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04-06-2008, 09:47 PM
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| Ghost
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Shiz
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xavieria Bole Graduated | I am NOT Maddie - Sa13+ ♥ Touch Lass! | MOON OF MY LIFE | Lemon's Winner | Inside Kitty
Banner by Lissy!
Hello Hello! I'm Nicolle and I really love my Bella, so when I can't be on to role play her, I like to write about her, which is how this story evolved. Narrated by Bella herself, this is the story of a girl named Maddie, who surprisingly, has the same exact life as Bella. Freaky huh? Maybe not so much. *shifty*
Jump To: Stupid Trees Boyfriend? Females Dancing Hufflepuff Vampire Dreams New Girl Rumors PINK?? New Girl and Tree Boy Cousin Breakup Goodbyes Clifford and Warren Pierre Potato Prince Charming Biting Hours Colby Medieval Times Writing Wrists Cedrella Two Boys Prefect Girl
Let me tell you a story about a girl named Madeline. First of all, Madeline hates her name, and she would prefer that you call her Maddie. Kay? Thanks.
Second, it is important that you understand Maddie's home life, her parents, while far from being in love, have been married for 30 years, and she is the product of their time together. The only one.
Being an only child, all of her parent's attention, obviously, was focused on her, sadly enough.
Maddie never saw eye to eye with her parent's philosophies, and the moment that she found a place to go, she moved out.
Ironically enough, she found herself living with the kind of person her parents loathed above any other. A Muggle.
So, this is where Maddie's Hogwarts adventure begins, after two and a half years at Beauxbatons Academy, she transferred to the one school she had wanted to be in to begin with.
Maddie loved being at Hogwarts.
She was closer to her cousin, she made lots of new friends, and she had access to all of the chocolate that she could ever want.
Then, everything suddenly went wrong, but at the same time it went right.
It's weird how at your worst moment, the most important things can happen.
Maddie's cousin disappeared along with the other students at Hogwarts, and no one knew where he was.
She was devastated to say the least, would she ever get to see him again?
Or would he be gone forever?
Did he miss her where he was?
Or did she never cross his mind?
She didn't know.
And not knowing was the worst thing ever.
But then, something good happened. Something that would forever change her.
Maddie met a boy.
Not just any boy did she meet, but the boy. One of those boys that you never forget, no matter how hard you might try.
He was simply perfect in just about every way. Perfect smile, perfect eyes, and he had that way of making her feel like she was the only girl on earth.
This boy made her feel special. Not like "stop eating the paste special". But then again, you totally knew that right?
Anyway, it turned out that this boy reciprocated her feelings, and that also made her very happy.
But, if everything was going so well with her newfound love interest, why did she find herself, from time to time, thinking of someone else?
Someone who she had never really thought of developing a relationship with.
Someone who had, when she thought about it, great relationship potential.
Someone who she had very recently fought with.
Hooked yet? I certainly hope so, because Maddie's story has only just started.
Last edited by Colley; 06-24-2008 at 01:04 AM.
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04-07-2008, 01:39 AM
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| Formerly: AutumnSun Kelpie
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: paperbin
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maisie Travers Fifth Year | No fun tag! | Haha, Zombie! | Nyeaarr!
I love it!! <3333 I like the 'He made her feel special' line. It made me giggle
... I want moar!!! -bounces up and down- It's awesome!! ^___^
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04-07-2008, 01:46 AM
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| DoM Veela
Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Themyscira
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nerissa M. Tate Sixth Year x8
| Wowza!
I love it!
I especially loved this part: Quote:
But, if everything was going so well with her newfound love interest, why did she find herself, from time to time, thinking of someone else?
Someone who she had never really thought of developing a relationship with.
Someone who had, when she thought about it, great relationship potential.
Someone who she had very recently fought with.
-wants to here more about Maddie-
-subscribes to this thread-
~The Royal Kitty
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04-07-2008, 01:49 AM
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| curly haired prefect - "sometimes I get angry!" - 30/90 - *chicken emoji* - probably @ Disney - I speak dog
EEEEEK! It is supa good, Nicolle! *stalks
I can't WAIT for more!
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04-07-2008, 01:59 AM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: State of Confusion
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Vera Brinley Thanatos Gryffindor Graduated Hogwarts RPG Name: Mandrake Beery Slytherin Fifth Year | Anashti l Brat Pack l Sally & Dr. Finklestein
OMG, this story is awesome. I can't wait till u post again.
~Michelle~
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04-07-2008, 03:52 AM
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| Re'em
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 19,522
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophia Svensson #556B2F Slytherin Fifth Year Hogwarts RPG Name: Eulalia Walles (#F48037) Hufflepuff Fourth Year | Constant Vigilance! O_O AWAKE!
OMJ. I love Maddie already Kneecolle, I thought I should tell you I'm subscribing to this. If you hadn't figured it out already.
Lookin' good. PAMS, buddy!
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04-07-2008, 04:28 AM
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| Chizpurfle
Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: @ Merlottes Grill
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Taylor Ashlyn Cooper Sixth Year | Original Tree hugger Truebie I am loving it.. Cant wait for more!!
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04-07-2008, 07:29 AM
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| Neville's Patronus Jobberknoll
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: At home.... duh
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This seems like it is going to be a really good fan fic! Keep writing please!! :woop:
PAMS!!!
Jemmz
xxx
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04-07-2008, 10:48 AM
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| Formerly: Dracos_Lady Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Hugo Jermaine Woods Seventh Year | avant-garde Mrs. Nick Jonas Daughter! *Cling* I cannot wait for the story to begin, and you know that I will be reading
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04-07-2008, 01:14 PM
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| Occamy
Join Date: May 2007 Location: London
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cora Dredworth Sixth Year x1
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Oooooh. Interesting.
I luff it Colley Wolley.
Maddie rawks. *pokes you to write more*
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04-07-2008, 03:00 PM
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| Snidget
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Chatich First Year | FanFic Enthusiast I really like this. It's very diffrent than all the other fan fics. I am waiting fo more!
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04-07-2008, 05:42 PM
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| Ghost
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Shiz
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xavieria Bole Graduated | ♥ Touch Lass! | MOON OF MY LIFE | Lemon's Winner | Inside Kitty Quote:
Originally Posted by AutumnSun I love it!! <3333 I like the 'He made her feel special' line. It made me giggle
... I want moar!!! -bounces up and down- It's awesome!! ^___^ haha thanks BFF! I totally stole the stop eating the paste thing from Gilmore Girls though Quote:
Originally Posted by Willow_Kovac I love it!
I especially loved this part:
-wants to here more about Maddie-
-subscribes to this thread-
~The Royal Kitty I wonder who that boy could be.......
*pets the royal kitty* Quote:
Originally Posted by Lissy Longbottom EEEEEK! It is supa good, Nicolle! *stalks
I can't WAIT for more! Thank you dear! I'm very glad that you like it Quote:
Originally Posted by eric_2007al_2006 OMG, this story is awesome. I can't wait till u post again.
~Michelle~ Thank you!
I'm going to post more right now Quote:
Originally Posted by ~*just_me(lily_evans)*~ OMJ. I love Maddie already Kneecolle, I thought I should tell you I'm subscribing to this. If you hadn't figured it out already.
Lookin' good. PAMS, buddy! OMJ? Is that Oh My Josey?
*giggle*
I love Maddie almost as much as I love Bella Quote:
Originally Posted by JazzyJay I am loving it.. Cant wait for more!!
Jamie Thank you! Quote:
Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape This seems like it is going to be a really good fan fic! Keep writing please!! :woop:
PAMS!!!
Jemmz
xxx Hmm. I hope that Maddie's life is interesting enough, it is to me Daddy!! *tackles*
You have to say it is wonderful even if it isn't cause you are my Daddy Quote:
Originally Posted by Red Squirrel Oooooh. Interesting.
I luff it Colley Wolley.
Maddie rawks. *pokes you to write more* *squishes Terd*
Does Maddie rawk more than Bella?
I'm wayy ahead of you missy, I've got three chapters done already Quote:
Originally Posted by shirelbb I really like this. It's very diffrent than all the other fan fics. I am waiting for more!
-*~ Shirel ~*- Thanks honey. I tried to make this as unique as I could
* You think that she would know better.
You think that after the accident on her broom, when she fell and broke her arm, that she would be more careful.
You would think a lot of things.
She should have paid attention. She should have had a tighter grip on the branches.
Actually, let's just blame this on him. After all, it was his fault that she had been so distracted right?
Well, no.
It really wasn't anyone's fault, though some people who shall remain nameless, would like to blame it on Maddie.
Maddie prefers to blame the tree.
Actually, I believe her words were, "Stupid tree, with it's stupid slippery branches."
What eventful and exciting day is complete without a trip to the Hospital Wing?
I dare say that it is the best way to pass your life away.
Not.
The waiting room was, in itself, an entirely different affair. Besides being boring, it seemed also a place where one would have a strange conversation.
As Maddie sat there, awaiting care for her broken arm, Tree Boy asked her where she would rather be.
Where would she rather be?
Should she take the sane person's route? Or the drama queen route?
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Drama Queen, dur.
So, she said that she would rather be back at home with her insane mother who was already lining up eligible bachelors for her.
Perhaps it had not been such a good idea to bring that up, because then, he asked if she would marry him.
Would she like to marry him?
Well, she supposed that if she were in love with him, and he asked her to marry him, sure she would.
And that is exactly what she told him.
Maybe that was not the right answer after all. Even though it was the truthful answer, she didn't exactly know how he felt about her.
What if he did like her? It would do her no good to lead him on in anyway, especially when she didn't know how she felt about him.
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04-07-2008, 07:13 PM
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| Kneazle
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: England.
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Bwaha. Tree boy. I have no idea who that is.
I'm hooked. Can't wait to read more. ^__^
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04-08-2008, 01:09 AM
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| Ghost
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Shiz
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xavieria Bole Graduated | ♥ Touch Lass! | MOON OF MY LIFE | Lemon's Winner | Inside Kitty Quote:
Originally Posted by Tinkerbell* Bwaha. Tree boy. I have no idea who that is.
I'm hooked. Can't wait to read more. ^__^ LOL! I love you Katie. You're too cute
I'm glad you like it, although you might not want to let Jack read the next chapter.... but he might like the one after that... Maddie's got a boyfriend!
Yes, it's true, it became official last night in the Dungeon Corridor. He asked her to be his girlfriend.
How adorable!
Yes, Yes, these two are moving a little fast, but they are young, and there is plenty of time to be boring when they're old.
Besides that, Maddie doesnt believe in putting things off to another day.
You never really know what a day can bring, so why not do what you want, while you can?
Lesson of the day: When someone asks you to be his girlfriend, do not ask him "really?"
Because all it does is make you look silly.
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04-08-2008, 01:16 AM
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| Re'em
Join Date: Aug 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophia Svensson #556B2F Slytherin Fifth Year Hogwarts RPG Name: Eulalia Walles (#F48037) Hufflepuff Fourth Year | Constant Vigilance! O_O AWAKE! Quote:
OMJ? Is that Oh My Josey?
*giggle*
I love Maddie almost as much as I love Bella
actually, Kneecolle, I'm not telling what OMJ is
Maddie is too cute. He asked her to be his boyfriend? In the dungeons? :eyebrow: that seems romantic..... and awkward. *cough* buuut... tree boy? Who - ohhh! *winks* gotcha. Tree boy. Who's tree girl?
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04-08-2008, 01:22 AM
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| curly haired prefect - "sometimes I get angry!" - 30/90 - *chicken emoji* - probably @ Disney - I speak dog Aww, so cute!
I love this story to pieces!
But what's gonna happen to Tree Boy? I like Tree Boy
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04-08-2008, 01:30 AM
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| DoM Veela
Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Themyscira
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nerissa M. Tate Sixth Year x8
| Wowza!
YES! Maddie has a boyfriend now
I'm totally hooked now
But I like Tree Boy as well ...
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04-08-2008, 02:42 PM
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| DMAC Occamy
Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Disneyland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Dezi Willard Fifth Year x2
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I love it how everybody loves Tree Boy. ^__^
You know I love this, right? It's like a much easier way to stalk! Like a .. a ..STALKING REPORT! :O
Is Bella stalking Maddie, btw?
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04-08-2008, 05:23 PM
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| Kneazle
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: England.
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Oh wow. -pets Tree Boy- He's kinda upset.
But, I so can't wait to read more. =O It's amazing.
-waits for next chapter-
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04-08-2008, 05:45 PM
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| Ghost
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Shiz
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xavieria Bole Graduated | ♥ Touch Lass! | MOON OF MY LIFE | Lemon's Winner | Inside Kitty Quote:
Originally Posted by ~*just_me(lily_evans)*~ actually, Kneecolle, I'm not telling what OMJ is
Maddie is too cute. He asked her to be his boyfriend? In the dungeons? :eyebrow: that seems romantic..... and awkward. *cough* buuut... tree boy? Who - ohhh! *winks* gotcha. Tree boy. Who's tree girl?
I'm suprised Juni didn't tell you that. She was there
ummmm.... there is no Tree Girl.... cause if there was a Tree Girl than she would be with Tree Boy and Bella Maddie would not like that. Quote:
Originally Posted by Lissy Longbottom Aww, so cute!
I love this story to pieces!
But what's gonna happen to Tree Boy? I like Tree Boy Thanks Lisseh I like Tree Boy too
I dunno what's gonna happen yet.... Quote:
Originally Posted by Willow_Kovac YES! Maddie has a boyfriend now
I'm totally hooked now
But I like Tree Boy as well ... Everyone loves Tree Boy Quote:
Originally Posted by Panda Bear I love it how everybody loves Tree Boy. ^__^
You know I love this, right? It's like a much easier way to stalk! Like a .. a ..STALKING REPORT! :O
Is Bella stalking Maddie, btw?
She sure does know alot of details of Maddie's life! LOL I didn't think it was going to catch on so well, but it looks like it did.
HAHA. Yeah! That's a great way to describe it!
Bella: NO! I do NOT stalk people...... Maddie just likes to tell me her thoughts..... there's nothing weird about that.... ...... *runs* Quote:
Originally Posted by Tinkerbell* Oh wow. -pets Tree Boy- He's kinda upset.
But, I so can't wait to read more. =O It's amazing.
-waits for next chapter- I told you he shouldn't read it. But nothing is set in stone. Maybe some day Maddie and Tree Boy will be boyfriend and girlfriend... you never know....
Maddie has a problem: She is too much of a flirt.
The result of this problem: She has very few female friends.
This is getting to be such a problem that the only way she can see to fix it is to put an add in the paper!
But what would such an add say?
WANTED: One girl between 3rd and 5th year. Likes Quidditch, sausages, and chocolate. Hates reading. Considers the school library to be haunted.
No. No. That would not do.
She basically just described a female version of her cousin.
Even if he was here with her instead of Merlin knows where collecting nuts, she still wouldn't be able to talk to him about the things she needed to talk about.
Sure he would listen, try to help, but he would be just as lost as she, and that would be no help.
This time, the girl in question had to be a girl.
A real girl.
One who liked real girl things.... like flowers and rainbows and whatnot.
Note to Maddie: Hang out with some girls once in a while!!
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04-08-2008, 08:21 PM
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| Kneazle
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: England.
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I think she just needs a Tree Boy. Not a girl.
Can't wait to read more. I love this. ^__^
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04-08-2008, 11:11 PM
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| DoM Veela
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nerissa M. Tate Sixth Year x8
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YES! NEWUPDATE
xD
I love Maddie almost as much as I love Bella Enough said
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04-08-2008, 11:26 PM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Vera Brinley Thanatos Gryffindor Graduated Hogwarts RPG Name: Mandrake Beery Slytherin Fifth Year | Anashti l Brat Pack l Sally & Dr. Finklestein
Oh poor Maddie. I'm sure she'll find a friend, who could not love her? oh and btw PAMS!!!
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04-09-2008, 12:25 AM
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| Knarl
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jack Fletcher Fourth Year | Dumbledore's Licorice Snaps Chipotle! NEW READER.
Ohhh, I think this is very clever. *nods* Something about it I can't quite place....but it's quite original and interesting. Can't wait to read more!
Taylor
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04-09-2008, 12:25 AM
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Even if he was here with her instead of Merlin knows where collecting nuts
LMAO! Update soon, puhlease
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