So... Here's a nice place for my poetry, if anyone else appreciates it.

Broken Dreams

Broken dreams lost within
I'm scared of everything
These tears are falling inside of me
With every word you sing
It hits me deep inside
Like a knife into my heart
I've felt this pain before, many times
But I don't know where it starts
A drop of crimson falls from your skin
There's a razor in your fist
I cry at the sight of you hurting yourself
The razor moves toward your wrist
I've never wanted anything more
Than an understanding friend
you made me cry tears that don't fall
When you put your life to an end
Now I can't stand the sight of red
It brings pain from deep inside
I didn't think you truly hated yourself
But now I know, because you died
And now I'm having broken dreams
And it's too hard to sleep
Because a broken dream is the worst pain of all
It hurts you inside
Way down
Deep

This is wonderful. Great Poem!

ooh that's a great poem! i love it!

wow that was a very powerful poem write more plz. im hooked to ur writing

I feel so loved! Thank you for your comments, they mean a lot to me. Here's a new poem for you.

She is Called Love
She is called Hope
If you believe her
She'll let you know
Another day

They call her Faith
If you allow her
She'll make you go
Needing to say

I know her as Truth
If you call to her
She'll help you grow
Becoming astray

She is called love
If you have her
She'll leave you broken
Fading away

Wow, those are really great, and I agree, strong poems.

Wow...i don't want to say strong...I want to say...

SLAM! you could be a total SLAM poet! Good job! I almost cried in broken dreams!

Thanks! I would love to go to a poetry slam, but I live in a small town, so we don't have them.

Here's another, not the greatest, but I like it.

Never

It's been a while
Since a single word I've spoken
All that was is simply becoming
Bruised and broken

It seems like a long time
Since the end of yesterday
And what has been is gone
Be careful what you say

It's been a while
You've been waiting forever
Will what we had come back again?
Never