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05-24-2004, 05:17 PM
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| Red Cap
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 72
| I miss you
Death happens all around me
Everywhere i go i see death
Now that he's back you can taste it in the air
I miss you
All my loved ones die
It started with you
I fear you are not the last
I miss you
It's worst at night
i see you die in my head
it took you an age to fall
Through the veil
I still think if i had not been so stupid
You'd be here
I miss you
I know you can't hear me
If olny i could have said it before
But now it's to late
You're gone
I miss you
I wish i could of ended my life
I could see you again
But the prophecy...
That stupid prophecy
I must make it come true
I miss you
I love you sirius
There i said it
But it's too late now
I love you
You were like a father...
Like a brother
I love you sirius
I always will
I miss you
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OLike it? i'll write more poems if you like just tell me what you want
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05-25-2004, 04:24 PM
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| Red Cap
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 72
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I miss you too
harry i am dead
but it's not your fault
stop blaming yourself
I miss you too
i love you
you were like a son to me
i can't come back
but i will always be with you
i miss you too
i thank you for trying to save me
it was brave
i don't blame you harry
I miss you
i love you
i always will
please stop blaming yourself
it's bellatrix that killed me
not you
i miss you
And it's never too late to say i love you
I miss you too
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Ok not my best but it'll do please respond
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05-26-2004, 10:19 PM
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| Horklump
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Ken-tuck
Posts: 39
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o my god! those were so good! mayb b/c i'm quite partial 2 sirius, but still, those poems were good!
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05-27-2004, 02:52 AM
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| Red Cap
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 72
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thanks so much
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05-30-2004, 06:25 AM
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| Ramora
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Canada
Posts: 5,506
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Cool. They were lovely, and sad! :sad:
PAMS
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06-03-2004, 03:37 AM
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| Red Cap
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 72
| Alone
You left me here alone
Alone in my heart
Alone in my mind
Alone in my soul
You left me here alone
To drown on my pain
And suffocate on my sorrow
Ready to die
You left me here alone
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I love this poem i hope you do too
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06-04-2004, 12:17 AM
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| Red Cap
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 72
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drowning in a pool
of despaire with nowhere to
go.Un loved, un kept
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my very sad attempt at a hiku
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06-10-2004, 08:35 PM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Japan~ <3
Posts: 132
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OMG ilove Sirius if you are a bit upset w/JK Rowling see Littlemisslupin, who is my cuz and right now sitting next to me. I am typing now (littlemisslupin) and i was gonna b littlemissblack but it was taken already. Ur poems r great, geez they are gonna make me cry soon! bye :sorcerer: |
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06-10-2004, 08:40 PM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Japan~ <3
Posts: 132
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[COLOR=blue]im very sorry for you about sirius but he had to die sometime y not now later you will very very sad :unsure:  :unsure: dont worry
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06-10-2004, 08:45 PM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Japan~ <3
Posts: 132
|  hi this is me again (littlemisslupin) if u love sirius, read my story in romance entitled: Death is only but the beginning. It is about sirius' life after death. Anyway:
[I]"Sirius is not dead; for he cannot die-- not when he is still alive in so many people's hearts. No, Sirius Black is not dead, nor shall he ever be. Sirius is strongly alive, and will always be right here--beside our hearts."--Lilly Sierra (aka littlemisslupin)
bye! :sorcerer: :wub:  (Sirius)
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06-14-2004, 07:10 PM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Japan~ <3
Posts: 132
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[COLOR=red] i know you love him but it was his time die i know you must be bad like so was i when the basilisk died so i always think it will return think...... about him he might come back u never know im beside u all the way if u love him so much see my cuz's storys in romance she loves him too so u are not alone ok ..........BYE
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06-14-2004, 07:14 PM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Japan~ <3
Posts: 132
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its me again im sorry about sirius i just wanted that too be clear bye
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06-17-2004, 12:58 AM
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| Guest |
OMG!!!!!!!! Your poems are awsome. I'm a total Sirius fan. But I still can't get over the fact that JK Rowling killed Sirius!!!!  It's not FAIR!  And your right (littlemisslupin). I agree with you.
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07-06-2004, 05:22 PM
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| Red Cap
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 72
| i agree with both of you totally
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07-29-2004, 01:59 AM
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| Red Cap
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 72
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you were always there for me
i loved you
one day you were gone
we were happy
you were ripped away from me
Why?
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07-29-2004, 02:34 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: at Hogwarts.
Posts: 737
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I miss Sirius too.
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"Remember Sirius, A man who taught us a lesson that took him a lifetime to learn."-me
"Quite the double act, Sirius Black and James Potter." -Madame Rosmerta
Oh don't you see that lonesome dove sitting on it's Ivy vine,it's mourning for it's own true love
"It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live" - Dumbledore
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07-29-2004, 02:37 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Canada
Posts: 415
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AHHH! STOP IT! Your making me cry!!! I want Sirius back!!!!!!!!!!!! :sad:
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07-29-2004, 11:12 PM
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| Red Cap
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 72
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don't worry emily me too
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07-29-2004, 11:50 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2004
Posts: 1,935
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was looking around ss and i found this thread so i decided to whip up a poem real fast. tell me what you think! i know the rhythm is kinda off but....
(Untitled)
We shared a bond that was short-lived
But recently I suddenly lost you.
Was angered and blinded, then broke down and cried
But I know somehow I'll pull through.
You don't know how much I need you here
Someone to talk to, and ease my fears.
A part of me knows we'll meet again
But it's hard to accept when you were more than just a friend.
Godfather and brother, truly like none other.
No one believed you were innocent
But I helped you escape your fate
It's just devastating that I couldn't save you again,
For my help came a minute too late.
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07-30-2004, 06:58 AM
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| Red Cap
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 72
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thats beautiful
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07-30-2004, 07:04 AM
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| Guest |
^indeed :sad:
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07-30-2004, 11:53 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2004
Posts: 1,935
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did you guys like my poem? maybe i'll write another one some other time but i dunno if it'll be about sirius <3 again.
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07-31-2004, 10:44 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2004
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so i decided to write another poem (although i dont think its very good, i liked my other one MUCH better but still tell me what you think!) its called sirius black, cuz notice what i did w/the initial letter of each line
Sirius Black
Suddenly appeared and just as suddenly you were gone,
Instead of feeling loved, I only feel lost and all alone.
Running around trying to find what's mine
It's a hopeless lost for you're lost in time.
Underneath the mystery lay something too deep
Still you were there, someone I should keep
But because of the lies, on a life I did bet
Lost you but I love you, and I'll never forget.
And although you're not here amongst us today
Can't pretend right now that my world isn't gray, but we'll
Keep you in our hearts, and that's where you will stay.
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09-08-2004, 01:35 AM
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| Red Cap
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 72
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It's great
have you ever listend to Sliped away by Avril lavigne it's awsome and it works with what happend to Sirius
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09-15-2004, 12:42 AM
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| Red Cap
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 72
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heres a short story/poem thingy bout Sirius (song fic)
Na na, na na na, na na
Harry looked out into the sunset. He thought they would be together forever. Even now sitting here in Grimwauld place all he could think about was him.
I miss you, miss you so bad
I don't forget you, oh it's so sad
It was three weeks since the passing of Sirius Black. It wasn’t fair Sirius was a great man he didn’t deserve this no one did except Voldermort and his followers.
I hope you can hear me
I remember it clearly
“Arrg Sirius! Why did you leave me I need you so much. You were supposed to be here for me my whole life. Why did you have to go? Why?
The day you slipped away
Was the day I found it won't be the same
That awful day flashed before his eyes. The duel, the spell, the veil and worst of all his expression, the laughter still on his face but his eyes filled with shock. That face would haunt Harry forever.
Na na na na na na na
Harry blinked trying to get the horrid memories out of his mind But they wouldn’t leave.
I didn't get around to kiss you
Goodbye on the hand
I wish that I could see you again
I know that I can't
Tears started forming in his eyes ‘Darnit’ he thought ‘crying won’t help it won’t bring Sirius back it won’t help nothing will’
I hope you can hear me
cause I remember it clearly
“Why did you go? I never had the chance to tell you I loved you.” With that he broke down and he cried letting it all out. He didn’t hear the door open behind him.
The day you slipped away
Was the day I found it won't be the same
“Harry” called a timid voice he turned his head. It was Hermionie. He tried to smile but that only caused more tears. She sat down beside him and put her arm around him.
I had my wake up
Won't you wake up
I keep asking why
And I can't take it
It wasn't fake
It happened, you passed by
“It’s ok Harry. It’ll be ok. I promise” she said trying to comfort him. He only looked at her His eyes, normally Bright and happy, were shining with tears.
Now your gone, now your gone
There you go, there you go
Somewhere I can't bring you back
Now your gone, now your gone
There you go, there you go,
Somewhere your not coming back
“it won’t be ok Hermionie not if he’s dead. It never will be ok.” It broke her heart to see him this sad. She wished she could help him some how.
The day you slipped away
Was the day i found it won't be the same
“Well Harry I’ll always be here for you. You know I will. We’ll get through this, Harry, together. I’ll always be your friend. Always” she smiled at him the just before she got up she kissed him on the cheek then she got up and left the room.
The day you slipped away
Was the day that i found it won't be the same
He touched the spot on his cheek where she had kissed him. He wasn’t sure if he would ever be ok without Sirius but maybe with friends like Ron and Hermionie he could heal a bit. He got up to go to bed giving one last look at the sunset.
Nah nah, nah nah nah, nah nah
“Good bye Sirius, I love you”
I miss you
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