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| | Honeydukes Cellar (Incomplete FF) Here is the home to those stories who didn't quite get told in full. | 
08-23-2011, 02:37 PM
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| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Spinner's End
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Violet Cyress Alexandria Snape
First Year |  A New Threat or a New Heroine? - Sa13+
Disclaimer: Many, I mean most of the characters used were originally written by the Best writer.......J.K. Rowling.
Without her there's no Potter world. note: this is only my first time writing a story that's going to be read by a lot/ maybe some people so I hope that you'll like it... A New Threat or A New Heroine
Chapter 1: the Hogwarts letter Resting quietly in her room, she lingered on the thoughts she should not even bother thinking…
What does Hogwarts look like? Is it the same with what my uncle told me??
“Hey couz, come on!! The letters have arrived…Let’s see if we got the Hogwarts letter!” shouted Scorpius, her cousin.
“Yeah, I’m coming!” replied Violet as she gets up from her bed…
Hmm…I better not think about it yet…I’ll just be very problematic…
Violet walks down the staircase groggily…
“My dear, the Hogwarts’ letter has arrived…You have one as well…”her grandmother, Narcissa announced.
“Really grandma?! I’ve been accepted?!” she said as she walks towards their very luxurious couch excitedly.
“Yup, so you better get yourself ready, ‘cause dad told me that we’re going to buy things at Diagon Alley, and our first wands!!” Scorpius interfered.
“Oh, really?! It’s going to be my first time to get out of the manor, I wonder, what’s it like…”she wondered.
“It’s really wonderful, ‘cause there’s a lot awesome things out there!” Scorpius replied.
“Now, now, my dear…You better go get dressed and eat breakfast.” Her grandmother reminded her.
“”oh, yeah…”she replied
I almost forgot…
After going through her clothes…
“Well, I’ll just stick to my favorite color…”she said to herself while holding a soft purple dress, that looks like what her mother usually wear.
“Vhie!! Come on!! Father and Mother’s waiting!!” shouted Scorpius.
“Yeah, nearly finished!!” she replied as she fit the dress.
She came out, at last…
“Sorry, Uncle Draco and aunt Astoria…”she said.
“It’s fine my dear…”her aunt said comfortingly.
“Well, we better go…”cut Draco, who was worried about the time.
Chapter 2: In the Diagon Alley Violet arrived in the Diagon Alley…
“Now, listen you two… Astoria and I are going to buy your other necessities for school, the both of you will go to Ollivander’s Wand Shop and Madame Malkin’s Store for your wand and school uniform. Don’t lose each other okay?” instructed Draco.
“Yes uncle!” replied Violet.
“Scorpius, can I trust you on this one?” asked Draco to his son.
“Uhmmm…Yes dad…” answered Scorpius.
“Okay. Take care my dear…” Astoria said.
The two left…
“Scorpius, come on!” shouted Violet.
“You go ahead and I’ll just catch up to you later, I just need to check out the newest broomstick…”replied Scorpius.
“But uncle said we should stick together.”She answered.
“Don’t worry, I’ll just catch up with you, and dad will never know” Scorpius whispered.
Scorpius runs, toward the broomstick store.
Why do I have a cousin like that, leaving me out of nowhere. As if I know the place.
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08-30-2011, 01:09 PM
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Sixth Year |  Claws do it BETTER! | | Language NERD!
Oh I like it!!!!! a new Hermione hmmm? interesting PAMS!
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08-30-2011, 08:00 PM
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Yay! Its amazing!
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08-31-2011, 04:09 AM
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| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Spinner's End
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
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Originally Posted by Orla  Oh I like it!!!!! a new Hermione hmmm? interesting PAMS! yeah but there's a bit of a twist... well, you'll know very soon.. | |
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08-31-2011, 04:10 AM
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| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Spinner's End
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Originally Posted by Orla Oh I like it!!!!! a new Hermione hmmm? interesting PAMS! Quote:
Originally Posted by Annabeth Yay! Its amazing! Thank you... I'll post the next chapter.. | |
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08-31-2011, 04:21 AM
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| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Spinner's End
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
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First Year |
Here it is hope you like it!!!
__________________________________________________ ________________________________________ Chapter 2.2 Walking towards nowhere a super cute guy accidentally bumped her.
“Sorry, I didn’t notice yo---”stopped talking.
Wow…she’s so beautiful …long Raven hair, red lips, and violet eyes??
“Uhmmm… It’s okay…I’m Violet by the way…” she answered while smiling sweetly.
The guy almost forgot she’s talking to him.
“Oh! I’m Albus Severus…But you can call me Al..” he replied while staring at her lovingly…
“Well, I think Sev is cuter…Can I call you that??” she asked.
“Yeah, anything you like…Where are you going anyway??”he replied.
“Technically speaking…I have no idea where is Madame Malkin’s store and Ollivander’s Wand shop…”she answered.
“Well, good thing you bumped to me, come on…I’ll show you where…” he said invitingly.
They walked together while holding each other’s hand…
“By the way, why are you alone here in the Diagon Alley??” Sev asked.
“Oh, my cousin left me, while we were going to the store to buy the requirements. What about you??”she replied.
“Well, it’s my second year at Hogwarts so I can buy things myself…”he answered.
“Really?! I mean you’re a Hogwarts student?? What’s the school like?? ” she asked eagerly.
“It’s really cool! There are these four houses in which you’ll be sorted in. I got in Slytherin, and unlike they say Slytherin’s not so bad after all because it depends on the student on how they act…” he explained.
“Slytherin… Sounds familiar…” thinking…
“I remember, that’s the house where all my relatives were sorted. Well, almost I mean…”said Violet.
“ Almost??” Sev asked.
“My great uncle, Sirius Black was in Gryffindor.” she answered.
“Sirius Black, that’s my father’s godfather.” he said.
Before Violet could answer, Sev spoke.
“We’re here!”
The both of them almost forgot all about it. They entered the shop of Madame Malkin.
An elderly woman approached them and spoke,
“Mr. Potter, you’ve forgotten something??”
“No, but my friend here needs robes and other clothing.” He replied.
Severus sat in the waiting area while the woman walks toward Violet…
“Full name please…”
“Violet Cyress Isabella Wena Alexandria…” she replied.
“Quite a long name my dear…hehe” Madame Malkin said.
“And it also has a long story behind it…”she answered.
“Well, tell me my dear while I’m taking your sizes” Madame Malkin replied.
“From what grandma told me, Violet came from the color of my eyes. My whole family says it is very unusual because no one in our family had this kind of eyes. Then the Cyress came from my father’s great-grandmother’s name, who was a very great witch, the Isabella was derived from the name of my mother’s mother, Bellatrix Lestrange, and Wena came from the name of Rowena Ravenclaw, one of the most intelligent witch in the history.” she explained.
“Wow! That’s an amazing story… Well we’re almost finished.” the old woman said.
After getting her needs from Madame Malkin’s Store, they proceed to Ollivander’s Wand shop.
“It’s a little creepy here…” Violet said while entering the store with Severus.
Severus called,
“Mr. Ollivander…”
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08-31-2011, 11:05 AM
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Eeeeeeeee !! Why didn't you mention earlier that Albus is here ?
I'm in love with this now !
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08-31-2011, 11:21 AM
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| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Spinner's End
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Originally Posted by tomewitch Eeeeeeeee !! Why didn't you mention earlier that Albus is here ?
I'm in love with this now ! that is Albus Severus Potter... it's about the second generation... Thank you for reading Beezus!! | |
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08-31-2011, 11:26 AM
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| DERP & DIMC Mackled Malaclaw
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that is Albus Severus Potter... it's about the second generation... Thank you for reading Beezus!!
Yeah, and I love him so much Vi .. Supahh !
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08-31-2011, 01:52 PM
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| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Spinner's End
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Originally Posted by tomewitch Yeah, and I love him so much Vi .. Supahh !
Oh, that's sweet!!
Well, don't worry he"ll play a great part in my story.. maybe I'll even add you to it!! | |
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08-31-2011, 02:24 PM
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| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Spinner's End
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Chapter 3: A very unique wand
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“Yes Mr. Potter?” answered Mr. Ollivander who came out of nowhere.
“I need a wand for—“ Sev stopped because Mr. Ollivander spoke.
“Ms. Alexandria, I’ve been waiting to see you.” Mr. Ollivander said while walking towards to the dusty wand boxes.
“Sorry? It’s my first time here in Diagon Alley and I believe this is our first time to meet each other… Unless you went to the manor and talked to my uncle before.” She replied.
“I know your mother.” Mr. Ollivander explained.
“My, mom?! You know her?” she asked.
“Yes, Annabeth Ella Alexandria née Lestrange.” answered Mr. Ollivander.
“Well, try this wand first” commanded Mr. Ollivander while giving the wand.
“How?” asked Violet.
“Just give it a wave.” replied Severus.
“Okay…” she said.
She flicked the wand, and it hit a lot of wand boxes.
“I thought so, but maybe the wand that your mother asked me to make personally would work…”spoke Mr. Ollivander.
Violet looked at him with a questioning look.
Mr. Ollivander entered the backroom to get something and he returned to them.
“Here you go.” said Mr. Ollivander while giving a box to Violet.
“What is it??” asked Violet.
“Why don’t you go and find out??” said Mr. Ollivander while smiling at Violet.
She opened it very carefully then she saw a very old wand with a snake handle.
“This is what my mother asked you??” asked Violet who was a little bit shocked.
“Don’t judge it yet. Try it first.” persuaded Mr. Ollivander.
Violet touched it and a purple mist surrounded her, the wood coating of the wand broke to pieces like an eggshell. It turned into an amethyst-like crystal wand.
“Wow! How did that happened??” she was shocked.
“I’ve never seen a wand like that before.” said Severus.
“It came from the wand of your grandfather which is from the feather of a phoenix. It’s a very powerful wand, it’s not only good for spells, charms, and transfiguration but it has a special characteristic which is still unknown.” explained Mr. Ollivander.
“Like mine?” asked Severus.
“Yes, Mr. Potter… Like yours but yours was from your father.” answered Mr. Ollivander.
“Wait… My grandfather? You know him Mr. Ollivander? None of my relatives talked about him, and they never told me anything about him.” asked Violet because she was very shocked.
“No, but your mother told me that it was from your grandfather.” Mr. Ollivander answered a little uneasy.
“Oh? Okay. I was just a little curious about him.” Violet said.
“Violet it’s nearly dark, we better go. Your uncle is probably looking for you.” reminded Severus.
“Yeah, well goodbye Mr. Ollivander.” said Violet while walking towards the door.
“Take care Ms. Alexandria.” said Mr. Ollivander.
They left the Ollivander’s Wand shop and went to Fortescue’s Ice cream parlor. They ate there, talked, and waited for several hours for Alexandria’s uncle.
“I think you’re uncle’s not coming, so what are you gonna do?” asked Severus.
While they’re talking, someone approached them it was an old friend of Albus.
“Hi Al!” she said.
“Oh! Beatrice, what are you doing here?” Albus remembered the girl, it was the girl she grew up with in the Godric’s Hollow.
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08-31-2011, 02:29 PM
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Nice! I like it so far!
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08-31-2011, 02:35 PM
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| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Spinner's End
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Originally Posted by ToxicWings333 Nice! I like it so far!
Thank you for reading it!
Oh and by the way to all those who are reading this and wants to be a part of the story, and any suggestions to improve it
just pm me. but the comments should be here alright?
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09-01-2011, 04:53 AM
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| DERP & DIMC Mackled Malaclaw
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Yeeyyyy !!
My Beatrice is there ..
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09-01-2011, 04:59 AM
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| | Dugbog
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Originally Posted by tomewitch Yeeyyyy !!
My Beatrice is there ..
Oooh, she grew up with Al ! Yup! wait for the next chapter...
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I'll be waiting dearest , of course ..
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09-01-2011, 12:03 PM
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| | Puffskein
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09-03-2011, 03:08 PM
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09-17-2011, 02:20 PM
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Very good update. I wanna read more!
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09-27-2011, 11:19 PM
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| | Dugbog
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Originally Posted by Droo Very good update. I wanna read more! Th-hanks!!
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Hey this is really good! I quite like it. It'll be interesting. Quick question; how are both Bellatrix and Narcissa her grandmother? I'm kinda confused on that. And her mother was Bella's daughter? I have a guess as to who her grandfather might be. May I PM you the guess?
Great job! 
-Rachel
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