so i just read your poem.....(as soon as u gave me that hint)...and i m totally in luv with these.....the h/g one.....the r/hr one....the tonks and lupin one....they're just superb....i love it....
i heart u......

aawww... thanks for dropping by Raazia!! I always appreciate new readers... thank you thank you! i'm still contemplating on what ship i do next... i was thinking James/Lily, maybe Draco/Pansy, maybe Hermione/Viktor just to mix it up hehe... i'm a R/Hr all the way, but i do wonder about Hermy/Vikky....

by the way, my new poetry collection has moved... the new site can be found here. So yeah... i'll see what i can do about the next poem..

OMG! wow!!! "ang ganda! as in!"(so beautiful! as in!) wow! really! wow! gosh...so touching...and wow! touching! i love it!! wwaaaaahhhh!! making me wanna cry now!!! life's really like that...sometimes you can't help shouting out the real feelings inside...in the outside people may see that you're just "dead-ma" to what happened but deep inside you you're really really hurt or you're STILL really really in love with someone...trust me people...i've experienced it...*thumps chest* and Ate Lai, thanks for the testimonial....

Wow I love the onoe of Ron and Hermiony!! Thats wkd!! You are so good!! Keep up the great work!!

aaww.. thanks steps!! there's a Harry/Ginny one too (previous page) if u're a H/G shipper...

Hey all!! I'd like to stray away from my HP poems - just this once. I know it's been almost a month since my last poem, but I've been... emotionless, I guess, lately so I've had no inspiration to write. But here's an update...

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Nothing

In my heart I feel nothing
I feel empty deep inside.
Gone were the days we were happy
The love between us has died.

I thought about our years together
Even then, my eyes stayed dry.
I sat as I stared out the window
My eyes just didn't want to cry.

For so long, I've been guessing..
Were you still in love? I didn't know.
I've tried and tried to make things better
But you didn't let your feelings show.

I tried everything to make it work
But you were a fool to believe
That I would stay despite your apathy
That I would be here and never leave.

I must admit I wasn't shocked nor shaken
When you said your love for me has gone.
I guess I've known it all this time
You expected a reaction, but I gave none.

I still feel empty, still nothing
Even as I watched you walk out the door.
You had feelings for me once, you said,
But you're just not in love me anymore.

You said you're working on bringing it back
Because you don't want to lose me
I said love is not forced, it is not a task
So just let it happen, just let it be.

Should our paths cross again in the future
And we find ourselves in love once again
Then we'll know we're destined to be together
But, for now, this stupid game needs to end...

AW....AWESOME AS ALWAYS!
Ihave to head out, but I'll edit what I want to say about this poem when I come back in tonight! Luff ya! *HUggles and hails and flees*
~~RQT

:bump: Wow.... I haven't written anything in.. forever! It's been like 4 weeks since my last one, so I thought I'd write another. This time, HP related. I guess you can kinda figure out who it's about....

You Don't Belong To Me

I'm the youngest to play Pro Quidditch
But my heart was stolen by a young witch.
She is great, she is smart, and very sweet
I waited for the day we'd officially meet.

See, I was invited for an event at her school
I accepted thinking, this event I'd rule
I walked in there, all sure and proud
Then I noticed her in the crowd.

Although I was surrounded by many girls
I noticed her, with her books and her curls.
I was always hanging around the library
I know she'll bump into me eventually.

But I just couldn't wait any longer
So I decided to just go up to her.
I let out my feelings once and for all
I asked her to go with me to the ball.

She looked at me, somewhat hesitating
She wasn't sure because she was waiting.
She was waiting for another to ask her out
But it seemed she was still having doubts.

So finally she agreed to go with me
At the Yule Ball, she walked in gracefully.
She was the most beautiful girl there
I couldn't have picked anyone better.

Yet I noticed she was still distracted
By someone whose hair glowed fiery red.
In her eyes, I saw her longing
For that someone she can't help loving.

The term ended, how I wished I could stay
I asked her to write me everyday.
She promised to keep in touch, an owl she would send
And she said she liked me, but only as a friend.

I wish things will turn out just fine.
I wish she will love me, and be mine.
But even if I use many potions and spells
I know she's in love with somebody else.

wow! that was so cool - ur really good at this!

New reader?!?!?! Wow thanks!!! I don't get much comments nowadays *pokes Tina* hehe so anything is very well appreciated!

The Nothing one was my favorite, it's extraordinary. You perfectly captured the heartbreak. Wonderful writer.

Another new reader!! thanks!! *takes a bow* did i really capture the heartbreak?? that's good then, because that's really how im feeling. my relationship of 7 years is ending, and that's how i feel. but i dont need sympathies and such. im fine, really.

That sucks... I'm sure you will be fine.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. I never knew Krum could be so romantic!
And Lai you don't need me posting my crazy comments to know your stuff rocks my world!!!!!!!!!!
I was just reading Taste berries for the Soul and they are no where near the things that you write! I mean don't get me wrong the poems were good but they didn't capture the reader and allow them to relate. They were experiences that were too personal. And even though your poems might be to you, I can relate to almost all of them with my own experiences.
I don't know how you must be feeling from the breakup but Love sucks when it ends.
:: Sniffs :: Then again, when you're in it it's as if you're blindfolded from the real truth.
ENough of my babbling, :: Hugs you and hails ::
Keep them coming...
Ooh, and btw I'm seen alot of other writers who are still doing "LOVE" poems...Hide one in between your hp ones if you can!
~~RQT

^Lai...that was great...and I hope you know what a great proponent for your poems yoou have in Tina..She's really working for folks to read your poems...which are great BTW. Go gamers!!

^ aawww.... is she really?? Tina's soooo sweet! *double glomps tina and lumus*

and yes, i did hide one of the heartbreak poems there... aahh im sneaky! you didn't even notice huh?? hehehe it's the "Nothing" one. That's about me, and that's the most recent non-HP... I'm sort of running out of 'ships. Most of the ones left are all 'happy' ships. I need heartbreak power!

i feel the same things Ate Lai!! as in! i can feel the *thumps chest* emotion there! i really love that one! when i read that, i could really site the time with this guy...I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!

yey!! i'm back here!! so good to be back here!!

whoa Eliza!! where have u been?? *hugs*

Thanks for reading again. Loyal ka talaga!! Welcome Back Eliza!!!!

I don't know when my next one will be, or what it'll be about. I was going to do Cedric/Cho, but Harmony (spell_caster18) beat me to it! Well, I'll write one anyway, and Harmony, it's going to sound a bit like yours, because like I said our poems sound alike...

lol...broadband connection last month was busted...and no time to go to the cafe..so, i have to wait for the technician so come...and he came the other day...

how about Fleur/and someone?? hehe...keep up the very great work Ate Lai!!

hugs!!

aahh... Fleur huh? I can work with that... any more suggestions?? Let's see, I have Cedric/Cho, Fleur/?... what about Lavender/Ron?? or Harry/Hermione... err.. no *hides from Sheila* I just can't get myself to do a Harry/Hermione one when it's SOOO obvious they're only just friends.

but thanks Eliza!!! I'm assuming being grounded has been lifted??

what about Fleur/Harry??? lol can't think anyone else for Fleur..it's fine with me for Lav/Ron..

lol, i'm still grounded..it's our semestral break...and going back to school tuesday...my mama actually leaving me with two choices, whether to abide or not as long as i am grounded.. i actually didn't get it...i have to make a choice right? and that choice is to abide! mwahaha...and by the way, Ate Lai, i got a high grade in english! yey!

Nice poems! Man, i cud never write anything like that!

I read, Lai, but don't comment usually. Sorry. I'll try to be better about that.

Filch and Pince?

Um, have you ever done one about James and Lily?

*glomps katie* awww thanks katie! so you haven't abandoned me!

There are so many of things I can write about, except I haven't been in a writing mood. I know, it's been, like, forever since my last one. Will try to post one soon though! Can't promise when, but I'll write another...

These are all great suggestions, and I'm not sure which one I'll do first... Thanks a bunch!!

Well, I'll be waiting as well! Pams when you can. And I agree with KATIE, A James/Lily one sounds perfect!
:worship:
Your Stalker,
~~RQT
:: SNiffs :: I'm a Niffler! But, not for long, PAMG is 100 over..