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08-17-2009, 05:10 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Knight Bus Depot
Posts: 1,115
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Acalia Montgomery-Lapin
Second Year |  Spinner's End - Sa13+
Hey, y'all! Welcome to my Poetry Vault! Come check out my (amateur!) writings! I do my best, so no hate mail or anything, please. And if you don't understand something, write me, and I'll try to explain to you what is confusing you (like a certain word, or something of the sort).
Anyways.. ON WITH THE SHOW!!
My first SS poem:
Astronomy Tower
You were there,
at the top
of the
Astronomy Tower.
Why did you do
what you
did at
the top
of the
Astronomy Tower?
Your purposes
were not clear
to me
at the top
of the
Astronomy Tower.
But your memories told
me what really
happened
that night,
at the top
of the
Astronomy Tower.
Here's another one, this time called
The House Elf Liberation Front
You and me
shall help them
They need freedom.
They do not know
what it's like
to breathe fresh air and to
see butterflies.
Our worlds should mix.
And then they can
teach us how to wash our socks.
That's all I have for now... hope you enjoy them! Bring others to see my art, people!
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08-20-2009, 07:03 PM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 15,697
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sebastian Price
First Year |  The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
Awwww I love them! Welcome to the poetry forum, be sure to read the rules and announcements and HAVE FUN!!!
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08-20-2009, 10:20 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Great!!
I loved Them...
Really Glad People Still Care For Poetry...
Cant wait For More...
PAMS!!!!
Love,
Xavier
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08-20-2009, 10:23 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Knight Bus Depot
Posts: 1,115
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Acalia Montgomery-Lapin
Second Year |
Here's another one called: S.P.E.W.
-SPEW?!
-No, Ron. It's S.P.E.W.
-Is there a difference?
-YES, Ron.
-Really?
-Yes, really.
-Promise?
- I Swear.
-Well, what does S.P.E.W. stand for?
- I'm not sure yet...
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Originally Posted by SeerCassandraTrelawney  Awwww I love them! Welcome to the poetry forum, be sure to read the rules and announcements and HAVE FUN!!! Quote:
Originally Posted by ##Hermione&Draco## Great!!
I loved Them...
Really Glad People Still Care For Poetry...
Cant wait For More...
PAMS!!!!
Love,
Xavier Thanks so much!
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08-20-2009, 11:07 PM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Whilds
Posts: 388
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rania Ramone
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Wonderful to have you here with us. =] Post more soon, darling!
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08-20-2009, 11:12 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Umm-..
I should Warn you..
(I know Im Not a Mod)
But Darling Please Dont Double Post Please...
Make Sure you read The Rules...
Because I dont want you to get in Trouble...
(I got in Trouble Couple Of times..HEHEHEHEHEHE)
Thank you!!!!
Post soon....
-Xavier  -
Last edited by ##Hermione&Draco##; 08-21-2009 at 02:50 PM.
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08-21-2009, 02:20 PM
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| | Dugbog
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Reading HBP!!!
Posts: 137
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Brad Coldwater
First Year |
Quote:
Originally Posted by Ginny_Weasley_Potter Here's another one called:
S.P.E.W.
-SPEW?!
-No, Ron. It's S.P.E.W.
-Is there a difference?
-YES, Ron.
-Really?
-Yes, really.
-Promise?
- I Swear.
-Well, what does S.P.E.W. stand for?
- I'm not sure yet... That's funny.You're really good at this.
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08-21-2009, 02:51 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Knight Bus Depot
Posts: 1,115
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Acalia Montgomery-Lapin
Second Year |
Quote:
Originally Posted by ##Hermione&Draco## Umm-..
I should Warn you..
(I know Im Not a Mod)
But Darling Please Dont Double Post Please...
Make Sure you read The Rules...
Thank you!!!!
Post soon....
-Xavier - I'll be sure not to! Sowwy! *bats eyelashes*
Another poem, called The Yule Ball
If I asked you a week beforehand,
maybe things would have gone
differently.
Maybe Lavender would not be
a part of me in sixth year.
Maybe Krum would still be my idol.
Maybe we could have been happy
a little bit
sooner.
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08-21-2009, 02:54 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Thank you...
And Awww..
What a Great Poem
PAMS
-Xavier-
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08-21-2009, 02:57 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Knight Bus Depot
Posts: 1,115
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Acalia Montgomery-Lapin
Second Year |
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Originally Posted by RonWeasley18 That's funny.You're really good at this. Thanks! You can make requests if you want.. I can write poems for your favorite couple, chapter, book, etc. But all must be related to HP!!!
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08-21-2009, 02:59 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Ooh....
Great Idea...
Can you make a Poem Of Neville's Toad?
heheehehehehehhehe
-Xavier -
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08-21-2009, 03:35 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Knight Bus Depot
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Acalia Montgomery-Lapin
Second Year |
Sure thing!
Trevor
I make my bid for freedom
As often as I can.
Because I don't enjoy being kept
in a cage
the size
of a wine
glass.
I want to get outside,
to catch some flies
that aren't already dead.
Because Neville is a
great big
GIT.
And I mean that in
a nice way.
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08-21-2009, 03:42 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
I loved it....
Pams!!!!!!!!!
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08-21-2009, 05:08 PM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 15,697
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sebastian Price
First Year | The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
These are all great!
Yes, Xavier is correct. Try not to double post (I merged it, so it was just one.) If you do by accident just edit one with the other's information and then edit the other and write (delete please) in it.
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08-22-2009, 08:02 PM
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| | Pogrebin
Join Date: May 2009 Location: London
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Alexander River Hirsch
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 That last one is so funny! Especially the ending! Ha! I love all your poems! They're fabulous! You're a really good poet! Keep up the great work! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: New reader!
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08-23-2009, 12:47 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Knight Bus Depot
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Acalia Montgomery-Lapin
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Originally Posted by hermionesclone That last one is so funny! Especially the ending! Ha! I love all your poems! They're fabulous! You're a really good poet! Keep up the great work! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: New reader! Thanks! 
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08-26-2009, 12:23 AM
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| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: island of misfit toy
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Diana Lacey Delhi
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the trevor one is funny
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08-26-2009, 03:37 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Knight Bus Depot
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Originally Posted by therealginnyweasly the trevor one is funny Mucho thank ya!
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09-25-2009, 02:55 AM
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| | Gnome
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keep on poet-ing! ur really good at it!
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