You know, you're doing good. I have to say, you have grown in your talents. I know that must be weird, but its true. I loved it, it was great. Keep it up, and I want a post asap... oh yeah. Go check out my thread... I think something might interest you.

i think some how dumbledore sent that letter just when harry saw it an we is lilly james sirius and dumbledore
that was really good please post a lot more soon its getin good
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: sirius

Awesome! Pams!

Thanks Otts! I wanted to do something with the start of the chapter, dark times lie ahead And you're never late, and if you are I expect it's Teddy getting upto his tricks .
The LJ is funny, i'm not sure why, but it is.
Ah, the questions. If i told you i would have to shoot you . And what do you mean, "Manipulating your readers," I would never do such a thing! I have it all planned right upto the point of Rons death...tehee. Nah, seriously, this is all planned.

Thanks Lottie, you are also getting great at writing. Talking about you're fic, I bet Otts will love what happens at the end of the last post

Could be, or maybe it couldn't

Thanks! It really means alot.

Now, should i give you all a new post? Should I? Lets see what i can do!
@1i

”Is the plan ready?” A cold voice said.
”Master, it should be in action by tonight, the child won’t know what hit him.”
”Perfect, with no Dumbledore, he’s weak and pathetic, it’s only a matter of time before he get what he deserves,” the cold voice continued and let out a high pitched cackle. He walked over to ladder and shouted, “Are you sure they will not suspect this place, Lucius?”
”Of course not master, after all, I’m in Azkaban and Narcissa is at her sisters house.”
”If they find out, you will pay for the consequences,” the coldness said cruelly. He had wanted the Malfoy family to pay the consequences a year ago, but the slimeball turned on the Mudblood lovers and did them a favour.
”So, in less than twelve hour’s time, Potter will be getting a taste of his own medicine. Let’s make sure it hurts, seeing as its sixteen years late.”

”Harry!” A boy shouted.
Opening his eyes, Harry noticed that the whole of the boys dormitory were crowded around him.
”Harry, are you alright?” Ron asked with fear on his face. “You were sort of, having fits, and saying things like, ’12 hours’. What was that about?”
Hearing 12 hours, he began thinking. What would happen in ten hours? It was a plan, but what sort of plan. Deciding to distract the other boys he shrugged and said, “I was having a dream, quidditch final. And 12 hours before the game, the team dissapeared.”
Ron eyed Harry cautiously, but knew that he was trying to cover up something. “Hey, Harry, do you want to see something I saw when you went to sleep. I’m sure you do, come on!” Ron said trying to get Harry on his own.
Harry understood what he meant and slowly got up, wiping the sweat of his face. As he put his glasses on, his eyes fixed on the two wands. He put both in his pocket, but decided against telling Ron about the contents of the message yet.

”So, what really did happen?” Ron whispered.
”I, I was him again. Something’s going to happen in twelve hours, a plan.” Harry said fearfully.
”Harry, do you want to go talk to someone? We could apparate and find the Order. Or we could go to the head master, what do you think?” Ron said, preparing to go on a journey.
”Okay, lets go and see the headmaster, I’ll tell him about what I saw.” Harry said, putting on his robes.
They walked in silence, until they arrived at the gargoyle.
”What’s the password?” Ron said looking at Harry.
As soon as Ron had said that, a strange feeling came into Harry’s head. He looked at the gargoyle and said, “Peruvian Vipertooth.”
The gargoyle sprung to the side and let Harry walk into the spiral stairway. As they reached the office door, Ron was about to knock when the door sprang open. Out came a red faced Rufus Scrimgeour, who jumped at the sight of Harry and Ron.
“What are you doing?” He snarled.
”I’d like to speak to Professor Orios.” Harry said, standing up to him.
”Go on then, he’s in there,” he said, then disappeared.
”How did he do that? I thought you couldn’t apparate in Hogwarts,” Ron said as he walked into the room.

I gots more but I dont want to post everything and then be stuck for ages. And now, i really need to go to bed if i want to come on SS in the morning. If i do then i will def' post more!
@1i

PAMS!
Wait, go ahead and take your time, this is so awesome! You can take as much time as you want and i will still be here waiting. I love this fic!

Peruvian Vipertooth...hmm...now why does that sound like I should remember it? *Teddy smacks Ottery for being so forgetful* I'm sorry I'm sorry I read a lot of fics and I write my own by the end of the day it's a miracle I remember my own name...

So anyways, I'm glad you posted...I was going through a dry spell actually no one was updating their fics...school really can take a toll but I know what you mean about going through a dry spell totally sucks.

Okay, so Harry knows something but we don't know what...and now you can apparate in Hogwart's... uh oh... Scrimgeour being angry though I can totally understand...and I love how you write Ron and Harry's friendship, people always miss that...but don't forget Hermione, it is a trio...but I like Harry & Hermione moments and Harry and Ron moments too, people think that they're always together...give them some room to breathe even...

PAMS when you can...I'll be here...

Thanks, so you dont want a post? I'm going to hold you to that, hehe. I have some stuff typed up and i said i was going to post it earlier, so it will be coming soon...

Peruvian Vipertooths were mentioned earlier in this, but i dont blame you for not remembering. You have written how many fics since this started? Lets just say Scrimgeour is going to be stuck for awhile, hehe. Hermione wont be away, the boys needed a bit of, boys time.

So, i said i would post earlier, but i was lazy and had to go to school. Now i'm watching Johnny English, which rocks. I so love the DB9!
Enough chit-chat Post next.

”You can’t. Before, it just wouldn’t let them, but then that would be a danger to the students. So now, if anyone tries, it sends them directly into the middle of the forest. And we all know what’s in the forest.” Fide Orios chuckled. “He came asking me to resign from running the school, and let him do it.”
Harry’s face turned from fear to horror. He couldn’t stand being with that man for a long time, it was just not possible!
”Good job you turned him away then, isn’t it.” Harry said.
”I agree 100%. So, what brings you to my office in these hours?”
”Professor, Harry had a vision,” Ron said, stopping Harry from the trouble. “He heard something about a plan, in 12 hours it’s going to happen. The head looked at his watch and saw that it was 4am. Suddenly fear came upon his face.
”Harry, what time is the DA meeting tomorrow?” He asked.
”At 4pm, but wait. That’s twelve hours from now.”
”Don’t worry, I will be in the meetings, and so will a few other teachers. Nothing should go wrong. Now, can you tell me some more information about this, vision?”
”I was him; I saw everything from his eyes. There was a man, he was familiar.”
”Who, can you describe him?”
”Malfoy.”
”That cannot be right, Malfoy is in Azkaban, maybe it was someone else. Harry, I want you to get a good nights sleep. And as soon as you wake up tomorrow, if you feel anything different, I want you to come see me, ok?”
”Yes Professor,” Harry said, feeling that it was time for him to go back to the common room.
“Good night professor.” Ron said whilst walking out. The returned back to the dormitory in silence. Everyone had returned to their beds. As they were getting in bed, Ron broke the silence.
”Was it Malfoy?”
”It looked like it, but it could be a mask, or even polyjuice, to disguise them. I’m going to try to sleep now; maybe I will see some more things. See ya,” Harry said, climbing into his bed.
”Night, mate,” Ron said trying to put the information Harry gave him together. “So in 12 hours, a plan is going to happen, with Malfoy?” He whispered to himself. He then suddenly fell back on his bed, a moment later snoring.

Not that long, but it adds onto the previous post!

O_O What is going on! NO, dont do it, not harry.. not harry! Okay ali, u got me all omg, so tell me... what is going on? PAMS!

~Lottie

Okay so uhm...what's going on here?

Just like that they go to bed? I think you're trying to mislead us...we're supposed to expect an attack at the DA meeting but...something else is going to happen...

Still...did Lucius escape? *Rhetorical* I mean...he could have escaped...Sirius did it...and it's not like the Dementors are there...maybe he paid his way out of Azkaban?

Still...hmm...now you've got me wondering...

Well, post soon...don't forget Hermione and give us some action...and yeah, I do write too many fics...LOL *Planning another* LOL

Interesting. Very interesting. Keep writing!

OH, Can't wait to see what's going to happen! PAMS soon!

Don't do what? You think I will kill Harry, well. Something is going to die, thats all I'm saying.

Mislead you? Me? I would never do such a cruel thing Something else, but what?
For Lucius' case, one question. What is actually guarding Azkaban?
You want action? There's going to be some action in the next few posts, including a death.

Thanks, I aim to please,
Thanks, I think you might like the next few posts

Post next...I think...

The song of the bird, so familiar, woke Harry in the morning. The sunshine blazed through the windows and lit the dormitory. It seemed that everyone had woken up, and left the room. Just as Harry stood up the door of the room swung open, and in came Ron.
”You awake?”
”Seems so,” Harry yawned.
”Do you want to go and see Orios or are you okay?”
”I’m okay, for now. Let’s see what happens in the DA meeting…We need to go and tell the people about the meeting.” He said jumping up.
”No need, Hermione sorted it all. And don’t worry; I didn’t tell her about last night, do you think we should?”
”Hmm, she’d be upset if she found out from someone else, so. Yeah, we should.”
Harry got changed quickly, stuffing the two wands into his pocket whilst Ron wasn’t looking. He emerged from the dormitory a few minutes later and nearly walked into Hermione.
”Harry, you’re awake. Are you ok?” She said smiling.
”Yes, I’m ok. But I need to tell you something. I had a dream last night, where I was him again. The main thing is that we need to be on our guard today, if there is an attack in the DA, we need to protect the newcomers.” He said.
”Attack? Dream? When did this happen? Have you gone to the headmaster?” Hermione said nervously.
”There is a plan happening, um, it was in 12 hours, but it works out to be the DA meeting time. And, me and Ron went to Professor Orios straight after it happened, he said that if anything strange happens today we should go to him.”
”Did anything else happen?” She asked. It seemed that she was angry that they hadn’t woken her, but she tried to hide it. After all, how could they?
”Nothing, well, we saw Scrimgeour, didn’t we Ron?”
”Wha, yeah, we saw him. Trying to take over Hogwarts,” Ron said. He hadn’t been paying attention and it showed. He had been acting different in the past few days.
”What’s that?” Ron asked pointing to the floor.
”It looks like it’s the ingredients for the polyjuice potion, they are all there. Wha-.”

”-Harry, I heard. What’s going to happen?” One of the second years said, pushing Ron out of the way.
”Oi, don’t push me, or you’ll be on the floor before you can get your wand out,” Ron said rubbing his shoulder where he had been hit. Harry, however, was feeling shaken by what the 2nd year had said.
”How did you know?” He said, eyeing the child.
”Hermione told us, she said that it will start at around 4pm. I just wanted to say hello, and see you there!” And with this, he ran off to his small group of strange friends.
”I thought he was talking about what I dreamt,” Harry whispered to Hermione and Ron. “Ron, are you okay?”
”Yeah, im fine, no thanks to that brat!” He said.

They walked down to the great hall, mainly to get Ron away from the child, but also for Harry. He hadn’t eaten yet and it was showing.

As they took a seat, the teachers all fixed their sight on Harry, Hermione and Ron. Could it be that Professor Orios told the other teachers to keep an eye on him? But funny, as soon as Hermione glanced over to the staff table, they all turned around. All, except for one. Professor Orios kept watching Harry carefully. He slowly stood up, and walked down towards Harry.
”Harry, how are you?”
Halfway through swallowing his toast, he managed to say “Fine, Professor.”
”Is anything bothering you after last night?”
”No sir,” Harry said, putting his food onto a plate. “When I woke up today, it seemed like it wasn’t that bad, but of course it was, I mean it is…”
”As long as you are okay, that’s all that matters. If you need anything, come straight to me.” He finished, walking out of the hall in the direction of his office.

”Everything ready?” Ron asked Hermione.
”Yes, all we need to do is get into the room. Actually, let’s wait until Harry finishes his breakfast, then we can go into the room and prepare everything.”
”Sure thing,” Harry said swallowing his last piece of toast. His picked up a banana and stood up. “Are we going then?”
”C’mon, we need to go before anyone slows us down.” Ron said. By anyone it was obvious that he meant the 2nd years. “There is something strange about those kids.”
”Which kids?” Harry asked.
”The ones who have been bugging you about the DA, and the one who hit me,” Ron said.
”Forget about it, they are probably just nervous because they are going to enter one of the famous Harry Potter’s defence clubs,” Hermione said smiling.
They walked rather quickly up to the seventh floor, passing the tapestry of Barnabas the Barmy. Harry walked passed it three times, seeing a door in his mind. From his imagination, it transferred into reality as they walked through the door into the room.
It looked similar to before, cushions were laid out on the floor, shelves were stacked with defensive books. It felt good to be back. Just as they sat on the cushions, the door swung open.

Hehe, just thought i would put a cliffie because...Well, no reason really

Ali... first to post... unless someone were to sneak in suddenly and steal all my thunder.

Okay, so I just read your post...Ali...what the devil is it with those kids? I swear they're freaking me out. Seriously...*has shivers* and what the devil they think they can just push my Ronniekins around...*glomps Ron and then drop kicks the midgets* Try that again and I'll do worse...*Ottery uses a word that rhymes with snitches*

You're trying to make us think they're going to attack the DA aren't you? You're trying too hard Ali, you're trying to disguise something...who's really in danger? *Ottery is the master of the game*

So, post when you can... *is wary* o_O I'm keeping on eye on those kids no matter what Ali...come near my Ron you'll see why I'm the HBP...take my lessons in meanness from :simm:

Steal your Thunder... never Ottery. Otts got a point, I don't trust those second years. OMG, there DE in disguise... caching... I know I'm right. No really, am I on to something, the Headmaster is on it too. I'm getting all types of ideas now. NO really, crud... the game... gtg.. L8r ali. Its great papi, keep it up... huggles.

~Lottie

I don't trust those second years too theres something about them and the head master he seem's a bit weird too i thought he might've called the order but i guess not
pams soon

ME EITHER!

PAMS!!!!!!!

*Ottery shares his thunder with Lottie* Taste like chicken...Baboomtish!

No one trust second years... *Ottery leads a charge against them* But the one who hit Ron's mine...the little punk!

The kids? The weak second years who dont know the difference between a patronus and a potato? Mabye
1 Thing, you admit to being Snape?

They're not, are they?
Hmm, I like the way you think. Could it be true?...I'm not telling
It sounds like you are against the kids.


I'm upset that you all think that the kids are bad, they are only children, aren't they? Do I want to be mean? Or should I give you a post?
Ahh, it'll be even more mean once I give this post, hehe

Me likes that smilie,hehe
So, A few of you guessed something would happen. Be assured that a death will occur in the next few posts

The two Dark Arts Professors walked into the room, looked around and said something amongst themselves. They muttered a spell and looked around the room, almost like searching for someone. After a minute, they turned around and greeted Harry.
”Hello you three, everything planned for today?” Professor Quarterman asked.
”Yes sir, we also have some books which will help us. It should be fine,” Hermione said.
”That is great; we will be keeping an eye on things, just to make sure that things don’t get out of hand. Is that okay with you, Harry?”
”Of course sir, and after last night, we need protection.” Harry said whilst brushing the dust of a book. The professors looked at each other, and then walked towards the door again.
”Harry, I hear that you can produce a patronus. If you need anything, focus on a teachers face, and send the patronus. This will be quicker. We will be coming back in around an hour’s time, for the start of the meeting.” Professor Sawyer said, opening the door. With the final word, they both exited from the room and left the three all alone again.

“I can’t wait for the DA to come back, it was great last time,” Hermione said trying to start a conversation.
”Yeah, but this time, I’m going to beat you,” Ron said looking at Hermione. She let out a giggle, and turned to the bookshelf. A slight grin grew on Ron’s face whilst Harry just stared at them.
“Hermione, did you actually tell the new people how to get into this room?” Harry said.
”It’s pretty simple. Anyway, I told them to come in groups. That way it would be better for them, and for us.” She said lowering a book just enough to show her eyes.

The door burst open and in appeared a few of the old faces. Colin and Dennis Creevey, the Patil twins, and the new Ravenclaw girl walked in.
”Hello,” she said nervously to the three. “I’m Orla Quirke.”
”It’s nice that you turned up, I’m sure you know who we are.” Hermione said with a smile. “I think it’s about time for the meeting to begin, that way, after an hour or so we can go to the Halloween feast.”
Right on time, the two teachers came into the room, doing the same spell as they did earlier. They walked up to Harry and told him that he was ready to start.

The door was about to be sealed, but it was opened again, by the 2nd years, Steven Cuthbert and Natasha Drewney. They ran into the room, sweat and tears on their face on their face.
”Death Eaters,” they cried. “Outside, we saw them through the windows.”
The room’s atmosphere changed from happy, peaceful, to everyone screaming and crying.
”Harry, escort these to the common rooms. I suggest you set of now, and keep your wand out. We’re going to see what is happening.” Professor Sawyer said loudly. Then, both professors burst out of the room and stormed away.
”Everyone, listen.” Harry said but the volume of the room didn’t lower.
”Sonorus,” Hermione muttered with her wand below Harry’s throat.
”Everyone shut up. Ok, all seventh years take your house back to your common room. Keep your wands out at all times. Is that understood?” Harry roared.

They all nodded so it seemed that it was clear. They all exited the room, and Harry decided to send the Gryffindors to their common room and then return to the room of requirement to get some items. After a few minutes, Harry, Ron and Hermione returned to the room expecting to find it empty. But instead, two Gryffindors were sat in the corner.
”Harry, we thought you had left us, we were so scared,” they said.
”C’mon,” Ron said waving with his hand at them. “It’s not safe, you need to get out.”
”I don’t think so, Weasley. We won’t be the ones going out, but the Mudblood, you and Potter have an interesting night ahead. And, no need fighting back. You’re defenceless.” The male said.

Hey Ali I keep meaning to stop in, and I'm as slow as dirt, but I wanted you to know that I was here! I hope to catch up before you finish! hehe

Lissy

<< this is the doof and he is my favorite! Lissydoof

I know you didn't just...*takes out wand* Crucio...

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo better be those 2nd years Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooo

Not on your life!!!!!!!!!!!! As Evil as Snape yes, but not EVER Snape

OMG... I so didn't expect that... NOT! Well, I dont think that went very well. The teachers are in it, I know it. I have a bad feeling about all of this. OMG... lol! No really, I like it, now stop with the cliffies... jezz! lol, I loved it, keep up the good work papi. Curfew coming soon, so thats why this is short. Anyways... huggles and adios!

~Lottie