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scc · 06-15-2007, 08:25 AM

shirel how r u
how is i wer u r
have fun
we miss u
scc

rellybelly · 06-15-2007, 09:06 PM

I am soooo sorry it took so long! I've been so busy with school work but now I will be able to post more often. My flight was great! I thank you so much for your patience and comments, but now I give you,

Chapter 12:

Days and nights went by since Mia's and Harry's brakeup, filled with misery. Sometimes Mia cought Harry looking at her but then he quickly turned away and pretended to be absorbed in conversation with whoever was next to him or absorbed in a book. As every new day came and went, Mia knew that it was getting closer to Harry's kidnapping and death.

People have finally gotten used to Mia's 'smiling and crying' at the same time and stopped pointing and whispering behind her back. Ashley and Pansy kept on trying to get it out of her but everytime 'Mia' came up with new excuses to tell them and they finaly decided to 'drop it' as 'Mia' said.

One day, everyone was to wake up to find notices on the common rooms notice boards, sighn's that there was to be a Hogsmade visit that weekend. Everyone was very ecxited to buy there gowns for the end-of-the-year Yule ball. Ashley herd Mia sing once and went straight to Professor Mcgonagall, who was in charge of the ball, and told her how nice she sings and imediatly Mia oppionted the job to sing. Since 'Mia' did not one to sing at all, Ashley convinced her to sing at least one nice song.

On saturday, the day of the Hogsmade visit, Pansy woke up her and Ashley and within one hour they were making there way down to the village. The three werte chatting very happily about which girls got asked already to the ball and who they wish would ask them. 'Mia' didn't say much as usual. her crying stopped and instead she would cry only at nights. She heard Hermione Granger and Ginny Weasley talking to each other in the hall one day on the way to the great hall for lunch and coulden't resist listening to their conversation. The few words she managed to hear was that Harry didn't have a date to the ball yet and he better make a move on. Her spirits lifted a little and since then she only cried at nights and very rarely during the day.

"Mia, What do you think, should we go to 'clothes for every occasion' or 'Dress clothes for you'?"

"Um, I don't really care. I just have to do the shopping fast because I have someting planned for today." The two girls gave her questioning looks but 'Mia' just waved them off. "Nothing special," 'she' said. So the girls decided to go to 'Dress clothes for you'. They entered the shop to find it filled with hogwarts girls alsow bying gowns for the ball. Ms. Pesteny was busy helping the shoppers with the fitting of the gowns, so the girls decided to look at the gowns untill she was free. 'Mia' moved the rack around and saw gowns in all diffrent colors, in all diffrent styles and meterials, one navy one a little lighter, one pink, one red, one green amd many more.

"What do you think of this?" Asked Ashley, holding up a green sleeveless silky gown that fell down to the floor and had a very low neck.

"Its beautiful, it even matches your eyes!" Pansy exclaimed.

"Mia, what do you think?"

"It's very pretty. Go try it on."

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To be continued.
-Shirel

HOPEendures · 06-17-2007, 05:04 AM

I loved the fact that she can at least be a bit of herself.Good post.PAMS

~heather

scc · 06-17-2007, 01:49 PM

I really like the post!
it's so nice hearing from you!
PAMS
SCCxx

rellybelly · 06-17-2007, 02:05 PM

Hi Heather and Shuli! Thank you so much for your complements and support, that's what really keeps me writing!

I want to let you all know that I am not going to be home for around two weeks which i'm going to be spending with my family... but like Chuvvy said, that's no excuse for me to not write! lol! So I will try to write as often as I can and hopefully the rest of the chapter will be up any day till tuesday. So I will try to post as soon as I can! I wish you all (whoever still has school) a happy end-of-the-year!! And whoever dosen't have school, CONGRATULATIONS!!!

-*~ Shirel ~*-

Diana00 · 06-17-2007, 02:22 PM

you haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaave to ****inu.:

how was your fligh?
PAMS bouncep

rellybelly · 06-18-2007, 11:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Diana00

you haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaave to ****inu.:

how was your fligh?
PAMS bouncep

Hey! How are you? My flight was great I got soome sleep and I want to wish you good luck on your report card tomorrow, eek, I have to wait until I get back!
-*~ Shirel ~*-

rellybelly · 06-18-2007, 12:35 PM

I am sorry for the wait. Here's the continuation of chapter 12:

So Ashley went to try on the dress while Mia and Pansy looked threw the racks to find something for themselves to wear at the ball.

Hey, Mia, What do you think about this?" She asked holding up a purple dress that went right below her kney, cap sleevs, low neck and came with a beeded belt, and on the bottom right side of the dress was a beeded flower.

"It's perfect!" 'She' said, Pansy grinned and went to try it on. In the meen while 'Mia' scimmed threw the racks in search for a dress. She looked at the clock that was hanging on the wall of the store and saw it was getting late, so she picked out a pink dress that was simialar to Pansy's dress except for the ruffle at the bottom and a light pink silky metirial that hung down the front of it in a pretty way.

'She' went to the fitting rooms to try it on. She took of her shirt and jeans and sliped on the dress. The momment the silk touched her bare skin, Mia felt a little chill escape her. She looked in the mirror and admired herself. It looked like the perfect match for her. She looked so pretty in it and inside she thought,"if only she and Harry were still together." She felt a few tears run down her cheeks but the curse made her rub them away.

'She' slipped of the dress and therew on her clothes. She left the fitting room and found a pair of shoes that matched the dress perfectly, then, she went to wait on line to pay for the dress and shoes.

I'm sorry, I can't write anymore, my head really hurts now and i'm a little dizy and I have a really bad cold. Please understand, I really want too write more but I have to lie down. More will come soon!

scc · 06-18-2007, 04:05 PM

good pos pams

HOPEendures · 06-18-2007, 04:15 PM

Good post.You shouldnt write if your not feeling well you should get some sleep.Take your time.PAMS

~Heather

rellybelly · 06-19-2007, 02:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by scc

good pos pams

Thank you! How was all the end-of-the-year parties?

Quote:

Originally Posted by springbaby

Good post.You shouldnt write if your not feeling well you should get some sleep.Take your time.PAMS

~Heather

Thank you so much for thinking of me!

Thank you all for eing so patient and understanding! I am feeling much better today, I still have a cold but its not that bad. I will try to finish the chapter, LOL, by today or tomorrow!
-*~ Shirel ~*-

rellybelly · 06-20-2007, 12:53 PM

Hey my fellow readers! I'm so sorry for the long wait but i'm feeling much better now, that's the good part! And the other good news is- this post finally finishes the chapter, It was sooooo looong! LOL!
When the three girls paid for
their dresses and shoes, it was already getting dark outside.They exited the shop, and found that the street of hogsmade was half fuler than it was earlier that day.

"We should probably go back now," said Pansy. It's getting dark and i'm pretty hungry." Ashley nodded, and they turned to look at Mia.

"I will go back up very soon I just need to buy myself a quill and more ink and you know the lines they have there." The curse made Mia say. The girls nodded and offered to carry Mia's bags up to the casle for her.

So when they left, Mia felt the curse move her legs down the narrow street. It made her keep looking backway glances untill her freinds were out of view, she went in to the store next door to the ink and quills, Honyducks. the store was filled with Hogwarts students and, Mia's heart sank, at the other end of the store was Harry, standing next to his freind, Ron Weasley. Please let him not see her, she pleaded. But the curse led her heavy feet over to where he was and made her tap him on the shoulder.

He turned and gave her a look full of hatred. "What do you want?" He asked in disgust and Mia fought back tears that came to her eyes.

"I want to show you something." 'She' said.

"What?" He asked.

"I want to show you something that you will die from shock." The curse made her say. That's it! She thought, I'm done for. This is how he will get merdured and so will I! Tears came down her cheeks.

Harry gave her a questioning look at the sight of her tears and reluctantly agreed to come. He told Ron that he forgot something in The Three Broomsticks and that he was going to retrieve it.

'Mia' led him out of the busy shop and they walked all the way down the street which was almost empty. They turned left where they were blocked behind a big hill and then the curse made her do something she feared to do: It made her take out her wand.

"What do you think your doing?" Harry gaped and made to take out his wand to, to be ready to fight but the curse that was on Mia was faster than he was. It made her take his warm hand and the two disapparated.

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I hoped you like it! I wonder what's going two happen next? Dudududum!!! Muhaha!
-*~ Shirel ~*-

jkrsong96 · 06-20-2007, 01:19 PM

Ahhhhhhhh! Noooooooo! Evil cliffie! Please post more!

HOPEendures · 06-20-2007, 04:53 PM

NOOOO...Gladd you feeling better.....ooooooooooo.Evil and with a cliffie.That curse is realy starting to bum me out.Good post (except for cliffie)PAMS

~Heather

chuvvy · 06-25-2007, 01:32 PM

gr8 post!!
cant wait 2 read what'll happen next
PAMS
BTW shirel - y rn't u writing 2 me?

chuvvy · 06-25-2007, 01:33 PM

shirel!! ur on 2!

rellybelly · 06-25-2007, 01:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jkrsong96

Ahhhhhhhh! Noooooooo! Evil cliffie! Please post more!

Hey Mindy! Sorry about the cliffie!! muhahaha!! LOL

Quote:

Originally Posted by springbaby

NOOOO...Gladd you feeling better.....ooooooooooo.Evil and with a cliffie.That curse is realy starting to bum me out.Good post (except for cliffie)PAMS

~Heather

Hey Heather!! Sorry about the cliffie! Yah, I am feeling much better now, Holle and healed!
So okay I know what the next chapter will be about and I hope that will clear matters!! LOL!!

Hey! What happened to all my other fans?? Don't dissapear like that!! Come back, come baaaaaaaaaaack!!
-*~ Shirel ~*-

P.S. Hi my twinny!

chuvvy · 06-25-2007, 01:37 PM

shirel - go on msn

rellybelly · 06-25-2007, 01:43 PM

It dosen't work on my grandmothers computer!

How are you?? Aren't you happy school ended? I still don't get it, I guess because I was not home to have the parties! Awwwww

rellybelly · 06-26-2007, 12:52 PM

this is shirells cousin molly, who wants to tell her thst her posts rox . yay!

rellybelly · 06-26-2007, 12:55 PM

this story needs to be continued i say-molly

scc · 06-26-2007, 01:59 PM

shirelle pleeez write the next chapter!!!!
You haven't written for a long time.....
PAMS

rellybelly · 07-02-2007, 09:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shirelbb

this is shirells cousin molly, who wants to tell her thst her posts rox . yay!

Quote:

Originally Posted by shirelbb

this story needs to be continued i say-molly

Hi Molly! How was your trip back? I heard it took around seven hours!! I played on that panguin web. and I guess its kinda fun but after a while it gets a little boring. Thanks for showing it to me!

I will e-mail you soon!

Quote:

Originally Posted by scc

shirelle pleeez write the next chapter!!!!
You haven't written for a long time.....
PAMS

Hi! I didn't see you for like 3 weeks!! Hows your summer going? I'm really sorry that the last chapter I wrote was like, OMG! 12 days ago! I'm soooo sorry I will try to put up the next post by tomorrow since...you know...
I hope you have fun!
-*~ Shirel ~*-

rellybelly · 07-03-2007, 11:56 AM

Hey everyone! I am sooooo sorry that I have't been posting lately and tomorrow i'm going to camp for two weeks and I feel like you guys will think that I don' tcare at all about this story because I do I just have been out of the country for a celebration of my cousin. BAssicly it's been very hectic by me! But whe I get back from camp, I will be able to post a LOT!! Well enjoy your simmer vacay and the next chapter!

Cahpter 13:

The two reappeared infront of an old mantion that had several walls cracked. Outside, what looked like was once a beautiful garden was now dead, the leaves were hanging off its last legs.

Harry was imedieatly tied up and his wand was taken away by the Death Eaters and that took only a mater of seconds.

Mia just stood here watching the Harry, screamingq and fighting to break free, beeing taken away by Death Eaters unable to do anything. Tears came down her face as hardest as ever as she knew, she would never see the love of her life, again. she felt a hard tap on her shoulder and the curse made her turn to see bellatrix standing there laughing at hertear washed face, her face pittyness.

The curse made her get p and walk twords the mansion, Bellatrix right behind her. 'She' walked through the old front doors and turned right then left then again left thyen 'she' walked down a couple of staircases, she figured this must lead her to the dungeons.

All of the sudden Bellatrix made Mia stop in front of a heavy door. She took Mia's wand and stepped in front off Mia and took out her own wand and muttered a spell. The door swung open and The curse made Mia go inside. Into hell. It was the scarriest room she had ever been into, the walls were filled of blood and the floors were filled with bones and was badly cracked. In the corner, was a chair that was missing a a leg and the place where you rest your back on was thrown on the floor.

And in the middle of the room, Harry was sprawled on the floor, lying motionlessly.

Mia was pushed hard in the back into the room and Bellatrix closed the door with her wand. And the momment she did so, Mia felt a weird sensation in her body and saw llike a shadow move out of her body and then it was gone.

Mia made to move her hand to touch the place were the shadow disapeard but then rememmberd that she was under bellatrix's curse but tried anyway. She moved it slowly and thought that was weird. How could she have done that? Is the curse, maybe...? She moved her other hand and touched her head. It worked, she was free! Her heart leapt with happiness but imediatly was gone when she rememmberd Harry. "Harry!" She said and she ran over to him. "Harry! Wake up!" She cried, heavy tears zigzaging down her face. "Please don't be dead! Please wake up. You have towake up! I need you right now. Please!" She sobed.

Slowly his body began to stir. His eyes flickered open but then closed. Ad then again they flickerd open, but then closed, again. It happened again for the third time but this time they stayed open, Mias face just above his watching for any sighnes of recognisation. And before she knew it there was a BAM! and then a loud CRACK! Harry had punched her in surprise in the face and she was thrown backwords. Mia had not expected this. "Wat was bat bor?" She yelled threw gushes of blood driping down her face from her nose. She took her scarf and sqeezed it against her nose so that she could talk a little normal.

"You tell me!" He yelled and got up. "What are you doing here?" He yelled at her, "The Death Eaters probably sent you here to watch on me, RIGHT? He screamed at her.

"Look!" Mia said. "Can you just let me explain what happened over these last couple of months?"

"What is their to explain? You're working for Voldemort. That's all that needs to be said!" He yelled.

"That's not true! Listen to-"

"-I'm not going to listen to your stupid lies right now, I heard inough off them at Hogwarts to believe you anymore! I could make up a list: A. You cheated on me. B. you went-"

"-Harry I was Imperiused!" She screamed threw her sobs.

"And then," Harry went on, "you...wait you were what...?

"Harry, I was Imperiused," she said quietly, "When I was kidnapped three moths ago, Bellatrix Imperiused me. I had no control on anyhting that was going on. She controled me day and night..."

"Do you have proof?" He asked awkwardly.

Mia fell down and kneeled in front of Harry's feet and begged, "Harry! Please you've got to believe me! There going to kill us any second! I love you so much!" She sobed.

Okay. I would really like to hear what all of you think because I feel like i'm losing most of my readers here!
-*~ Shirel ~*-