* Sits there * .. Seriously! why dont you write a book or something! You always manage to keep us on the edge of our seats! I know not much has happened but the way you ended it.. it made so many questions pop up in my head!

So sorry SS ate your other post but this was one a good one too. Here is an idea I usually use. I usually type it in word and then try to post, if SS eats it no problem I still have a copy of it in word.. thats a good idea.. right? lol!

Ok aside from that you REALLY need to add more soon! Cause I REALLY want to know what happens to her, nothing bad please.. remember I dont want anything bad to happen to her.. *tries puppy dog eyes* please...

But truly.. this is amazing! I cant wait to read more from you.. you amazing writer you.. lol!

Write a BOOK book... I'd LOVE to. But, I can never see them through. Maybe one day?


I usually DO write my stuff in a word doc, so for me it's a case of I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN BETTER and also because I've been trying desperately to just get this done so the quickest/easiest option at the time seems to be to just write it here.


No promises

*nods* Yup! a book book.. well there could be a time where you cant stop writing and WILL see a book through lol! .. yup! one day! cant wait! lol!

Yeah? ahh ok yeah *wont say you should have XD * .. mmm true true it is.. ok so copy the post after you written it here (and paste elsewhere if you doing something else on the side).. so a copy still remains unless like me you copy something else and lose the previously copied text

now thats just mean lol!

*bounces in* Well I've not been on here in a while, good thing you had a chapter waiting for me Emily! It was goooooood! I loved it! *nods*

I can't wait for me!

Overdue... but getting there, slowly



The boy continued to hurry in her footsteps, taking elaborate strides to keep up pace with Karkaroff's long legs. The advantage of this, was it made travel on foot quicker, more rapid without seeming out of place. It took everything she had to stop herself from running the length of the corridors, throwing herself into lifts, thrusting herself up stairs. She had to play the part.

"In here sir," came the boys voice again, Ellouise paused midstep and awkwardly turned back to retrace her steps. She'd not noticed the door the boy held open for her, which led her to believe she wasn't fooling the defensive enchantments in the area. The boy showed her the way. That was enough.
"In then," she muttered pushing the boy forward to take the lead.
The door had opened into another corridor, this one different from the others, there was no air circulation... the air was thicker, dirtier, it smelt of death and decay.
"Status? Their condition?" she asked as they moved briskly through the low light. Ellouise fixed her gaze on the back of the boys hooded head. If anything were to give her away now, it would be inappropriate questioning, but she needed to know. Needed to know they were, alive and well enough.
"G-g-good, according to plan," he acknowledged without turning around.

The hairs on the back of her neck, of Karkaroff's neck, were beginning to stand on end. There was no noise in the distance, if anything the place seemed to be too quiet. Were they alone?

It started very sweetly. I'm up to post #5 but I have to go home from work, so I will have to finish this probably tomorrow. I don't know how often you post so maybe I shouldn't catch up too fast.

Your story is very interesting and sweet, and I'm very interested in Xavier and Ellouise's adventures . . . and maybe romance? Don't tell. I'd rather find out slowly as the story unfolds.

Its very cute. I hope you PAMS soon, and I'll try to catch up soon. Really good story.

EDIT 1: Because I can't SPAM your thread.

Oh Snap! Maybe I was looking for romance in the wrong quarter. Or maybe there isn't a clear cut romance . . . I love those better. *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee* LOL I like Anton already. And Xavier too.

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*flails*

I just read it all *wibbles* I haz more plz? *looks at you with big Dobby eyes*

I absolutely adore this story, I was so happy when Xavier and Ellouise confessed their deepest feelings for each other aww, but more so I just love the plot. It's really good

PAMS