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Old 03-25-2004, 05:36 AM   #1 (permalink)
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This is a poem about the four marauders. And, yes, a little about Harry too. Please note that the characters and plot is not mine, as much as I would like that, but JK Rowling's. Please make nice comment only, and make corrections and suggestions. Thank you for reading this, and PLEASE make a note at the bottom- how do you like it?

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THE MARAUDERS

Four stood up
Against the night
One was killed
One took flight.

Padfoot then turned
Against his friend
The three left were split
And this wasn’t the end.

Then the one evil
Who had split the four
Broke apart
And fell to the floor.

Wormtail was trapped
Between good and bad
Moony wasn’t sure
To be angry or sad.

His friends had all left
One was hidden
One had been killed
And one was in prison.

Then, miraculously,
Padfoot made an ascape,
Came back to his friend
His godson and his fate.

Two marauders united
With the son of Prongs
While Voldemort planned
To finish his wrongs.

They captured Wormtail
And found who was right
They ment to put him in prison,
But again he took flight.

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Old 03-25-2004, 10:59 PM   #2 (permalink)
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you are good at ryming (SPELLING- oh well). I liked it. Continue. If you want to read other poetry, I am always interested in feedback-- read Christine's Scary Poems, they are weird! lol.
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Old 03-26-2004, 12:35 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Wow! A reply already! Thank you! I know spelling isn't great. My fingers slip and I never think about spelling when I'm writting. I will add some more for you soon...
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Old 03-30-2004, 01:21 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Sorry that I haven't continued it yet- I still plan to do so. I've just been really busy lately.
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Old 03-30-2004, 08:42 AM   #5 (permalink)
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This is great I love it, dont stop now!!!
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Old 03-31-2004, 12:37 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks Emily! I continue it, I really will. I jsut need to get in a poetry mood & have some spare time... :sorcerer:
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cool, I cant wait.

In the mean time check out my poems for all who are waiting for susie.
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Old 03-31-2004, 11:24 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Wow, I didn't know you wrote poetry! This is really, really good, I'm normally not into poetry that much, but you have a great story and rythm in it! Keep it up! Flowers for my friend! :flowersmile:
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