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| | Honeydukes Cellar (Incomplete Fanfiction) Here is the home to those stories who didn't quite get told in full. | 
10-21-2011, 12:12 PM
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|   DMLEMooncalf
Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: GMT - London, UK
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jaxon Brodric Fletcher
Fourth Year |  Love of my Life - Sa13+ ||Delta Goodrem Lover || Emma Watson Lover | | RavenPuff || 1 of 4 Amigos ||
 
Love of my Life
Disclaimer:Though I will be using the name Emma, and also Emma Watson’s picture in my banner, it is in no reference to Emma Watson what so ever. This is a fictional story. Hogwarts and all thing related to it such as places outside and inside Hogwarts, spells, school uniform and Hogwarts itself are all owned by the one and only J.K Rowling who created the world of Harry Potter in which we live via SS  .
Chapter Index
Chapter 1: Seeing An Angel
Chapter 2: Love At Last Or Is It?
Chapter 3: Jealousy! 
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10-21-2011, 03:41 PM
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10-21-2011, 08:31 PM
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| DMLE Mooncalf
Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: GMT - London, UK
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
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Fourth Year | ||Delta Goodrem Lover || Emma Watson Lover | | RavenPuff || 1 of 4 Amigos ||
Chapter 1: Seeing an Angel
Dean had just started his first year at Hogwarts and he had been sorted in Ravenclaw, he found this new experience to be amazing for him since he was a muggle-born.
He knew nothing about this magic business until he got there, but there was one other type of magic that he was oblivious to and that magic was called Love. He had never been in love before, well he was not sure as he didn’t know what love was. He was in his 4th year when he started to realise how beautiful the girls in his year were getting, he had never realised it before.
Soon into the 4th year he noticed one particular girl, she had golden blonde hair, warm chocolate brown eyes and an angelic face that seemed to glow, she was in Hufflepuff. Whoever this girl was he knew that he wanted to be with her and to have her in his life. He didn’t know anything about this girl, all he knew was that he loved this girl.
Whenever he saw this girl he felt like he was on cloud 9, all he could ever think about was this girl. As if his life depended on this one girl, whenever he thought about her his heart beat a lot as if it was trying to jump out of his chest and jump all the way to her. He felt complete when he was near her, and he knew that all these desires would only be possible if he introduced himself.
He wanted to introduce himself but he didn’t know how to, he didn’t have the confidence to talk to her. So he would watch her from somewhere near her, what he didn’t know was that she had noticed that he was watching her and she was finding it creepy. So she decided that she was going to have a chat to this boy, so one day she went right upto him.
"Excuse me I have been noticing that you have been staring a lot at me lately, may I ask why you are staring at me" This girl asked him politely. Dean stood up really fast that he felt kind of dizzy, this girl was actually speaking to him!
"Well…er… i..it’s just t..that I have ..er… n..never seen a girl as b..beautiful as you." Dean managed to get out.
"Oh well er.. thank you" she said a little taken aback "But that is no excuse to just stare." she said to him.
"I am sorry I didn’t mean to at first, afterwards I just couldn’t help myself." he said. He then realised that he hadn’t introduced himself. He stretched out his hand "my name is Dean, Dean Watson."
"Nice to meet you officially Dean, my name is Emma, Emma Wilson." she said shaking his hand. Dean looked at her shyly when she said it was nice to meet him officially.
"Yes it’s nice to meet you too Emma." Dean said
This was the start of a very special friendship in Dean’s mind. He had wanted to talk to this girl for a long time and here she was talking to him!!
"erm.. we have the next class together want to walk together?" Emma asked Dean.
"Sure we can walk together." Dean replied leading the way to the next class. He couldn’t believe that she, the girl he had been fantasising about for a long time was friends with him now.
End of Chapter 1
Well that is the first chapter, do let me know what you think of this chapter. Mind you it may be slow but it is just the beginning, I am trying to make the other chapters interesting. | |
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10-21-2011, 10:22 PM
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AHHHHH! It's brilliant, I love it! I can't wait for more! | |
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10-22-2011, 09:58 AM
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| DMLE Mooncalf
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10-23-2011, 09:08 AM
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it amazing!!! i love it!
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10-23-2011, 09:20 AM
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| DMLE Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by LeiaSadieAnnabeth  it amazing!!! i love it! I am glad that you like it! It feels good that you all like this, it makes me want to carry on writing this fanfic. Thank you all for your lovely comments, it really means alot to me | |
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10-24-2011, 03:11 PM
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great story!!!
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10-27-2011, 02:47 PM
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| DMLE Mooncalf
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10-29-2011, 01:09 AM
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I like it, keep going. 
Im hooked.
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10-29-2011, 01:01 PM
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| DMLE Mooncalf
Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: GMT - London, UK
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Originally Posted by Vargaroth I like it, keep going.
Im hooked. oh wow. thanks, glad to hear you are hooked already. I will update you when a new chapter is put up, anyone who leaves comments will get regular updates as to when a new chapter is put up. new chapter coming soon, it is already written but giving people a chance to read this first chapter. Ok I have decided new chapter will be put up sometime next week. | |
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10-29-2011, 05:25 PM
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| | Puffskein
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Awesome, look forward to it mate.
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11-01-2011, 06:01 PM
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'mazin story!!!!!
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11-04-2011, 08:31 PM
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Sweet story!!
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11-05-2011, 06:14 PM
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| DMLE Mooncalf
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Well this is Chapter 2 finally put up after much suspense I hope . I hope you all enjoy it
Chapter 2: Love at Last or is it?
Dean and Emma became the best of friends in the 1 year they had known each other, over the summer they had not been in contact much as Emma had gone holiday to tour Asia with her family and she didn’t want any owl to travel that far. So he had not contacted her, it was at this point that he realised how much he loved Emma. He had thought that these feelings were for a friend, but he realised it was for someone who meant more to him. He didn’t know how to let her know his feelings, and if he did what would her reaction be. Soon she was back and it was time for school again, they sat in the same compartment together but opposite each other.
" So how was your holiday" Dean asked Emma
" Oh it was fantastic seeing the Taj Mahal, the Great Wall of China and stuff." Emma told Dean " I did a lot of shopping, plenty of good shops there and the best part is..."
Dean didn’t hear the rest he was too busy trying to figure out how to tell her that he loved her. "Emma....Em…. we have been good friends for a year now…. I mean we are very good friends….. and I want us…." Ugh no let me start again "Em… we have been very good friends for a year now… and in that one year we hung out almost everyday. Then you went on a very long holiday and in that time I realised just how much I missed having you around… and at the same I realised that…. I cared about you more than ever before…. I guess what I am trying to say is that…. Em I love you, I love you very very much" yes that was it, that was what he was going to say. Ok here goes
" Dean?!.... hello Dean?!... Earth to Dean!" Dean realised that Emma had been calling him for a while
" Oh sorry, I… er…I…" he stuttered and then just smiled, she smiled back. It warmed his heart to see her smile and he decides now is the best time to tell her when suddenly the compartment door opens and in comes a boy a little older than them, he goes straight towards Emma and kisses her on the lips!! Dean is taken aback isn’t Emma going to do something about this?
" Oh thank god! I thought you missed the train." Emma exclaims to the boy now sitting beside her
" Sorry babes I got stuck in traffic, but I am here now." the boy said as he kissed Emma’s forehead, held her hands.
Dean was now more confused than ever Did this guy just call her 'babes'? he thought to himself when Emma notices the confusion written on his face
" Oh Dean this is the guy I was talking about, his name is Roger." Emma told Dean " Roger this is Dean my best friend." Emma told Roger than she turned back to Dean " I met Roger on the Asian tour that we went on, he was on the same tour as us. We became friends " she said looking at Roger and then back at Dean " and then we became close and soon we were together." she said looking at Roger smiling.
Dean was shocked, he didn’t know what to make of this. The thing that he wanted to tell Emma he could not tell since he was too late, if only I had told her earlier he thought But how earlier, I only realised my feelings when she went on holiday where she met this… this Roger!
" Dean…woohooo…Dean….where are you lost? Dean." Emma called him shaking him, Dean came to realising that Emma was calling him.
" Oh…. er sorry about that… I don’t know what happened there." he then saw Roger " Oh er… nice to meet you" Dean said reluctantly shaking hands with Roger, he then proceeded to looked out the train window, his heart paining for Emma. End of Chapter 2
That was Chapter 2, hope all enjoyed it. I editted it many times and finally came up with this. I am currently writing Chapter 3 and will put that up in about 2 weeks (hopefully). So thanks to all who commented and please keep posting all your wonderful comments on here, they push me to write more and more. I will send chapter updates to all who comment
If you commented on the first chapter I hope I informed you of this second chapter, If I havent then I am so sorry that I missed informing you.
Once again Thanks for all your lovely comments! 
Last edited by DarkStorm; 11-05-2011 at 07:04 PM.
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11-06-2011, 10:00 AM
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Amazing!!! Poor Dean, I feel sorry for the guy!
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11-06-2011, 01:06 PM
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I am really quite enjoying this story, very well writen, I cant wait to read moar!! PAMS!! | |
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11-07-2011, 01:00 AM
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| DMLE Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by LeiaSadieAnnabeth Amazing!!! Poor Dean, I feel sorry for the guy! Thank You!! Yes so did I when I wrote it. He missed his chance  Quote:
Originally Posted by PureBlood64 I am really quite enjoying this story, very well writen, I cant wait to read moar!! PAMS!! Oh I am glad you are enjoying it. Oh Thanks I am glad you think it is well written. Well new chapter coming in about 2 weeks or so once I have finished writing it
I will let the both of you know when the third chapter goes up | |
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11-07-2011, 07:28 AM
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How did i know you would throw a curveball in there? lol
Very nice. Great story.
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11-07-2011, 10:06 AM
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Great story!!!!!
Poor Dean!!!!
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11-07-2011, 10:12 AM
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| DMLE Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Vargaroth How did i know you would throw a curveball in there? lol
Very nice. Great story. Either the title told you, or you just knew there would a curveball in there somewhere  coz love can be very unpredictable. Glad you like it. Thanks for lovely comment, really appreciate it Quote:
Originally Posted by Hermione345 Great story!!!!!
Poor Dean!!!! Thank you, yes I know. I felt sorry for him WHILE writing this chapter. Thank you for the lovely comment, really appreciate it
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11-10-2011, 01:08 AM
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| Formerly: Rupert-Grint-Fan Porlock
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When I read this, I litterally wanted to start yelling at that Roger kid that Dean belongs with Emma!  Its real good! I can't wait for more!  | |
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11-10-2011, 06:23 PM
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| DMLE Mooncalf
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11-12-2011, 10:48 AM
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| | Puffskein
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Such a good story.Can't wait until next chapter.
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11-12-2011, 03:42 PM
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| DMLE Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by KP1 Such a good story.Can't wait until next chapter. Thanks, hope to upload soon
Thanks everyone for your lovely comments, please keep them coming, it is nice to know how much this fanfic is appreciated | |
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