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| | Honeydukes Register (Finished Fanfiction) Here you will find all the completed works of fanfiction and poetry belonging to our talented SnitchSeeker authors. | 
07-02-2008, 04:55 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year |  If Circumstances Were A bit Different - Sa9+ Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
Hello every one. This is my very first fan fiction. I want to thank my friends Alyssa and Haylee for helping me with this story. I hope you'll enjoy reading.
-nat
DISCLAIMER: All of the characters were owned by J.K. Rowling. the only thing i own is the plot.
If Circumstances Were A bit Different
A boy was lying on his bed staring at the blank ceiling of his room. Tomorrow would be his birthday, and he had spent the whole day reminiscing his past birthdays. For the past years, he had celebrated his birthday with his grandmother and other family friends. They would go to Diagon Alley, browse shops or celebrate it with a small party in their house.
Tomorrow... how will we celebrate my birthday, the boy thought.
"C'mon, little boy! You better go to sleep now, tomorrow's a big day for you," his grandmother sweetly said.
She gave her grandson a goodnight kiss and hug as she left him in his room.
Just after his grandmother left, he grabbed something on his bedside table, he stared for a moment at the stuff, then, the boy rolled over his bedspread...
...and fell asleep.
Last edited by Nat nat; 07-05-2008 at 03:35 PM.
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07-02-2008, 09:01 PM
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|  Neville's PatronusJobberknoll
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: At home.... duh
Posts: 4,122
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sabrina Dumbledore
Fourth Year |
YAY I'm the first reader!!!! Oh this is fantastic, I think it's about Teddy am I right?????  Can't wait to read more which means one thing.... PAMS!!!!
Jemma and Sabrina
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07-02-2008, 11:08 PM
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|  Fred and George's DarlingPuffskein
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Sydney, Australia
Posts: 2,138
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sienna De Luca
Fifth Year |
ohh, is this a Teddy story? I think so
PAMS
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07-02-2008, 11:08 PM
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| RP Queen Snidget
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: dining with Hannibal
Posts: 2,619
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Saiyomi Neliel Schiffer
Seventh Year |
New Reader!! love it!! can't wait for more!! 
~Codi~
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07-03-2008, 05:31 AM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
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Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape  YAY I'm the first reader!!!! Oh this is fantastic, I think it's about Teddy am I right????? Can't wait to read more which means one thing.... PAMS!!!!
Jemma and Sabrina
xxx You got it right Jemma.  thank you. Quote:
Originally Posted by Ms.Malfoy ohh, is this a Teddy story? I think so
PAMS You guys are quite good in guessing. thank you, Nikki... Quote:
Originally Posted by supercodi95 New Reader!! love it!! can't wait for more!!
~Codi~ thanks codi.
i should have placed the disclaimer on the next post not on the first one. 
do you have any idea what the stuff was? just wanted to know your ideas about it
Update coming up...
Last edited by Nat nat; 07-03-2008 at 06:13 AM.
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07-03-2008, 05:38 AM
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| Neville's Patronus Jobberknoll
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: At home.... duh
Posts: 4,122
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sabrina Dumbledore
Fourth Year |
YAY!!!! new posts.... can't wait to read it!
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07-03-2008, 06:13 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Mystic Falls
Posts: 716
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ellie Summers
Sixth Year |  Wow love your story!
Hi I'm a new reader and I LOVE your story so far.
Signed
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07-03-2008, 06:52 AM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
SO here it goes... Teddy Remus Lupin woke up to see a mound of packages at the foot of his bed. Of course, how could he forget that today was his eleventh birthday? It was the typical cold morning as he forgot again to close his only bedroom window for the thirtieth time. His grandmother, Andromeda Tonks, had been complaining about it to him for days, but Teddy just wouldn’t listen to her.
He stared at his own room and noticed that it was much more organised than he had remembered it being when he had gone to bed. He thought that maybe his grandmother had dropped in and cleaned as he was busy dreaming about flying his own toy broomstick. He had never had a toy broomstick because his grandmother would not agree upon giving him one. His gaze continued to scan the room.
Suddenly, his eyes became glued to a picture on top of his bedside table. It was his parent’s picture; they waved and beamed at him after giving each other a nice and warm hug. He smiled at the thought of them. He felt the need to change the atmosphere and turned his blue hair into vivid turquoise colour to suit his birthday mood.
He got up stretched his arms for the start of his daily routines and exercise. He glanced over to the window and felt the cold morning breeze brush his face. He drew a deep breath, and turned to face the gifts, which was neatly stacked up on the floor. He grabbed the parcel on the topmost part of the pile of packages and started opening it, but before completely tearing the wrap, he took a quick look over a few words scribbled on the side of the pack.
To Teddy Lupin,
Hope you’ll like it. I thought it would match your hair. Your loving Godfather,
Harry
Harry’s gift was a colour-changing quill. Teddy smiled, Harry always had a gift for him. He pulled a piece of paper from his table and tried his Godfather's gift. The first stroke was blue in colour, then it kept on changing as Teddy continued to write.
HaPpy BiRthDay To ME!!!
He found Harry's gift interesting but he caught a glimpsed of the other packages, he turned to face them again, he left the quill and paper beside him. He continued on opening his gifts, eager to see the content of the other packages.
Last edited by Nat nat; 07-03-2008 at 09:10 AM.
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07-03-2008, 07:54 AM
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| RP Queen Snidget
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: dining with Hannibal
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Saiyomi Neliel Schiffer
Seventh Year |
love it!! can't wait for more!!
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07-03-2008, 08:48 AM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
Thanks codi...
sorry for the cliff hanger... (i guess it wasn't that good)
I hope you'll still like it...
Last edited by Nat nat; 07-03-2008 at 09:16 AM.
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07-03-2008, 09:25 AM
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| RP Queen Snidget
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: dining with Hannibal
Posts: 2,619
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Saiyomi Neliel Schiffer
Seventh Year |
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Originally Posted by nymphadora_nat Thanks codi...
sorry for the cliff hanger... (i guess it wasn't that good)
I hope you'll still like it... of course I still like it, why wouldn't I?
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07-03-2008, 09:42 AM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
I was just thinking you guys wanted a real cliff hanger... | |
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07-03-2008, 09:45 AM
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|   SS Featured AuthorTürk BilginiBugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sarani Glass
Graduated  x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ]
Nice story, hun. Keep the posts coming. <3
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07-03-2008, 10:30 AM
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| Neville's Patronus Jobberknoll
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: At home.... duh
Posts: 4,122
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sabrina Dumbledore
Fourth Year |
It was really good! Why can't Harry be my godfather? Or husband for that matter? I can't wait to read more! I'm subscribing to this!!
Jemma
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07-03-2008, 12:47 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Nice story, hun. Keep the posts coming. <3
ANother reader, thank you.  thanks for subscribing Jemma... You want gifts too?
I'm working on an another update...
Last edited by Nat nat; 07-03-2008 at 02:29 PM.
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07-03-2008, 02:32 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
here it goes... hmmm what will happen next...
He was almost through from opening the last parcel from Ron, whom he considers as his Uncle, which is quite larger and heavier than the rest of the packages, when he heard noises.
What is that noise all about, he thought.
However, Teddy was not at all surprised when he saw the faces of the people who made the noise. But it was their presence that shocked him and made him gaze at them with disbelief.
Wake up Teddy, wake up, he told himself. He pinched himself but nothing happened.
Silence filled the room, but Teddy’s expression was filled with curiosity. The people looked like the ones in the portrait on the top of his desk. | |
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07-03-2008, 02:39 PM
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| | Abraxan
Join Date: May 2008 Location: ATL :: GMT -5
Posts: 25,054
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ava Masterson
Second Year
Diagon Alley Proprietor:
Victor Sayre
Dark Wizard | Fiercely Flirtatious | ILY T&E ♥ | SUPER MOM!!! | *liebkost*
Hey Nat, why didn't you tell me that you were writing a FanFiction?? I would have subscribed right away. You dear, are a sneaky, little monkey! 
BTW, I love your story. Are there anymore that I should know about? Love you girl, Lisa
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07-03-2008, 02:54 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
Sorry, i didn't tell you, i was just waiting for readers i didn't want to advertise that i was writing a fiction...
anyway, thank you.. The monkey's cute...
ta thanks again...
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07-03-2008, 09:54 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Belgium soon enough!
Posts: 211
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Charlotte Tonks
Second Year |
ohh! i love this story so far!
write on!
great posts!
PAMS!
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07-04-2008, 02:39 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
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Originally Posted by keeper#1 ohh! i love this story so far!
write on!
great posts!
PAMS!
~~ Charlotte (Charlie) ~~ Thanks Charlie.. no updates as of now... | |
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07-04-2008, 02:43 PM
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| Fred and George's Darling Puffskein
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Sydney, Australia
Posts: 2,138
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sienna De Luca
Fifth Year |
Ahh I love this story
please PAMS, please, please, please!!
Isabel.
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07-05-2008, 07:08 AM
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| RP Queen Snidget
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: dining with Hannibal
Posts: 2,619
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Saiyomi Neliel Schiffer
Seventh Year |
love it!! can't wait for more!!
~Codi~
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07-05-2008, 07:23 AM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
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Originally Posted by Ms.Malfoy Ahh I love this story
please PAMS, please, please, please!!
Isabel. Thanks isabel...
I've been calling you nikki...
sorry... Quote:
Originally Posted by supercodi95 love it!! can't wait for more!!
~Codi~
Codi thank you...
I'll post update soon...
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07-05-2008, 08:01 AM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
How can they be here when they’re… perhaps they were simply a trick. It is my birthday after all, he wondered.
The eleven-year-old Teddy stood there staring at the two, who appeared into his own bedroom, making noise as a racket. Teddy's heart was pounding. He wanted to shout, for his heart could not contain the happiness that had started to engulfed him. He leapt to his feet and walked slowly to them. But for that moment, it was as though time had suddenly stopped and that he can do whatever he wanted to.
Just close your eyes, Teddy.
He closed his eyes hoping he had been imagining things. But when he opened his eyes, the figures were there, they did not fade. Although he thought they were just a trick and one blink would tell him that they were not true.
Teddy was grinning. But still he could not believe it.
Then he broke the deafening silence around them.
Last edited by Nat nat; 07-05-2008 at 08:07 AM.
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07-05-2008, 03:15 PM
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| | Plimpy
Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: 6 Ft Under The Stars
Posts: 15,260
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jacklyn Gold
Fifth Year |
NAT, This is really good! Why di dyou not tell me about it???
you have to post more soon, cause I can not stand cliffies,
and I need to know what happens!!!
PAMS!
~Becca~
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You go for seconds and days I live for moments to say that I may never get a second chance don't throw it away
Living for dollars and dimes They'll all diminish in time Oh let that motion come and crash
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