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03-08-2006, 12:21 AM
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| | Chizpurfle
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: she's in looooove :)
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
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Fourth Year |  The Creative Poetry Challenge
Welcome to the Creative Poetry Challenge!  Basically, I post a topic for writing about and its point total and the user who posts the most creative and/or entertaining 8 (or more) line poem gets the points. Note: There must be at least five contestants until I judge. 
So, if I post:
Topic: Spaghetti Points: 8
And *UserBlahBlahBlah* posts the most creative poem, I would give him/her the 8 points.
Remember!: The poem must at least 8 lines long, unless I say it can be shorter. 
Have fun, and start writing! 
Topic: House Elves
Points: 10
Last edited by Simple_Spells; 05-08-2006 at 05:02 PM.
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03-08-2006, 04:32 PM
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| | Murtlap
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: At the pool, swimming laps.
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OK, I'll take a stab at it... here we go...
House elves live
For serving you
Always check
Before they do
Love to make you
Smile with glee
Do their chores
Quite happily
Ehh... it's alright... not much of a writer
~ Shay
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03-08-2006, 04:40 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Breakdancing sumwher
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Kiliana
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House Elves House Elves
Serving Me,
One died today,
Under a tree.
House Elves,House Elves
Serving You,
OOOPs...
One just steppped in poooooooooo...
LOLZ,
?VICTORIA?*not very good but took a shot
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03-08-2006, 07:56 PM
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| | Chizpurfle
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: she's in looooove :)
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Thanks for submitting poems, you two. I'd just like to say that I forgot to mention above that I need 5 contestants before I judge.
~ Emma | |
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03-09-2006, 08:32 PM
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|  Poetry Prince
Spotty
Quidditch FanaticNogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003
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I hope you are allowed to pick just one House Elf.....enjoy :ballcap:
Dobby's working hard each day
and doing what he oughta
"But my work is more like play"
"Cause I work's for Arry Pottah!"
"He gave me clothes and set me free"
"and now I gets some payin"
"no more Malfoy family"
"Just hoopla and horrayin."
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03-10-2006, 12:54 AM
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| | Chizpurfle
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: she's in looooove :)
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Awesome! Just two more entries and I can judge... | |
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03-10-2006, 10:57 PM
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| | Dugbog
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Where elephants and unicorns live in harmony...
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Tess Windsor
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Kreacher was so very old
His hair was white
His toes were cold
He worked all night
And more in day
To do things right
All Potter's way
Kreacher worked with all his might.
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03-16-2006, 12:09 AM
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| | Chizpurfle
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: she's in looooove :)
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OK, thanks, Jumping_Elephants.
One more entry people! | |
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03-16-2006, 12:43 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Rose
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House elves, eh?
If you want an oreo
Or possibly some stew,
You call out for a house elf,
And they'll bring it right to you.
They think they're serving royality,
The way they prance around.
They just want to please you,
And they'll even kiss the ground!
yeah...lol
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03-20-2006, 08:47 PM
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| | Chizpurfle
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: she's in looooove :)
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Alright, thanks for submitting, Rose.
I've narrowed it down to two so far. I'm gonna think on this for a minute or two or three or four or however many it takes to decide. 
~ Emma | |
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03-20-2006, 08:51 PM
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| | Chizpurfle
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: she's in looooove :)
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Alright, I've made my descision. The winner is.... Sir_Spots!
Points:
Sir_Spots - 10 New catagory!
Topic: The Dursleys
Points: 14
Good luck!
~ Emma | |
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03-20-2006, 10:16 PM
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| | Puffskein
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Good job, Sir Spots! I liked yours!
The Dursley's, Dursley's....hm...
Spend a day with the Dursley's.
I'd rather eat some soap!
There house is too sanitary.
Mr. Clean couldn't even cope!
But that's only the beginning.
They also have a son.
He's fatter than a whale.
His mum calls him 'honeybun'.
yeah...that's it.
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03-20-2006, 11:02 PM
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| | Chizpurfle
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Thanks for entering again Rose! We need 4 more entries! | |
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03-21-2006, 01:48 PM
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| | Diricawl
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: I laik bread.
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Sixth Year | Erin Jr. | | Dude! Nowai!!
It's not great, but I'm making it up as I type, so.....
The Dursleys
If you were an orphan,
And you needed a place to stay.
Don't go to the Dursley's;
I think you'd rather run away.
It could get annoying,
That Petunia's way too clean;
Dudley is a rude, fat pig,
And Vernon's very mean!
Well, there you go!
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03-24-2006, 08:19 PM
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| | Puffskein
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I wish three more people would enter...lol! I'm so impatient!
When Petunia cleans, she turns to Scrubbing Bubbles.
It's the only thing that seems to clean away her troubles.
Yeah...I just had to put that too lol! The first one's my real entry...yeah. hehehehe! i like this game!
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03-24-2006, 08:26 PM
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Tea Party AnimalSnidget
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The dursleys
Petunias a bit crazy
Vermons a twit
Dudleys fat and stupid
there a perfect fit
and that my dear friend
Is just about it.
Ta-da i love poetry but sometimes my poems dont make much sense unless you know what im really writing about but that ones very simple
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03-26-2006, 01:35 AM
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| | Murtlap
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the Dursleys!!!
OK, Here goes:
Petunia and Vernon
and Dudley, of course
Are the most twisted family
you'll ever meet of their source
The glummest and maddest
muggles in Britain
meeting them definetly
would make me quite smitten
LOL!!! I dunno what smitten means, but it rhymes with Britain! Just pretend it means bad or nasty or something like that!
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03-27-2006, 02:38 AM
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| Poetry Prince
Spotty
Quidditch Fanatic Nogtail
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you didn't say how many lines this one could be so I made mine a bit longer.....hope it's okay :ballcap:
Number four privet drive is a horrible place
You’re mistreated and awfully deprived
But unfortunately that fate is the one you must face
As the world famous “boy who survived”
Vernon Dursley the head of this household of terrors
Aunt Petunia’s the sis of your mum
And you laugh from the cupboard space neath the main stairs
At the size of your cousin Dud’s bum.
Each day with the Dursleys brings pleasure and pain
You try to make all their lives tragic
And as unexplained misfortunes happen again
You just snicker cause you know it’s magic
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03-27-2006, 03:29 AM
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| R/Hr Crusader Firecrab
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was that 5 people? when's the next round?
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04-03-2006, 11:27 PM
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| | Puffskein
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mugglesupporter, I'm sure it's fine with Emma if you enter. She'll post a new topic when she gets around to it...just be patient, please.
p.s. I'll be waitin' for the next topic, and when you post it, I'll be ready...lol!
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04-09-2006, 02:23 PM
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| | Chizpurfle
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hmmmm......im havin a go..but well, we will see........
D udley, well it has to be said, is a little (or even large) pig, cos...
U ncle Vernon and Petunia spoil him with things he doesnt need.
R otten parents don't you think, as a
S econd young lad lay forgotten...
L ook under the stairs and there in a cupboard you will find an
E ager young magician who works secretly, indeed,
Y et it is Harry who is famous in his world
S o the moral of this holdhold - unpleasantness never succeeds.
OK so the the rhymes dont really fit - but at least I had a go........
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04-23-2006, 05:44 AM
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| | Bundimun
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Dudley, yeah, he's fat and round
Vernon ain't much better
Petunia she could use some food
You'd be suprised if ya metta
These are the Dursleys
Menaces people would tell ya
Harry of course would be a lot better
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05-08-2006, 10:28 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Hogwarts dungeons
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|  Dumbledore's man
Sirius you can't be dead,
I just can't put it in my head.
That ruddy veil, is such a threat,
it makes me cry in my bed. 
One bright day I'll save the world,
no time to waste, I'll say the word,
no more waiting, no time to cry,
the people I love, I won't see die.
Even now that Dumbledore's gone,
I want nothing more than to go on.
I'll do my best, me and my crew,
'cause I'm Dumbledore's man
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05-08-2006, 05:01 PM
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| | Chizpurfle
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: she's in looooove :)
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Casper Scouten
Fourth Year |
A lot of poems to sift through this time...
The winner is... ErinElizabeth!
Points:
ErinElizabeth - 14
Sir_Spots - 10
Another catagory!
Topic: Honeydukes
Points: 12 | |
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05-08-2006, 05:13 PM
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| Dairy Queen Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: I'd tell you...but then there might be some...uh...repricussions....
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Jonsie B.
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okay.....4 to 8 lines, right? i call it "Honeydukes" 
Honeydukes! Ah! Just the name makes my tummy rumble.
They've got everything from Pudding Pops to Buzzing Bee-da Bumbles.
But it's bittersweet everytime that i get to make it there,
'Cause i spend my money and gain some poundage that causes folks to stare.
Yet it doesn't matter any more what they think about it.
For i will continue to munch on bewitched sweets and love it!
It's my favorite place in Hogsmeade Village; i wish that you could see,
That a mouth full of magical sugar is what i like best to eat for me!   ha! i haven't written a poem in years! and i managed to make that one rhyme!!!  
i hope i win 
Jonsie 
your neighborhood ninja 
Last edited by Jonsie B.; 05-08-2006 at 05:24 PM.
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