i said i would post, and surprisingly, i have. anyway, here is the post, it might not be that good, im too tired to make it better
anyway, here it is

’Wake up, you’ve only got an hour to get ready,’A voice screamed from downstairs. Harry lifted his head up and looked out of the window. The sun was shining brightly and birds were flying, visiting each others nests. It was the perfect day, nothing could go wrong…
’WAKE UP NOW,’ the voice shouted again,’ unless you want me to get you out of bed.’
Harry looked around and was surprised to see that Ron had slept through the screams.

’Oi, Ron, wake up’ Harry said prodding Ron.
’Smicholate,’ he said suddenly,’ oh, it’s only you Harry.'
’Who did you expect, the tooth fairy?’ Harry asked with a grin. ’C’mon, we should be down by now, the wedding starts in fifty minutes.’
‘Mornin’ Harry,’ Ron yawned until he realised what Harry had just said. ’What? Fifty minutes, Mum will kill me.’ He added running out of the room.

After Ron and Harry had a slice of toast each they had to get a couple of boxes to take to the wedding and then get changed. Ron had to wear some navy blue dress robes whereas Harry wore jet black robes.
The celebration was going to take place on a big plot of land outside the village of OtterySt.Catchpole.

When everyone was ready, they took a portkey to Stoatshead hill, where they would be meeting with the rest of the people.
Ready to leave from the Weasleys house were Harry, Hermione, Ron, Ginny and Lupin. Hermione had said that her parents had been invited and would be getting there with Mr and Mrs Weasley.
When they arrived at the venue everything looked in order, seats were neatly placed on the mown grass. A number of people were already sat down waiting for the wedding to start. Harry recognised Gabrielle, Fleur’s sister dressed in a silver dress.
All that was needed now was the Bride and Groom, who appeared after ten minutes. Bill was wearing dress robes which were a dark shade of red. Fleur, on the other hand was wearing a stunning silver dress, like her sister.
Seeing the couple arrive, Charlie pulled out a muggle camera and started taking photographs whilst the sun was high in the sky.
Just after the last photograph had been taken, a scream filled the ears of everyone.
’Wands out, we don’t know who this is yet,’ Lupin said but it was soon answered. The dark mark was shining in the sun. ‘Ok, we need to get the Grangers to the burrow, Molly can you do that?’
’Yes Remus, but what about the kids?’
’Yes, they should go with you as well.’
’No, we are staying’ they all said in unison.
Mrs Weasley disaparated with Fleur’s parents, Gabrielle and Mr and Mrs Granger.
’You don’t think they have killed anyone yet,’ Ron asked looking pale.
’No, everyone is here.’
’POP’
There in front of everyone appeared…(im not gunna tell you, )

even though im tired i couldnt help it if ya look at the post above you might be able to work out who it is, now i reely got to got to bed, its 1AM and i got a 7AM start.
cyas
@1i

hehehe....yah i guess writing fleur should be fun...but i wouldn't try that...it would be too hard for me.....
ahaaaan...and outdoor wedding.....do love them.....

*Ottery falls off his rocker* :evillaugh It's Sirius isn't it? :evillaugh

Anyways...you're soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beyond sweet, and really nice Ali to post for us so late at night having to wake up so early the next day *turns to the readers* Everyone say "Thank you Ali" *everyone says thank you* You're too sweet really you are. Not only that I'm really loving your story.

I liked that you actually gave us descriptions of the clothes, a lot of people just skip over that...I'm sure Ron looked dashing and Harry looked smart in their suits. And an outdoor wedding, and Fleur's silver dress *Ottery's daydreaming* Sorry where were we? Oh yeah...

Look I'm in your story

I love Ron... He's tooo cute...

Post more when you can Ali...I love your story...and I know I'm totally off, I went back to the first chapter post to see if I could read a clue or something...but...let's face it...long day and Ottery's not so smart... ahehehe

Heyy
You read my story so I'm goingng to read yours!! LOL
I really like it,post more soon!

thanks everyone,
this might refresh your memo for the person
notice anything ^^^, i might post tomoro, cyas
@1i

I have but I'm not gonna spoil it for anyone who hasn't figured it out yet.

hey people, heres the next post:

There in front of everyone appeared Alberforth Dumbledore.

He stood in front of Lupin and nodded, and then turned to Harry and handed him a package. Harry took the long box and opened it. Inside it was the wand of Alberforth’s brother. The wand belonged to Albus Dumbledore.
‘Harry, I want you to keep this, Albus would want you to,’ he said as Harry saw what was inside the package.
’Thanks,’ Harry said with a tear in his eye.
The meeting was stopped as another scream filled everyone’s ears. Looking in the distance many Death Eaters were hiding in the dark.
’Everyone, listen, use stunners on them, but, in extreme situations, use stronger spells,’ Lupin said, looking at everyone in turn.
Harry stuffed the box and wand in his pocket and pulled his own wand out.
Many death eaters were running into the crowd where the wedding was taking place.
’Stupefy,’ Lupin shouted, sending a flash of red light into the death eaters. Everyone did the same Lupin and sent stunners into the distance, but the death eaters were not dumb, as a cold voice shouted, ’Stupefy’, hitting Ginny in the face. Splat! Ginny had just fallen face first onto the floor, but Harry noticed she was bleeding and unconscious.
’Ginny, wake up,’ Harry said, ’Remus, do something.’
‘Episkey,’ Lupin muttered, wand pointing at her nose, and the bleeding stopped. ‘This way, she won’t be in much pain, Enervate’.
Harry understood what he meant; better to heal her while she was unconscious.

Too busy with things to do, i'll try to get some done laters.
just dont kill me,

hahaha.....i wont' kill u...promise
awww ginny's hurt......tht's too bad......
post whenever you feel like it....

wowww, i hadn't read fics all week coz of my tournie. cool posts. please let ginny b okay. that cold voice, is it voldie? PAMS
Roshni

As always I'm late Ali. Sorry. Can't keep up with all the fics I'm reading and trying to write. But I'm always here. I like your story a lot, I don't mind romance so much, but I think I'm sick of it, partially. There's no action in romance stories, other than the weepy, emotional kind and very few people can pull that off very well, so you can't begin to imagine how glad I am you're story is not like that. But you should still throw out some love or something...LOL You're so mean to ruin the wedding...

*glomps Ron* Speaking of which...where is he?

Post when you can Ali, and you really surprised me there...I wasn't expecting Aberforth, considering we were busy talking about someone else earlier...

You're a sly one Ali. Back laters. Still loving your story and I'm definately loving the action.

Yay, i can live

arr, no, or mabye it is? let me check,:evillaugh

its going to get worse

well, you might be upset with the next post which will be coming out sometime.
@1i

come on post some more i have to print out the fanfiction on count i have not much time on here as it is

:sorcerer: You better...someone has to finish this fic, and I don't fancy doing it, I have enough already...LOL

Ali please don't kill Ron *begs* Seriously, I swear if I read another story where they kill my Ronniekins...*crying* I'll stop reading all fanfics. Doesn't anyone love my Ronniekins? *glomps*

Post when you can Ali...but don't kill Ron!

0%%$

what exactly do you mean.

Ottery, things will get better, i think.
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Anyway, heres the last bit of this chapter.

She opened her eyes and sat upright. ‘Wha…what happened?’
’You were hit by a stunner, but you’re ok now,’ Harry said reassuring her.
’Ginny, you have to go back to the Burrow, if Molly knew…’ Lupin told her.
’But, why can’t I stay?’
’Safety, It should only be the Order fighting the Death Eaters. Charlie,’ Lupin said, calling Charlie, ‘can you take Ginny home.’
’Sure Remus,’ Charlie said, taking Ginny by the hand.
They dissapeared from view but then another stunner barely missed Ron.
’Crucio,’ shrieked the cold voice. A scream was heard in the distance again.
’Look, this is not safe for anyone, we need to get to the Burrow as quickly as possible,’ Lupin said looking alarmed. He pointed his wand at where the fight was taking place and sent a silver shadow in the direction.
A man in a hood appeared near Hermione’s head and put his hand over her mouth, but Hermione, being very good at nonverbal spells, just stunned the man. When his hood was taken off Lupin stumbled. Fenrir Greyback had just tried to bite Hermione.
’Stupefy,’ the cold voice said, but this time it was more clear, louder and maybe even closer. Harry stretched his arms trying to reach it but he collapsed on the floor.

’But what can we do, where can we search; he’s bound to have hidden him somewhere special, maybe even unplotable ,’ said a stern voice.
’But we can’t leave him; we don’t know what they’ll do to him. We need to find him.’
’We have no choice. We need to think of all the possible places where he could be. Maybe Spinners End, Severus’s house.’
’Why would Snape want the kid? I think that we need to check the Riddle house; I heard that you-know-who uses it as a hideout.’
’What about the Malfoys, they have a mansion large enough to hide a student.’
The door opened and a red haired person entered the room.
’Any news?’
’We are going to search three houses, hopefully, we will find him in one of them. We will be searching the Malfoy manor, Snape’s home and Voldemort’s hideout. But we need to have teams, and an easy way of communication.’
’But you can find him cant you? Mums really upset.’
’We will try our best; this is a difficult time for your mother.’

The Sun, no, a reflection, Harry tried to lift his arms but a weight was pressing them down. Blinking, the room came into view. Harry noticed that the kitchen of the Burrow was full of Ministry workers, who were all stood still looking upset.

‘What happened?’ Harry said noticing that everyone looked upset about something.
’Harry, we can’t tell you now,’ Lupin said looking pale. ‘Go join Ginny and Hermione in Ron’s room.’
Harry stood up and walked out of the room. Walking up the stairs he tried to remember what had happened. He opened the door and the first thing he saw was two teary eyed girls. When Ginny saw Harry she turned around and went bright red but Hermione looked at him.
’Have they told you?’ She asked him.
’No,’ he answered, ‘but you two know, don’t you, tell me.’
’Ron has gone. They took him, the death eaters.’
‘Wha… why’ Harry managed to say as he ran out of the room back to the kitchen. He jumped down the stairs two stairs a time.
’Why didn’t you tell me? What are you going to do about it?’ He said landing into the kitchen.
’We were going to tell you, and we are going to search to find him. We will be searching the Malfoys home, Riddles home and Snapes’ home.’
’Snape,’ Harry spat. ‘What’s he got to do with it?’
’We don’t know yet.’ Mr.Weasley said.
’But we need to go to 12 Grimmauld Plc to get a mirror that lets us talk to each other whilst we’re searching for him.’
’I’ve got it,’ Harry said. He ran upstairs and came back down with a shiny board.
’Ah, Harry, that’s perfect. You see, James and Sirius had them to talk whilst in detention and I had one to see what they were doing. Now I think we are ready to go and search.’ Lupin said smiling.
’POP’
Rufus Scrimgeour had just apparated into the Weasleys home. He looked tired but gave a weak smile as everyone looked at him.
’Harry, can I have a word with you,’ Rufus said.
’Yeah.’
‘In private,’ he said walking out of the room with Harry. ‘Harry, are you going to be free tomorrow because I have a daily prophet interview for you. Just to say that you support the ministry because many people are very scared after Dumbledore died. What do you think?’
’My friend has just been kidnapped and all you can say is if I want to do an interview with some dumb old newspaper about something which I don’t believe in. You work that out yourself.’ Harry roared.

Enjoy!
@1i
ps-Things will get better, they have to,:evillaugh

I just dont have the time to read this on the internet i'm am usually on the Big truck with my mom

cool.
I really should be posting now shouldnt i? But i might do later on. Im doin that halloween thing,hehe.
I'll post when i have time
@1i

They've kidnapped my poor Ronniekins... Noooooooooooooooooooooo *Ottery faints* Okay...we've got to save him... *Ottery rounds up the DA* OMG! I know they didn't... Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

I love your story Ali it was interesting before but its only getting more so. Wow, I loved the action, even if I think maybe you should have kept it up a little longer, maybe a few casualties... yes I know I'm a bloodthirsty reader... Seriously I'm loving your story. Go Harry *glomps* You're my hero. Now go save Ron.

My money's on Malfoy Manor...

i like this story much keep more please...

Very good! I didn't get to post this a while back, but I wanted to say that I love how you portray Fleur's accent! Very good! *applause* write more soon!

welcome cocogodessmegrly1, its nice you decided to read this

Thanks for all your comments
Im sorry i havn't update in like a week but all going well, i'll be able to post some more in around 20 minutes

@1i

Chapter 4- Hide and Seek
‘So when are we going?’ Harry asked walking back into the Burrows kitchen.
‘What happened with Scrimgeour, Harry?’ Lupin asked.
‘Nothing, now are we going or not?’
‘Yes, everything’s ready. But first we need to organise who’s going where.
‘Well, we need to contact Hagrid to get him to come and help us. Dawlish, Shacklebolt can you find Mad-Eye,’ Lupin asked.
’Yeah sure,’ they said and then disaparated.
‘What can we do to help?’ Bill asked.
‘Get as many people, try and get Charlie, your Father.’
Fred, George, Hermione and Ginny walked in wanting to find out what was going on.
‘When are you going to get him?’ Ginny asked.
’Now, we are just getting everyone ready.’
’We will all come,’ said all four of them at once.
’If you really want to, then it can be arranged. Now, where’s Aberforth?’
’Here I am, Remus,’ Aberforth said walking into the kitchen drinking some water. ‘Now who else do you need?’
’No one, we are ready to go, let me get Tonks,’ Lupin said and then walked out of the room to find her.

Whilst he was gone, Hagrid, Mad Eye Moody and
Mr.Weasley had entered the kitchen. Lupin re-entered the room two minutes later with Tonks ready to go.

’Ok, here’s how it will work. Bill, George, Hagrid, Alastor and Shacklebolt, you are going to go to Spinners End. Harry, Tonks, Me, Ginny and Hermione will search The Riddle House. And Dawlish, Arthur, Fred, Aberforth and Charlie will go to Malfoy Manner. Any questions?’ Remus asked.
No one said anything so Lupin pulled out of his pocket two mirrors. Harry, seeing Lupin do this pulled out his own mirror.

’We are going to go by portkey, to the Riddle House use this newspaper, to Spinners End, use this tea cosy supplied by Dobby, and for the Malfoys Home, use this box.’
Harry and Ginny let out a small laugh when they heard that Dobby had given them a tea cosy, but turned it into a cough as all of the Order looked at them angrily.

’Three…Two…One.’
They all grabbed their own portkey and were transported.
Harry’s head was spinning and then he landed on some cold earth.
’Ah, just as I expected,’ Lupin said pointing at the house because lights were shining brightly inside.’
’We need to contact the others, tell them about this, Harry, give me your mirror please.’
Harry handed the mirror over to Lupin and he looked into it and said clearly Alastor Moody. Then, Moody’s face just appeared in the mirror.
’Alastor, there are some lights turned on in the house, we will go in and inspect.’
’Fine, contact me if anything else happens, I will tell Dawlish about this matter,’ the face of Moody said and then disappeared.
’Lets go in,’ Tonks said, ‘we are just wasting time standing outside.’

Not really a lively post, but it fills you in.
@1i

Boy do I know that feeling... that's how I've felt lately about a lot of my posts...but that's the problem with this type of story posting you know? You can't just upload the whole chapter, and this stuff has to happen to advance the story...so don't feel bad, it's still interesting, and I can see the tension mounting...that's why Ginny and Harry laughed nervously.

I'm still worried for my poor Ronniekins though...

Anyways, you're story's good that's why we're all still reading...and don't worry about not posting all the time, you post more often than a lot of other people whose fics I read here on SS. Seriously.

By the way..... i luv this story...... i can't wait to read what happens....

hey....
u r going real nice......
oh and ottery...i love ronniekins...so dun loose heart....i think allucha loves it too...dun u?? *innocent face here*
oh and allucha: i luuuuuurrrrved ur halloween story.....

Theres no need to worry, or is there?

Thanks, there will be some more later on, hopefully soon.

aw...thanks alot,

So, thanks for your posts guys, they really mean alot. I decided to type up some more and i should hopefully post it soon.

Will Die, or will he be saved?