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08-01-2009, 11:38 PM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Stamford ;)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Izabella Rigsby First Year | Hockey Fan
OOHHH gr8 story!
potter die! NOO
but cute how draco thanked harry and Scorpius is still alive
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08-02-2009, 10:09 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Kentucky, USA
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| I shall patiently await more especially since you have been patient with my story. PAMS when you get a chance. I'm excited to read what you come up with next.
~Tori
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08-03-2009, 06:11 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: May 2009 Location: I don't even know
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| PAMS!!!! |
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08-03-2009, 06:55 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2009
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OMG!!!! that is just brill, i can't wait for the next chapter
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08-08-2009, 08:53 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: May 2009 Location: I don't even know
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| neither can I!!! PAMS!!!! |
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08-13-2009, 10:13 AM
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| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece
Posts: 416
Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
FINALLY!!! I'm so terribly sorry that I didn't post for like ages, it's just that I didn't have a computer neither time to do so since I got a job.....but finally I got a hold on my cousin's computer so I'm gonna take advantage of it. I can't check the spelling from here however so forgive all the mistakes I'm sure I'm gonna make. Oh, by the way I'm so happy I have new readers and I'm glad you're enjoying my story....
Chapter 25 part 2
James was walking carefully through a corridor with his wand in his hands. He didn't know where this urge for revenge was coming from but he sure knew that it was unbearable. He just had to find Dolohov, he had to. He wasn't scared; actually there wasn't even the slightest bit of fear inside him. He had spend far too many sleepless nights and wasted far too much time being scared, that right now all he wanted was to get rid of this feeling of helplessness, he had been carrying around ever since his father brought him back from Austria. Dolohov. He knew he could take him down and he would.
"What are we gonna do?" Ginny whispered in Harry's ear as Artemis and Dolohov were arguing about accepting Harry's offer and take the book.
"I'll destruct them; you take Lilly and run".
"No way".
"Ginny do not argue with me now, just do what I say and..."
But he didn't have a chance to finish his sentence because Artemis turned to face them again.
"Give me the book, Potter", she said one more time.
"Let them go and I will".
"I don't think this is an option. We will all stay here and have fun".
"You have a really twisted way of defining fun", said Ginny.
"Twisted huh? I like that; it maked me feel as dangerous as a hurricane".
"Have you ever considered therapy?" Ginny suggested.
"Oh, I've been to psychologists and analysts and all the so called experts but none of them could help. The only way all of these will be okay is if the Dark Lord returns to make it right".
"You are crazy", Harry said shaking his head. "If you manage to bring him back he'll probably consider you a threat and kill you the moment he won't need you anymore".
"Maybe...maybe not...you don't know; and anyway to die from the Dark Lord's hand will be a tremendous honor".
"Should I tell her that I'm the Dark Lord so she'll let kill her?" Ginny whispered in Harry's ear. He just shook his head not knowing what to say to a person so messed up as that girl that stood in front of him.
"It's wrong, can't you see it? All of it", he said finally.
"Yes it is", Artemis agreed. "That's why I want the book to start fixing things. Give it to me!"
And with that she attacked again but her spell didn't make it all the way to Harry because it was stopped in the air by someone else. The Death Eaters and the Potters all turned at the same time to see a bunh of aurors climbing down the stairs. Artemis screamed outraged and pointing her wand at the ceiling above the aurors it caused it to explode, something that would delay them for a while.
"Give me the book Potter!"
"No", he said shaking his head. "I don't think you're in position to make such demands anymore, either Artemis. Didn't you count the aurors? We have the advantage now".
"No one has advantage over me!" she yelled and hit the air with her wand again. Harry pushed Ginny and his daughter back and then stopped her curse with one of his own.
Lilly was watching her dad fighting with that woman horrified. Her mom pushed her a little more back so she wouldn't get hit by a spell and she just watched as a part of the stairs exploded and through the dust and the fuss one auror after the other started coming out ready to fight. Chaos reigned for a while since Artemis stopped aiming at Harry and started shooting curses everywhere.
"Lilly get back at the wall!" Ginny yelled at her and she hurried to do as she said. Dust was covering everything; Lilly could hardly make out her mom's figure in front of her. She stayed there listening to shoots and screams and hardly seeinf anything when a man's figure approached her. Certain that it was her father she took some steps towards him but when she came closer she realized who it was and tried to run away but it was to late; Dolohov had already grabbed her whist and held her so tight, it hurt.
"Let go of me!" the girl screamed. "Mom! Daddy!"
"Lilly?"
Her father's voice came from somewhere in front of them but she couldn't see him, and obviously neither could he.
"Daddy, help me!" she sreamed but Dolohov covered her mouth with his hand and dragged her out of the hall and through a small door, that led them to a corridor.
"Last time with your brother the plan didn't go exactly as we thought it would; let's see if it will now", the man said.
"Let me go!" the girl yelled, but he just ignored her and kept dragging her through the corridor. She realized that her wand must be on belt and start searching for it but she couldn't find it.
"Are you looking for this?" the man told her pointing her own wand at her.
"Let me go!" she said again trying to free her hand but the man was too strong for her.
"I rather think that your daddy will not be so reluctant to give us the book in order to take you back, don't you?" he laughed.
Lilly got a hold of a door's handle and grabbed it tight while trying to free herself from Dolohov.
"Come on, do you really think that you're gaining anything like this, little girl?" he said smirking. "Relashio", he whispered and her hand left the handle.
"LET HER GO!"
Lilly turned at the same time as Dolohov did but she knew who's voice it was before she looked.
"James?"
-Angie-
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08-13-2009, 12:02 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2009
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Yay first post!!
that was brill. i hope james dosen't do anything to stupid.
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08-13-2009, 12:41 PM
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#458 (permalink)
| Jarvey
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Stamford ;)
Posts: 559
Hogwarts RPG Name: Izabella Rigsby First Year | Hockey Fan
i hope james beats him
great chapter
PAMS!
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08-13-2009, 02:18 PM
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| X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Doxy
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: London Institute!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ruby Cynthia Ciao Fifth Year | Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! Gleek in Disguise ll Doctor Who! Daughter of Hades ll Leslie-loo-whoo ♥ Oh no poor Lily.
Go James kick Dolohov's butt.
That post was awesome.
Post some more soon.
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08-14-2009, 09:48 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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| ohhhhh brillo lol ! so glad ur back was missin this fic like mad !
can't wait for more !!! pams pams pams hehe ! xLillyx
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08-14-2009, 03:47 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Missouri
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Adams First Year |
PAMS I just started reading your story it is amazin please post more soon!
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08-16-2009, 09:35 PM
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| Formerly: forensicscientist101 Doxy
Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Lost in my Mind
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Charlene "Charlie" Manos Seventh Year | | Charlie the Unicorn | | SnowManipulator |
It's so good!!! Please keep going! Pwease!
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08-19-2009, 01:55 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Kentucky, USA
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| PAMS!! It was great. I've gotta know more!
~Tori
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08-23-2009, 03:45 PM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Komotini
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Oh, God I can't believe how much I love your story!!!!!!!! It's amazing!!!!!!! I hope James won't do something stupid, revenge is not a good thing and he should know that......I also hope that Lilly will be okay..
Pams!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Kate*
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08-23-2009, 04:25 PM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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JAMES!!!
YEAH, YOU GET HIM AND KICK HIS BUTT!
Abi... xox
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08-27-2009, 03:24 PM
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| Bundimun
Join Date: Jul 2009
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hi!!!!!!!! im a new reader and i lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeee this story!!!!!!!!
PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS
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08-27-2009, 07:47 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece
Posts: 416
Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Hey guys I'm sorry it takes me so long to post again but I'm going crazy with my summer job...but the summer ends soon and for a while I hope I'll be able to write more of this story so hopefully the posts will come more often...
Tnx for reading my story....
-Angie-
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08-31-2009, 09:52 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Chapter 25 part 2 cont.
"Get your hands off my sister now!" James yelled outraged.
A large smirk spreaded across Dolohov's face.
"Well, well...and here I thought that you wouldn't be able to step out of your house let alone come to the party".
"I'm not afraid of you", James replied full of hatred.
"Now you're just hurting my feelings", Dolohov said ironically. "Do you want me to remind you what happened the last time we met?"
"The last time I did not had a wand", James replied. "Now let my sister go".
"Okay", Dolohov shrugged and let go of Lilly's hand. She stood astonished for a second by the fact that he freed her and then she run to James. He hugged her for a moment and then hid her behind his back since Dolohov had raised his wand. "See, it doesn't matter whether I let go of her hand or not; you're both coming with me".
"Think again", James said. Dolohov smirked again and then with no further discussion he shot a curse at the boy.
"Protego!"
The curse hit on James' shielding charm, making a loud bang and forcing the boy to take some steps back but other than that not affecting him or Lilly.
"Well", Dolohov smirked again with something like satisfaction in his eyes. "It seems that daddy has taught you your lessons, hasn't he? Good. I'll have more fun than I expected to".
James grunted full of anger; the next moment he aimed at Dolohov and send a curse after him. The Death Eater just waved it off.
"Come on, is this all you can do?"
The next curse from Dolohov forced James to push himself and Lilly against the wall in order to avoid it.
..... that's all I managed to write before my boss came....sorry, I'll continue it as soon as I can....
-Angie-
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08-31-2009, 10:01 PM
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#469 (permalink)
| Jarvey
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Stamford ;)
Posts: 559
Hogwarts RPG Name: Izabella Rigsby First Year | Hockey Fan
LOVED IT
DUN DUNN DUNNN! you never know your boss could secretly be on snitchseker as well
can't wait for more, love this story, James so has to win, wooo he saved Lilly, for now...hhmmm
PAMS!
from Lolz x
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08-31-2009, 10:35 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2009
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OMG its mean to have a cliffie like that!!
PAMS i need to kno what happens!!! Shell |
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09-01-2009, 04:59 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Missouri
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Adams First Year |
PAMS I love it please post more soon! Stupid boss haha no!
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09-03-2009, 11:52 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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| PAMS!!! Its brillo more more more tell ur boss ur finding new customers online hehe ! xLillyx
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09-03-2009, 08:26 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: May 2009 Location: I don't even know
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| Well it's great so far PAMS |
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09-05-2009, 10:50 PM
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| Formerly: forensicscientist101 Doxy
Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Lost in my Mind
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Charlene "Charlie" Manos Seventh Year | | Charlie the Unicorn | | SnowManipulator |
Oh awesome postey-ness. Pams!!!
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09-07-2009, 11:01 AM
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| Fire Slug
Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Earth!!
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whats gonna happen to lily and james????
i loved it!!!
PAMS!
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