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Umbridge kept me locked in her office all day while she left me inside as she left several times to check on misbehaving students and she sealed the room so I couldn't get out. She took my wand so I didn't have chance to escape. It was the 3rd time she had left her office and I thought she wouldn't come back at all as I stop writing on the parchment about 1:30 PM.

I went over to her fireplace and I took some Floo Powder out the container as I thrown it into the fire quickly. I stick my head into the fireplace and say, "Grimmauld Place." My head felt like it was being suck into huge drain as my head appeared in the kitchen of Grimmauld Place.

I suddenly spot my father, Sirius Black at the table eating his lunch and then I suddenly say, "Sirius." It suddenly startles him to see my head sticking in his fireplace. He asks, "Isabella, what is wqrong?"

I reply very fast and quickly not knowing if Umbridge would come back or not, "Father, I am being kept locked up in Umbrdige's office. I also am keep having those nightmares every night. Plus I can't escape with my wand because Umbridge took with her. She also found that you are my father. Guess who brought me to Umbridge? Why she ask to bring me to her?"

Sirius says, "Who, Isabella?" I reply, "Draco Malfoy and she wanted me to rat Harry, Hermione, Ron and yourself, Sirius."

My father is atonished as I said this important announcement to him. My heart began to thump hard in my chest as I was thinking if I was going to get caught or not. Before my father, Sirius Black could answer me I was being pulled back into the Umbridge's office. I couldn't see who pulled me back, but I could see their fingers full of rings as she yelled at me from behind, "WHO ARE YOU COMMUNICATING WITH YOU LYING LITTLE BRAT? ANSWER ME!"

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Then I sudden recognize the voice behind me immediatelty as I turn around to see who was behind me. It was Professor Umbridge, who suddenly came back from where ever she was to see if I was still writing the lines she had assigned me and if I was still in her office as well. I am too terrified to answer her as my heart began tumping inside my chest.

It looked like I was going to be in more than I was already in as Umbridge says in her tirade, "If you don't tell me who you were communicating with Miss Black. I will be forced to do drastic measures on you." She uses my wand in her hand that she had pulled out her robes as she threatens me with it. SHe points my wand right where at my chest wa thumping from my heart beating. I am so very scared and then she continues her tirade, "You little filthy brat. You see you unable to defend yourself from what I about to do to you. You think that are right. Think again girl. I am in control and I am about do to you. So say good-bye to the wizarding world, Miss Black because it is the last you will see in the wizarding world." I see and hear her saying in loud clear voice as she points my wand at my heart, "Crucio."

I feel extreme pain from curse as I am forced to the floor of Umbridge's office trembling and thrashing about when the curse had hit me. My lip begins to bleed as the pain in my body had gotten worse. I can't feel anything except the pain. I am trying to fight the pain of Crutius Curse that was applied to me by Professor Umbridge.

Professor Umbridge begins to laugh at me as I am so much pain. I wished that I would just die from all the pain I am in. I kind of hope that Harry Potter would come to my rescue and come to my aid. The pain was intensifing in my body when Professor Umbridge says to me, "Miss Black, I giving you another to answer the question I asked."

I still don't answer her at all still being defiant. I continue to feel the pain rush throughout my body and I continued to fight the curse just as Professor Umbridge says to me in mean voice practically screaming at me, "Answer me girl. I want an answer to my question." So she decides that I am not going to answer her at all and then after 10 minutes interrogating me Professor Umbridge leaves again from her office. She just leaves on the floor of her office fighting for my life and fighting the Crutius Curse applied by her. The longer I am under the curse I am starting to insane losing all focus and reality. Very slowly crawl to the door and open it still serious pain just to get as far away from Umbridge's office. I began crawling on my hands and knees throught out the corridor and end up 2 corridors away from there.

As I reach the 5th floor corridor I collaspe on the stone floor from serve pain I am in. It was very lucky that I collasped right in front of Harry, Ron, and Hermione as they were heading to their next lesson. I manage to say to them as the pain increased and the insanity began to grow very weak from the curse, "Harry, Hermione, and Ron I was trapped in............................."

Cool story ineresting plot, I love it.

I will post more when I feel better. I am not feeling so well to post anymore of the fan-fiction right now.

Thanks to all that have comment and replied to this fan-fic.

Sorry I couldn't post anymore until today cause I was banned for accidently posting spoilers in a no spoiler policy here before DH came out.



Harry says to me as I lay on the stone floor in such pain, "Where were you trapped at Bella? I saw you getting dragged off by Draco Malfoy. I saw you mouthing, Help me, Harry."

I reply in such pain back to Harry, "I was trapped in that foul evil toad-face woman's office since you last saw me, Harry. I am so much pain from not answering her and I now I am going insane. I had to get out of her office and make my escape before she tortures me again." I wince from the pain I am in from the Crutius Curse applied to me.

Hermione looks at me and she says to me, "Bella, where you trapped in Umbridge's office?" I nod my head yes as I started to feel the effects of the pain getting so very severe in my entire body from head to toe.

Hermione turns to Ron and she says to him in hurried and rushed voice to him, "Ron, go and get Professor McGongall. Please go Ron because her life is at stake and please do hurry back here." Ron says back to Hermione, "Okay, Hermione." He runs off to find Professor McGongall.

Within ten minutes, Ron is back with Professor McGongall in tow. She asks Hermione and Harry as she saw me in pain, "What happened to Miss Black over there?" She sees me on the stone floor thrashing about in so much pain and I collaspe again on the floor still awake for the time being.

Hermione immediately reponds to Professor McGongall, "She has been tortured and locked up in Professor Umbridge's office because she just told us about being trapped and locked before you came, professor ." Professor McGongall looks at me ays to me, "Is this true, Miss Black?" I nod my head in reply.

Then Professor McGongall says, "Get this girl to the hospital wing immediately." I fall out of consciousness as I hear Professor McGongall conjure a stretcher for me and that is the last thing I can remember from that point as I was taken the hospital wing.

Chapter 17: Revenge amd the Truth


A week and half goes by before I could make a full recovery as I woke up in the hospital wing with Crutius Curse removed from my body. I don't remember anything prior to waking up in the hospital wing the entire time I was there. The only thing I do remember was bits and pieces of some horrid nightmare that has plagued me since the start of term in September so long ago.

Madame Pomfrey lets go after she had looked at me before I could do take my O.W.L.s. I feeling so very sick to the stomach not able to take most my O.W.L.s cause I didn't get to study for them since I was laid up in the hospital wing. I knew surely would fail all the O.W.L.s I was supposed to take no thanks to Professor Dolores Umbridge applying the Crutius curse onto me.

All I knew how much I dested Umbridge wish such passion when I entered the Great Hall as she had very smug look upon her face if she give a damn that put me through hell and back. She didn't want to admit that she applied that curse onto me cause it would ruin her image. The hate I felt towards Umbridge as I walked towards the Ravenclaw House table after I seen Professor Umbridge sitting there as she owned Hogwarts was at a boiling point as it radiated from me like an obession.

I had taken my seat beside Luna Lovegood unable to eat anything that was in front of me. Luna asks me after I had sat down beside her instead of my own friends in her usual airy tone that she uses to speak with, "A wrackspurt got you?"

I reply back to Luna, "Um, I really don't know what the heck you are talking about or any clue? Have you seen Harry, Ron, or Hermione lately, Luna cause I need to talk them?"

Luna looks back at me as she replies, "Not since DA had gotten busted by Umbridge's Inquisitorial Squad because of Marietta Edgecombe ratting us out to Umbridge. heard that she bore the word "SNEAK" on her face. She is Cho Chang's best friend." She points down the girl sitting beside Cho Chang with her face covered in in nasty purple postules spelling the word "SNEAK." trying to hide the hideous marks with make-up, but it didn't do any good. Marietta sat five or more spaces Luna and I sat, but across the table.

Then I looked towards where Luna had pointed. I look away cause Professor Umbridge looks at me.

Then I decided to leave the Ravenclaw House table because I couldn't stand to be in the same room with Umbridge, that evil, calculating, and old toad-face toad hag a moment longer. If I would have cursed Umbridge into oblivion like she deserved from the hate I was feeling towards her making me remember everything she has ever done to me almost immediately. I wanted Umbridge to feel the same serious pain and emotional scarring she had left me in that fateful day only a week and half ago. When she locked me in her office on hours on end as she applied the Crutius Curse onto me. I will never forget the look of satifaction she had upon her toad-like face after she had applied the illegal curse onto me as it had imprinted into my memory until my dying day. I wanted utter and sweet revenge on her.

I enter the entrance hall as I hear footsteps behind me. I didn't know if the footsteps were from friend or foe until the spoke my name, "Isbella?" I turn around to see who was behind me and I see Harry Potter behind me.

I reply back to Harry, "Yes, it is me, Harry. I need to talk to you in private Not here especially if Umbridge would overhear us talking about her. I can't stand her after all the things she put me through." Harry nods his understandment of what I said to him because he lead to an empty unused Transfiguration classoom.
After I had entered the unused Transfiguration classroom that Harry had lead me into Harry made sure the door was shuted before we starting talking because neither of us wanted to overheard by Mr. Filch or Umbridge. She would try anything to have me thrown out of Hogwarts for the most simplest thing possible. I said to Harry, "We need a plan to teach Umbridge a lesson that she will never ever forget. I hate her with passion and when I had entered the Great Hall from being in the hospital wing for a week and half from the Unforgivable Curse that was applied to me by her. She tortured me into madness and now I want to curse her into oblivion or make her feel the hell she put me through. She derserves what is coming to her."

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Over the few weeks I found out by father, Sirius Black had died while Harry Potter and his friends when tried to save him. Since I recieved the news from Dumbledore about my father's death the day after it happened after he talked to Harry in the early morning hours, but later in the day. I was devestated about the news. I was going to be an orphan because I neither parent to reply on.

I wasn't there when my father died because hurt me the most because we spent a very to get to know each other. When I went home from the train ride I sat beside Harry in the comparment with his friends unable to look at Harry from the grieve we both felt. That is the last time I saw Harry.

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On my 16th birthday, July 15, 1996, I had been home crying since I found out father's tragic death. I lost my family and didn't anywhere to turn so I lived in the house I lived at in Godric's Hollow be myself.

That day I run in my mother's searching for any clue about my father and mother's romance and about their lifes before I was born. When I had entered my mother's room as it was the same the last time I was in there. I check in very nook and cranky of her old bedroom to find anything I could possibily could find. I look in her closet on the top self after 3 hours of searching high and low. I see a shoebox was on top of the top self of the closet and I reach for it. I grab it off the top shelf and it was very dusty. I take it to the dusty shoebox to the bed my mother slept in, but it hadn't been used in 10 months since my mother died.

I rummage through the shoebox after I had quickly opened it as I see the bits and bobs of what was inside of it. It held mementos and memorabilia from my mother's romance with my father. Inside the shoebox were letters, a ring, and many other things. I pick up the letters that my mother and father written to each other. They very pieces of info I found out in my entire life.

I was kind of in a daze and I was in shock as I was crying. I found that my own god-parents were none other than Lily and James Potter, Harry's parents. They have been dead for nearly 15 years now. I never that they were my god-parents because my mother decided to keep that piece of information from me.

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begin reading the letter my father, Sirius Black had sent my mother, Jennifer Lynn Drake. It was old and faded. This letter was over 15 years old. It written prior to my birth.

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Dear Jenninfer Lynn Drake,

April 15, 1980

I am asking your hand in marriage. I have enclosed a magical ring inside the envelope. If you say: Yes, It would make me the haoppiest man in the world cause you make me whole and complete.

I know you are pregnant with my child. I haven't seen you in for 4 wholes months. My best friends, Lily and James are having their baby. I want to come with me when I go to their house.

I miss you and I will always love.

Sirius Black

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I pick up the ring inside the envelope after I had read my father's letter to my mother and I examine it. It truly breaks my heart that my father asked my mother's hand in marriage, but she never said: Yes! Then I pick up the next letter that my mother never sent my father, but it nearly year later on my 16st birthday. I am miserable since both my parents are dead.

So I open the unsent letter that my mother was supposed to send my father, Sirius, but never was sent. It was written a month after I was born. This letter had been strained with red ink.




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Dear Sirius Black,

August 15, 1980

I had a little baby girl, in which I named her: Isabella Black. She is an spitting image of you. She has my hazel eyes and your black hair.

I want to see your daughter to know her. I know that you are busy with being god-father to Harry James Potter, the son that Lily and James Potter had. I agree with you that Lily and James Potter be god-parents to our daugther.

I can never marry you, Sirius even our love was love at first sight the very moment you met me. You helped me with that heavy basket in the pouring rain. You have never seen your daugther yet. You weren't in the muggle hospital when I gave birth to her. You didn't dare show up that night to support me in my time of need. Not once.

It breaks my own heart to break off our relationship together. I loved once and you broke my heart. I will be very long time before I am ready to love again.

I will raise our daughter alone, but you can come and visit her. Even she turns out to be magical just like you. I will raise her the normal muggle way and I will not tell her about her fathr and god-parents until she come of age or if starts asking questions who her father is.

I will promise you two things:

1. I will find true happiness again with any man I am with even they make me happy. I have loved since we first laid eyes on each other.
2. I will take care of daugther with utmost responibility. I will let come see her.

Jennifer Lynn Drake

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I can't image why own mother had never had sent the this letter to my father, Sirius Black. I continued to rummage through the very old photos both wizarding and muggle when I was baby with the same features of my father, Sirus Black with the good looks that he had when he was younger with the black hair, but I had my mother's eyes that were the same hazel eyes she had when she was alive that changed from the grey-blue to green in every picture.

I was nearly a year old at in one of the pictures because I being held by Sirius Black in his arms at James and Lily's house in Godric's Hollow on the sofa as my father was smiling showing a smile that melt the most stubborn of person. Also my father was held Harry on his other leg in the picture. In this picture the only other thing I see was James Potter, my god-father whose jet-black hair had stuck up on ends smiling because he right behind the sofa that Sirius was sitting holding me and Harry on both knees. I couldn't see Lily Potter, Harry's mother or my own god-mother in the picture because I thought she was taken the picture.

Why was my own mother trying to hide the truth about my past, my father and my god-parents from me? I will never get to know why she did this to me. Was I too so immature that I could handle it?

I continue to look through the shoebox through the mementos of my father's, mother's and my past. I try on the ring that my father sent my mother to ask her hand in marriage, but she never accepted his hand in marriage. I think she had regretted it all my life and hers. I see that the tears had begun to dry up in my eyes to see the ring became engraved with the words, 'With all my love. Always and Forever. Sirius' that he sent her so that he could settle down his wild ways for her. I find another letter that addressed to my mother to my father.


Dear Jennifer,
September 30, 1981

I am sending this letter to you in due course. It pains me to write this, but if I don't I would have to do it anyway. In fact that I loved you always as the pain of losing my daughter, Isabella Black, to see her face and be with her and you. I might be forced to forget the fact you both exist in order to keep you from danger that I am in and I don't want to be in. My friends, the Potters and their year old son are in danger. I don't want to lose to very dark wizards that planning to kill or even murder Muggles or half-bloods.

I am giving a token to my daughter, Isabella. It is a heart-shaped necklace with the words, 'Never forget who are.' engraved on the front of it, but I wnat you to promise me this that you give it to her when she turns 16 years old. This necklace will not tarnish or even rust for it has several magical enchantments on it.

I am also warning to you and my daughter, Isabella to go into hiding until I give you the word. Everyone that I ever cared for is in danger of being murder or tortured by the most evil dark wizard ever. I better tell you that I love, Jennifer. I really wanted to settle down my troublesome ways to be with you and our daughter to be with you in the letter I asked your hand in marriage before you had Isabella.

Sirius Black

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whoa! noo! don't kill Isabella! is she really dead? poor Isabella...

I had to do it or it have never got finished. I really had tough time to write it cause it took me for a year and 1/2 before I finally finished it.

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