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06-09-2011, 03:56 PM
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#101 (permalink)
| | Jobberknoll
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Up in the Stars
Posts: 3,857
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kennedy Stark
Fifth Year  x2
|  ♥ Slytherpuff ♥ dancer ♥ totally awesome :: Starkid lover
Oh my goodness, what can I say? Well I pretty much read the entire thing this morning.
I love it!! It is amazing, cant wait to read more.
pamspamspams
~Sarah 
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06-16-2011, 07:16 PM
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#102 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: A planet.
Posts: 480
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lillian Strap
First Year |
Authors Note: Thanks for all the comments and tips, this story wouldn't be possible without you readers! Also, sorry that it's so short, but it sums it up nicely. So enjoy!
Chapter Ten: Home at last
Bethany was having mixed feelings. She was able to go home for the first time in two, almost three, years. But that meant leaving Scorpius behind.
She turned to Scorpius, "You better write, Scorpius. If you don't I'll...." She stopped, not knowing what she'd do.
"Cry?" he teased, smiling. Bethany glared, he rolled his eyes. "I'll write, okay?"
She nodded, "Good. And you'll visit." It wasn't a question.
"Yes. I will visit. I will see you soon. Now go on, your family is waiting.."
Scorpius then watched as she walked off, but she didn't get far. After a few yards she stopped, dropped her luggage, turned around, and ran back. She jumped up, wrapping her arms around his neck.
He stepped back in shock, but them returned the hug. "I'm going to miss you, Invisible Girl."
"And I'll miss you, Scorpius Malfoy."
She kissed him on the cheek, and ran off before he could process it. Picking up her luggage she wave, which he returned weakly.
Then she was gone, leaving Scorpius, red faced and smiling, to gather his thoughts while his impatient father looked on from the barrier. He walked slowly to his father, planning out the next time he would see Bethany.
"I'll see you soon Bethany, I'll see you soon..."
THE END...stay tuned for the unamed sequal
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Last edited by LillyJames; 06-16-2011 at 07:45 PM.
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06-16-2011, 07:30 PM
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#103 (permalink)
| | Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kaylee Strap
First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
IT'S OVER!   There is now a HUGE void in my life, what am I going to do without this? IT WAS WRITTEN SO BEAUTIFULLY AND AMAZINGLY! I'm gonna miss it so much, gahhhhhhhhhhh, this is sooo sad.
I have one last comment, SCORPIUS! I LOVE HIM SO MUCH  He is just so adorable.
Oh and, thank you, you are amazing!
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06-16-2011, 09:07 PM
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#104 (permalink)
| | Jobberknoll
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Up in the Stars
Posts: 3,857
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kennedy Stark
Fifth Year x2
| ♥ Slytherpuff ♥ dancer ♥ totally awesome :: Starkid lover
How can it be over  so sad acnt wait for your sequel. Gah your writing was so amazing I will be on the edge of my seat waiting for the sequel.
Please pretty please notify me when you put out the sequel 
And I agree Scorpius is so adorbs.
~Sarah
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06-19-2011, 10:18 AM
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#105 (permalink)
| | Plimpy
Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: The TARDIS
Posts: 15,339
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cassidy Euston
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| don't blink | you will be upgraded | silence will fall | exterminate
Awesome ending! Can't wait for the sequel!
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06-21-2011, 05:47 PM
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#106 (permalink)
| | Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Enya Mayberry
Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
What a lovely ending!
I like the sequal bit on the end, i want to read more!
Loved the entire story, you should write more!
Eviee <33
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