absolutley not the person I was a WEEK ago. Who changed me? I want Draco Malfoy BACK! I went down to dinner, because apart from being mad, I was hungry. But in my head, she was still there. It's like, bloody crazy because I've never, never let any girl get to me this bad. And insanely enough, I want more of her. I've lost my head. I sat down at the Slytherin table. And God forbid Serena was sitting right across from me. Just what I need... "Hey Draco," she purred. Then Serena leaned over and started kissing my jaw. Ohh Merlin..I pushed her off of me. "Wha-?" She was clearly confused. I was never one to turn down a good snog..Unless it was Pansy I was kissing. "Just..no," I said. I looked around me..at all the food. I suddenly wasn't very hungry anymore. I got up and walked out into the entrance hall. And to my luck, Hermione walked off of the stairs. She hurried toward me, grabbed my hand, and walked me around the corner. She pushed me against the wall. "Ow..." I rubbed the back of my head, smirking yet in pain, wondering where this was going. "Oh you are so full of it. Wipe that smirk OFF your face. Now. IF you won't mind telling me, please, WHAT in the world was that kiss about?" Hermione asked in a harsh whisper. I was still smirking. "It was a kiss! What more do you want? I mean, don't tell me you've never kissed anyone? I did think that Krum bloke would have done something....He did seem the type." She slapped me on the arm. "DON'T switch the subject on me. Viktor might have done something with me, mind your asking..So WHY did you kiss me!!!" "Well...because I wanted to. Isn't that why people snog? Because they feel like it?" I asked smartly. "Oooh. I get it. So basically you just go off kissing whoever you want and whenever you want!!!???" She slapped me again on the arm. "God, it's not like that! Well..at least not whoever....I would NOT kiss Eloise Midgen...I mean, what kind of person would I appear to be kissing her?" I saw a small smile appear on her face, but she slapped me on the arm again. "Will you stop?!" I was half laughing. But it did hurt!! "So will you tell me why? Please? Because the other answers you gave me were NOT satisfactory.." She looked into my eyes. "Maybe I'm attracted to you." I slid my arms around her waist. "But to you I'm a 'Mudblood,'" she imitated. Then she tried to break free out of my embrace bit I didn't let her get away. "Yes but you're different then what I had thought..." I said softly. "Didn't your dear, old mummy ever teach you to never judge a book by it's cover?" she asked me harshly and slapped me AGAIN on the arm. I love it when she's so fierce. Such a turn-on. I smirked again. "No..but she did teach me to fight for what I want." "And...what is it you want?" I felt her muscles relax in my arms. "You.." And to my surprise, SHE kissed ME. It wasn't the romantic, crazily, obsessive kind of kisses that I hate. It was the kind I expected out of myself. I don't care if you got a man. Baby I wish you'd understand.'Cause O know he can't love you right, quite like I can. 5 o'clock in the mornin and I just can't sleep..thinkin 'bout your beauty it makes me weep. I'm feelin helpless at home.. |
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08-12-2006, 09:12 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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OH MY GOSH, THAT WAS THE BBBBBBBEEEEEEESSSSSSSST POST EEEEEVER!!!! I loved it sooooo much! I loved how Hermione confronted him. That was awesome!
Love love love
Adrienne
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08-12-2006, 11:47 PM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: May 2004
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lovely.
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08-13-2006, 03:22 AM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| Woot woot, go Hermy! Yeah! rotfl, Eloise Midgen. PAMS!!
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08-13-2006, 04:13 AM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: somewhere in the USA
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LOVE IT love it love it!PAMS!
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08-14-2006, 03:35 AM
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| Guest |
LOVE IT! post more soon please!!!
~ Sarah
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08-15-2006, 07:28 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| weeeeeeee. its tuesday!!! less then a week til school. now im sort of dreading it. i change my mind a lot..OH WeLL! thanks guys for your comments...here is the next chapter!: Chapter 13: Life Has Moments - Aly & Aj I surprise myself. I truly do. Like sometimes in class, my hand will be up and the question will be answered (correct!) before I even know what I am doing. That's kind of how I kissed Draco. I did it before I even know what I was doing. And I don't know what made me do it either...It's like I thought nothing of the person I want to appear as...And that person does not just start kissing people without a second thought to it. And when I went to bed that night, I couldn't help thinking if I was in my same body. Like I seriously jumped out and ran to look in the mirror. Thankfully I was in my own body, but you never know! The past week we didn't really...interact. Well he did stare me down and wink at me if we made eye contact. But we never really talked or, as I hate to say it, kissed. Since we haven't talked in a week, a new theory had popped in my head. What if he had moved on to another girl? Oh Merlin now I'm panicking. As I sat down at my seat in Potions, I looked over at Draco. He didn't look like he was interested in another girl. He was talking to the two idiots Crabbe and Goyle. Relax, Hermione. He's not after another girl. I kept telling myself that over and over as Snape was talking and giving instructions. When it was time to prepare the potion, I noticed there was a piece of parchment in my cauldron. I made sure Ron or Harry wasn't watching me and then I read it: Dearest Hermione, Since it seems you have been busy enough to avoid me, (with that, I gasped, offended. I was not AVOIDING him. He was looking over at me, and I stuck my tongue out at him) I thought it would be right to have a little outing tonight. How about 11 at the lake? Don't be the stuck up person you can be and not come because of your "Head duties" or the stupid "rules" this school abides by. Meet me then. Draco Oh. Well. Fine. He knows me too well. I guess I'll go then. Oh please..I want to go. I gave a small smile at Draco to let him know I was agreeing with his little idea. Now I just have to get through these classes. After making sure I looked good enough for Draco, I snuck out. I thought I was doing good because I made it to the entrance hall steps without getting caught. Right up until Zacharias Smith caught me walking down. Before he could tell me off, I hexed him. I fixed myself as I walked quickly down to the lake. I saw Draco there skipping rocks. "I was starting to wonder if you were going to bail out on me," he said without turning around. I wasn't even making much noise walking down here. I jumped when he spoke. "I-I had to hex Smith before coming out here," I said as casually as I could. "Now that doesn't sound like you. Must've wanted to see me that bad then?" He smirked as he walked towards me. "You didn't bother to talk to me either." "But honestly, what was there to say? And anyways, I've been preoccupied about how to get you to kiss me next." He leaned in to kiss me, but I held his face in my hand. "Wait..How come we can't just talk? I'd rather talk to you first..If you don't mind," I said. Now that sounds like me. He looked a little disappointed but he smiled. "Okay. Talking first." We both sat down against a tree. "So.." he said. "Can I ask you something?" I asked. There were a few things I wanted to know about him. "Anything," he murmured. "What are you truly afraid of? Because you never act scared or nervous or afraid...." That does bother me sometimes. That Draco never really shows his emotions. "I feel that if I show that I'm scared or whatever, I'll appear weak. But what I'm truly afraid of is.......probably my father. I never know what to expect out of him.." I watched him gaze into nothing. He was apparently in thought. With what he said, I felt way more compassion for him. I wish I had years earlier. "I'm sorry..." "No. Don't be. My father never knew how to be one. He was too preoccupied with...other people and it just got in the way of things. I know I'll never experience what it's like to actually live in a stable home, but I am happy with how I turned out. I want to be anything but him," he said confidently. "Good...So anyways. Do you like me? Or am I just someone you want to snog with. Like Serena.." That question was nagging at the back of my head. "Like Serena..Ha, that's funny." "Draco! Answer me.." I moved to face him. "Yes I do fancy you, Hermione. I would like to snog you now though," He smirked. I smiled and gave him a tempting kiss. "Satisfied?" "Er...yeahhh." He breathed. "Hey, you wanna do something?" He suddenly asked me. I raised my eyebrows. What is he up to? "You want to go swimming?" He asked me. "But we don't have bathing suits.." "So?" He smirked. Oh Merlin. Life has moments it's hard to describe feelin great. Livin the life, never comin down from this. Now that we're on (now that we're on) Feel it in the air, kinda crazy over here. Life is amazin with you on the ride |
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08-15-2006, 07:32 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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Hey hey hey! I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee that song, and I love how Hermione made him talk to her first. And I love how he was scared of his Dad. I love it all!!!
Love
Adrienne
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08-15-2006, 08:04 PM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: somewhere in the USA
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^^^^^ she basically said it all. lol PAMS!
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08-18-2006, 04:17 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Atlantis...that's right, I found it!
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hee hee i love it!! its amazing please post more asap!
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