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07-27-2005, 08:39 PM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
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| The Sweetest Thing Lissy De Vil Ok, this half of a post (as will be the second half) is dedicated to my dearest Tina who is so loyal and anxious for more Siry!!! A Trip to Diagon Alley Sirius never thought he would be grateful to be going on an outing to Diagon Alley to buy a bunch of school books, but it’s always amazing how one’s perspective can change. Being back at Hogwarts was great, but with no students and very few members of the staff hanging about, there really wasn’t all that much going on. He noticed ruefully that not even Snivellus was around. The thought of the greasy git enjoying a summer holiday was equally annoying as it was unlikely (Snape probably never enjoyed anything). Nevertheless, the potions master wasn’t here and it irked Sirius for some reason. It also irked him that he was standing here in the Great Hall waiting for an escort to take him to Diagon Alley.
“Are we quite ready to go, Mr. Black?” someone asked behind him.
Sirius knew the voice immediately. He turned and grinned at his former transfiguration professor, “I was born ready, Professor McGonagall,” he teased. “And it really should be Mr. Wulfric now, don’t you think?”
McGonagall waved the comment away as if it were no matter, “yes, yes, I know,” she said peering at him over her glasses. “I can’t believe I’m teaching you a second time.”
“It’s our lucky day,” Sirius grinned. “Besides, you loved having me in class.”
“Right,” she answered primly, “and just for the record, that didn’t work the first time and it won’t work this time either.” McGonagall waved one finger in admonishment, “and I take points even from my own house if it is deserved.”
“If you say so,“ he winked, he loved pushing her buttons. “Besides, it’s possible I won’t be in your house anyway.”
“And where did you get this notion?” the Deputy Headmistress scoffed, leading her student into the staff lounge.
“From Dumbledore,” Sirius stated simply. “I need to be sorted all over again.”
McGonagall’s lips pressed into a thin line, “once a Gryffindor, always a Gryffindor,” she retorted lighting a fire in the fireplace.
“That’s what I said… Hang on – we’re going by floo?” Sirius was disappointed.
“Well, we’re not apparating, are we?” McGonagall countered almost accusingly. “And I won’t go by broom,” she added.
Sirius pictured the straight-laced professor with her bun disheveled and glasses askew from the wind and had to admit she had a point. At the very least, floo powder was a quick form of transportation, if uncomfortable and slightly messy. They were soon exiting from the public floo in Diagon Alley. Sirius brushed the loose soot from his clothes and noticed that McGonagall managed to look as unruffled as ever.
“We’ll have to stop at Gringott’s for some money,” he ventured, realizing suddenly that he had none.
“Of course we do not,” McGonagall countered and handed him a pouch of galleons, “Since you gave Professor Dumbledore privileges to your vault, he has kept it safe. He has already made this withdrawal for you.”
“Well that was mighty considerate of him,” Sirius drawled weighing the bag in his hand and mentally judging the value of it’s contents. He should have plenty of spending money.
“So, I guess I’ll meet you back here…” Sirius was sincerely hoping that he would not have to spend this entire outing with the professor.
McGonagall, for her part, appeared as though this prospect did not appeal to her either. “Two hours, Mr. Wulfric,” she gave him a stern look as he appeared about to protest, “two hours, ”she repeated, “right here. Here’s your list and I expect that you will try not to be too conspicuous.”
Sirius promised his good behavior and darted off into the crowd before McGonagall could change her mind. He hadn’t felt this free in a long time. For the first time in ages, he could walk about in public without fear of recognition. Well, for the most part, he would have to avoid those who knew him as a young man, but that was a vast improvement over his earlier situation. As he passed many of the shops, he saw that photos of himself still hung next to those of the escaped Death Eaters. This bothered him, but there was nothing that could be done about it. There was an obvious increase in security here on Diagon Alley. Sirius could see several wizards he knew to be aurors monitoring the crowd. The atmosphere was not as relaxed as it once was, as many people seemed to be on edge. The streets teemed with Hogwart’s students shopping for the new term. Sirius scanned their faces for a dark haired boy with glasses and a scar, but did not see him.
Sirius consulted his list of supplies and decided to get started. After purchasing his parchment and quills, potions ingredients, and cauldrons (all of which he was having shipped to his attention at Hogwarts, he’d learned a long time ago that it was worth the extra galleons not to have to carry that stuff around), he encountered an interesting shop called “Weasleys’ Wizarding Wheezes”. He grinned to himself, wondering what Molly must think of the place. He had to see this. Inside the shop was crowded with students and every possible sweet, joke or explosive one could imagine. The proprietors were clearly doing a booming business and Sirius couldn’t imagine Molly having an issue with that. Fred and George were mingling with their customers and periodically making recommendations and demonstrations of various items. Sirius figured since he was ‘pretending’ to be a student, he really needed to be prepared with a few joke shop supplies… He selected some of the twins newer (and frankly in some cases more dangerous inventions) and went to check out. He decided it was safest not to have these particular items shipped to him.
The twins showed no signs of recognition beyond noticing a profitable sale when they approached Sirius. “I see you’re a man of distinguished taste,” Fred observed.
“Going to Hogwarts by any chance?” George asked.
“As a matter of fact, yes,” Sirius replied.
“What year?” Fred asked while packing up the merchandise.
“You don’t look familiar,” George continued, counting back Sirius’ change.
“Well, I wouldn’t,” Sirius answered casually, “haven’t been there yet. My mum’s a bit cracked you see,” he made a circular motion with his finger to indicate crazy, ”doesn’t believe in school. But I finally won. I’ll be a 6th year” he grinned.
“Brilliant!” Fred handed Sirius his parcels, “you’ll know our brother Ron then.”
“And if you ever are in need of our services…” George started,
“…feel free to send an owl,” Fred gave Sirius a card for the shop. They were clearly hoping for more business.
“Or just bug our brother, he won’t mind,” George laughed.
“I’ll do that,” as Sirius turned to leave, he noticed a pretty girl about his age eying him up on the way out. He winked at her impudently and decided that this was just getting better and better. Next will be more Diagon Alley!!!
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07-27-2005, 08:50 PM
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| I am a SIRIUS artist! Imprisoned By Sirius Doxy
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“And if you ever are in need of our services…” George started,
“…feel free to send an owl,” Fred gave Sirius a card for the shop. They were clearly hoping for more business.
LOL just like those two to notice a prospective costumer. Quote:
“I’ll do that,” as Sirius turned to leave, he noticed a pretty girl about his age eying him up on the way out. He winked at her impudently and decided that this was just getting better and better.
AAAH!!! Sirius is soooo adorable!
Lissy, you are an exceptional writer. Keep it up!
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07-27-2005, 11:54 PM
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Ok, this half of a post (as will be the second half) is dedicated to my dearest Tina who is so loyal and anxious for more Siry!!!
Yah Lizzy, you’re right! I am loyal! I deserve an update. And I’ve been anxious like crazy for more of my Siry!!!! But you know what, I love you for it verryyyyyyyyy veryyyyyyy much! You know that right? Well, to say it again, I thank god for the dya an awesome writer named Liz came on SS! Oh my, this is heaven sent! I can’t wait for Snape to die… He is gonna die right? I can’t imagine Siry going to school and acting like good little boy! We hate Snape with a passion *Then remembers she promised to Siry a try for Liz* Okay, okay, I don’t want him to die…He can live…But I hope to see some old steaming action returning!!! Quote:
It also irked him that he was standing here in the Great Hall waiting for an escort to take him to Diagon Alley.
Yah dude! What happened to Driving in style? Lmao, That’s okay Siry, you’re cute anyway liz writes you! Quote:
“I was born ready, Professor McGonagall,” he teased. “And it really should be Mr. Wulfric now, don’t you think?”
OMG!!! Mcgonagall knows? Heheh, I’m like jumping off my computer chair… So excited.WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *Giggles then POkkles herself to keep reading* Quote:
I can’t believe I’m teaching you a second time.”
Something I love when reading, is when the title comes in the story. This isn’t really it, but it ties in with his second chance! Quote:
“Well that was mighty considerate of him,” Sirius drawled weighing the bag in his hand and mentally judging the value of it’s contents. He should have plenty of spending money.
*Stares at Siry* That doesn’t sound like him… My siry aint selfish… After all DD took him in… Quote:
“Weasleys’ Wizarding Wheezes”
AWESOMENESS!!!!! Ever since the little extra in One Ravenclaws…about fred and george for Ottery, I love how you write them *Hopes they’ll come in…* Then again…I love all of what you write.... Quote:
The proprietors were clearly doing a booming business and Sirius couldn’t imagine Molly having an issue with that.
I enjoy how you add on things that are fact from HBP…Just wondering…Um…surely you can’t use the HBP ending (After all DD’s still alive in your fic) How will it really fit in…Just wondering… You know I love trying to read your mind…Too bad, it never works… Quote:
“haven’t been there yet. My mum’s a bit cracked you see,” he made a circular motion with his finger to indicate crazy, ”doesn’t believe in school. But I finally won. I’ll be a 6th year” he grinned.
Hehehehehe I couldn’t have said it any better! His mom is cracked, psychotic, crazy, loopy, stupid, idiotic…hypnotic FUNKY SKUNK Lmao, sry I’m listening to Ciara…(the funky fresh was changed…hehehe) Quote:
“I’ll do that,” as Sirius turned to leave, he noticed a pretty girl about his age eying him up on the way out. He winked at her impudently and decided that this was just getting better and better.
*GASP* *Then stares shocked* I don’t like this ending…..*Starts crying…..lmao..just jk* But, who could it be? Liz, this aint no fun for me! *Starts pouting like a baby* Who is this grl that caught his eye? He would surely know the ppl from Harry’s classes. Then again, Hogwarts is a big school…*Remembers Liz’s awesome gift of inventing made-up chracters…* But, I still will hate her…I don’t want to hate any of your characters…
Lizzy, PLS…MAKE THIS Character likable!!!! *Tries to read Liz’s mind harder than before* I don’t know how much you’ve written, but I think we can solve this silly crises. The only I’ll be okay, is if you name the new character Liz or Lizzy. That way luff overtakes hatred I can’t dare hate you right? Good plan? Well… just a theory, don’t know what you’ll make of it! Quote:
Next will be more Diagon Alley!!!
PLS!!!!!!!!!!!! AND THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!! *Huggles and kiggles her new Stalk-ee! Lmao…like my location?
Love Always,
Tina
P.S. Where have you been Amber? YOUR fic is pretty good! I’ve been reading but I haven’t posted… I’m seeing Mlafoy in a new light…
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Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
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07-28-2005, 07:45 AM
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| Ginny, we go way backAt Wentwater Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: William Quinn | Congratulations, Lissydove! You're the recipient of my 500th post! Quote:
Originally Posted by Lissydove
You may be asking, "isn't that enough?"Why, Lissy, are you moved to start another thread?" Answer: "I can't help myself!" I've had this idea for awhile and lately it has been taking up my creative thoughts. So I feel the need to put it in writing.
Why, Lissy, are you move--oh you answered that already. Quote:
Originally Posted by Lissy Those who know me realize that I am a Marauders fan and the topic here will not surprise them. What I hope is that I have written a story on the subject of Sirius, post OOTP and post veil in a way that you all haven't seen before ( though it won't be evident in the first post), *shrugs* I know I haven't. I hope that the seasoned fan-fic readers and Sirius lovers out there will enjoy this as well as all casual readers. As my loyal readers know, I rarely take the traditional point of view in my writing. Don't think I didn't see that winking smiley! Quote:
Originally Posted by LD
Sirius Black’s head was pounding. He felt as though he had been hit with something hard, repeatedly. Perhaps he’d just had one too many firewhiskeys. That wouldn’t be a first. Unfortunately, he felt like he should be remembering something. What? He raised his arm to cover his face. Something was blinding him, which did nothing for the state of his headache. He groaned and rolled over. It was at this point that he realized two things: one, that he was lying down and two, that he was getting wet. He sat up in surprise “What the…?” Then the rest came back to him: leaving Grimmauld Place, the Department of Mysteries, Harry… Harry! What happened to Harry? Sirius sprang to his feet, wand in hand. He braved the bright light and opened his eyes. And found himself… alone… outside.
Hmm...how did he get back? Quote:
Originally Posted by Lissy Nearby, at the top of one of such hills was an archway. A thin veil or curtain hung from it, fluttering in the breeze. Sirius recognized it instantly; he had just seen one in the Department of Mysteries. It must be a gateway of some kind, which meant he should be able to go back. He ran up the hill to the arch, but he needn’t have bothered. Just as he reached the stone archway, the veil fluttered one last time and disappeared. Recklessly, he tried to walk through the stone structure, only to come out the other side on the same rocky hill. The gateway, or whatever it was, had closed. Nice...an AU fic that explains why it's an AU fic...haha. Quote:
Originally Posted by D-O-V-E He could try to apparate a few times until he got his bearing. It was dangerous for a wizard to apparate over long distances when he did not know where he was, but he'd have to try it. It was as good of a plan as any. I like that. You didn't just have him Popping around the place. Makes it more realistic. Quote:
Originally Posted by Lise Sirius sighed and moved away from the arch and… went nowhere. He tried to disapparate again, with no result. Again. What was going on? He growled in frustration. Well, if he had to travel on foot, he would be faster on four legs then on two. This way, he could also approach any towns unnoticed. He attempted to adopt his animagus form of a great black dog. Unfortunately, once again, nothing happened. He looked at his hands in astonishment, they were still hands and not paws and he was clearly still standing on two legs! He couldn’t believe it! Was he bereft of all magical ability for some reason? What could this mean? He was slowly beginning to feel frantic. As a test, he raised his wand and tried a simple spell:
Clearly he could do magic, but why couldn’t he disapparate or use his animagus form? Or do anything that would get him out of this ruddy place and closer to Harry? Yes, this is curious. Very curious. Quote:
Originally Posted by The Dove Anything could be happening to Harry at this moment and Sirius was powerless to help him. He gritted his teeth and made a decision. He turned south and started to walk, with only his thoughts for company. How could he have failed his Godson so badly? You've really captured the essence of canon, Sirius. Not only can he not protect Harry, but he's missing a good fight! Quote:
Originally Posted by I can't think of anything else to make! Nearby, there was a stream that he had recently begun to follow. He knelt down by it’s edge and splashed cool water onto his face. Perhaps after a drink and something to eat, he could continue to travel into the night. He leaned over and cupped his hands to get more water. The stream was a very slow moving one at this time of year and reflected his face like a mirror. What he saw caused him to recoil in fear and shout out in surprise... What did he see?! I can't read ahead, I'll save that for my next review. 500th post!
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07-28-2005, 08:07 AM
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Ooh this is quite an original idea. I look forward to seeing how this one turns out. Stamped =)
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07-28-2005, 09:11 AM
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| Ginny, we go way backAt Wentwater Firecrab
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Wow...Lissy! Didn't you just mention that yesterday? ^ Congrats!
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07-28-2005, 04:36 PM
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| Congrats, Lissy! Quote:
Originally Posted by Rovie Ooh this is quite an original idea. I look forward to seeing how this one turns out. Stamped =) A well deserved award. Congrats, Lissy, and keep up the good work!
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07-29-2005, 10:59 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabelle Lee Costas First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ
WOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOO! *Grabs Dean's, Amber's, and LIssy's ahdn and dances!*PARTYYYY! lMAO, CONGRATS HUN! DO I even need to say how much you deserve this? Or do i need to babble on about the awesomeness of your talents? Or maybe i should go on about how a true writer (u) can only make my Siry alive again! No, the right thing to do would be annoy Rovie to go and check our other fics! lmao!
Congrats!!!!
Tina
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
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07-29-2005, 11:54 PM
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| Official -()- Seeker*glompsz and runsz*Padfoot & Lissy's Candy Ramora
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Lissy!!!!! Omg omg omg!! Your fanfic is featured! I always knew it would I just never commented because I never had the time. From now on I will comment! Your fanfic rocks! Keep up the great work Lissy and you deserve having your fanfic featured! Great post by the way and I can't wait to see what'll happen next! Well see yah Lissy!
Your friend and LyLas,
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07-30-2005, 02:12 AM
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| Guest | Great Post!! Quote:
Originally Posted by Lissydove *Siriusette Black*
I just love to have you reading! With a name like yours, I need to have you here!!
Thank you sooooooooooooooooooo much!! I really wanted to do something a little different with a Sirius fic and I am so glad that others like the idea!
Thankees!
GREAT post! Loved the whole Weasley's Wizard Wheezes segment...PAMS PAMS PAMS!!
OMG! Featured Fic? GASP! Yayness!!!
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07-31-2005, 09:39 PM
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This is a great story! I can't wait untill you post more!
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08-01-2005, 01:41 AM
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| The Sweetest Thing Lissy De Vil Wow, I am just so excited! I love seeing so many faces, you guys have no idea how happy it makes me to see you! Thank you so very much for your kind words. Seeing replies makes my day. It really does. I just wanted to update you all that I am on the verge of a mini vacation for a few days this week - Monday - Friday. When I come back, I promise to get everything into high gear, I have plenty of stuff planned! So please bear with me as I re-charge my batteries! I'm gonna miss it here and I already can't wait to get back!! See you all very soon!
Love you!!
Lissy
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08-01-2005, 10:22 AM
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Hey Lissy!
Loved the post Cant wait for the next one! Wahay, youve been stamped!
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08-01-2005, 02:35 PM
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| I am a SIRIUS artist! Imprisoned By Sirius Doxy
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I just wanted to say that I am something of a literary critic. Not trying to scare you or anything, but I like the fics I read to not only be entertaining, but well written. You do both wonderfully.
One of the amazing characteristics of your story is your ability to write emphatically. We as the readers can tap into Sirius' emotions and feel what he is feeling. It is this skill that many fanfic writers lack and I truly enjoy. Keep up the good work!
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08-01-2005, 07:12 PM
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| Siriusly Addicted Jarvey
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Gah Lissy! You have to go away on that note? Who was the girl I wonderr? And won't Harry recognise Sirius from the pensieve? You can rest assured I will be waiting (im)patiently for you to get back and post some more. *taps foot, drums fingers*
Love you Lissy,
Have a great time on holiday!
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08-02-2005, 07:38 PM
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i lvoe the story in this its so awsome!
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08-02-2005, 09:00 PM
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I just wanted to update you all that I am on the verge of a mini vacation for a few days this week - Monday - Friday. When I come back, I promise to get everything into high gear, I have plenty of stuff planned! So please bear with me as I re-charge my batteries! I'm gonna miss it here and I already can't wait to get back!! See you all very soon!
Love you!!
Lissy
Have fun *Remembers the last time she went camping* And, take loads of soft tissue (u could get sick, and using the hard one they provide sux), lotion , hand wipes, face wipes, and last but definitely not least pepper spray! Lol, um… Hope you come back soon!!! WE’LL MISS YOU TOO!!
Love Always,
Tina Quote:
Who was the girl I wonderr?
*WONDERS AND WONDERS* Wait… Lol… I guess we’ll find out! Soon, I hope! Quote:
And won't Harry recognise Sirius from the pensieve?
See, that’s what I’ve been thinking too! But even If he doesn’t recognize him, the Mauraders Map will give him away sooner or later! Let’s just hope Liz has thought of this too! Then again, it is LIzzy! CAN’T WAIT FOR MORE!! PAMS!
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Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
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Crazy on a Sunday night..
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08-03-2005, 06:04 PM
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Keep writing please, this is an awsome story!
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08-05-2005, 01:30 AM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
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| Just a quick reply post!!! The Sweetest Thing Lissy De Vil Just a quick reply post as I am ready to submit some more of the fic! I'm looking around and seeing all my lovely loyal readers and some new faces as well . You guys have no idea how much that means to me. I may have said that already, but honestly I do so love to see replies. I cherish every one. I am also quite excited and grateful for all your congratulations. Wow, I have a featured fic! I hope that I can keep it interesting for you all.
I normally make sure to reply to you all individually, and I will be sure to do that again next time. I'm just in from vacation today and need to be catching up on some sleep! I wanted to make sure to post story before bed...
Two quick anouncements though:
First, You will see that I went back and edited my posts tonight. I just added Chapter titles to them. I was not happy that I was leaving them out and from now on there will be titles.
Second, Check out the new banner for this fic! It is by the Awesome Mikky Mu. I just love pics of a young Sirius Black... Don't you?
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| The Sweetest Thing Lissy De Vil A Black Family Reunion
After a quick stop at Florean Fortescue’s for some ice cream (it was still as good as he remembered), Sirius moved on to Madam Malkin’s Robes for all Occasions. He quickly selected several sets of school robes, a set of dress robes and a variety of casual clothes. Thankfully, the shop was not busy and he was first in line to submit (albeit impatiently) to the usual session of pinning and fitting with the store’s proprietor.
“A fine looking man such as yourself should have his robes fitted just right,” the woman chattered around a mouthful of pins as Sirius complained for what felt like the hundredth time that the robes looked just fine as they were. He knew that his two hours of freedom were rapidly running out and he didn’t prefer to spend more time then he had to being stuck like a pin cushion. He hadn’t even had an opportunity to see Harry, who he was sure must be around. This was the most popular day to shop for school…
“And such fine taste you have,” the woman was undaunted, “some of my best fabric.” This thought abruptly caused Madam Malkin to notice the lack of an authority figure accompanying her young customer.
Sirius picked up on the robemaker’s pointed look around the store, “don’t worry, I have the money,” he replied, “are we almost done?” he asked again.
The woman’s face brightened, “just a few finishing touches… There… And there… Done!” she declared, surveying her handiwork. “How many sets do you want?” She indicated the large pile of fabrics that Sirius had piled up.
Sirius looked at his reflection in the mirror, maybe it was all those years of not having anything new, but he had to admit that he liked the woman’s work. “I’ll take them all,” he decided.
Madam Malkin beamed, “you’re going to break some hearts!” she clapped her hands together.
Sirius smiled and attempted to ignore this comment, he knew what it usually lead to. He took out his bag of galleons in an attempt to speed the transaction along…
“The girls are going to love you,” the robemaker gushed, “My niece, Tina, a lovely girl, she goes to Hogwarts too. Fifth year, Hufflepuff, you should look her up.”
Sirius promised politely that he would do so as he stacked the rest of his selections on the counter to be rung up.
As Madam Malkin folded up the boy’s purchases, accepted his name and payment, and promised to have everything sent off to Hogwarts, the bell above the door chimed, announcing that another customer had entered the shop.
“Oh dear!” she exclaimed, “you haven’t selected your house colors!” The woman reached beneath the counter and pulled out a drawer full of ties and house emblems to be affixed to the school robes.
Sirius hesitated with his hand over the red and gold Gryffindor colors. The Slytherin green and silver seemed to mock him sitting there… “No colors just yet,” he sighed with regret, deciding not to risk it. “Special case,” he added by way of explanation. “I’ll send an order along later.”
“Draco darling,” a voice called from across the shop. “Come and have a look dear.”
It was then that Sirius noticed the customers who had entered the store. A good looking young man his own age was standing nearby observing Sirius with interest. If the boy’s pale coloring and aristocratic features did not give away his identity, his intelligent grey eyes would have made him instantly recognizable as they were quite like Sirius’ own grey gaze. An inheritance from a mutual Black family ancestor, those eyes sized Sirius up with the instinctual recognition of another wizard of wealth and class. Sirius could detect no hint that the boy knew who he was as he came over to address him.
“Going to Hogwarts?” Draco asked, though Sirius was sure that the boy already knew the answer. “I’ve never seen you there,” he finished almost accusingly.
“Well, you wouldn’t have, as I’ve never been there yet,” Sirius replied in kind, “private tutoring, you see.”
“Draco…” Narcissa called from across the store.
Draco cast a scowl in his mother’s direction, and then turned back to Sirius, “yeah, I know what you mean. She would have had me study at home too, if she had her way,” the boy gestured toward the back of the store. “I personally would have chosen Durmstrang, but Hogwart’s will do for now.”
Sirius agreed to this statement while doing his best to keep his back toward his cousin. With a quick glance, he spotted her blonde hair coming in their direction to investigate what was holding up her son. Sirius figured that Narcissa would have no reason to suspect that the teenager before her was the same young man who had played pranks on her at Black Family get-togethers so many years ago, and had even less reason to connect him to the escaped prisoner whom she believed dead, but even if Draco did not realize it, the family’s good looks were plainly evident in Sirius’ features and it was best not to risk any awkward questions.
“The name’s Malfoy, by the way,” the blond youth extended his hand for Sirius to shake, "Draco Malfoy, Slytherin House. I expect I’ll see you there.”
“Darling?” Narcissa was almost upon them, “who are you talking to?”
“I’m Brian Wulfric,” Sirius hastily shook Draco’s hand. “See you at school,” he agreed, while thinking the boy should not count on seeing him in the Slytherin Common room, not if Sirius had anything to say about it…
Sirius’ last glance as he made his way out the door was of Narcissa and Madam Malkin converging on the scowling Draco. Sirius felt a brief sympathy for the boy being so clearly overmatched, but all thoughts of his cousin left his mind as he raced out of the shop and headlong into a man passing the store from the opposite direction…
A legendary LadyV type cliffie... :evillaugh
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| The Sweetest Thing Lissy De Vil Question: Why do we always manage to meet Draco in the clothing shop? Answer: Because the boy's got styyyyyylllle!!!
Psssttt... Tina, did you catch my little reference for you?
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| Seelow ☆ Overnight Celebrity ☆ Perky! ☆ Harley Quinn AAHHH!!!!!!! LISSY!!!!!!!! *tackleglomps* An update!!! *prepares fingers to quote* Quote:
A Black Family Reunion
*wonders which members were involved..* Quote:
After a quick stop at Florean Fortescue’s for some ice cream (it was still as good as he remembered), Sirius moved on to Madam Malkin’s Robes for all Occasions. He quickly selected several sets of school robes, a set of dress robes and a variety of casual clothes. Thankfully, the shop was not busy and he was first in line to submit (albeit impatiently) to the usual session of pinning and fitting with the store’s proprietor.
hehe *sees young Sirius being fitted for robes* Quote:
“The girls are going to love you,” the robemaker gushed, “My niece, Tina, a lovely girl, she goes to Hogwarts too. Fifth year, Hufflepuff, you should look her up.”
I could see Sirius dating a Huffie...[/end sarcasm] Quote:
“Draco darling,” a voice called from across the shop. “Come and have a look dear.
” 0_0 *sqeals like a fangirl* DRACO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote:
It was then that Sirius noticed the customers who had entered the store. A good looking young man his own age was standing nearby observing Sirius with interest. If the boy’s pale coloring and aristocratic features did not give away his identity, his intelligent grey eyes would have made him instantly recognizable as they were quite like Sirius’ own grey gaze. An inheritance from a mutual Black family ancestor, those eyes sized Sirius up with the instinctual recognition of another wizard of wealth and class. Sirius could detect no hint that the boy knew who he was as he came over to address him.
AAH!!! *loves the way you describe my sex god* lmao Quote:
Draco cast a scowl in his mother’s direction, and then turned back to Sirius, “yeah, I know what you mean. She would have had me study at home too, if she had her way,” the boy gestured toward the back of the store. “I personally would have chosen Durmstrang, but Hogwart’s will do for now.”
Thank GOD you didn't go there! *clings to Draco* Quote:
Sirius agreed to this statement while doing his best to keep his back toward his cousin. With a quick glance, he spotted her blonde hair coming in their direction to investigate what was holding up her son. Sirius figured that Narcissa would have no reason to suspect that the teenager before her was the same young man who had played pranks on her at Black Family get-togethers so many years ago, and had even less reason to connect him to the escaped prisoner whom she believed dead, but even if Draco did not realize it, the family’s good looks were plainly evident in Sirius’ features and it was best not to risk any awkward questions.
Hehe he played pranks on Cissa? SWEET!!! *loves on Sirius* Quote:
Sirius’ last glance as he made his way out the door was of Narcissa and Madam Malkin converging on the scowling Draco. Sirius felt a brief sympathy for the boy being so clearly overmatched, but all thoughts of his cousin left his mind as he raced out of the shop and headlong into a man passing the store from the opposite direction…
YES!!! Feel sympathy for your cousin!! He's HOT!!! *drools*
Nice update sis! Post again soon for me!!!!
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
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| The Sweetest Thing Lissy De Vil Quote:
Originally Posted by Aingil an Spéir Gah Lissy! You have to go away on that note? Who was the girl I wonderr? And won't Harry recognise Sirius from the pensieve ?You can rest assured I will be waiting (im)patiently for you to get back and post some more. *taps foot, drums fingers*
Love you Lissy,
Have a great time on holiday!
LadyV. I just wanted to address this question real quick... I will only say that I have that covered... Hehehehehe...
The girl...?
For all the thinkers out there ( but don't say anything) ... I have something else in mind... What object does Harry have that could blow this whole ruse apart...? Just think about that... I've got that covered too... :evillaugh You'll see!
I'll be back with more replies and some more fic later!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabelle Lee Costas First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ Quote:
You guys have no idea how much that means to me. I may have said that already, but honestly I do so love to see replies. I cherish every one.
Awwwwwwwwwwww! That’s so cute! And same goes to every update of yours! It’s cherished in all our hearts! *Nods on behalf of all* Quote:
Second, Check out the new banner for this fic! It is by the Awesome Mikky Mu. I just love pics of a young Sirius Black... Don't you?
HE’S SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!! That’s awesome LIZ! It’s gives us so much to hope for in your fic……HEHEH!*Steals Siry for her and her only* Quote:
had to being stuck like a pin cushion
Lol, what a comparison! Poor siry! That reminds me of my mom’s aunt. She fits that description. You didn’t hear from me! Lol! *Flees* Quote:
This was the most popular day to shop for school…
Lol, is that supposed to lead to somewhere….*Thinks* Then again, if Siry’s shopping…then that definitely means it’s the right day to shop!! Quote:
“And such fine taste you have,” the woman was undaunted, “some of my best fabric.”
How many times do I have to repeat! MY SIRY GOT STYLE!!!!!! Quote:
Sirius looked at his reflection in the mirror, maybe it was all those years of not having anything new, but he had to admit that he liked the woman’s work.
*Looks at Siry through the mirror after his comment! *Shakes her head* No, hun, it’s not because of that! It’s just you have the bode to fit it! HEHE! Quote:
“you’re going to break some hearts!” she clapped her hands together.
*Looks at the lady and then thinks about the remark* Is this what I thin it means? Where is this leading? *Keeps reading half in shock* Quote:
Sirius smiled and attempted to ignore this comment, he knew what it usually lead to.
Okay, so he caught that remark too! (We so think alike! Lol) But…so that means….*Reads* Quote:
“The girls are going to love you,” the robemaker gushed, “My niece, Tina, a lovely girl, she goes to Hogwarts too. Fifth year, Hufflepuff, you should look her up.”
LMAO!! *Looks dumbfounded with her mouth wide open* Are you kidding! I’m her neice? So, that means…Okay Okay I’ll shut up and see where you take this! *Huggles her Siry* Quote:
“Draco darling,” a voice called from across the shop. “Come and have a look dear.”
*Stares at Draco* He’ll be nice in here right? Well other than his normal torment toward Hp/Ron. That’s okay, just how I’ve accepted to like Snape b/c of you Liz. I’ll do the same for Draco! Even though I've always loved him, the book was….*Remembers mods* Shocking. Quote:
A good looking young man his own age was standing nearby observing Sirius with interest. If the boy’s pale coloring and aristocratic features did not give away his identity, his intelligent grey eyes would have made him instantly recognizable as they were quite like Sirius’ own grey gaze. An inheritance from a mutual Black family ancestor, those eyes sized Sirius up with the instinctual recognition of another wizard of wealth and class. Sirius could detect no hint that the boy knew who he was as he came over to address him.
WOW! What a description! Seriously, you have awesome writing talents! *Hails her majesty* Lol…*Looks at Dean and hails his majesty too* Quote:
Draco cast a scowl in his mother’s direction, and then turned back to Sirius, “yeah, I know what you mean. She would have had me study at home too, if she had her way,” the boy gestured toward the back of the store.
So, Draco doesn’t like his mom in the book? Well, I've always thought of Draco to have utmost respect for his parents. Maybe we’ll see a change? I doubt it…but hey anything’s possible! Quote:
Sirius figured that Narcissa would have no reason to suspect that the teenager before her was the same young man who had played pranks on her at Black Family get-togethers so many years ago
Lol, Prank eh? No surprise there! Nice addie! Quote:
the family’s good looks were plainly evident in Sirius’ features and it was best not to risk any awkward questions.
Lol, for some reason, I can’t compare Draco’s looks to Siry. They’re like total opposites. Well, at least I think so. I mean, both are cute, just cute in their own ways! Quote:
I expect I’ll see you there.”
CAN EVERYONE STOP HINTING THAT! Liz loves my Siry too much to torment him in Slytherin! Lol, then again, this is to drive us crazy! Just to tell you, it’s working hun! Quote:
I’m Brian Wulfric,”
Have I said how much I love the name Brian? Seriously, if no one believes me, I've posted it numerous times in threads all over SS! *Ends thinking of BSB* Quote:
Sirius felt a brief sympathy for the boy being so clearly overmatched, but all thoughts of his cousin left his mind as he raced out of the shop and headlong into a man passing the store from the opposite direction…
Awwww, I feel sry for poor Draco too! *Hugs Draco and then huggles her siry* Into a man eh? Who could it be? Okay, I’ll just say who came to my mind while reading. It was either Hagrid or Lupin….Maybe Mr. Weasley? I’m not sure….but that’s what I thought….
We’re at the end? Wait… no…there’s more… Quote:
Answer: Because the boy's got styyyyyylllle!!!
LOL! Yah, I guess he does! But hey, so does my SIRY!!! TO repeat once more! Quote:
Psssttt... Tina, did you catch my little reference for you?
Lol, yah I sort of did! I don’t know what to think of it though! Lol, it was in the same sentence as Girls loving him! And I do, which you already know! But, I also saw hearts breaking! But, that’s okay. Every story needs a bit of steaming action! You can write me anyway you like! Thanks for including me at all! Quote:
For all the thinkers out there (but don't say anything) ... I have something else in mind... What object does Harry have that could blow this whole ruse apart...? Just think about that... I've got that covered too... You'll see!
Oooops….Lol, once you get through the posts Liz, you’ll see that I’ve already said something. I’m pretty sure that it’s what you’re talking about! And, like I’ve said I knew you had it covered! Hehehe, Lol, see I’ve been getting closer to reading your mind! LOL!
And again, thankees! *HUGGLES AND KIGGLES AND SHNUGGLES AND CUDDLES LIZ TO DEATH* Lol,
Luff Always,
Tina
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
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| The Sweetest Thing Lissy De Vil Quote:
Originally Posted by Tina!!! :glomp: Oooops….Lol, once you get through the posts Liz, you’ll see that I’ve already said something. I’m pretty sure that it’s what you’re talking about! And, like I’ve said I knew you had it covered! Hehehe, Lol, see I’ve been getting closer to reading your mind! LOL! Actually you did say it! I missed it! Sssssshhhhh... Covered!
Well, it will be
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