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| | Honeydukes Register (Finished Fanfiction) Here you will find all the completed works of fanfiction and poetry belonging to our talented SnitchSeeker authors. | 
12-30-2007, 09:26 AM
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|   I Snuggle Werewuffs!
Love PotioneerMoke
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I got this idea, as usual, out of the blue. Enjoy!
Her green eyes bore deeply into his, although they were partially hidden by his black hair and the shade of the Beech Tree.
"I am truly sorry." He said, softly, tilting his head a bit to the left as he saw her eyes flicker quickly from his. "I don't know, Severus." She said, hesitating before speaking his name.
"You've told me that... so many times... I just don't know anymore." Her hands slipped into his and a smile twitched on each of their faces. "Please," he implored, "Please Lil' ...trust me."
"I don't know if I can!" She started, "Every time I do... my heart ends up breaking, Severus, and..." She mouthed wordlessly for a moment and turned away.
He frowned a bit, "Lily...?" He stroked her red hair gently, and she eventually turned to him. "I love you." He said, simply. She smiled and a single, crystal-like tear dropped from her cheek.
"Kiss me." She said suddenly, and Severus merely blinked. "Kiss me, Severus... please."
He could feel his heart beating heavily in his chest, and was certain that if neither of them did anything, it would surely burst.
In an instant of thrill, they kissed. After a brief moment, Lily took his hands in hers and looked to him, "I love you too, Sev."
He smiled, "Why is it," he said softly, "that I can hear a 'but' coming?"
She smiled sadly, "But," his heart sank, "I'm not meant for you, Sev." He shook his head slightly in a moment of denial and absolute shock. "...I ..."
But he knew it was no use, he let his pale hands drop out of hers. The Black eyes became hollow and desperate, whilst the Green had a feeling of regret.
Lily's eyes filled with a few tears before she picked up her knapsack from under the tree and left Severus standing in the spring wind, watching his destiny trod off across the grass.
And that's all she wrote.
I do say, I didn't even know I could write like that... I'm not a romantic person.... :hmmm:
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Reason: Spelling...arg! >__<
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12-30-2007, 05:32 PM
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| | Lobalug
Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: DRESS REHERSAL!!!!!!
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Clementine Reynolds
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i loved it!... really sad though...
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12-30-2007, 05:34 PM
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| | Wrackspurt
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Toronto
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Madison Valentine
Fifth Year  x12  x9
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That was great! But sad. *sniffles* | |
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12-30-2007, 07:37 PM
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| I Snuggle Werewuffs!
Love Potioneer Moke
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Thankies! That story was the result of daydreaming at four in the morning!
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12-30-2007, 07:59 PM
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| | Mackled Malaclaw
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Maryland
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really good! Is this a one shot or will it coninue?
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12-30-2007, 08:05 PM
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| I Snuggle Werewuffs!
Love Potioneer Moke
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One-Shot. Although i'm starting to wish i'd continued it 
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12-30-2007, 08:07 PM
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| | Moke
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: New Orleaaanss!
Posts: 8,554
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Katelyn Quillio
Fifth Year | Aquila Pacis
hmm. I love SeVans ships...I LOVED ITT! *huggles you* it was SPLENDID!!
keep on writing!!
*Kate*
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12-30-2007, 08:13 PM
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| I Snuggle Werewuffs!
Love Potioneer Moke
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I can't it's a one-shot.  But i do have a simalar SevAns FF. *Finds le link* 
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12-31-2007, 05:52 PM
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| | Snidget
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Far away from you...
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Jake Chatich
First Year | FanFic Enthusiast
Aww! That was so sad. I am not usually sev/lilly shipper but I couldn't resist it! It was really sweet and romantic even if you say you're not. 
-*~ Shirel ~*-
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12-31-2007, 07:01 PM
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| I Snuggle Werewuffs!
Love Potioneer Moke
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I'm not a SevAns shipper either *blech!* But, that's the way the idea came to me...  *plots*
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01-01-2008, 07:13 PM
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| | Jobberknoll
Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A rainy, rainy place
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I read this yesterday but didn't have time to post, but I must say that was so good! I love seVans ships, and that was perfect! I loved it!
Love,
Lena xXx
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01-01-2008, 07:23 PM
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| | Moke
Join Date: Feb 2006
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Kaitlynn Hopsisk
Second Year | Hope is the only thing stronger than fear.
Thats so swet and romantic but yet so sad and i'm practically crying now.
Bravo
~*<3*~
Heather
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01-04-2008, 03:00 AM
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| | Red Cap
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: The periodically beautiful USA
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Nickelle Miffed
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Aww. =[ So cute.
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01-08-2008, 04:11 PM
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| Formerly: Nibs   Mackled Malaclaw
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Wonderland ☆
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Dominique De Aura ♥
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That was brilliant
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01-15-2008, 08:08 PM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Flying on my broom stick.
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That was such a good one shot loved it. | |
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02-06-2008, 01:52 AM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: In my mind
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Billy-Jean Bennet
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HEllo NEw REader Pretty Good Soo far
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02-06-2008, 02:01 AM
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| I Snuggle Werewuffs!
Love Potioneer Moke
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Thx, Thx, Thx! 
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02-06-2008, 02:10 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: In your head..
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Lillith (Lilly) Abrian Jason
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OMG!! That was absolutely amazing! I loved it! | |
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02-06-2008, 02:13 AM
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| I Snuggle Werewuffs!
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Mucho thankies. I do like this one... *Contemplates*
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Very nice Nanc! 
Romantic person or not, you could have fooled me 
