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| Honeydukes Cellar (Incomplete Fanfiction) The cellar holds unfinished confections of storytelling, giving readers a glimpse into creative ideas that may one day be revived. |
04-21-2010, 06:41 PM
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| Snidget
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I can confirm that Sophie is completely against young people doing what Connie is thinking. There are a few people in our school who laugh at us if we say that because they think it is cool to do what Connie is thinking.
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04-21-2010, 09:00 PM
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Originally Posted by Morag "Ronald!" He turned around to face Hermionie and she slapped him. Bahahahaha, Way to go, Hermione! Quote:
"Don't push it Ginny! It's already the early hours of the morning and quite frankly I've been nice enough to let you stay up this long." She tutted.
Haha, I love Molly. Quote:
I put a finger to his lips and shook my head. "If you want it, come and get it...in thirty minutes."
Hahahahaha, I loved this bit!  Totally cute. Quote:
"Gin, you gave me you."
Awwwwweeeeee, this was precious  I loved it!
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04-22-2010, 03:17 AM
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| Mooncalf
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Nice post Soph...pams when you can... |
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04-22-2010, 04:30 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | New Post ! Chapter 5 Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Chapter 5- A long one
"Gin" Harry whispered opening my bedroom door.
"Hey" I replied. He wallked over and knelt beside the edge of my bed. I slinked my arms around his neck and he brought my face to his. He kissed me passionatly. One of my hands broke away and gripped the collar of his shirt. I pulled him up into bed beside me. I snuggled up to him. There was a plesent warmth radiating off his body. His arms were wound tight around my body. "I almost forgot. Your birthday present" I went and got it from my dressing table where it was wrapped up neatly in gold paper and red ribbon inside a red giftbag. I handed it to him with a hug and a kiss on the cheek. "Happy birthday Harry"
"Thanks"
"What is it? It's a big present"
"Well, it's actually just a few little ones" I told him. There were four presents in total. He opened the first. It was a book called the 100 Greatest Wizards of all time.
"Thanks Gin." we flicked through it quickly spotting wizards like Albus Dumbeldore, and then there was Harry, the boy who lived. He laughed when he saw his picuture. He lay the book across our laps and he put one arm around my shoulders. "Thanks Gin, I love it."
The second present was a box of belgian chocolates from Honeydukes. We munched on a few of them together. We shared our favourite ones and the nasty tasting ones we dared each other to each, though some were just too revolting.
The third, was a voucher for a subscription to Quiditch Weekly. "I asked if they would sent it to Hogwarts and they said it would be no problem." I told him.
He kissed my forehead. "Gin, this is far too much. Thank you and I've not even opened all of them yet."
"Anything for you Harry."
"And you said I was hopelessly romantic." he laughed
He opened the last present. "I love it Gin. Thank you, sooo much" He gave me a tight squeeze and kissed my cheek.I held out my hand for him to take. It was a scrapbook I had put together of his six years at Hogwarts with pictures of the four of us, Harry, myself, Ron and Hermionie and there was also a few pictures of his parents. On the front was a picture of the two of us He was so like his dad it was unbelievable. But he has his mums eyes and lovely eyes they are to inherit. We're going to have beautiful children. Then I laughed then relised it was out loud.
"Whats so funny?" He asked smiling at me.
"I honestly can't tell you" I laughed
"Yes you can, you can tell me anything," he pressed his lips to my neck.
"Harry." I shook my head, "I'm so scared. Don't ever leave me again."
"I promise. But Gin, you know how angry your mum was with you for joining in the fight at the ministry, so if something like that happens in the future, there in no way you will be taking part. Your way to precious. And thoses weeks appart form you prove that." He hugged me tightly
"My mum and dad can't stop me. And niether can you! I'm practically an adult!"
"Your fifteen Ginny. Your still young, practically a baby and at least have a whole life to live."
"Harry, be quiet. you sound even worse than my mum. Plus your sixteen and you still have your whole life ahead of you too. Plus, I doubt that a baby would kiss you like I do!"
"And this is what you found funny?" he asked.
"No. That was something else" I said as I cuddled closer to him.
"So what was funny?" He asked again.
"Promise me something, Harry"
"Anything for you Gin" He said repeating me line from earlier. I rolled my eyes
"Stay with me." I said as I gazed deep into his eyes. I was serious
"Gin, you know I will." He answered.
"And then I'll tell you. In the near future, if you remember."
"Aw don't do that."
"You just promised to stay with me. That way, we have the rest of our lives, together." I put my hand on his cheek and brought his face round to mine. "I can't see a life without you Harry. It wouldn't be worth living." He kissed me softly.
"Thank you Ginny. For all the lovely birthday gifts. And for you. I love you Gin." I pulled him toward me and kissed him passionatly. My head hit the pillow and I pulled him with me. I drew away for a breath but he continued to kiss me under my throat and down my neck. I pulled him back up to my face. He rolled over so I was on top of him. His hands were sliding down my body. They were under my t-shirt and then it was on the floor. His fingers traces soft patterns up and down my back. They were warm and soft on my skin. I reached for his t-shirt. He helped me with it, and it too was on the floor. We laughed in unison. My hands touched his bare chest. I stopped what I was doing and sat on top of him, my legs at either side of his body. He was unbearable beautiful. My hands glided along his chest. He put his arms around my waist and pulled me back to him. It was nearly dawn, but we didn't have a care in the world. We had each other.
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04-22-2010, 05:53 PM
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| Puffskein
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Awh that was sooooo cute (L)(A)  PAMS PAMS PAMS !!!!!
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04-22-2010, 06:09 PM
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| Snidget
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black Yes they will have lovely children like Albus. But not as lovely as Draco's kids!
Aww, her presents were sooo nice!
Gah..! My computer is lagging really badly.. Can't review all that well
Gabriella
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04-22-2010, 07:45 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Sophie, I'm happy about what you assured me of earlier. You have another very good, and well written post here. Some things I especially like are: Quote:
It was a book called the 100 Greatest Wizards of all time.
"Thanks Gin." we flicked through it quickly spotting wizards like Albus Dumbeldore, and then there was Harry, the boy who lived.
This is great! I want one of these books! Quote:
a box of belgian chocolates from Honeydukes
Alas, my downfall. I love chocolates and my figure shows it. Quote:
a voucher for a subscription to Quiditch Weekly
I wouldn't need to have this, but it was really sweet to get it for Harry. Quote:
It was a scrapbook I had put together of his six years at Hogwarts with pictures of the four of us, Harry, myself, Ron and Hermionie and there was also a few pictures of his parents. On the front was a picture of the two of us He was so like his dad it was unbelievable. But he has his mums eyes and lovely eyes they are to inherit. We're going to have beautiful children.
Ah, this was so sweet of Ginny! And I love the thoughts you gave her as she was looking at it with Harry.
I'll be watching for your next post. Good job.
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04-22-2010, 07:48 PM
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| Graphorn
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Awww that was so romantic!
I like the presents...specially the scrapbook 
Cant wait for more!
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04-22-2010, 08:17 PM
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| Snidget
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I loved this post!
Very romantic!
The tops were on the floor! Great way to describe them stripping without having to be rude about it!
I loved this!
PAMS PAMS!
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04-22-2010, 09:04 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Morag . It was a scrapbook I had put together of his six years at Hogwarts with pictures of the four of us, Harry, myself, Ron and Hermionie and there was also a few pictures of his parents. On the front was a picture of the two of us. He was so like his dad it was unbelievable. But he has his mums eyes and what lovely eyes they are to inherit. We're going to have beautiful children. Then I laughed then realized it was out loud. Awe, cute. I love scrapbooks Quote:
"You just promised to stay with me. That way, we have the rest of our lives, together." I put my hand on his cheek and brought his face round to mine. "I can't see a life without you Harry. It wouldn't be worth living." He kissed me softly.
Sooo sweet Quote:
It was nearly dawn, but we didn't have a care in the world. We had each other.
Absolutely precious 
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04-23-2010, 03:27 AM
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| Mooncalf
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good one...pams when you can...
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04-23-2010, 03:28 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Chapter 6 Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Enjoy
Chapter 6 I woke with a loud noise. There was lots of talking but I was much too comfertable to get up I was lying across something and my hands were knotted in something soft. Without opening my eyes, I streched. Then I realised what I was lying on. Crap. My eyes fluttered open quickly to find Harry sleeping peacefully with me in his arms. Then I noticed I had falled asleep in my bra and pyjama shorts. I didn't remember that either. "Harry! Wake up." I said jumping out of bed and rummaging around the floor for my t-shirt.
"Mmm...Gin? Is that you" His eyes opened. I stood in front of him half naked with a stern look on my face. "Harry, you fell asleep in here last night and knowing our luck Ron will awaken any minuet to come and find you." I told him. He sat on the side of my bed and took my hand and pulled me into the circle of his arms and kissed my stomach. He sat holding me while I kissed his hair once then continued to look for something clean and presentable to were as the Delacours were arriving today. Harry stared after me, lounging along my bed. "Are you enjoying the view?" I asked him as I caught him looking at me from through the mirror on my dressing table
"You mean your half-naked being?" He asked back. I just stared at him.
"Is that all you care about?" I said with my back to him while looking for my hairbrush on my dressing table.
"No!" He said quite appaled. Suddenly his arms were around my waist for behind me.
"Thats ok then." I said turning around in his arms. "But you need to get ready Harry!" I said sternly
"Ok, I'm going" He moaned. He kissed me quickly on the lips before walking to the door. "Love you Gin"
I smiled "I love me too" I laughed and waited to see if he'd notice my error.
"What?" He asked wondering if he had heard correctly and peeping his head around the door.
"Just kidding. Love you too Harry" and I blew him a kiss. I know its only short. I might even post chapter 7, since its Friday and I have a long peaceful weekend ahead :D Comments Please!
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04-23-2010, 03:29 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Wow, I just realised how big the writing is... oh well :p Soph x
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04-23-2010, 04:26 PM
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Haha i was thinking about the size too..Hmmm..
Awww A really cute little chapter 
Anddd He fell asleep!!! Opps!!! 
Haha the little 'Error' at the end made me think twice..i had to read it twice  Loved it though!
More soon please
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04-23-2010, 05:00 PM
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| Snidget
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Bwhahahaha! That was reaaaaally funny! I didn't notice the error *iz embarrassed* till Evangeline made a comment, but it was good! Haha. Ginny is awesome!
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04-23-2010, 05:06 PM
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funny...nice post...
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04-23-2010, 06:20 PM
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Haha the end was good  PAMS PAMS PAMS !!!!!
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04-23-2010, 08:34 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Haha, that was cute and funnnnyy at the end 
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04-23-2010, 09:26 PM
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| Snidget
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Great chappie Sophie!
You have to post more soon!!!!
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04-24-2010, 01:01 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Sophie, OK, yeah, it was a short post, but that's ok. You got your story point out, and made us want more. Those are the important things. I'm thinking Ginny isn't going to be having a good day, what with Gabriella (sp) arriving in a little bit. I really don't know why Ginny feels threatened by her. But, just the same, I'll be watching for your next post.
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04-24-2010, 08:40 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | I like cookies! hehee Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie I'm thinking Ginny isn't going to be having a good day, what with Gabriella (sp) arriving in a little bit. I really don't know why Ginny feels threatened by her. But, just the same, I'll be watching for your next post.
Good job Sophie.  I think Ginny feels that she's just got Harry back and with Gabrielle (I checked the books for the spelling) turning up, who has a bit of a thing for Harry, she doesn't Harry to leave her again. I can assure you that the next chapter will be rather interesting.
Sophie x
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04-24-2010, 09:28 AM
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| Snidget
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I love this story, it is doing realy well.
Pams Pams!!!!
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04-25-2010, 05:20 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Chapter 7- Arrival of the Delacours :) Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Sorry I didn't post yesterday. I was out all day shopping for dresses for weddings...... Anyway.......
Chapter 7
I don't know how we got away with it. Everyone was so caught with the arrival of the Delacour that our little sleepover seemed to go unnoticed.
I wore a simple green summer dress with a white cardigan as again, today was sunny. Harry was waiting for me outside my room door. He hugged me tight and then took a step back to admire, what he calls 'My beauty'.
"You smell nice, Harry." I told him "And I must say, you are very, very presentable."
"You smell nice too, Gin" He said taking my hand "And you suit green. Brings out the colour of your hair"
"Harry, thats the perfume you got me for my birthday."
We waited in the kitchen, quietly sipping coffee. Ron clearly wasn't happy that Harry and I were back together. When Harry asked him if he slept well he said, "No, not really, Harry. Not with your snoring." Ron spoke in a disgusted tone. I almost spat my coffee out but then almost choked trying to swallow it. I burt out into hysterical laughter. "What's so funny, Ginny." he asked, but I laughed harder and Harry joined in. The look of anger on Ron's face was priceless. "Fine then." He said and walked out the kitchen.
"Well it wasn't me keeping him up." Harry told Hermionie. "I'm lucky if I was in that room for thirty minuets last night." Hermionie finally got what we were on about. She laughed too
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The Delacours arrived shortly after ten in the morning. I was too tired to be bother with the comotion and I was sure Harry felt the same. We were leaning against the worktop at the back of the kitchen with our eyes closed. Harry had his arm around my waist and I leaned against him with my head rested on his shoulder. "Come on," He said taking my hand, "Let's get out of here." Gabrielle looked at Harry and batted her eyelashes but then looked awfully disapointed that he was taking me with him wherever we were going. She drew me a dirty look but I just smiled and waved before we headed out to the garden.
Harry sat under the old oak tree in the small forest area behind the orchard and pulled me onto his lap. We sat in silence for a few minuets lost in the time we finally had together, obsorbing the moment. Harry broke the silence.
"Gin, I've been thinking" He said
"About...?"
"Us"
"I think about us too"
"Well, I was thinking, about when all this is all over. I mean, you'll deffinatly stay with me?"
"Of course, silly" He hugged me tighter to him.
"I'm going to marry you one day, Ginny Weasley." He told me gaazing into the distance.
"Are you serious?"
"You don't need to but I've told you before, Gin, I love you and you said it yourself last night that you can't see a life without me in it." I threw my arms around him and he kissed me softly.
"I love you too, Harry" I told him before he kissed me tenderly. "But for now lets take it easy. I like this, the way things are. We're going at a nice pace."
"I agree." he said before rolling over on the grass and kissing me passionatly.
So tell me what you think...
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04-25-2010, 05:26 PM
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nice post...poor Ron...  ...pams when you can...
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04-25-2010, 05:45 PM
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Originally Posted by Morag When Harry asked him if he slept well he said, "No, not really, Harry. Not with your snoring." Ron spoke in a disgusted tone. Hahahahahaha, I wonder what he was hearing! Quote:
"I'm going to marry you one day, Ginny Weasley." He told me gaazing into the distance.
Awe, this is precious Quote:
So tell me what you think...
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