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08-18-2010, 05:11 PM
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I had a slight issue with the story but I fixed it.
“ ALICIA!” I heard Jamie’s shout from a distance and looked up. He was running up the side of the hill towards me. I used Crabbe’s lifeless body to try and stand. It didn’t work- my knees buckled and I fell again. “ COME ON! MOVE! ALICIA- NO!” He froze as someone grabbed my hair and pulled my head back. I stared at Jamie as he stepped forwards, fear and anger on his face. I saw the wand out of the corner of my eye and started to fight against the hand wrapped in my long silver hair. As the Cruciatus Curse hit Jamie in the chest, I started screaming.
“ JAMIE! NO! STOP IT! LET GO OF-” Something hit the back of my head- hard. Whoever had hold of me, let go and I fell sideways into the mud. My vision grew dark as Jamie scrambled to his feet, his mouth forming the words that I couldn’t hear. Then everything was black.
The next thing I knew, it was darker outside- I could see through the window opposite me- and I was under a large green and silver bed cover. I looked either side of me and felt suddenly sick- under the cover beside me, Draco Malfoy was asleep. I climbed out of the bed and looked at my reflection in the mirror under the window. A black ring circled my right eye. I frowned. Everything, the black eye; the cuts up my legs and arms, across my face; the bruises over my body- looked days old. I was only at the Burrow yesterday, wasn’t I? The blood that was dried across my face didn’t help the sickness thing. I glanced at my hair and groaned loudly. It was a sickly green and was matted with mud and blood. A movement behind made me scream.
“ You’re awake?” Malfoy said as I jumped away from the bed and backed towards the wall. I forgot that I was just in my underwear. “ I’m not going to hurt you” He said quietly, sitting up. I felt uneasy as I scanned through his thoughts. I couldn’t breathe as I hit the cold mirror.
“ NO!” I shouted and he climbed out of the bed. “ NO! You hate me!” He stepped forwards and I flattened myself against the mirror. My thoughts flickered to my unborn twins.
“ I almost forgot you could do that… Read my mind…” I cringed as I heard them again. He turned away from me and pulled something up off the floor. I glanced at the door. “ Here- get dressed” I didn’t catch the dress. It fell into a pile at my feet.
“ You hate me! You tried to kill me! I HATE YOU!” I shouted, tears pooling in my eyes.
“ I don’t think you do…” He muttered. Panic took over me. The door was too far away- I’d cornered myself- so, I started laughing.
“ You’re crazy if you think that!” I said through my maniac laughter. I didn’t see where the idea came from but he kicked me in the chest. I was suddenly bent double from the pain, finding it hard to breathe. “ What’s. The. Matter? Truth. Hurts?” I asked breathlessly.
“ I don’t want to hurt you…” He said quietly and I started to laugh again. It was painful so I cut it off quickly.
“ You. Don’t. Want. To. Hurt. Me? You. Already. Have!” I wished I could stand up straight but the pain was too much. “ You. Took. My. Kids. Away. From. Me! You. Tried. To. Kill. Me!” I got another kick to my already bruised chest and fell to my knees, gasping.
“ Enough!” He said angrily and I suddenly saw the seventeen year old Slytherin again. “ I’ve had enough!” He strode over to me and grabbed my hair, pulling me to my feet. I was still struggling to take a breath. He snatched the dress of the floor and dragged me out of the room. Hope you enjoy it
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08-18-2010, 05:36 PM
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Ohmylanta, Abi! You can't just leave it there! Please PAMS! I have to know what happens! Please?
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08-19-2010, 05:51 PM
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Hey Abi. I've been sneeking around this FanFic for some time and I thought you weren't going to post on it again so I never replyed but here I am. I absolutly LOVE your story! PAMS! Malfoy is a twat!!! I hate him Grrrrrrrr.... Did he rape her? It's just kinda what it looks like. And it's very sad and makes me want to cry He is totally eartless taking her Kids and Jamie away from her. Malfoy- I will hunt you down
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08-19-2010, 07:35 PM
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OMG GREAT POST!! I kinda gave up on this not knowing if it was being continued but Woohoo!!
I was wrong, thank Merlin for that
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08-20-2010, 07:56 PM
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP OMG GREAT POST!! I kinda gave up on this not knowing if it was being continued but Woohoo!!
I was wrong, thank Merlin for that I nearly gave up it so don't worry... Quote:
Originally Posted by Morag Hey Abi. I've been sneeking around this FanFic for some time and I thought you weren't going to post on it again so I never replyed but here I am. I absolutly LOVE your story! PAMS! Malfoy is a twat!!! I hate him Grrrrrrrr.... Did he rape her? It's just kinda what it looks like. And it's very sad and makes me want to cry He is totally eartless taking her Kids and Jamie away from her. Malfoy- I will hunt you down
S x Thanks for commenting Sophie!
He IS totally heartless- in this story anyway!
I can tell you now that he...
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Originally Posted by emilyblack Ohmylanta, Abi! You can't just leave it there! Please PAMS! I have to know what happens! Please? Ohmylanta?
Where did that come from?
I shall post when my other laptop is fixed! YOU!
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08-20-2010, 08:36 PM
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Originally Posted by 3uzz3ee Ohmylanta?
Where did that come from? I have no idea where the phrase is from... But I do know I went through this phase in high school, saying "ohmylanta" all the time, whenever anything happened. It's just what came to mind when reading your amazing fic! |
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08-20-2010, 08:41 PM
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Abi and Emily are just too funy
Its not just this fic Em. You say it all the time
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08-20-2010, 08:46 PM
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Abi and Emily are just too funy Thanks Quote:
Its not just this fic Em. You say it all the time Nu uh! I usually say OhmyGOSH! SO there! |
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08-21-2010, 05:01 PM
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Originally Posted by emilyblack Nu uh! I usually say OhmyGOSH! SO there! I have a friend on here, Amelia, and she says OhMyGolly... It was sooooo funny at the time!
The computer has now been removed from my house so it can be fixed...
So I shall keep you updated on it until I can post!
Abi
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08-21-2010, 08:35 PM
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OK I shall miss this story! I missed it before but now I know its no gone forever then I will miss it even more!!
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08-22-2010, 02:11 AM
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omg!!!!!!! you posted!!!! yay!!!! is she gonna be okay? does malfoy like her or something? why is he really doing this? ahhh! I'm going insane!!!
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08-28-2010, 03:27 PM
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“ Where. Are. My. Kids?” I said between gasps as I stumbled down a corridor. I could hear shouting echoing up to us.
“ They’re safe- for now”
“ They’re. Not. Even. Here…” I said, grief gripping my heart.
He glared down at me as a door opened and the shouting was suddenly close.
“ IF ANYTHING’S HAPPENED TO MY WIFE, I’LL KILL YOU, MALFOY!” I frowned as Malfoy rolled his eyes.
“ Shut up, Starlight- I bought you a present. I’m done with it anyway” He said, opening a door and throwing me into a dark room. I lay on my side, gasping for air as I heard footsteps close by. “ Here…” Malfoy threw my dress into the room and closed the door. Tears poured down my face as I tried to get up. Something touched my cheek, wiping them away.
“ Shh… It’s okay- we’re together now… Shh” Jamie’s voice was overrun with panic as he tried to soothe me.
“ Oh, Jamie! I’m so. Sorry-” I started but he shushed me again.
“ Never apologise for something that’s not your fault” He said as he pulled me up off the floor. Through my gasping and tears, I found his face.
“ You’re. Bleeding” I said, unwrapping an arm from my chest and touching the cut on his temple. It healed under my fingertips.
“ Looks like you were too” He said as he looked over my nearly naked body. I smiled slightly.
“ Crabbe. And. Goyle. But. They. Won’t. Do. It. Again. I. Killed. Them” Jamie nodded.
“ I know- Harry and Ron helped me move the bodies while Luna tried to wake Neville up… Everyone’s fine before you ask,” He added as I opened my mouth. “ We were worried about you” I frowned up at him.
“ How long have I been here?” I said, my breathe returning and letting me speak properly.
“ Ten days” He said quietly, refusing to meet my gaze. “ I’ve been here for three days, shouting at them to bring you in” Something crossed his face too quickly for me to read it.
“ What is it?” I asked, refusing the urge to just pick it out of his head. “ Tell me”
“ What did Malfoy mean? The bit when he said that he was finished with you?” He said, looking down at me. I felt the colour drain from my face as my hair was suddenly lying round my shoulders. He looked away from me again. Well?
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08-28-2010, 05:09 PM
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Well! Very good Abi!! I loved it
Poor Ali, ten days? Jeezo - didn't expect that!
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08-29-2010, 02:51 PM
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I'm glad they're together gain. They might get through it all a bit easier. I hope they are both ok and the kids are safe.
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08-29-2010, 07:11 PM
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Originally Posted by 3uzz3ee “They’re safe- for now” What do you mean? FOR NOW?? Quote:
“Ten days” He said quietly, refusing to meet my gaze.
Oh wow, that's a long time. Quote:
“What did Malfoy mean? The bit when he said that he was finished with you?” He said, looking down at me. I felt the colour drain from my face as my hair was suddenly lying round my shoulders. He looked away from me again.
Awe, I feel so bad for the two of them. Must you be evil and put them through this? Quote: Well? Well, of course it was fantastic. Aren't they always? Great post, Abi! Please PAMS! |
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09-02-2010, 02:32 PM
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“ Jamie?” He didn’t look round. “ Jamie, I’m sorry. I’m sorry for everything that’s ever happened to us-” He twitched and I stopped talking.
“ Alicia Luna Starlight...” I smiled slightly at my full name. “ It doesn’t matter what’s happened- or going to happen, or whatever- I love you more than anyone will know! I don’t care why Malfoy did that to you- I only wanted to know what he’d done” He said, looking back down at me. I shivered slightly and he laughed. “ Come on, let’s get you dressed” He picked up the dress and frowned. “ Hmm... I’ll have to buy you a new one when we get out of here” He said as he helped me into the tattered garment. I was still freezing so he pulled off his mud splattered, white hooded jacket and helped me into that too.
“ I love you too, you know” I said as we sat in a corner together.
“ I know... Are you feeling better?” I nodded and he lent down to kiss me. “ Have you tried contacting the others yet?” He asked, pulling away.
“ No- I was too occupied in trying to breath. I’ll try now” I said, reaching for him again.
“ Alicia- the others” He said round my lips. I frowned and nodded, making him laugh. Thinking of Hermione, I closed my eyes.
‘ Hermione?’
‘ Alicia! Oh, thank god!’ I smiled and felt Jamie touch the corner of my mouth. ‘ Are you okay?’
‘ Well, there’s no lasting damage- Hermione, I’ve got a problem- I’m having difficulty breathing, Jamie hasn’t got a wand and we’re locked in a room at Malfoy Manor’
‘ We’re on our way’ She thought quickly.
‘ No- plan it out first. If you just come rushing in here, someone’ll get hurt... Victorie, Teddy and Tasha are not to come here’ I thought and I felt her agreement.
‘ All right- we’ll plan now and be there tomorrow’ I opened my eyes.
“ Well?” Jamie said and I grinned at him.
“ We’re getting out to- to- tomorrow” I said, yawning.
“ You should get some sleep” He said, watching me stand up. I shook my head.
“ I don’t want to... I’ve got to find out where the kids are... Anyway, I’ve been asleep for ten days” I said, wincing as I poked the large bruise on my chest. It vanished under my fingers.
“ Don’t worry- We’ll find them” He said as I traced over the cut on his arm, healing it.
“ I’m not worried about finding them- I’m worried about what will happen when we find t- t- them” I said, yawning again.
“ Come here...” I sat down beside him and leaned against his side. He pulled me onto his lap and hugged me tightly. “ Get some sleep- we’ve got a little while to wait” I fell asleep as soon as I shut my eyes, Jamie’s fingers tracing soft patterns up my arm. Well?
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09-02-2010, 03:08 PM
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Originally Posted by 3uzz3ee “Come here...” I sat down beside him and leaned against his side. He pulled me onto his lap and hugged me tightly. “Get some sleep- we’ve got a little while to wait” I fell asleep as soon as I shut my eyes, Jamie’s fingers tracing soft patterns up my arm. They are the cutest couple
Alicia's powers do come in handy in situations like these, with the healing and reading minds thing. If only I had that.
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09-02-2010, 03:46 PM
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Great job Abi!! Its strange reading them when they are older but super-cool at the same time!!
PAMS PAMS!
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09-03-2010, 06:14 PM
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Aww. See what I mean,...things are so much better now they are together. I hope they do get out tomorrow though things never seem to go the way they are planned.
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09-13-2010, 02:09 PM
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Part Three
Jamie
Alicia must have been asleep for at least five hours when I heard footsteps outside on the gravel paths. The loud echoing bang that followed jolted Alicia awake.
“ Wha-” She said, as she jumped to her feet, her hands held out in front of her. “ Jamie?”
“ Still here...” She relaxed and closed her eyes.
“ The others are here- Harry, Ron, Hermione, Neville, Luna and the Aurors are fighting... Ginny’s trying to convince someone to come and find us” She said, frowning. “ WHAT!” I jumped as her shout echoed round the tiny stone room. “ Teddy, Victorie and Tasha are here! That’s who Ginny’s with!”
“ Good- I want out of this room” I said. One thing filled my head- finding Malfoy.
“ No. You’re not facing him alone. I’m going to be there” Alicia said at once, glaring at me. “ TURN LEFT!” I jumped again. “ Sorry- they’re lost... I’m going to shout again- TURN RIGHT! I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU CAME HERE! IT’S FAR TOO DANGEROUS! LEFT!” I grinned at her.
“ SHUT UP, MUM! WE’RE SEVENTEEN FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!” We heard Tasha shout and I started laughing.
“ DON’T TALK TO ME WITH THAT TONE OF VOICE! THIRD DOOR ON THE RIGHT” I heard footsteps before the door swung open and Tasha ran in, Teddy and Victorie right behind her.
“ Glad to see us?” Teddy said as Alicia hugged him tightly.
“ Sort of” She laughed and Victorie walked over to me.
“ Here, Uncle Jamie” I looked down at her open hand and saw my wand.
“ Thanks, Victorie” I said, reaching for it but Alicia grabbed my arm.
“ GET DOWN! NOW!” The five of us ducked as a blue jet of light soared towards us. It hit the wall, which cracked. I looked up as Alicia waved a hand. The door slammed shut but a second later it flew off its hinges and Malfoy ran into the room. I didn’t think. I pulled Victorie out the way and stepped forwards.
“ UNCLE JAMIE- NO!” Victorie shouted as I braced myself for the fight. I heard a scrambling behind me and then Alicia stood next to me, her hands on her hips. “ AUNT ALICIA!” We ignored Victorie’s shouts and continued to stare at Malfoy.
“ You picked the wrong fight, Draco” Alicia said calmly, a slight smile on her face.
“ I’ll kill you” Malfoy said, his voice shaking with rage. His eyes fell on something behind me- the three teenagers.
“ The orphaned werewolf cub” Alicia reacted quicker than me, sending a curse at Malfoy while casting a shield charm behind her. I could hear Teddy fighting to get free of Tasha’s grip.
“ Watch what you say about my family” I hissed, ducking under something.
“ Just keep an eye on your Mudblood wife!” Malfoy yelled, blocking another jinx from Alicia.
“ EXPELLIAMUS!” I turned as Tasha’s shout sounded behind me. Malfoy’s wand flew from his hand.
“ WAND!” Alicia yelled, her hand outstretched as it flew towards her. She threw it up in the air.
“ BOMBARDA!” Victorie’s spell hit the wand and it exploded into a million of pieces. I turned to stare at the three teenagers so I didn’t see Malfoy’s hand plunge into his pocket. TaDa!!!
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09-13-2010, 05:24 PM
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OMG!!! It sooo exciting!!!
Malfoy is so disgusting and nasty, it makes me sick! I'm glad there is a group of them together. Maybe it will make things easier for them. PAMS!
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09-13-2010, 06:33 PM
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WOOHOO ABI!!!
You are awesome!! Great post!!
Its strange because I can't keep track of all the Draco's I read
K xx
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09-13-2010, 07:26 PM
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Originally Posted by 3uzz3ee “No. You’re not facing him alone. I’m going to be there” Alicia said at once, glaring at me. “TURN LEFT!” I jumped again. “Sorry- they’re lost... I’m going to shout again- TURN RIGHT! I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU CAME HERE! IT’S FAR TOO DANGEROUS! LEFT!” I grinned at her. This part made me laugh. I love how she warned him the second time she was going to shout. Her reading mind ability is quite handy in battle. Quote:
We heard Tasha shout and I started laughing.
Is he not worried about her getting hurt? Quote:
Tasha ran in, Teddy and Victorie right behind her.
I thought they were with Ginny? Or did she help the others instead? Quote:
“BOMBARDA!” Victorie’s spell hit the wand and it exploded into a million of pieces.
That was pretty epic, dude. Quote:
I turned to stare at the three teenagers so I didn’t see Malfoy’s hand plunge into his pocket.
What is it with you and cliff hangers? WHAT DID MALFOY GET FROM HIS POCKET???
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09-14-2010, 01:59 PM
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Originally Posted by emilyblack This part made me laugh. I love how she warned him the second time she was going to shout. Her reading mind ability is quite handy in battle. I know
I thought the warning would lighten the mood slightly... Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack Is he not worried about her getting hurt? He is, but he knows that because she's going to be in his sight that he can watch over her...
Does that make sense? Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack I thought they were with Ginny? Or did she help the others instead? Ginny convinced them not to fight...
They went to find Alicia and Jamie while she helped Harry Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack That was pretty epic, dude. Thanks Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack What is it with you and cliff hangers? WHAT DID MALFOY GET FROM HIS POCKET???
Great post, Abs! Please PAMS! I like cliff hangers... Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP WOOHOO ABI!!!
You are awesome!! Great post!!
Its strange because I can't keep track of all the Draco's I read
K xx Thanks, Katie!
I know... I keep getting confused too...
Sometimes I write him like he is in Now, Forever and Always... Quote:
Originally Posted by Morag OMG!!! It sooo exciting!!!
Malfoy is so disgusting and nasty, it makes me sick! I'm glad there is a group of them together. Maybe it will make things easier for them. PAMS!
Soph x Thanks Soph!
I'm not quite sure that things will be running smoothly though
I'll post again soon...
Don't forget to PM me with your ideas on what you think is going to happen!
Abi
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09-20-2010, 01:13 PM
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“ NO!” I spun round at Alicia’s shout. Malfoy was pointing something at me. He must of pushed a button on it because there was another bang as Alicia pushed me sideways. She hit the floor screaming at the same time Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, Neville and Luna appeared. Harry summoned the thing Malfoy was now pointing at me again as Ron grabbed him.
“ What’s happening?” I asked as Hermione covered Alicia’s shoulder with her hands as blood appeared.
“ She’s been shot- it’s a Muggle thing” She said, trying to stop the bleeding. Her voice and hands were frantic.
“ USE YOUR HEAD, HERMIONE! SHE NEEDS A DOCTOR!” Harry shouted as he and Ron led Malfoy away. Hermione apparated me and Alicia to a large, white building. We rushed inside, Alicia in my arms, shouting her head off at Hermione, who was pushing down on her shoulder.
“ Can we see Doctor Molloy now!” Hermione said as we approached a blonde woman behind a desk. She picked up a phone, said something very quickly and then told Hermione a room number. As we laid Alicia down on the crakly papered bed, I saw a nervous look on Hermione's face. I pulled a chair over and sat by her head, putting pressure on Alicia's shoulder as she gave me instructions.
" Hermione!" I looked up to see a woman around the same age as us run into the room. " What do you want? Natalie said something about an emergency" She said, pushing a strand of black hair out of her face.
" It is- I need your help!" Hermione said as I glared at the woman. " I've told you enough about my friends that-" The woman glared at Hermione.
" This is about your new world? The one which you disappeared to every year? The last time I saw you, you were fifteen!"
" Look- I hate to break this up but I need some help here!" I shouted and both women stared at me. I saw something change in the woman's expression.
" This is why we're here, Sam- you know enough about Alicia not to get freaked out by her" Hermione said as Sam leaned over Alicia, who glared at her.
" How can you even think that? He would never hurt me!" I lay my hand on Alicia's cheek to try and quiet her. " Can you fix it or not?"
" Be nice" I scolded before looking up at the woman. " Er, can you help?" I asked.
" Yes- it's Jamie, right?" I nodded and she turned to rummage through a cupboard.
" Top cupboard, bottom shelf, right side, behind the bandages" Alicia said, breathing heavily as she stared at the ceiling. What do you think?
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