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| Honeydukes Cellar (Incomplete Fanfiction) Here is the home to those stories who didn't quite get told in full. |
09-11-2011, 09:09 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: (GMT)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: LuLu Kieren Sixth Year | Hogwarts Second Generation - Sa13+ Claws do it BETTER! | | Language NERD!
Hello there i'm Órla hopfully this is alright *Crosses fingures* Copy rights: Of course the wizarding world belongs to J.K.R and any other authors I might have copied of you all RULE Setting: Lilly potter going into her first year at Hogwarts
Chapter 1
Ughhhh when am I getting my letter already.... It can't be lost can't it NO no i'm sure it's coming soon yes! But maybe ''NO emm possitive thinking!'' Lilly was walking up and down her bedroom as if she was on protest ''Crying about your letter again?'' she looked up to see her brother James in front of her messed up hair and brown eyes just like her mother she inhabitated them aswell ''No!'' she replied coldy ''Poor Lilly the only one thats not going to Hogwarts'' he shook his head sadly and then sniggered she went red and then he laughed his plan was working ''Why are you here anyways?'' Lilly asked really tring to forget about that ''Am I annoying you?'' ''No no no James I just love when you come in here and tease me'' said Lilly sarcastically ''Oh come on i'm just having a bit of fun!'' ''Well go somwhere else i'm... Thinking things threw!'' ''Oh so Hogwarts''
Lilly lost it ''WHY DO YOU RUIN EVERYTHING!'' she picked up a pillow ''Not everything just things that are importent to you!'' he laughed
she threw the pillow at him but he ducked and it hit her mother instead
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Her mother was kind hearted and sweet but her brother was a trouble maker and teased her alot but got away she watched as her mother picked up the pillow and walked into her room ''So what are you two fighting about this time?'' she fake yawned ''Mother I came in because poor Lilly was upset about somthing'' Ginny raised an eyebrow it wasn't quite sold yet ''I asked if she alright but she told me to leave'' Going once going twice ''But I wouldn't cause as I said before she was upset and then she threw the pillow at me and i'm so deeply sorry it hit you instead of me'' SOLD! ''Aww'' Ginny hugged him and squeezed him tight
I'm in for a long long night ughhh
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09-11-2011, 09:24 AM
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| Knarl
Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Pigfarts. Mars.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Harland Chadwick Lewin Sixth Year | Did you just lose something? The GAME? Sorry... 'Justin Bieber, he is the man!' U mad, Felton!? Aw, I can imagine Ginny being like that, but not to James I think...
PAMS!
P.S. James sounds like a git. Didn't like his grandad, James Sr either.
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09-11-2011, 09:27 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: (GMT)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: LuLu Kieren Sixth Year | Claws do it BETTER! | | Language NERD! Quote:
Originally Posted by Fred is awesome Aw, I can imagine Ginny being like that, but not to James I think...
PAMS!
P.S. James sounds like a git. Didn't like his grandad, James Sr either. Oooh already a comment already
Yeah I suppose but I defently couldn't put Albus as the bad guy Besides i'm probably gonna change James in the story and make a new bad guy I have it all planed |
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09-11-2011, 09:31 AM
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| Muggle Red Cap
Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Somewhere in heaven
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Abigail ''Abbie'' Jones First Year |
Oooooh I love it poor Lilly an older brother I should probably invite her to the club PAMS!
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09-11-2011, 09:34 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: (GMT)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: LuLu Kieren Sixth Year | Claws do it BETTER! | | Language NERD! Quote:
Originally Posted by HPFan1 Oooooh I love it poor Lilly an older brother I should probably invite her to the club PAMS! WOW how do people find a story so quick it's freaky
Thanks Yea always wished I had a brother then I go to my friends house ALL BETTER! |
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09-11-2011, 01:56 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: May 2010 Location: your closet MWAHAHA
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Septimus "Sep" Galen Fourth Year |
This is hilarious so far!
James is a jerk, but Lily sure seems like a good protagonist for a story.
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09-11-2011, 01:58 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: LuLu Kieren Sixth Year | Claws do it BETTER! | | Language NERD! Quote:
Originally Posted by hermione23 This is hilarious so far!
James is a jerk, but Lily sure seems like a good protagonist for a story. YAY new reader
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09-11-2011, 09:21 PM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Oceanic Flight 815
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LOL! That's adorable. Poor Lily! I love how Ginny is so leniant with her wittle Jimmy! Can't wait to read more!
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09-12-2011, 07:41 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: (GMT)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: LuLu Kieren Sixth Year | Claws do it BETTER! | | Language NERD! Quote:
Originally Posted by XenoLongbottom LOL! That's adorable. Poor Lily! I love how Ginny is so leniant with her wittle Jimmy! Can't wait to read more! Thanks |
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09-12-2011, 04:12 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: LuLu Kieren Sixth Year | Claws do it BETTER! | | Language NERD!
Chapter 2
After punishment from the day before yeah thats right punishment... Oh how she wished James wasn't such a sulk up to their mother she lay in bed tossing and turning thinking over things ''Lilly darling breakfast'' Lilly half winced and got up andwent downstairs and took a piece of toast. ''Why the glum face?'' her mother asked ''Oh no reason'' she replied staring into space *TAP* she looked around
Just mail! she sighed ''Anything interesting?'' she asked even though she couldn't have cared less her mother was gazing at the mail ''I suppose'' she replied a grin on her pale face anything interesting from her mothers wasn't ever interesting! She handed Albus and James letters and then left another on the table Lilly gazed at it ''MY- my my LETTER!'' she screamed
Ginny's grin widened and she hugged Lilly
While Lilly's grin was so big her mouth was like a clowns big wide smile ''Eeep!''
Albus smiled at her maybe because she did when he opened his
James rolled his eyes and looked threw his new list
This was her BEST day ever!!!!!!
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09-12-2011, 04:40 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: The Shire
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabeth Bernadette Kane Fourth Year |
Thats amazing, PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!111
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09-13-2011, 07:50 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: LuLu Kieren Sixth Year | Claws do it BETTER! | | Language NERD! Quote:
Originally Posted by LeiaSadieAnnabeth Thats amazing, PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!111 Thanks |
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09-13-2011, 08:09 PM
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| Knarl
Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Pigfarts. Mars.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Harland Chadwick Lewin Sixth Year | Did you just lose something? The GAME? Sorry... 'Justin Bieber, he is the man!' U mad, Felton!? Awesome!
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09-13-2011, 09:27 PM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Oceanic Flight 815
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Nice. Hope you post more soon! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!
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09-13-2011, 11:28 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: A planet.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lillian Strap First Year |
Hey! I love it! Keep it up!!
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09-14-2011, 07:42 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: LuLu Kieren Sixth Year | Claws do it BETTER! | | Language NERD! Quote:
Originally Posted by Fred is awesome Awesome! Quote:
Originally Posted by XenoLongbottom Nice. Hope you post more soon! PAMS!!!!!!!!!! Thanks Quote:
Originally Posted by LillyJames Hey! I love it! Keep it up!! Oooh new reader glad you like it |
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09-17-2011, 01:58 PM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sebastian Price First Year | The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
Ooo I like this so far! Keep writing.
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09-23-2011, 07:45 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: LuLu Kieren Sixth Year | Claws do it BETTER! | | Language NERD!
Thanks
New chapter soon...
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10-12-2011, 08:06 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: LuLu Kieren Sixth Year | WOW long time no write Claws do it BETTER! | | Language NERD!
Chapter 3
Lilly couldn't sleep the whole night she was awake reading over the letter again and again it was the best thing that could have possibly happened! Hogwarts FINALLY after all those years watching her brothers go onto the platform she was finally going to!!!!! She grinned got out of bed and got dressed in her favourite clothes. Well they looked quite dissturbing actully a lumoness jumper ripped white jeans and a yellow top with a weird looking tiger on it! But what made it dissturbing was the she had red hair very red hair!!!! ''Morning!'' said Ginny cheerfully ''Morning!!!!'' Lilly replied with a loud of excitment in her voice ''Mum? Are we going to diagon alley today?'' she smilied
Ginny stared at her ''Why?'' ''No... no reason,'' she sighed Ughhhh! another thing to bother me!!!
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10-13-2011, 05:29 PM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sebastian Price First Year | The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
Well that was a tease! LOL! I want moooore.
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10-18-2011, 10:27 PM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Oceanic Flight 815
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More! Please! We need more, like Droo said!
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10-19-2011, 07:28 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: LuLu Kieren Sixth Year | Claws do it BETTER! | | Language NERD! Quote:
Originally Posted by Droo Well that was a tease! LOL! I want moooore. Yea s'ppose Quote:
Originally Posted by XenoLongbottom More! Please! We need more, like Droo said!
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12-09-2011, 03:36 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: LuLu Kieren Sixth Year | Claws do it BETTER! | | Language NERD!
Thankss
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12-21-2011, 01:14 AM
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| Gnome
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Septimus "Sep" Galen Fourth Year |
This is awesome! So sorry I can't come up with a better comment... PAMS!
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01-17-2012, 04:45 PM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: England, Wirral
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Rachel Elizabeth Annabeth Chase Third Year |
I am so very sorry, i haven't posted on your story! I am so sorry, but I am glad I did!!!
Its amazing, please update soon!!!!!
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