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Old 12-07-2003, 01:08 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I can see you again.
Your face.
How your head rested on my shoulder.

I can feel your hot breath
on my cold cheeks,
I am trying to get over you.

You bring a light in my life
as I wait for you to reply
to this letter.

I can hear your voice
saying those three words
that mean the most

I can smell your deodrant,
constantly contaminating my world.
It overthrows me
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Old 12-07-2003, 01:10 PM   #2 (permalink)
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"whoa" is all i have to say..... in a good way :online2long:
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Old 12-12-2003, 06:43 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Wow, I totally LOVED the last three lines... the deoderant thing was pure genius... wonderful job!
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Old 12-26-2003, 04:52 AM   #4 (permalink)
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You............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................................Rock! :music_band:
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Old 01-02-2004, 01:27 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Cheers!

Though we've drifted apart,
You linger in my mind.
Always in conversations,
You're the subject we always find.

I love someone else,
But because they deniy loving me,
You drift into my mind again,
Forever taunting me.

Your eyes plague my vision.
I can't seem to break away.
You're hot breath blowing on my neck,
Distracts me every day.

You're not any closer,
I still wait for your reply.
But for you to linger in my mind...
You are dead, that's probably why.

I just can't get you out,
You're taking up my life!
Reply to my E-mails,
I want to slit my throat with a knife.

Our love never lasted long,
But it still remains here true.
I'm always trying to contact you,
So I can see it through.

You know I would let my blood spill,
Just to keep you alive.
I just wish I could tell you that,
I don't want to loose your life.

We could just be friends,
If you gave me a chance.
But no, you leave me hanging here,
Ready to break my neck...
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