i dont get it whats up with lupin? is he under polyjuice potion? oh i never get things like this

omg!! what's wrong with lupin??
post soon pleaseee ali so we can all find out.
PAMS

roshni

What is going on? Has Lupin gone loony, or are his animal senses kicking in?

The wall was made so only a person with a wand could walk through, so muggles didn't just walk into it. Weird, I know, but thats me
Ah, I don't think so, but we never know. Once a wolf, always a wolf. Maybe that helped.

Lupin gone loony, Lupin gone Loony. This is what happens what happens when you eat too much sugar.

Thanks for all your comments, they made me . Sorry about not posting, exams are finished now so I have a week holiday. Hopefully will be posting more regularly. I'm having ideas for a HP crossover with Lost or 24. So I'll see what I do... Post next.

Soon enough, the door burst open and Fenrir Greyback emerged from the door. Lupin had called Greyback to him, with a wolf whistle. Fenrir Greyback had the wands of the trio dangling in his pocket. He also had a vial of pink liquid which looked like polyjuice potion.
”Remus, what brings you here?” Greyback snarled.
”Why is Harry’s wand in your pocket? Or a better question, why are they here?” Lupin said raising his arm at Fenrir.
”Kids, they wander off. Sometimes, they had to be punished for their relations actions. Did you know that she’s a Mudblood?” Fenrir said pointing at Hermione.

Lupin’s face turned pale as Fenrir mentioned children being punished for their relations actions. He raised his wand in the air and sent a stunner at Greyback. Greyback dodged and deflected the red beam at Shacklebolt.
”Oh no you don’t, sonny.” Shacklebolt said, sending a blue spell at Fenrir. Stuck, with no means of escape, he apparated.

Harry looked at Hermione, then Ron and finally Lupin.
”He’s got our wands, we need to get him.” Harry said.
”Harry, don’t worry. Did you try and apparate before we came?” Lupin asked.
”Yes, but it didn’t work. Why did it work for him?”
”Well, once you are more experienced at apparating, you can trick security measures. But sure enough, he will appear in a few moments.” Lupin said as a mini explosion occurred where Greyback was standing last. He reappeared and now he was trapped.
Lupin sent a spell at him, along with Shacklebolt and Harry. Greyback felt to the floor hitting his head on the wall. Remus walked up to the corpse of the Death Eater and emptied the pockets. He handed the trio their wands back, and poured out the vial of polyjuice potion on the floor.

With the noise of footsteps from the far door, Remus sent a patronus in the direction of the other members of the Order.
”It’s not safe, we should go. The others will understand the message. C’mon, before anyone else gets hurt.” Lupin said with a fearful tone, looking at the corpse of Fenrir Greyback.
They slowly walked out of the building through the fake wall in the burning room. After a short walk they were clear from any spells affecting the house.
Just before they apparated, Lupin looked at Harry.
”Well done, your dad would have been proud at the way you handled the situation today.” Harry smiled as a tear came to Lupin’s eye. With a flash, they were out of sight.

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They arrived at the Hogsmeade station and made their way back to the headmaster’s office. Whilst they were walking, the second group from the trip joined them and they walked together to the castle.

The crowded office of the headmaster was noisy. Many people from the ministry were stood at the desk, or looking around trying to spot the headmaster. As they entered the room, everyone became silent. Rufus Scrimgeour looked at Harry, and then Orios.
”Where have these children been?” He asked, glaring at Professor Orios.

Professor Orios looked at him and chuckled. He slowly made his way to his desk, took a seat and poured himself a glass of pumpkin juice. After finishing it, he cleared his throat.
”Rufus, I would say that it’s nice to see you, but should I? I’m guessing that you walked into my office with no permission, and now you demand to know where myself and a few of my staff and students were? We went on a trip, which doesn’t concern you. Now can you please leave? I want to have a word with the students, privately.”
Harry looked at Professor Orios in amazement. He had just kicked the minister of magic out of his office, and he was chuckling about it.

Scrimgeour face turned a violent shade of red as he was told to leave, but he did what he was told. With a few of his friends from the ministry, they walked out of the office whilst muttering something under their breath.

One more post till the next chapter, woohoo.

lol, awesome. Post more soon...

Okay, I so didn't expact that to happen...lol! NE ways... it was really good... keep it up papi... I love it, really is an action story...lol! *huggles*

~Lottie

Its turning out to one of the best fanfics Ive read on this site.

pams so was lupin transforming?

Thank You! I'm glad that you like it.

Thanks. Expect the unexpected, thats my motto...Well it isn't actually, but I thought that I would say that, so

Hey, thank you Aragon. That means a lot to me, I hope you enjoy it.

Nope, but he can contact a wolf with the high pitched whistle which irritates them.

So, first of all, thank you. The replies mean alot. Next up is the final part of this chapter, it's not that long, but it finishes it up. It should be on in a while
The next chapter is going to include the return of one of my favourite characters, it may not be canon, but I hope you all like it, because that character rocks... Now to begin the speculation about who it is, post soon...
@1i

”Now that we’re alone, do any of you care to tell me what happened?” Professor Orios said closing the door.
”Two students disguised as death eaters were in the school. They sent us to that place and Voldemort’s snake came after us.” Harry began.
”Came after you? What happened?” Orios said, sounding concerned.
”Harry beat it, he took a silver thing out of it,” Ron said.
”Silver…Could this be true.” The headmaster muttered. He walked up to Professor Sawyer and asked him something. He came back facing Harry, with a smile on his face.
”Harry, are you sure that it was a silver object?” He asked.
”Yes, we destroyed it, what ever it was.” Harry said looking at him.
”Harry, Harry, that silver object was a horcrux. You destroyed one of Lord Voldemort’s Horcruxes. This means that there are only 3 horcruxes left, the locket, the tombstone and the Hufflepuff cup. It is late, you need to go to bed, or celebrate.
You are one step closer to defeating the dark lord. You are doing very well Harry, with help from your friends, of course. But you can’t talk about this to other people, not even the DA. Tonight we learnt that we cannot trust anyone. Now, you need to go, before anything else happens. Goodbye.” Professor Orios said opening the door with a smile on his face.

Harry, Ron and Hermione were walking out of the office when Professor Sawyer caught up with them.
”Here you go,” he said handing them three bottles. “It’s a mix of butterbeer and pepperup. It tastes nice, go on.” He added, and then walked off.

”We did it!” Ron exclaimed, whilst taking a swig of the drink.
”We did, didn’t we.” Harry said. “I didn’t think it would be like that, but it worked.”
Hermione looked at them with a smile on her face, and slowly said, “We need to get to Gryffindor tower. Come on.”

They slowly walked back to their common room, and decided to go to sleep. They had done it, or partially. They could relax for a while, but something strange was on its way. The next month was going to be fun.

End of what ever chapter this is *lost count* chapter 8.

Well, that's good that they destroyed a horcrux! Only three to go.. Good post, hope to read more soon.

So Fenrir Greyback is dead, Harry's managed to destroy a horcrux, Professor Orios told off the ministry, am I forgetting something?

And this in just the last two posts? Dude... seriously, more happens in two of your posts than in the whole of my stories... color me jealous.

Keep up the great work Ali...more action and adventure. Funny you forgot the chapter number... I write mine on word on another computer so I keep everything backed up so...LOL I always know what Chapter I'm writing

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woww, great posts. the horcrux destroyed and greyback dead.
PAMS

Roshni

yes!!! How good... the actions... i luv it... what will happen next??? lol! Bye papi... *huggles*

~Lottie

Thanks for reading. 3 Till something major happens...I wonder what?

Thanks, Ottery. I can't start something and not finish it, or else there would be so many more cliffies and stuff.
I type the fic on word. I think I forgot it because this chapter has been long.
Thanky, I see that you like it?
Thanks Lottie. What next? I have no idea,

I have delayed this post for a while, but all I say is 24 is addictive. I've just finishing watching day 1 and I'm on day 2 at the mo'. I have a post coming up but my net is messing up, so if it doesn't come through, it should be up by tommorow.
@1i

Chapter Nine - An Unexpected Visit

Snow fell gently on the neat Hogwarts grounds. White blankets covered the many fields and students were having snowball fights.

”Ouch, that’s not fair! We said no face shots,” Hermione said wiping the snow of her face. Harry and Ron looked at her and laughed, then were both hit by a snowball.
”Ron, no cheating,” Ginny said piling up another snowball to throw at Ron. Luna slowly drifted behind her leaving a trail in the snow.
”Hey Luna,” Harry managed to say, before being hit by another snow ball.
”Harry,” Luna began, “Have you heard about what’s happening tomorrow?”
”What,” Harry said stopping the snowball fight. “What’s happening tomorrow?”
”I think it’s a surprise, but I heard the teachers saying that two quidditch teams are going to be coming to play at Hogwarts.”

Smack! Never stay unguarded when Ginny’s around.

”Two teams, who do you think they’ll be, Harry? Ron asked whilst making a snow barrier. “Do you think we’ll be able to play with them after the game?”
”Maybe, it depends who they are, and when they come. Do you think this is what Hagrid meant when he said that this week was going to be fun?” Harry asked.
”I hope it’s Chudley Cannons, but it could be anyone.”

The sun began to sink into the horizon and the students decided to make their way back to Hogwarts. Harry, Ron and Hermione took a chance and walked to Hagrid’s hut to question him about the surprise.
They knocked a few times but no one answered. You could hear fang howling from the inside and signs of the fire from last year were visible. Hagrid opened the door and let them inside, checking the door before closing it.

”Harry, Ron, Hermione, how are yeh all?” He asked whilst getting the kettle ready.
”We’re all fine, but we wanted to know what the surprise was. Do you know about it?” Harry asked.
”O’ Course I do, but it wouldn’t be a surprise if I told yeh, now would it?” Hagrid chuckled.
”We know about the quidditch match,” Ron said.

Hagrid looked at them and then took four mugs out of the cabinet. He pulled a plate of cakes out and then sat down.
”I should of knew, we can’t keep a secret from you. Remember the philosopher stone, eh? Well, there’s going to be more than a quidditch match, but I can tell yeh.”
”Please Hagrid.” Hermione said.
”No, I am not going to tell you about the surprise, because it wouldn’t be a surprise. You’re going to be in a shock when you see …”
”Yes, keep going Hagrid.” Harry said.
”Here, take your tea. Drink it before it gets cold. How have your lessons been so far?” He said trying to make some conversation.

Harry, Ron and Hermione looked at each other. So something else was going to happen, but what. They slowly drank their tea, staying away from Hagrid‘s rock cakes. Fang was resting on Harry’s knee, so Harry took a cake and slowly gave it to Fang. It looked like it was hard to get into, as he began biting it viciously.

”The lessons have been ok so far, the Dark Arts is weird. We’ve never had two teachers teaching us at the same time, but we’ve learnt a lot of good things.” Hermione said.
”We learnt some really cool stuff in potions.” Ron said.

pams please

Whats the surprise going to be? PAMS PLEASE!

Hehe, I'll try to do soon.
But then it wouldn't be a surprise, hehe.

Sorry I haven't updated in a while, I wanted to yesterday but school's just started again so I've been tied up with that. Hopefully, I can get a post in by wednesday. Test tommorow, oh poop

heyy, kool posts. been a few days since I came on here I think. Can't wait to read what the big surprise is. wonder wat is it :S
PAMS

Roshni

what is that??? Quidditch.. i luv it!!!! we shall see, we shall see... what will happen next. lol, keep it up papi... L8r, *huggles*

~Lottie

Ha ha...I loved that line. Totally awesome and like Fang to do that...I could just picture it in my mind. lol. Anyways..great job, keep it up!

Surprise, hmm...I wonder what?

Quidditch? Who said that? Oops, maybe I did.

Thanks, poor Fang. The dentist couldn't fix his teeth after Hagrid's cooking.

Thanks guys, the replies mean alot. I'm getting my results back now, and they are all good. I'm doing the best at English *is surprised*. Anyway, I have finally managed to get a post up, so yeah. It's coming soon.

Hehe, I thought I would put someone from 24 into this, his names Alexis Drazen. Although he will have a different job in this

Previously On 24
The following episode takes place between 6.00pm and 7.00pm
Sorry, I just had to do that,


Hagrid looked interested, but then walked over to the window. He looked out, in the direction of the lake and then told the trio to leave.
”Look, one thing you visiting me, but it’s another thing visiting me at night. You’re in danger, yeh shouldn’t have come. Get into the castle before they come.”
”Who come?” Harry said looking worried, “The death eaters?”
”No, nothing like that, it’s part of your surprise, but I can’t tell yeh. C’mon, we’ll go together, just gimmie a few minutes to smarten up.”
Hagrid walked up to his bed and pulled out a large comb. He began combing his hair, and then put a big moleskin over coat on.

Whilst they were walking back to the castle, they saw some lights emerging from near the lake. Harry ran towards them, not knowing what it was. Hagrid and the rest followed.

Out of the water came a large boat, with a skeletal look. It looked old and used, and had ghostly lights on the side. It’s large sails had fallen as a number of students wearing blood red robes walked across the deck. Durmstrang had arrived.

”Hagrid! Is this what you meant?” Ron asked.
”I told yeh, it was a surprise. But yeah, it is what I mean,” Hagrid said going to greet the people arriving.
”Are they here for the quidditch match? Or what else could they do?” Ron said.
”Well, I really can’t tell you, so you’ll have to wait.” Hagrid said looking over at the ship.
A few men were walking off the deck, a few with a wooden staff. They walked to where Hagrid was and asked him something. Hagrid nodded and they slowly began walking back into the castle.

Harry, Ron and Hermione followed them into the great hall and noticed a crowd. Nearly all of the school were sat in the hall. They looked at the trio as they walked into the hall, but Harry led his friends to a bench at the Gryffindor table.

”Ladies and Gentlemen,” Headmaster Orios began, “I am very pleased that all of you could make it here, at such short notice. As the festive season begins, Hogwarts will play host to a few things. Before I begin, I would like to welcome our guests…The Durmstrang Institute!” He said, pointing at the wooden door. It burst open and the men and boys from Durmstrang walked into the hall. They looked around the room and went to sit at a free bench placed in between the Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff tables. A man dressed in a large fur coat walked up the steps to the platform where the staff table was. He was quite tall and had brown hair coming down to his blue eyes and had a small beard. He had a quick word with Orios, chuckled, and cleared his throat.

”Good Evening all, I hope you are all well. We, at the Durmstrang Institute are proud to come to Hogwarts at this time. I am Alexis Drazen, and I am the deputy head of Durmstrang. The head will be arriving soon. Some of you may know him, some of you may not but I would appreciate it if you treated him well. After all, I’m nearly 100% sure that you all have heard of him. But enough talking about me,” Alexis Drazen said, chuckling, “Your headmaster told me that there was a surprise in store for us. So, will you please fill me in?” He said looking at Orios.

”Ah, yes I think I should. I have just been informed that a few students know about this surprise,” looking at Harry, Ron and Hermione, “but that does not make the surprise bad. I am almost certain that something will take place tomorrow, a quidditch match between Chudley Cannons and Puddlemere United. I hope that you all can come as it would be a great game. I have someone to talk to you from one of those teams.” Professor Orios said waving to a familiar person. Oliver Wood.