lol, kool post. tony almeida. like the name.
PAMS so we kno wat happens on Xmas day!!!
PAMS

Roshni

New reader here! I just loved this story! It is very well thought out and written. I love that you brought Sirius back, killed Nagini and Greyback! I can't wait to read more of your twists and turns although I must admit that your cliffies are raising my blood pressure to new heights!

you story is amazing! i love it and cant wait for more. plz post more

Thanks Shannon, it means alot that you're reading.
Ever heard of him? Well, his cover won't stay for long.
ooo, Xmas day, I wonder what'll happen.
Welcome Tatewin, it's great to know that you're enjoying this, but one thing. Me, cliffies? I'd never
Thanks, I hope to post more, just in awhile.

Ok, so here's what's happening. I have ideas ready for a next chapter and post ready, but earlier today I had to get an injection and my arm is really drowsy so it would be a pain typing up lotsa stuff. But I will try to post s'more in the next week because after next wednesday, I might not be able to update as regularly.

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Originally Posted by Aule
hehe..tony almeida
keep up the good work mate


Ever heard of him? Well, his cover won't stay for long.

Hehe..ever heard of him I love 24

what happened to mcgonagall?

Woohoo! Everything's so...happy... I love having Sirius back. He's awesome. Post more soon!

Woohoo, a fellow 24 fan. I've been using some names from there, Tony's is the most obvious one.
What do ya mean. For the moment, she's out of the picture, but she will be in soon.
He is, ain't he. He is the bestest. *thinks of joining the Sirius club thing*

I finally managed to get a post ready, *feels stupid* so it should be coming up soon. Stupid ms Word messed up so I had to do losta weird things, but the post's still normal.

Chapter 10- The Real Fake.

“Is it in place?” Harry asked.
“Yes master, as soon as the boy touches it, it shall take him to his doom. What if someone else touches it before the boy?”
“Ah, my ingenious plan. The charm will only be activated after the wrapping is removed. It should be him who arrives.”
“That is great sir; it looks like this is going to be a good Christmas for us.”
A tear trickled down Harry’s face, but he wiped it off his rather flat nose. “Excellent, this will be the last Christmas he will live to see.”
“But sir, do you think he will be able to get away from us?”
“How dare you say that, the mighty Lord Voldemort will not be beaten by a sixteen year old child. You disgust me.” Harry spat.
“I’m am terribly sorry sir, I beg for your forgiveness.” The small dark haired man said, getting down on his knees.
“Avada Kedavra,” Harry said, sending a burst of green light onto the man kneeling, making him collapse on the floor.
A small rat shaped man wals walking and jumped at the sight of the corpse.“What is it Wormtail?” Harry’s cold voice said.

Bright sunshine, lighting up the room. A gently touch on the ankles, with a heavy load on the feet. The cold sweat trickled down his face as his arms reached out to put his glasses on. His first view of the room was blurry; all he could see was a pile of boxes, all in different colours.

“Harry, are you awake?” Ronald Weasley asked.
“Yeah, Merry Christmas, Ron, presents!” Harry said jumping out of his bed into his load of boxes.
“Happy Christmas, look. Mum finally got it right; she gave me an orange jumper with the Chudley Cannon logo.”
Harry began opening a small box with a book in it. He suspected it was from Hermione but checked the note attached.

Merry Christmas Harry
It was great to see you again. I hope you enjoy your present just as much as Prongs and Moony did.
After all, we did it, so why can’t you?

Padfoot

“Ron, look,” Harry said holding a book in his hands. On the front were a cat and a unicorn, with big bold letters saying ‘Animagi for Dummies’. At the bottom was a warning note saying that no one should try becoming an animagus by themselves. Funnily enough, this was partially scribbled out with the name ‘Prongs’ written next to it.

“Wow!” Ron said looking at the book. Do you think you could become one?”
“I dunno, I guess we could try,” Harry said going into open his other presents.
“Merry Christmas Harry and Ron,” Hermione said walking into the room in her pyjamas.
“Merry Christmas Hermione, thanks for the chocolates,” Ron said.
“Hi Hermione, that Quidditch book is awesome,” Harry said flicking through pages of a quidditch book Hermione had given him.

Okay, so I haven't been here much... sorry. But I haven't abandoned your story...and how sweet of you to notice I have five fics Ali, and ignore that I have a lot of bad grades because I'm writing them...

I can't believe you didn't show us the dragons Ali, that's so wrong...I love dragons any time you can write them in you should...

I think you should have written out all of Sirius' adventures...you just told them, but I think it would have been more exciting to read them as a flashback *Ottery is obsessed with flashbacks*

*Intro flashback to Ottery writing this post* What should I tell Ali? I was busy fighting a ring tailed lemur? Or a horntailed snagglerock? Or an elephundronebeetle.

*back to the present*

Okay Chapter 10 has me confused? Harry is talking to Wormtail as if he's Voldemort...I would have thought it an accident but you did it throughout the first half of the post...who Harry is he? A doppelganger?

And Animagi for Dummies... You're too funny Ali, keep up the story mate I'm still reading. I'm just slow sometimes...

Suhweet book! lol Wish I had it. PAMS!

kool book. animagi for dummies
PAMS so we see him opening that present (although i hope nothing bad)

Roshni

i agree

very good Ali, I loved it. . .keep it up

Lottie

The dragons, well, if I showed them, then you would have expected the roar.
As for Sirius' flashbacks, who say's they won't come in. Well, that's coz they might be able to be made. But maybe in a separate fic *ideas for lotsa weird stuff*
Ah, it seems that Word has been stupid. I highlight the whole thing and copy, it leaves out a line. Anyway, yeah. At first I was going to make someone else say the words *won't say who, but it's pretty obvious* but then I thought how about do it this way.
*gives you it* But it's only for dummies, you're not a dummie, are yeh
Something bad. Me? I'd never do such a thing. you wait and see
Thanks Lottie!

Hello Um, yeah. Post, today, hmm. Maybe, um, ok

Yup, its a post.

“Hey Harry, where did you get that book from?” Hermione said.
“The Animagi one? Sirius got me it,” Harry said unwrapping Hagrid’s present. The usual rock cakes were in one container with Hagrid’s special treacle.
“I tried getting it out of the library, but Madam Pince said that we weren’t allowed to get it without a teacher’s permission. I was going to go to Professor McGonagall today.” Hermione said looking at the pages carefully.

“Look,” Harry said opening a small green box wrapped in black paper. “What is it?”
The object glinted as the sun shone on it, but then made a low rumble and glowed blue for a second.
“What was that?” Ron said looking at the golden object.
“It’s, well…The locket?” Harry said going out to pick it up.
“Harry, stop!” Hermione said putting her hand in front of Harry’s so he couldn’t touch the locket. “You saw it glow, and the noise it made. I don’t think it’s real.”
“So what if it glowed, wouldn’t that prove that it is a real magical object?”
“Magical object, yes. The horcrux, no,” Hermione said sadly.
“Is it a portkey?” Ron asked, reaching for his wand.
“It could be, we need to take it to Orios,” Hermione said, going to wrap the locket in the paper it was.
“Wait, if it’s a portkey, won’t it work through the paper?” Harry said, finally believing Hermione and blocking her from it.
“Yes, it would. We need someone to go get it,” Hermione said, she looked at Ron, then at Harry.
“I’ll go, that way I could tell Professor Orios about it,” Harry said. He slowly put his robes on and ran out of the common room, on his way to the headmaster’s office.

“So, your mum gave you a quidditch jumper,” Hermione said trying to make conversation.
“Yeah, it’s so cool, look,” Ron said pointing to the Chudley Cannon logo. Did your parents send you anything?”
“Yes, they sent me a necklace, let me go get it.” Hermione said running in the direction of the girls dormitory.

Ron went back to opening his presents, but looked out of the window as he saw something strange happening. The sun, which was in the sky was getting covered by something round. It slowly moved until it was in the middle of the sun and the rays were shining out of the side.

“Hermione,” Ron said as she came back into the room. “Look at that.”
“Wow, if that’s what I think it is, we’re very lucky to see it. It’s a solar eclipse, ah.”
They both gazed at the eclipse for a moment and then the moon moved away and Ron looked at Hermione.
“Is that the necklace?” He asked pointing to the thing in her hand.
“Um, yes, it is. Look, if you shine it in the sun you can see the crystals reflect it all.”
“That’s beautiful,” Ron said staring at her.

“Where is it Harry?” Someone said walking up the stairs.
“It’s in the dormitory, c’mon.” Harry said walking into the boy’s dorm.

Professor Orios, accompanied by Lupin and Sirius looked at the locket.
“Well, it looks like its safe, but it could be a portkey.” Lupin said.
“The locket, how did it get there?” Sirius said looking confused.
“You know about it?” Hermione said moving away from Ron.
“Well, partially. When my brother left the death eaters, he had that with him. He said that it was really special, but how did it arrive here?”
“Look, there’s a note.” Ron said picking up a piece of paper stuffed in the box. He carefully moved it out without touching the locket and read.

“The dark lord shall die, all with a touch.”

ohh. . . aww! wow, really interesting. . . I liked it! Well, I'll keep it short! Just keep up the good work Ali!

♥ Lottie

So Ali, I see you're up to your usual mischief...

So you've got some kind of evil plan is what you're saying? :litebulb: I think I kind of realized that at the end of this last post...so... but yeah, it's still a mystery. Keep it up.

*rubbing his eyes* Why Ali, you sly dog. Did you really think you could slip that past an old shipper like me? *madglomps Ron* He's too cute. The necklace Ron, the necklace...

So, Harry's possesed, or there's another Harry, or there's another dimension, or you're going to confundle us, or I have no clue, but I know you're up to something Ali... Just don't know what. Keep it up...er the writing not the trying to confundle us...some of us *like me* are easily bamboozled.

Thanks Lottie.
Me evil? I'd never do such a thing like kill everyone including Ron to see your reaction


I'd like to tell you, but it will come out in the next few posts. But until then, a post will come *is confusing own self now*

Just want to warn you that there is a semi-evil cliffy, so watch your step, but you won't have to wait long because I should be posting tommorow evening/ wednesday dawn

“Kreacher,” Harry said.
“What?” Sirius said.
“Well, Kreacher is on the search for the locket, so if he finds it, he’ll tell me.”
“Is he listening to you?” Sirius asked.
“Yeah, we made a deal. Kreacher, come out, come here, I want you now.” Harry said looking around.

Poof

A tall creature, with pointy ears stood in the middle of the room, accompanied by a short elf.
“Master wants Kreacher?” The tall elf said.
“Yes, Kreacher, did you sent me a locket?” Harry asked.
“No sir, we couldn’t find it, was just opening your present.” He said pointing to pair of socks in his hands.
Harry looked at Sirius, and then laughed.
“Dobby, do you like the socks?” Harry asked the other elf.
“Yes, Mr Potter, Dobby likes them lots.”
Kreacher seemed to only notice that Sirius was in the room and jumped, dropping his socks.
“You!” He snarled.
“It’s nice to see you too, Kreacher.” Sirius said with a grin. “I missed your manners whilst I was away. Nearly forgot how polite you are.”
Kreacher scowled at Sirius, and then looked at his new master, Harry.

“Hold on, if you didn’t die, then why did Kreacher obey my orders?” Harry asked looking really confused.
“Because I knew one day something would happen to me. I gave him the order of obeying anything you ever say, no matter what it is.” Sirius said, “But I still don’t know why he lied to you the night I died.”
“Master was busy, couldn’t let the Potter boy find out. T’was only a little white lie.” Kreacher said.
“Which could have cost my life,” Sirius said.

“Kreacher, Sirius, you can welcome each other another time, for now we need to check what will happen with this locket. You say that you didn’t send it?”
“No mister Loony,” Kreacher said glaring at Lupin.
“It’s Moony,” Lupin said looking at Kreacher, “so it is a trap then.”
“I guess so, and there’s no time better than the present.” Sirius said pulling his wand out.
“I knew you’d say that,” Lupin said. “Who wants to go and deal with him?”
They all said they would go, but it wasn’t possible.
“Fide, you need to stay with the school. Just in case their plan was to get you out of here.”
“Ok, but stay safe. Harry, take both wands.” The headmaster said.

Hermione said that she wanted to get changed and left the room, leaving the men alone. Harry and Ron got dressed in their outdoor clothes and got their wands ready. When Hermione returned, they were all ready to go.

“So, take hold of the locket in 3, 2, and 1, now!” Lupin said as he grabbed the locket.

Sirius, Ron, Harry, Hermione and Lupin began to disappear from sight, leaving the headmaster standing alone in the empty boys dormitory.
He was turning around and saw Hagrid’s treacle. He took a piece and put it in his mouth, realising after a few seconds that Hagrid had made it. His teeth were stuck! Luckily no students had seen him.

They were spinning in the air, with the sun flashing on them. After a few seconds they landed onto a large pile of earth. They had landed in front of a large house. But this house was familiar, for Harry had visited it in his fourth year. The last time he came here, he was nearly killed, and he felt that this time would be the same.

All the group stood up and tried to locate where they were, until they noticed a few tombstones. It was a grave yard.
“Excellent.” Lupin said.

wow! exellent. i love this fic its great. all the cliffies are giving me a headache lol
post more !

*gives you some paracetamol*
Thanks, hope yer headache gets fixed

Ok, I totally forgot to mention this, but I think I should. The reason I'm posting tommorow is that on Wednesday I'm going on holiday. I should be able to get internet access but I'm not 100% sure. Hopefully I can post whilst I'm away, but the worst is that you have to cope with the cliffie for 3 weeks

Okay Ali, you're posting too much, seriously, I can't keep up... give a guy a break even. Anyways, this is getting exciting again, so that's cool. Did I mention I love that Sirius is back? Because I do.

I think I spotted a bit of a problem though...uhm, Kreacher didn't get socks from Harry did he? Because then he would be free...wouldn't he? *goes back to reread* It's in the sentence where you say he dropped them...uhm, no.

Anyways, keep it up Ali, but not too fast...LOL you're killing me even. Back when I can.

EDIT: WTF!!!!!!!!!!! Wait, I didn't mean it Ali, you're leaving us for 3 weeks... Come back... hope you have fun. We'll miss you.

Thanks Ottery! Don't worry, after tommorow's post, it'll probably be a week or so before I can post, but I'll see. Maybe I won't post tommorow, let people catch up, it has been quite alot for me *thinks*

Eek, a problem *runs to check* no, because Harry wasn't Kreachers master, Sirius was.
Now I need to pack my bags, decide what to take, what to leave

heey mate. sorry i have been away for a while
story is getting on great, cant wait for another post

"He was turning around and saw Hagrid’s treacle. He took a piece and put it in his mouth, realising after a few seconds that Hagrid had made it. His teeth were stuck! Luckily no students had seen him."

HAHA..bloody brilliant