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| | Honeydukes Register (Finished Fanfiction) Here you will find all the completed works of fanfiction and poetry belonging to our talented SnitchSeeker authors. | 
06-02-2004, 03:45 AM
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#101 (permalink)
| | Billywig
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Hmm.... I dunno.....
Posts: 3,518
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Chris J. Theroux
Graduated |
I Don't know what to say..... :ermsmile:
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06-04-2004, 06:18 AM
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#102 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Back from hibernation :P
Posts: 2,470
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Nice one, Ashley! It's really good.
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06-04-2004, 07:06 AM
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#103 (permalink)
| | Snidget
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: California
Posts: 2,766
Hogwarts RPG Name:
William Ashlan McCollam
Graduated |
I'll have another up by tomorrow
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06-04-2004, 07:18 AM
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#104 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Klang, Selangor, Malaysia
Posts: 102
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That poem 'Lies' was great! Keep up the good work!
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06-15-2004, 07:17 AM
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#105 (permalink)
| | Snidget
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: California
Posts: 2,766
Hogwarts RPG Name:
William Ashlan McCollam
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ok here's another.lol its a bit dark.
Haunts me
I feel so alone,
in this darkness called,
school,
home,
Life.
I'm always in darkness,
alone,
and depressed,
But no matter,
What I do,
Who I am,
I will always feel like this.
Like I'm alone,
Depressed,
And unwanted,
or loved.
I usually go into hiding,
Into darkness,
and depression,
But I always seem normal,
Like nothing has happened.
You only see the outside of me,
the happy,
careless,
different,
funny me,
but that's not my reall feelings,
and me.
I'm mostly depressed,
Cautionous,
different,
and dark,
But I am what I am,
because of what I know,
see,
an heard,
or felt.
I have seen what some,
Shouldn't see,
Should hear,
or go through,
But I did see it,
heard it,
and gone through it.
So I write my thoughts,
dreams,
and feelings,
But it will just mak me,
feel only abit better,
and either way,
The darkness will Haunt me.
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06-18-2004, 07:16 AM
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#106 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Back from hibernation :P
Posts: 2,470
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Nice one, Ash! Keep up the good work! Made another one if you'd like to check it out.
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06-18-2004, 07:19 AM
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#107 (permalink)
|  Official -()- SeekerChizpurfle
Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Sexy Island
Posts: 10,575
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jacob Lyon Eastley
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I like it... and I can relate to that poem "Haunts me."
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06-19-2004, 01:14 AM
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#108 (permalink)
| | Billywig
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Hmm.... I dunno.....
Posts: 3,518
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Chris J. Theroux
Graduated |
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I couldn't agree with you more ^
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I love it Ash. :flowersmile:
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06-20-2004, 10:40 PM
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#109 (permalink)
| | Snidget
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: California
Posts: 2,766
Hogwarts RPG Name:
William Ashlan McCollam
Graduated |
ok,thank you all!  her's another one.
Feeling
I hate being in darkness,
I truely hate it,
and now all I can do is look at the stars,
and Wait.
Wait until I go crazy,
From the darkness,
and depression.
The stars tell stories,
Of heroes,
Gods,
and Goddeses.
I sometimes if they tell,
my story,
Of how i went through hell,
Day after day,
month after month,
and Year after year.
how I always lost,
everything important to me,
And only gained horror nightmares,
and memories in darkness.
My imagination,
dreams,
Thoughts will give me,
Some relief,
and happiness,
but I'm too alone,
Depressed,
sad,
And feeling worthless.
I'm too much in darkness,
to get out,
Of this depression,
loner feeling,
and my own hell.
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06-25-2004, 06:10 AM
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#110 (permalink)
| | Billywig
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Hmm.... I dunno.....
Posts: 3,518
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Chris J. Theroux
Graduated |
W O W !!!!! :flowersmile:
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07-19-2004, 03:14 AM
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#111 (permalink)
| | Snidget
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: California
Posts: 2,766
Hogwarts RPG Name:
William Ashlan McCollam
Graduated |
sorry all for not posting,but here's another one.lol
The thought of you
The cold chills me,
as I think of,
Memories,
and thoughts,
of you.
The cold is suppose,
to mean something bad,
but it is meaning,
Something wonderful,
heavenly,
feelings for you.
It means that I stay up,
in the chilly night,
dreaming,
and thinking of,
You and me.
When I start to think,
about us,
the cold doesn't chill me,
instead it warms me,
and I feel cozy.
No one has,
made me,
feel this way,
But you,
and only you.
I have felt love,
but no one comes,
compare with you,
and your love.
I think about you,
your kindness,
your smile,
your personality,
and most of all,
Your cariness.
I love everything about you,
you love everything about me,
and I love you for you,
you love me for me,
So I think about it,
and of you.
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07-19-2004, 03:19 AM
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#112 (permalink)
| | Snidget
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: California
Posts: 2,766
Hogwarts RPG Name:
William Ashlan McCollam
Graduated |
Ok this is not one of my poems,but one of LdyArwin's.She's been trying to post some of her's including this one,but is waiting for the Moderaters to accept it.Tell me what you think of it.
Thyn Sweet Definition of Love
To touch without touching
To embrace without fearing
Caressing thy love's heart
bringing soul's that were once apart.
The soft and gentleness of only a kiss
to the feeling of such erotic bliss
only shared and given unconditionally
to and with each other so freely.
To grasp and hold thy precious love
in thy hands protected by thy hearts glove
fulfilling every need and dreams
reaching the definition of love, it seems.
To give and receive love's trust
the souls urning and ache for it's lust
arousing the very core of life and feeling
that sends our hearts and minds reeling.
To realize that such love is within me
and wanting it to be shared with thee
releasing the passions and love
sharing deeply, gently with thy hearts glove.
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07-24-2004, 05:34 AM
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#113 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Back from hibernation :P
Posts: 2,470
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Great work, Ash! Wow!
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07-24-2004, 06:11 AM
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#114 (permalink)
| | Snidget
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: California
Posts: 2,766
Hogwarts RPG Name:
William Ashlan McCollam
Graduated |
Thanks,but out of curiousity,what do you think of LdyArwin's poem?
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08-02-2004, 01:46 AM
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#115 (permalink)
| | Snidget
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: California
Posts: 2,766
Hogwarts RPG Name:
William Ashlan McCollam
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Here's another I wrote,but in HArry's P.O.V.
I am who I want to be,
You can't make me different,
I already am,
After all I didn't choose my life,
It was given to me.
I didn't choose to be the boy who lived,
I didn't choose to have no parents,
I didn't choose to be hunted,
It was all given to me,
But I did choose who my friends were,
and Who I will become.
Whether I become a hero,
or a villain it is my choice,
but I'm only a villain when people think,
That I am,
I'm only a kid trying t make it through life,
with out being killed by my enemy.
I am who I am,
and I am a Hero,
a great friend,
a brave Gryffindor,
but most of all,
I've become,
who I wanted to be,
As me.
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08-28-2004, 04:48 PM
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#116 (permalink)
| | Lobalug
Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: I could tell you, but then I'd have to kill you!
Posts: 171
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That was very good! You manage to portray really deep, haunting themes without being corny, and that's a very difficult thing to do. Keep it up! You have a fan in me!
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09-06-2004, 03:16 AM
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#117 (permalink)
| | Lobalug
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: In Sirius' Heart <3
Posts: 181
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I have to agree your poems are very good! :flowersmile:
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