Ok, you really need to update the story! I can't take the suspense! I need to know what happens next!

I know I should and could. It would take for every to copy it from my notebook to here. I usually copy from hpfzforums.com where I already typed it mostly out. I am writer's block on the story as well. I been busy with a story on hpfzforums.com called: A Dark Obession (Hermione/ Draco) story to come up with anymore right now. I written out to a point where she meets Hagrid in my notebook. I am having writer's block and having trouble with coming ideas.

new reader here! My Remy says he didnt know Sirius had a daughter! great story!

I meant has the 'd' is right next to the 's' soo i messed up, ok?

FYI: Sirius doesn't know that Isabella Black is daughter. She is only daughter and child. They have never met because he was in Azkaban Prison most her life. She looks just like him and trying to find out more about him because she is on quest to find her father Sirius. When Sirius finds out that he has her as a daughter he will protect her and Harry.

continueing from Chapter 8:

My friends and I head to dormitory in the Ravenclaw tower to put away our books so we can go and eat in the dinner in the Great Hall. We drop off our books in our beds, when we reach the Ravenclaw House tower. After my friends and I dropped off our books in our dormitory, we head for the Great Hall.

We go and sit down at the Ravenclaw House Table, when my friends and I reach the Great Hall. Everyone in the Ravenclaw House Table looks at me as I sit down. They all heard about the fight I had with Professor Umbridge during the Defense Against the Dark Arts today during her lesson. I look away as I eat my food barely touching it and I push it away from me. I don't feel like eating anymore.

Chapter 9: Getting Ink Dropped On Me

I have to go to Professor Flitwick's office because he head of Ravenclaw House about the weeks worth of the detentions with Umbridge starting tomorrow. I get up from the Ravenclaw table and then I head to Flitwick's office.

I go up several sets of stairs to Flitwick's office. I finally reach his office and I knock on the door. No one answers the door. I have to wait for Professor Flitwick to come from the Great Hall from dinner. As I am waiting Peeves the polergiest comes up from behind me while being invisbile and pours 2 inkwells on top of my head. I start cursing because I am covered in jet black ink from head to toe. The ink is dripping in my hair and it is running down my face. I try to wipe the ink from my eyes, but the ink is running faster down my face onto my school robes. My temper is faring. I hear Peeves cackling, "Little Miss Black covered in ink. She sure does stink." I scream, "Peeves show yourself." Peeves shows himself and is still cackling as he floats away from me. I am covered in the ink that Peeves had dumped on me and I am still waiting for Professor Flitwick.



Professor Flitwick finally comes up to his office and sees me. He says, "Miss Black, what are you doing here and what is all over you? Please enter my office." Professor Flitwick leads into his office and tells me to sit down. I sit down and explain what happened in Defense Against the Dark Arts and how I got a weeks worth of detentions from Professor Umbridge. I also tell him what I am covered in, which is jet-black ink that Peeves poured on me. Flitwick says, "Miss Isabella Black, you need to keep out of trouble espcially with Dolores Umbridge because she works in the Ministery of Magic and she reports to the Minister of Magic, Cornelius Fudge, himself." I shake my head and the ink that is on me is still wet adn it splatters all over Flitiwick's desk. Professor Flitwick raises his wand towards me and siphons the ink off me. I thank him for doing this for me. He escuses me from his office. I take my leave from his office. It is now 7 o' clock at night as I head to my dormitory.

I reach the portrait and say, "Phoenix." The portrait opens for me adn I enter the Ravenclaw common room. People are sitting near the fireplace, who are talking about as I walk up to the girl's domitory and I goe straight to my bed. I open the door of my dormitory and head straight to my bed. I remove my books that I placed on my bed earlier before dinner in the Great Hall on my nightstand next to med right beside my father, Sirius' picture. I am so very tired that I don't change from my ink-stained robes and uniform off. I just lay on my bed not covering up. I know that I should have taken a long hot bath to get rid of the rest of the ink that Professor Flitwick couldn't siphon off me. I fall asleep and I have the same dream I had last night.
I wake up in the morning at 5 o' clock from the dream I was having about my father, Sirius Black that I have never met before in my entire life. When I wake up on September 4, 1995 I decided that I needed a bath because I was still partially covered in ink that Peeves had thrown and dumped on me. I started to realize that very moment right after lessons I would have to go straight to Professor Umbridge's office. I start to shudder just wondering what would that evil woman have in sote for me.

I get a change of clothes to take with me so I can take bath and have clean clothes to wear. I exit my dormitory without waking my friends up as quietly as possible. I head to the bathing area that is reserved for Ravenclaw girls. When I get there and say the password of "Animagi". The door opens for me and start to enter the bathing area that is reserved for Ravenclaw girls. I grab a fluffy white towel. I place on the floor and then I turn the facets of the huge bathtub and the bubbles. I turn off the all the facets when it gets nearly full. I get out my clothes and climb into the hot water in the tub. It was kind of relaxing when I get in. I start to get in. I start to wash my hair and my body while the bubbles are covering me. I rinse off the soap and I get out of the tub. I grab the towl that I placed near the tub and I dry off real good. Then I get dressed into my Ravenclaw uniform and then I pull the plug of the tub. The water drains very slowly. After that I grab my dirty clothes in my hand and I leave the bathing area. I head up to the Ravenclaw tower. I say the password, "Phoenix" when I reach the Ravenclaw tower and I enter the portrait to the common room. Then I go straight up the stairs to the my dormitoy.

I put my dirty clothes that I had on that I had changed form onto my bed. My hair was still wet and my jet-black hair was mess. So I do a simple drying charm to dry my hair. My hair gets dry. Then after that I head to the Great Hall and it is 6:45 AM and my friends are still sleeping.

hey great post!
peeves is so mean but so funny at the same time!
PAMS!

Is Isabella going to have Detention with Harry? If so, it'll be just like when James and Sirius got dentention together! PAMS please!

Yes, a weeks worth of detentions. She will be sitting with Harry everyday for a week. They will in the same room at the same time, but writing different words on their hands. The only difference is Isabella is left handed and her hand that that will cut open will be her right hand and Harry is right handed and his hand that is cut open is his left. They will be serving 7 days worth of detentions together in Umbridge's office.

If you guys need any questions answered about the story just ask away.

A little info that might share with you all: I originally planned Isabella Black to live in North America and was supposed to grow up there, but I changed my mind up. She going meet Harry earlier during summer holidays. I never told anyone hpfzforums.com about this. She finds out by her mother that she is Sirius' daughter on her 15th birthday. Her mother supposed to die and was going to search for her father.

Chapter 10: Detentions with Umbridge

I have to go downstairs to the Great Hall for breakfast. I watch for the trick step as I go to the Great Hall. When I reach the Great Hall, I yawn as I go and sit down at the Ravenclaw House Table. I go and eat my breakfast. Ten minutes later around 7:00 AM my friends come down to the Great Hall for breakfast and when they reach the Ravenclaw House table they see me barely eating my food as I am picking at it as they start to sit down. They ask me what is wrong with me and I tell what is wrong with me. The next thing it is 8 o' clock in the morning and it is time for Potions.

I head down to Potions and when I reach the Potions Lab with my friends and I enter with them, I sit down at my seat. The class goes very fast as someone a had set the clocks on overdrive and the bell rings signaling the next lesson. It was the same in Charms lesson also. The next thing is that I am in Umbridge's Defense Against the Dark Arts and I am dreading the detention that I would have right after all the lessons because I don't know what I am doing or what she is going to make me do in the detention. We are forced to read Chapter 2 in the Defensive Magical Theory books. Professor Umbridge looks at me with such distain. Then right after the lesson Professor Umbridge holds me back to tell me to be ther at 5 o' clock in her office.

I go to the Great Hall for lunch and I don't bother eating any lunch becasue I am too nervous. Then during lunch I head to Ancient Runes because I can't eat at all and my friends don't try to stop me from leaving. When I reach the Ancient Runes classroom and I go and enter the classroom because the door was unlocked. I go and sit down in my seat waitning for Hermione Granger, my partner in the class. Everyone who is in the Ancient Runes comes in the classroom and they down in their seats. Hermione sits down beside me and we start talking while we are assigned to decipher the stones with runes on them on the desks. Hermione tells me that Harry has to go to detentions with Professor Umbridge and they are week's worth as well. I say to her, "Same here. I have to go straight to Umbridge's office at 5 o' clock tonight every night for a week." We start deciphering the stone with runes on them on our desk as quickly as possible trying not to misread the runes on the stones. The next thing is the that the bell rang signaling the next lesson. I say to Hermione, "Good-bye, Hermione" as we walk out of the classroom together.

I went to Transfiguration and it seemed to go very fast as someone continued to set the clocks faster. Only a few more hours until I start my detentions with Umbridge. It was 2 o' clock in the afternoon now as I head down to Herbology because the bell signaled for the next lesson. In Herbology, Draco started on me and I told him that he was foul and evil little git. Still he continued on me as the lesson continued. In Herbology, we were learning to take care of exotic and magical plants. The bell rings signaling me and my friends to go to History of Magic. I go to History of Magic class with my friends and we entered the classroom together. The class begins as everyone takes their seats. Professor Binns starts droning on about Giant Wars for the past few days. The class is so boring that everyone starts slipping into deep stupor. I end up falling asleep in class pretending that I am listening to Binn's constant droning. Finally he stops talking then everyone starts to wake up from the stupor incuded by Professor Binn's droning on about the lesson. The bell rings for us to go to dinner, but I have to directly go to Umbridge's office for my detentions.

I head up to Umbridge's office while my friends head to their dorms to put away their books and they would go to the Great Hall for dinner. When I reach Umbridge's office I knock on the door and Professor Umbridge says, "Enter." So I enter and take my seat and Harry Potter was serving the detention with me. Umbridge gets out these two strange thin black quills with very unusally shharp points that belonged to her out her bag. She tells Harry he must write, I MUST NOT TELL LIES! Then she turns to me and says, "Miss Black, I want you to write, I MUST NOT CAUSE TROUBLE IN CLASS" Both Harry and I ask at the same time, "How many times do we have to write this?" Umbridge says, "As many times to get the message across. Both of you get to work." She places a parchment in front of both of Harry and me. Harry asks, " You didn't give us any ink." I was thinking along the same lines. Until Umbridge says, "YOu wouldn't be needing ink for these quills." Harry starts writing, I must not tell lies, while I have to write I must not cause trouble in class. As soon as we started writing the lines on our parchment there is red ink adn then I start realize that my right hand had been cut open and was bleeding freely. The blood droplets on my hand were running down my hand and I take a glance at Harry without Umbridge catching me and his hand was doing the same thing.

After I write the first line my right hand healed, but then the words were started to etch into my skin. Then I continue to write several more times while each time my hand would heal and then split open again as it bled freely. I was using my own blood as ink. Harry continues to writing, 'I must not tell lies' as his left hand began to be etched with the words and began to bleed freely. Harry and I continue until Umbridge checks hands around 11 o' clock at night. She is checking is we got the message and then she lets us go.

Harry and I get up from our chairs and gather our things up. We go to to the door as Harry opens the door for both of us to exit. As we exit Professor Umbridge's door and I start to talk to Harry as we head to toward our dorms. I say to him, "I can't believe she making us write lines in our own blood. I swear that woman is definitely evil. I will see tomorrow in detention as well." Harry turns towards the Gryffindor Tower as I head toward the Ravenclaw Tower.

I go up to the Ravenclaw Tower and say the password abd UI enter into the common room realizing that I have to work on the homework that Professor McGongall had given in Transfiguration today in class today. It due tomorrow. I go abd get my Intermediate Transfigation book from my bag and I start to read the passage entitle, 'Animagi Rules and Regulations'. The homework had had to be an essay about the the passage in the book, but it had to be in my own words. I get cracking on my essay working until the wee hours of the early morning. The only source of light in the commin room was the fireplace, which was stasrting to burn out. It was about 3 o' clock when I finish my essay and I am so very tired that I can't even get myself from the chair I was sitting on. My right hand starts to hurt and I see a faint outline of the words, 'I must not start trouble in class' on my my hand. I start to rub my right hand with with my left hanfd. I started to yawn as I felt very sleepy and tired from staying up all night working on Transfiguration essay.

I end up falling asleep at the table and I start to dream. In this dream I see my father, Sirius Black in pain and was in so much excruciating pain pain. It looked like he being placed under the Crutius Curse. I can see him writhing in pain and I can feel him and hear screaming because I am standing right next to him. I scream, "No!" Then I wake up from it.

I'm not sure if you noticed this, but you posted the same chapter twice.

Fixed it and I didn't really notice it. Sorry!

hey that was a really good post!
was she really standing beside sirius like one of Harrys dreams or did it just feel like she was beside him??
PAMS!

That's ok. Anyway, the new post was really good! PAMSOID!

great post! PAMS!!

She standing beside him her dreams though she has never met or seen in her life expect for the picture that her mother gave of him when they were a couple.

The next day is the same as the 1st day of detention. At 5 o' clock in the evening I go straight to Umbridge's office to serve my 2nd day of detention for the week with Professor Umbridge and was raining outside when I got into her office. Harry ist here serving the detention with me again. Professor Umbridge gives me and Harry those quills again and parachment to write those lines again. Then she forces us to write on the parchment the lines. My right hand is cut open as I start to write: 'I must start trouble in class." snd the blood was running down my hand. As I finish my 1st line my hand heals as it scabs up and then I write more lines. It keeps doing this several more times just like Harry's left hand. Pretty soon my hand and Harry's hand had become etched with words that Umbridge forced to write. Finally around midnight after 7 hours absolute torture and grueling pain, Umbridge finally decides to look at Harry's and my hands to see if got the message. Both of my hands were hurting from writing those lines.

Umbridge lets Harry and I go for the night. I head up the Ravenclaw tower, while Harry headed up to the Gryffindor tower. Also I had handed my Transfiguration essay earlier in the day and it was horrible. I didn't even have time to do it neatly finish it and probably got a "T" or a "D on it.

By the 3rd day of my weeks worth of detentions with Umbridge U feel like skiving off the detention. I went to Potions lesson that day and worked on a new potion that Snape made us prepare. I was yawning as I was working on it trying not to fall asleep and not trying to forget the key ingredient in the potion. In that case I totally forgot the to put the Hellabore in at the right moment and Snape came over to me after he was watching me behind his desk. He whispers in my ear, "Miss Black can't you read you completely useless girl. You know that you were supposed to put the Hellabore in and why is your potion as runny and as green as pea soup, Miss Black? It is supposed to be a light shade of blue in color. Ten points from Ravenclaw house. " I try explaining to Professor Snape why my potion was wrong, but what was the use of doing that I just got myself a detention with him tomorrow. I say to him, "I am already having a detentions with Umbrdige tomorrow and for the next 3 days. So you will have to reschedule it for another day, sir."

great post! oh and i love your siggy!

that was a great post!
PAMS!

Great post! Can't wait for more!

I will write more in the next days becuase I just suffered a terrible loss of my dear friend of mine that passed away.

Oh, don't worry, take as much time as you need, friends and family is much more important than writing a story. You have my sympathies.

It was no use trying to convience Snape to reschedule the detention he gave me. I would have two detentions tomorrow. How I am going to serve two detentions at the same time? I know couldn't get Umbridge to change my detention even I half tried because she would turn me down flat.

The rest of the day that day, I complained about how unfair Snape was to me as it was getting closer to 5 o' clock at night I go straight to Umbridge's office, I enter her office for the 3rd night in row. Harry was sitting in the other chair when I entered and I took my seat. Professor Umbridge takes those strange black quills and hands them to Harry and me with a roll of parchment in fornt of us. Harry and I start writing our lines and hands start to bleed again. The pain seers through my right hand as I write and wince trying not to give Professor Umbridge the satifacction and gratification that she was getting to me.

I take a peek at Harry while I was writing, "'I must not cause trouble in class' as my blood flows down my right hand. I can see Harry feels the same way as me. The hours fly by very fast and then Professor Umbridge checks Harry's and my hands around 9 o' clock to see if we both got the message. Then she says, "You both may go now. Tomorrow be here at 5 o' clock."

The next day I was in so much trouble with Snape for not showing up with him with his detention. I failed a test that I took in Transfiguration because I couldn't study for it. I recieved an "P" on the homework that I handed into Porfessor in Transfiguration yesterday. Professor Binns class was boring as ever as that day and I kept dreaming about my fahter, Sirius Black and I was to meet him.

Wonderful post! Bravo! Your story is comming out great!

Awesome post! You should have her talk to Harry after the detentions. When is she going to meet Sirius? PAMS!

They do talk after the detentions. I don't yet, but something tragic will happen to her in the near future. That is all I am saying on the subject.