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| Honeydukes Cellar (Incomplete FF) Here is the home to those stories who didn't quite get told in full. |
07-12-2007, 02:41 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: under Tom's bed.
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Yay!! Good job!! I loved it!
PAMS!!
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07-31-2007, 02:39 AM
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#277 (permalink)
| Banshee
Join Date: May 2007 Location: Gotham
Posts: 51,213
Hogwarts RPG Name: TBD Gryffindor Hogwarts RPG Name: Zara H. Bunbury-Foster Slytherin Fifth Year | Professor Pink | Mrs. Bruce Wayne | I'm on a Goat | Glitterpuff | Dumbledore's Defense Squad | BHB
OMG!!! Write more!!! I've never even read a fanfic till I read yours....and I must say, I am impressed!!!! Brilliant!!!
The only criticism I have is this: when is this all taking place? their 7th year? if so, Karkaroff's dead already.....if not, then when? b/c if it's before their 7th year, wouldn't they all still have The Trace on them? Regardless, it's awesome and Draco's dialogue is highly accurate. |
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08-01-2007, 01:04 AM
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#278 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore! Hey everyone! Thanks for all of the awesome feedback! I'm so glad that the fan fictions are open again, and to celebrate I'll be posting tonight!
And as for the question: Yes, this is all taking place during their seventh year. And, just in case you guys haven't noticed - lol - I'm not really sticking to the books fact-for-fact. That would just take all of the fun out of writing it.
A big thanks goes out to my amazing reader marfamarfa, because without her there probably wouldn't be a post tonight.
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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08-01-2007, 02:44 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Post Seventeen Bassoons galore!
"You're back!"
A soft collision against my body proves that Janie missed me for the days I was gone. She's jumped on me and I almost loose my footing. When I'm steady, I look down at her and I can only smile.
"So she's okay - your grandmother?" she hurriedly asks after she's done hugging me.
Ignoring her question, I lean down and kiss her. God, how I missed those lips. And, maybe if I kiss her long enough, she'll forget to ask about my "family" again ...
No such luck. After we've returned to the sofa - our favorite piece of furniture in the Room of Requirement - she looks at me, and I can see it in her eyes that she's determined for details.
"Look," I say before she can press. "My grandma has a broken hip and collar bone. She slipped, but with how frail she is ... it didn't treat her body kindly. My dad's with her now ... she'll be okay."
Janie lets out a sigh of relief. "Whew. It really was nice of you to take care of her, Greg. I hope one day I can meet her. She's really lucky to have you ... so am I."
We spend the rest of the night there. Janie falls asleep on my shoulder and I gently rest my head on top of hers. She smells of flowers and parchment, and it's the nicest thing in the world.
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"Where were you last night?" is the first thing Crabbe asks when I sit down in the Great Hall the next morning.
Great. The oaf is now on my tail. I already have Him and Malfoy - is that not enough?
"What do you mean?" I ask as I take a deep bite into a piece of bread. "I went up to the dormitory and went to sleep."
He looks at me, his smug face turning into one of confusion. "Whaaa? I didn't see you there."
"Well I was. Are you feeling okay?"
He doesn't answer, but instead questions, "Seen Draco yet?"
I shake my head, and I can only wonder what he's gotten himself - and all of us - into.
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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08-01-2007, 05:04 AM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: In my dreams
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Thank you for posting.PAMS please!!!!!!
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08-01-2007, 05:16 AM
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| Banshee
Join Date: May 2007 Location: Gotham
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Hogwarts RPG Name: TBD Gryffindor Hogwarts RPG Name: Zara H. Bunbury-Foster Slytherin Fifth Year | Professor Pink | Mrs. Bruce Wayne | I'm on a Goat | Glitterpuff | Dumbledore's Defense Squad | BHB
CAITLIN!!!!!!!!!
You're brilliant!!! post more please!!!!!
*This is officially the best fanfic EVER!!!!!!!*
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08-01-2007, 11:12 AM
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#282 (permalink)
| Keeper of Ginny's AttitudeBatty Bella Knarl
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Dancing in the rain.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tara Elizabeth Kensington |
Yeah for the posting!! PAMS!!
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08-02-2007, 10:29 PM
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#283 (permalink)
| Ramora
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Avvie by... Well, ac
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lia Taylor | Draco's Director Dramione=OTP OMG, I just caught up on all the posts I missed when I dropped off the face of the earth... They're amazing!!
Can't wait for the next one! |
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08-08-2007, 11:19 AM
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#284 (permalink)
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Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: SHIELD's Helicarrier
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Dhruv Vihaan Khanna Graduated Hogwarts RPG Name: Aryan Atreyu-Rehman Slytherin Fourth Year x12 x12
| ~ Mrs. Steve Harrington ~ It be like that sometimes.
Caitlin!!! I feel so guilty i hadnt been keeping track of your FF. I saw the link in your siggie & caught up on it. Love how its going!!
PAMS!!!
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08-22-2007, 05:28 PM
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#285 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: under Tom's bed.
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Hurry up and post all ready! |
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09-08-2007, 09:14 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: The Eugene O'Neill Theatre
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lena Lovegood Fifth |
Hey!
That last post was really good, I can't wait to find out what Draco has planned next. PAMS!
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09-09-2007, 10:43 PM
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#287 (permalink)
| Keeper of Ginny's AttitudeBatty Bella Knarl
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Dancing in the rain.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tara Elizabeth Kensington |
Come on Caitlin we are dieing from suspense!!!
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09-12-2007, 01:26 AM
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#288 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore! Hey guys! Yeah, I know, I suck. I'm sorry. Time seriously has flown by. It feels like I just posted here last week! I just wanted to let you know tomorrow is Wednesday, which is my free day, basically, and I'll be posting!
I love you all, and I'm so sorry it's been this long. <33
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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09-12-2007, 11:52 PM
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#289 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Post Eighteen Bassoons galore!
The rest of the weekend passes in silence. Draco returns by Sunday, just in time for classes to start up again. He has a smug look on his face, yet he doesn't care to share with the two of us what happened in his absence.
I walk into Potions, eager to sit back and take in the fumes. We've been working on some concoction that smells like mint and berries ... I don't work in the class, so it's much easier to sleep with those versus the day they worked with newt livers.
Draco plops down in the seat next to me and sighs. "Well it all went well." About time you told me, I think, but I bite my tongue.
The Professor glides into the classroom, assigning us the next steps of our creation. I, of course, ignore her. If I want a potion I'll pay someone to make it.
Moving on past that, I scoot my chair closer to Malfoy. Leaning on the table, I look at him, waiting for him to continue. Taking the hint, he sighs and begins to grind up his knotgrass.
"I'm too susceptible to being seen as a threat with Snape ... he'd know that I was up to something. I talked to the Dark Lord about this ... he feels it is not my place to try to befriend our enemies. Therefore ... he's given me the honorable take of finding someone who is."
He turns and looks blantantly at me. I stare back, and then it hits me.
"You're kidding, right? You've picked me?"
He nods, and it's all I can do to keep from slugging him.
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"Why me?! Why me?" I cry, slamming myself down onto my bed. I am stuck, alone, talking to myself. I want Janie so bad, but I can never tell her.
I am in this by myself.
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
Last edited by the.time.is.now; 09-12-2007 at 11:54 PM.
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09-13-2007, 03:17 AM
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#290 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Guelph, Ontario
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvan Weatherskein First Year | Crafty
That was excellent! Please don't wait so long between posts anymore. It makes me sad.....
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09-13-2007, 03:16 PM
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| Keeper of Ginny's AttitudeBatty Bella Knarl
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Dancing in the rain.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tara Elizabeth Kensington |
YAY!! a post thank you thank you thank you!!! It was amazing!!
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09-22-2007, 03:34 AM
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#292 (permalink)
| Banshee
Join Date: May 2007 Location: Gotham
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Hogwarts RPG Name: TBD Gryffindor Hogwarts RPG Name: Zara H. Bunbury-Foster Slytherin Fifth Year | Professor Pink | Mrs. Bruce Wayne | I'm on a Goat | Glitterpuff | Dumbledore's Defense Squad | BHB Wow. And I was never a fan of Death Eaters before now..... POST SOME MORE SOON AS POSSIBLE PLEEEEEEEEZ!!!!
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10-15-2007, 04:14 PM
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#293 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore! Hey guys ... if you haven't all left by now ... () ... I'm writing and I'll post by today/tomorrow!
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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10-15-2007, 10:19 PM
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#294 (permalink)
| Keeper of Ginny's AttitudeBatty Bella Knarl
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Dancing in the rain.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tara Elizabeth Kensington |
yay!!!!!! Can't wait!!!
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11-09-2007, 02:15 AM
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#295 (permalink)
| Veela
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Left Coast (-8 GMT)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maximus O. Vindictus III First Year | No Touchy! ♥ demented_teacher Last update 12 SEPT 2007
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11-23-2007, 05:49 PM
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#296 (permalink)
| Veela
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Left Coast (-8 GMT)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maximus O. Vindictus III First Year | No Touchy! ♥ demented_teacher Reactivated per request
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12-07-2007, 11:01 PM
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#297 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore! HEY GUYS!
I know I died away, and I'm really sorry. I'm really going to rededicate myself to this fan fiction, so expect a post sometime soon. Thank you for staying dedicated!
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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12-19-2007, 12:06 PM
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#298 (permalink)
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Wrackspurt
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: SHIELD's Helicarrier
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Dhruv Vihaan Khanna Graduated Hogwarts RPG Name: Aryan Atreyu-Rehman Slytherin Fourth Year x12 x12
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Hey Cait!! Just read your last post!
PAMS!!!
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12-27-2007, 08:13 PM
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#299 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Post Nineteen Bassoons galore!
Later, when I reenter the Common Room, Draco is sitting on one of the couches. There are first years surrounding him on the floor, listening eagerly as he talks about experiences with darker magic and fighting.
“Er, Malfoy?” I ask timidly. The group looks up and me, and Draco glares.
“What?”
I sigh. “Can I talk to you for a second?”
He holds a scornful gaze for a few seconds longer, then slowly stands up. I lead us over to the stairs, where we sit. “Why … how does He expect me to befriend Snape, much less have him trust me? It’s you he’s always favored, no matter how much trouble you were in.”
“Yes, but he also knows me too well, and he knows how deep I’m in with the Dark Lord at the moment. He won’t be himself with me, much less trust me,” he explains slowly, as if speaking to a child. “It’s got to be you. I’d take Crabbe over you but he’s such a blundering idiot that he’d probably forget why he was there.”
I lean back against the wall, so Draco leaves me to my thoughts.
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Janie’s birthday is coming, and I don’t quite know what I’m going to get her. A lot of it is scary, because things that interest me don’t really interest her … like severed heads and Dark Magic. Draco will be furious if he knows that I’m with her still, much less that I’m better when I’m around her.
And then part of me wonders - does the Dark Lord know we’re still together? Does Draco? I’m sure they do. Neither are stupid … which would explain why he has me, of all people, being the one to befriend Snape.
As punishment.
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
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12-30-2007, 02:38 AM
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#300 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Guelph, Ontario
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvan Weatherskein First Year | Crafty
Stop teasing! Post more!!!!!
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