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| Honeydukes Cellar (Incomplete FF) Here is the home to those stories who didn't quite get told in full. |
06-11-2011, 03:44 AM
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| Shrake
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Akihabara, Japan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Shin Jong Second Year | Broken Cello Strings - Sa16+ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ Kind Hearted ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ Disclaimer: I own the characters in this fan fiction story,
but I don't own the world of Harry Potter. For that, I have to thank the wonderful JK Rowling. Thank you for creating this wonderful world.
Hello my name is Kevin and I hope you enjoy this story. I've been unreliable from time to time to update my stories but I will make sure I keep it updated if I get some loyal readers.
I will be narrating this story through the eyes of the main character. Chapter 1
The strings of the cello echoed within my ears. With each string the memories of my life haunted me chilling me down to my bones. The empty concert halls are what is left of my life. Nothing more and nothing left for to love once and never to love again is what I have to endure.
5 years ago.
The concert hall full with joyousness to hear the orchestra play a sat waiting to begin the show with the cello against my chest and the bow within my hand as I run the bow gently across. Tho I preform this song for the past week solely in practice the song echoed with more of a charm up on the stage while I played it for the people that came.
All in the world seemed to stop as a played as if the music I produced had halted time. I had everything going for me the man of my dreams a man that wanted me solely to himself. As I looked upon the crowd for him as I played my solo the seat that I reserved him was empty. Had he not come to see me play had he given up on me or was he busy. The strings know echoed sorrow as I felt my heart pour into them their happiness was no more.
Once the show was done I walked back stage with my cello there laid a basket of red roses I looked upon the card and it said. 'My Lovely Yue Su I love you' I picked up my phone and called him just to hear his voice. As he answered the first two words he said was "I'm sorry" the words wrong through my head. He then later explained to me that there was a business meeting he had to attend to at that time and told me that he would see me the tomorrow.
As the next day came I sat up in excitement that I was gonna see him.
Present Day
"Who knew that within the next few days my life would be worse." I whispered to the empty concert hall the days when I played my cello there haunted me yet at the same time they where happy memories. Tho he had broke my heart I was happy to have meet him because without him my life was dull and boring. Yet looking upon the stage I had played on and practiced on the one memory that haunted me most was the day the wicked women took my cello and smashed it upon my back.
The word muggle still echoed in my mind.
To be continued.
Fyi this story is taken place through the eyes of a muggle women and tho its listed romance which it is there will be times where it will be slightly tragic.
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06-12-2011, 11:02 AM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
First reader *dances*
Woah you have my hooked!
I can tell this is going to be an interesting read.
pamspams
Eviee <33
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06-12-2011, 08:22 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: The Underworld
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Klaus Jäger Fifth Year | Love me or Hate me... Either way atleast you know me ♥
Awww
I can't wait for the next chappie
It's only the first one and I'm already in love with it
Eppp PAMS!! Pretty please
Morgan♥
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06-13-2011, 09:05 AM
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| Shrake
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Akihabara, Japan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Shin Jong Second Year | ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ Kind Hearted ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I am happy you both enjoyed it so far I will post up the next chapter very soon since I see I have some already loyal readers.
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06-13-2011, 11:36 AM
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| Shrake
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Akihabara, Japan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Shin Jong Second Year | ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ Kind Hearted ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ Chapter 2 Exiting the empty halls I gaze upon the dark night sky seeing few stars glancing back at me. The streets tho it was late still had many people walking down. With a deep breath I walked down the sidewalk the air itself as I walked was very humid it felt as if with each breath it was a slap across my face. Just by what the humidity felt like one could tell it was gonna ran soon.
The clank of my heels seemed to start to be the only noise around me. I glanced behind me and noticed that there wasn't anyone by me I was alone by myself. Tho one might be scared to be alone at night walking by themselves I felt almost at home. Once ones life goes down the toilet one gets used to being alone.
With a startle I walked passed a bar a moment later a group of noisy men walked out not being at their right senses. I continued to walk trying not to look back at them hoping they weren't following me as I walked a few blocks I looked back and saw the emptiness was back. Just the thought of them following me sent shivers down my spine making my knees unstable and unable to stand with what little stability I had left I found myself next to a wall of a building and leaned up against it.
The shivers were not of that one would say was cold but as if haunted by the dead. One of a few things the wicked women once told me was that she would always be watching me. She said she would watch me until the day I died. With the relapse of thinking of her pain rushed to my stomach gripping it with my one hand tears flowing down my cheeks. What stability I had left once left me as I fell to my knees.
The pain only brought back worse memories.
More of Chapter 2 coming soon I hope you enjoyed it so far.
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06-13-2011, 04:10 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Brlliant, i really want to read more soon!
I wonder who this women is, she seems really mean.
Eviee <33
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
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06-13-2011, 10:06 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: The Underworld
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Klaus Jäger Fifth Year | Love me or Hate me... Either way atleast you know me ♥
Oohhh!! I love this
I can't wait for more!
Pams!
Morgan ♥
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06-14-2011, 12:51 AM
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| Shrake
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Akihabara, Japan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Shin Jong Second Year | ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ Kind Hearted ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I am happy you two like it I will post more soon <3
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06-24-2011, 11:53 AM
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| Shrake
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Akihabara, Japan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Shin Jong Second Year | ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ Kind Hearted ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I'm sorry I haven't updated anything lately I am currently having a hard time trying to decide how to play the format of the next part I will make sure to post with this week. I am so sorry to you guys.
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07-25-2011, 02:19 PM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Orlando, FL
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina Morninglory- "Glory" Second Year | WizWorld Universal / Tom Felton for President
New Reader!
Your writing is beautiful, almost poetic in its prose. This is really deep, I can tell. I'll be reading more, for sure.
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09-01-2011, 12:01 PM
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| Abraxan
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Perth, AU (GMT +8)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jasper Hart First Year x10 x10
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Last Updated 13/06/11
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09-13-2011, 03:30 AM
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| Shrake
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Akihabara, Japan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Shin Jong Second Year | ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ Kind Hearted ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ Sorry for the delay everyone. Chapter 2 cont. -Flashback-
5.5 years ago.
The wind blew with great strength, as if the wished to guide us to are paradise. As I looked up I could see that this wind was filling the mast with what it needed to go. I didn't know much about boats back then. But I knew that I didn't care it was just made me happy I was with him. The man I knew I loved and to this day I secretly admit I do.
We had sailed upon the ship for what felt like a month but in fact was truthfully was only three days. I guess that what young love is it makes your mind over reacted to the simplest things. One thing I don't mind.
A month later.
It was morning it was a day in which we need to practice at the concert hall for a upcoming event. This day hadn't been a whole important day to me it felt just like any other day in passage days in life that just seemed to blend into one another. But something changed as I was practicing I kept wanting a break to come sooner and sooner so that I could go to the bathroom.
I felt something deep down in my throat but wasn't sure what it was. Until break came I jumped up from my seat letting my cello drop to the ground with my hand covering my mouth I ran to the bathroom and ended up still my head in a toilet and vomited and kept vomiting for the whole time during the break.
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12-19-2011, 01:05 AM
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| Bugbear
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jackson Reagan Hufflepuff Fifth Year Hogwarts RPG Name: Norah Reagan Slytherin First Year | Forever Hufflepuff | | Always.
You're writing is so good! Please keep writing, you're doing great!
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| Abraxan
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